In the case of Miao Kexin’s composition, I’m right to give you a stick, but where did your sweet dates go?

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Miao Kexin’s composition is full of errors and omissions? But ignoring common sense mistakes, is the teacher really serious? Does the teacher really have no responsibility at all?

The incident of primary school student Miao Kexin has triggered heated discussions among netizens. Although there is no direct evidence that the teacher is related to the incident, some clues can be found from the reading of the direct trigger? Miao Miao. My child really doesn’t believe that teachers really have no responsibility at all. The teacher is not generous enough and his level really needs to be improved! Why do you say that?

First let us review an article I wrote before, "Primary school students lack words and actions, teachers have complex ideas and misunderstand students and parents". This article is also about teachers’ comments on primary school students’ compositions. Because the student wrote one less word in his composition, it was directly misunderstood by the teacher. The students and parents are not simple-minded.

In the primary school student’s composition, there are many wrinkles on his face, and he missed one word “face”. The joke was big, but the teacher’s comments were too incompetent. He actually said, “Parents can’t do something” Show it to the children? And ask the parents to sign it. Is this an attempt to slap parents and students in the face? But in the end, he was slapped in the face by his parents.

Such an obvious mistake can be easily seen by ordinary people. As a teacher who teaches and educates people, he actually misunderstood it like this. It's really surprising. I feel that the teacher's level really needs to be improved, and her thoughts are too impure. You have to know that the student she is reviewing is a primary school student! Are the thoughts of primary school students so impure in the eyes of teachers?

The composition of primary school student Miao Kexin actually has similar problems. A composition written by primary school student Miao Kexin was changed beyond recognition by the teacher. Not only did he make many big crosses, but he also deleted many details. I don’t know if it’s because I’m not good enough or something else. Among the deleted details, they are really necessary. Delete it? I really don’t understand it. I feel like the teacher is a bit picky.

Next, let me analyze it using my poor Chinese writing skills:

Miao Kexin wrote: The four masters and apprentices came to Baihuling, and everyone was tired and thirsty. ?For the four people who have been traveling all the way, it should not be a problem to describe them as "tired and thirsty"!

White Bone Demon? I heard that eating Tang Monk’s meat can lead to immortality. It’s like catching Tang Monk and eating it. ?It seems that there is nothing wrong with this sentence. It explains the cause and effect, and the causal relationship is very clear. If you delete the sentence "I heard that eating Tang Monk's meat can lead to immortality?", but you don't know why the White Bone Demon eats Tang Monk's meat, does it mean that everyone knows that monsters eat people, and there is no need to explain? Or do you think that everyone knows that eating Tang Monk meat can lead to immortality, so there is no need to elaborate? If you put it this way, I guess everyone has watched the episode "Three Strikes of Bone Demons". You can delete all the introductions in this article, because they are too familiar and should be understood without having to explain them!

In the article, the village girl who transformed into a white-bone spirit is described as "as beautiful as a fairy", which seems to be no problem! The best evidence is that the lustful Zhu Bajie looked at the village girl and looked like a pig brother. There are many more such inconsequential deletions in the article, so I won’t list them all.

Should parents reflect on this?

Looking at Miao Kexin's composition that was deleted, deleted, and revised by the teacher, some people may think that the teacher is very serious and carefully read the composition word for word. Afterwards, some parents of the students actually supported the teacher, and those who supported Teacher Yuan praised the teacher because they thought he was right. The result is also surprising, there are a lot of likes afterward.

I really don’t know what these people think.

Are they all flatterers? Everything about the teacher is right. Does the teacher’s fart smell good? Or are you afraid that if you don’t like it, the teacher will give your child some shoes? Shouldn’t everyone reflect on it?

After all, a living little life has just passed away. Is it necessary to make a fuss about the teacher here? We are all parents of students. Why can't we think of the deceased's family with compassion? Is this really a good thing?

Serious teacher, why do you ignore common sense mistakes?

Let’s talk about Miao Kexin’s composition. The teacher found so many problems, it can be said that he picked a lot of bones, but he didn’t find even a common sense error.

In the composition, Miao Kexin mistakenly wrote that the author of "Journey to the West" was Luo Guanzhong, while Luo Guanzhong's famous work was "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", and the author of "Journey to the West" was actually Wu Cheng'en. Such a common-sense mistake , the teacher hasn’t noticed yet. I really doubt whether the teacher is seriously revising the composition. After all, more insignificant mistakes were highlighted. Is this mistake, in the teacher's mind, just a very small "bone"?

Teacher, hit me with a stick, but where are your sweet dates?

Although the teacher carefully commented on the students' compositions, there was nothing wrong with it. Miao Kexin's composition revealed the dark side of human nature. It is not wrong that the comments were not positive enough, but teachers all know that compositions should promote positive information. . So why can't teachers be more positive when correcting essays? If we have to find fault with the students and comment on the students’ problems, shouldn’t we look at the students’ strengths? Everyone knows that if you hit someone with a stick, you will get a sweet date. I want to ask, teacher, where are your sweet dates?

As a teacher, although you have to find out the children's problems, isn't it the more important thing for the teacher to discover the children's strengths? Only in this way can we teach students in accordance with their aptitude, right?

Speak from your heart

No matter what the child's psychological endurance is, as a teacher, you should have a bigger picture and discover more of the children's strengths, instead of blindly thinking that you are For the sake of the children, blindly criticize them. And as a student's teacher, regardless of whether there is a direct relationship or not, he needs to bear certain responsibilities.

After all, children are innocent. Whatever happens is written directly on their faces. As a teacher or a student being criticized by the teacher, shouldn’t we pay more attention to it? If you could really care more about your students, perhaps such a tragedy could be avoided. But it's too late to say anything now. All we can do is to keep reflecting and hope that there will be no next time!

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