Introduction to teaching plans of sick sentences

Modifying a sick sentence refers to modifying a sentence with the language of the sick sentence, so that it does not change its original intention and the sentence is more fluent. What are the teaching plans for sick sentences? The following is an introduction to the teaching plan of ill sentences that I have compiled. Welcome to reading.

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Teaching objectives

1, master the types of common ill sentences,

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2, can accurately judge whether the sentence is speechless.

3, can make appropriate changes to sick sentences.

Stimulate students' interest in learning Chinese and make them happy to learn.

Teaching emphasis: master the types of common sick sentences and the methods of modifying them, so as to improve the ability of modifying them.

Teaching difficulties: discrimination and modification of common ill sentences.

Teaching methods include induction, guidance and cooperative inquiry.

Teaching hours count as one class hour.

teaching process

First, the introduction of new courses.

Speech by Han Fuju (J incarnation)

Before liberation, Han Fuju, the great warlord who occupied Shandong Province, was a big idiot. But he often pretends to be knowledgeable and gives speeches everywhere. On one occasion, cheeloo University celebrated its anniversary, and he also rushed to join in the fun. Before his ass could sit still, he began to give a speech.

"Ladies and gentlemen,

What is the weather like today? Today is a good day for a speech. The people attending the meeting are very lush, it seems that there are about eight fifths! Raise your hand if you haven't arrived! ""I'm very lucky. The headmaster invited me to your school today. Giving a speech in front of all gentlemen really stands out from the crowd! " (Students burst into laughter)

"What are you laughing at? I am a lout, I can't compete with you. You are all college students and know English in seven or eight countries. I don't even know English in China. I don't know much about talking, but I can go shirtless when I want to fight. " (The students all burst into laughter)

(Show jokes to stimulate students' interest)

After reading this speech, all the students found it very interesting. Who can tell me why you are laughing?

Yes, there are many ill sentences in the speech. In normal times, if we have sick sentences when we speak, we will make a lot of jokes or misunderstandings, so we must be accurate and express our meaning clearly when we speak.

A "sick sentence" is a sick sentence. Sentence is the basic language unit for exchanging ideas and expressing emotions in our daily life. In order to make sentences play a full communicative role, the minimum requirement is "using words in line with the text", which is in line with grammatical norms. If a sentence does not follow the language, rules and grammatical norms, then it is a mistake. In layman's terms, any sentence that doesn't read smoothly, feels awkward and ambiguous is a sick sentence.

Identifying and modifying ill sentences is also one of the popular test sites in our senior high school entrance examination. Mastering the topic of ill sentences will directly determine our exam results. Today we are going to learn the topic of sick sentences.

Second, learn new lessons.

(a), show the learning objectives:

Teaching emphasis: master the types of common sick sentences and the methods of modifying them, so as to improve the ability of modifying them.

Teaching difficulties: discrimination and modification of common ill sentences.

(2), show the exam instructions:

Can identify and correct the following common language diseases: incomplete composition, improper collocation, improper word order, redundant repetition and inconsistency.

Knowing the types of common sentences in senior high school entrance examination, let's take a look at the types of common sentences and deepen our understanding of them.

(3) Summarize the types of ill sentences:

1, the composition is incomplete

(1) Missing theme

Through this conversation, I understand a lot of truth.

(2) Lack of predicate

A, on my way to school, suddenly a beggar-like man fell to the ground.

(3) Lack of objects

A, although I am very busy, I still study problems with my classmates.

2. Improper collocation

A, the happy smiles and hearty songs of those students in middle school are still ringing in my ears.

3. Incorrect word order

First, we must carry forward and inherit the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation.

4. repetition is troublesome

A: I sincerely thank them in my heart.

5. Inconsistency

It took him about a year.

Once the cause is found, we will start treatment, so what principles should be followed in treatment? Please refer to the following principles and methods to modify sick sentences:

(4) Methods and steps to modify ill sentences.

1 method

(1), incomplete composition-completion (2), improper collocation-collocation specification

(3) improper word order-changing position (4) repetition and redundancy-deleting redundancy.

(5) Inconsistency-strict logic

Addition: Make up the missing elements in the sick sentence to make the sentence complete in structure and clear in meaning. (mostly used to modify ill sentences with incomplete components)

Delete (deletion method): delete redundant elements in a sentence to make the meaning of the sentence clear and avoid repetition. (mostly used to modify repeated and inconsistent sentences)

Tone (Transposition): Adjust inappropriate words in a sentence to make the sentence structure clear and logical. (mostly used to modify ill-ordered sentences)

Change (lexical change): replace inappropriate words in sentences with appropriate words to make sentence collocation reasonable and accurate. (mostly used to modify ill sentences with improper collocation)

2. Steps to modify sick sentences:

(1), Reading: Look for sick sentences with the help of the sense of language, and the awkward place to read often is the sick language.

(2) Extraction: trunk extraction. So as to judge whether the sentence is wrong.

(3) Change: add, delete, adjust and change.

(4), check: review (whether the sentence is fluent, whether there are new language diseases).

(5) Focus on the senior high school entrance examination and practical exercises.

1, Wang Min has a fever. The doctor gave him a blood test, and the test results will not be known for half an hour.

During the holiday, the aunts and uncles in the community are very concerned and take care of us. Our gratitude is beyond words!

At the opening ceremony, the athletes walked through the reviewing platform with vigorous steps.

I was greatly encouraged by the headmaster's report.

5. This book is about 20 yuan.

Introduction to Ill Sentences and Teaching Plans II

This cultural station has become a place to educate and help backward youth, save and train young people who have lost their footing, and has been commended by superior leaders many times.

② The document has made detailed provisions and profound exposition on some issues in the economic field in theory and policy.

(3) He immediately convened a meeting to study and arranged the content, time, participants and problems that should be paid attention to in the meeting.

A factory, driven by technological progress, is constantly committed to the research and development of new products, new technologies, new processes and new materials.

⑤ In a few cases of disrespecting labor, making troubles without reason, or even beating and insulting sanitation workers, the relevant departments promptly criticized and educated sanitation workers and dealt with them seriously.

⑥ During the Spring Festival this year, 2 10 fire engines and more than 3,000 fire officers and soldiers in this city gave up their vacations and stuck to their posts.

⑦ In recent years, China has accelerated the development of higher education, and colleges and universities will further expand enrollment and focus on building a number of high-level universities and disciplines.

At present, electronic computers have been widely used in all walks of life, which requires us to improve and train a group of professional and technical personnel as soon as possible.

In view of the rising international crude oil prices, the United States, India and other countries have established or increased their oil reserves, and China must also establish a national strategic oil reserve system as soon as possible.

Attending our newspapers, magazines, television and all publications have a greater responsibility to set an example, put an end to the phenomenon of nonstandard use of words, and increase the sense of standardization in the use of language and characters.

answer

Example 1,? Save and cultivate? Form a coordinate phrase, but? Cultivate? A young man who slipped? Unreasonable and unworthy.

Example 2, the two coordinate adverbial components do not match the back collocation, which one should it be? Theoretically? Work? Explain? ,? From the policy? Work? Rules? .

Example 3, arrangement? Is there an object consisting of four coordinate phrases behind it? What should I pay attention to in the meeting? Can't be with the predicate? Arrangement? deploy

Example 4, new technology, new technology? Can't be together? Research and development? Match, should? Research and development? .

Example 5, Criticize education and deal with it seriously? Form a coordinate phrase, and? Events? Can't you? Critical education? , the two cannot be mentioned in the same breath.

Example 6? Give up your vacation? Can't be together? Fire truck? Competition, attend to one thing and lose another.

Example 7, Accelerate? Only with? Speed? Match, but don't match? Scale? deploy

Example 8, A group of professional technicians? Can be used with verb predicate. Create? Match, but don't match? Improve? deploy

Pet-name ruby build or add? Are you online? Establish? Can't be together? Oil reserves? deploy

Example attending,? Newspapers? Including? Magazine? ,? All publications? Including again? Newspapers? 、? Magazine? This sentence makes the mistake of juxtaposing the concept of genus-species relationship.

(2)

(1) The county informed that Township Head Zhao should report before 15 this month.

(2) The ranger exposed the problem that the Forestry Bureau took the lead in smuggling timber, and everyone was very angry.

This exquisite lantern will be given as a gift to the guest who scored the highest score today.

He secretly deposited money in two banks behind the back of the general manager and deputy general manager.

The director told the leaders of several schools that the work in the new semester must be improved.

⑥ This column rearranges, combines, polishes and re-creates the songs and dances, folk customs, culture, entertainment and sports activities selected by local TV stations.

⑦ The relevant government departments explicitly prohibit banning the drug trading market.

The CIS countries despised the 2002 World Cup.

The police expressed indignation at the informant's claim that bystanders stood by.

It is hard to believe that this is a work with an average age of only 20 years old, because of the high-quality lyrics and songs independently created by this singing group, as well as the musical talent and cultural accomplishment shown in singing.

Answer: Example 1: Different pauses have different meanings. Are you online? /kloc-before 0/5? Suspension means reporting before 15 days; Are you online? /kloc-go before 0/5? Suspension means reporting on 15. Examples 2 and 9 belong to prepositions? Right? Unclear definition leads to unclear meaning and ambiguity. What is everyone angry about? The ranger exposed the problem? , or? The problem of ranger exposure? Police? Anger? Who is the target? Reporter? , or? Watching?

Example 3, As? A gift for the guests? It can be understood as a gift for guests, and it can also be understood as a gift for guests; ? Him? Can be understood as? Guest? , can also be understood as? Guest? People outside.

As a conjunction, Example 4 means? Him? Do something behind the back of the general manager and deputy general manager; What does it mean as a preposition? Him? Go behind the general manager's back and do something with the deputy general manager.

Example 5, the definition of quantifier is not clear. How many/much? Can I decorate it? School? , can also be modified? Leadership? .

Example 6 and example 10 are inexplicably expressed. Is it to explain? Column? The nature of, or? Column? How to make it? Does it mean? Singing group? , or? Works? How's it going?

Example 7, Banned? There are different understandings of structural relationship: verb-object relationship, which means? Prohibit doing sth? ; What do you mean by juxtaposition? Prohibit and ban sth? .

Example 8, Disdain? Is a polysemous word, which means? Look down on? , another meaning is? Can't you tell? .

(3)

He is usually taciturn, but when he talks about his favorite major at academic conferences, he becomes much more active and talkative.

(2) On Wednesday, the general branch of the school league held a forum with 15 participants?

③ China's calligraphy and painting art has formed its own artistic tradition and unique national characteristics in the long-term historical development.

At the beginning of this year, the United States and Britain assembled a frightening military force, which made the Gulf region once overcast.

Actually, on closer inspection, what is the Han culture in China? This concept itself is a dynamic development process, not a closed and stable category.

As soon as people enter the teaching building, they will see all the pictures and posters about the history of Macao hanging on the walls on both sides of the corridor.

⑦ A glimpse of China's ancient literature, because of its uniqueness, has been widely circulated and enduring for nearly 300 years since its publication, and it is still a valuable anthology.

(8) Once it is determined that the consumer has suffered mental damage from the operator, the operator will pay at least 50,000 yuan in mental compensation.

Pet-name ruby before taking part in the expedition, he has written a will, in case of any accident during the expedition, four children can receive a fixed amount of living expenses from his huge legacy every month.

Attending today, with the increasingly frequent international cultural exchanges and the collision of different national cultures, we should pay more attention to the inheritance and development of traditional festival culture.

Answer: Example 1? Extra? Adverbial, too much? As a supplement, I made redundant mistakes in my composition.

Example 2, attend the meeting? Yu? Attendees? Word repetition.

Example 3, unique? With what? Features? Repeat each other.

Example 4, deterrence? It means to make people feel scared and scared, plus? Making people? This is redundant.

Example 5, No? what's up No? What do you mean you should put it? what's up Delete, or change? It's not true? .

Example 6? Is it? Redundant words should be deleted

Example 7, Nearly 300 years after it came out? It should be changed to? Since it came out? Or? Nearly 300 years after it came out? .

Example 8, At least? And then what? Above? Tables and figures are contradictory, only one can be kept.

Pet-name ruby if? That is, if, what if? What if? Say it again.

Example attending,? International? Meaning? Between countries? , behind? Between? redundant