Ask that knowledgeable person to help me revise my poem. Cao's "Tortoise Life" is still a short sentence, and the poem is particularly funny.

Although the dragon is brave, it has its moments.

The crane was driving in the fog and finally it was covered with dust.

Alas for Zhongmou, the fief is thousands of miles away;

Er Qiao, not your wife.

Shang Xiang Xiaomei married Liu Bei again;

I advise you to leave early, and you will live forever.

I am glad to use this poem to express my inner desire. -changed from "Although the tortoise is alive"

-Hong Jiayi at sea