Third grade English composition, urgent!

I am very happy today. After breakfast, I went to the park.

It's a sunny day, the birds are singing and I'm singing. When I arrived at the park, I saw some girls playing games, so I joined them. We had a good time. Then I have lunch with my friends. We all had a good time. What is a happy day?

a happy day

I am very happy today. After I had breakfast, I went to the park to play. The sun is shining, the birds are singing, and so am I. When I arrived at the park, I saw some girls playing games, so I joined them. We had a good time. Then I have lunch with my friends. We are all very happy, what a happy day!

Mother's Day

Mother's Day is on the second Sunday in May every year. On that day this year, I bought a sweater and some flowers for my mother to thank her for her hard work. My mother was very happy to receive my gift.

Mother's Day is the second Sunday in May. On Mother's Day this year, I bought a sweater and a bunch of flowers as gifts for my mother, thanking her for her hard work. Mother was very happy after receiving the gift.

My pet

My pet is a teddy bear. His name is Xiao Bai. He is white. He has blue eyes and blue ears. His hands and feet are blue, too He is very naughty. He likes to make fun of me. He likes reading. He accompanied me when I was unhappy. He is my good friend.

My pet

My pet is a teddy bear. His name is Xiao Bai. He is white. He has blue eyes and blue ears. His hands and feet are blue, too He is very naughty. He likes playing with me. He likes reading. He accompanied me when I was unhappy. He is my good friend.

My new teacher.

My new teacher is a science teacher. He is very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a nose that is neither too big nor too small. He often wears a new black shirt, brown trousers and two big shoes.

My new teacher.

My new teacher is a science teacher. He is very pretentious. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a moderate nose. He often wears a new black shirt, gray trousers and two big shoes.

My good friend.

My name is XXX. I have a good friend. Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China. Her mother is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to music. Liu Yun likes playing the violin and riding a bike. Every morning, she walks to school. Every night, she reads newspapers at home. Then she goes to bed at nine. This is my good friend Liu Yun.

My good friend.

My name is xxx and I have a good friend. Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China. Her mother is a singer and likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter and likes listening to music. Liu Yun likes playing the violin and riding a bike. Every morning, she goes to school. In the evening, she reads newspapers at home. Then go to bed at nine o'clock. This is my good friend Liu Yun.