Write off-topic paragraphs in a composition

1. Rethinking how to write 400 words When I was in the first grade of primary school, I quarreled with my good friend. Here's the thing.

In an art class, my good friend borrowed crayons from me, and I lent them to him very readily. When he was drawing, the crayon suddenly broke somehow, so he returned half of it to me and the other half continued to draw by himself. When I saw this half of the crayons, I thought to myself: Why did he break the crayons without telling me, and return the half I had left before? I just glanced at him and saw that he was still drawing with my crayons. And painted with relish. At this time, my heart is particularly sad. Why is the other half of the crayon I lent him still in his hand? I was very unhappy and said, "You broke my crayon without telling me and left half of it in your own hands. I want you to compensate me for a new crayon. " "What's the big deal?" He said loudly. In this way, we got into a fight, and then no one spoke to anyone.

After school, I went home and told my mother about it. My mother criticized me and then said, "You should be tolerant of your classmates. You can't quarrel over a trivial matter. " After listening to my mother, I regretted it. When I went to school the next day, I sincerely apologized to my good friend as soon as I saw him.

Our classmates should unite and be friendly, help each other and resolve conflicts. We can't let a little thing spoil our friendship.

2. Ask for an off-topic composition: the off-topic phenomenon of composition in the examination room. Two orioles singing green willows-each speaking his own words.

(Two-part allegorical saying) Sun Jinli, Hebei, let's diagnose the "off-topic composition" together. 1. Off-topic words in place After an exam, I saw such a composition called "Beautiful Campus". Reading without thinking will make you feel that you have written well.

But when you read it carefully, you will find the problem-digression. Below, I dedicate this composition to everyone, and everyone will comment on it together.

Beautiful Campus Our campus has beautiful scenery in all seasons. In spring, trees take out new branches and grow green leaves; The wheat seedlings have also been stretched.

Spring is like a shy little girl, hiding, secretly painting the earth with green mountains, green waters and beautiful flowers; Yan Zi flew back from the south. Look, everything has changed, flowers have become bright, people have become beautiful, and the campus has put on new clothes.

In summer, trees grow in green cages, layer upon layer solid. After class, everyone is jumping under the tree … having a good time.

In autumn, leaves turn yellow and fall in succession; Some Chinese rose flowers are in bud, while others are elegant ... colorful and gorgeous yellow! Gradually, gradually, the weather became cold. He blew a cold wind and sprinkled snowflakes flying all over the sky, making the campus crystal white.

Some children make snowmen and some have snowball fights. It's like a paradise. I like our campus very much.

Let's analyze it. The title of this article is "Beautiful Campus", but when it was written, it was both right and left.

For example, in the passage of "Spring", spring is like a shy little girl, hiding from each other and secretly painting green mountains and green waters on the earth. And beautiful flowers.

For this paragraph, don't be fascinated by beautiful words. What's wrong with this paragraph? It turns out that this paragraph is beside the point in position.

The topic is "Beautiful Campus", which requires us to write about the campus, but the land outside the campus, "green mountains and green waters". Oh, there is another sentence: Mai Miaoshen.

It suddenly occurred to me that there are no wheat seedlings on our campus, but there are wheat seedlings outside the campus. This is beside the point again.

Second, the time digression is also after an exam, I read my classmates' papers. The title of the composition is "Enlightenment from a Class".

A little author found something unusual in trivial matters. But let's not be confused by this unusual truth, because it is also beside the point.

Please see: what a class gave me. In a handicraft class, I waved my knife carefully, but carelessly folded one piece of paper after another and tore it back and forth, making it wide open and unprepared. Later, I almost didn't need a knife, so I tore it directly by hand.

However, accidentally, a piece of paper crossed my thumb. First there was a pain, then a chill. Then look-the paper really cut my hand! At that time, I was really puzzled: the knife didn't cut my finger, but the paper did ... I seriously thought about this problem and finally understood: we often relax our vigilance and are unprepared for soft things, such as a page of paper; For something sharper, such as a knife, you will be very wary. Because be careful; No matter how dangerous things are; They will be safe. Similarly, because of carelessness, things that are safe now can also cause harm.

In the evening, I was watching Naughty Ma Xiaotiao with relish. I accidentally brushed my thumb off the edge of the book when I turned the page. In a flash, I felt a pain. As soon as I saw it, there was another cut on my finger, and blood was flowing out-it was cut by paper again. Through this incident, I finally know: be careful, be careful, and don't despise anything.

This composition is beside the point. Because the topic of the composition is "Enlightenment from a Class", but the little author has gone beyond the time category of a class-added a section about "evening".

Third, out of an eye in an exam, in order to test students' grasp of the eye, I came up with the topic of "a funny person who is willing to do good deeds." A classmate is impossible.

He wrote: a funny classmate who is willing to do good deeds, Gao He in my class is not very good-looking, but he has a stunt, that is, what to learn. Therefore, wherever he goes, he is full of laughter, as if he were a happy angel.

Speaking of his wit, it really makes people laugh! Once in a Chinese class, I suddenly meowed. Why do cats meow in class? Nine times out of ten, it's that "future crosstalk master" again.

This time, he was unlucky. Of course, it is inevitable to taste it when you enter the office.

Not only was I criticized by the teacher, but I also had to write a critical letter! It's really in distress situation. Once, I went shopping with him and met a little girl with tears all over her face.

He asked the little girl, "Little sister, are you separated from your mother?" The little girl nodded. He walked up with a figure-of-eight step, which suddenly made the little girl smile through tears.

He also accompanied the little girl to find her mother. After many twists and turns, I finally found the little girl's mother.

The little girl's mother asked him which school he was from. He pointed to the red scarf on his chest and took another step. I admire him from the bottom of my heart

Students, do you think he is a funny and willing to do good deeds? The title of this composition is "interesting and willing to do good", so we should stick to these words when choosing the topic. However, the passage "Gao He learns to meow" chosen by the author is purely a description of a student who makes trouble in class, far from being "funny and willing to do good".

So this paragraph is impossible. Then affect the quality of the whole composition.

3. Reflection on Off-topic Writing This composition is off-topic, which is really puzzling. Later, after reflection, I found the reason:

1, I didn't grasp the key words in the title requirements, and I didn't understand them deeply, which is the fundamental reason why this composition is off topic. After the teacher's comments, I now know that writing a composition does not mean writing as fast as you can, but that you should read the requirements of the topic first and then spend some time reviewing the topic. It's not a pity, it's a knife sharpener.

2. I don't study hard at ordinary times, I don't read many articles and don't know how to write.

3/ I don't pay attention to observation in my life, and I have accumulated little life experience. I don't know what to write.

In the future, we must read more books, pay attention to life, carefully examine the topic when writing a composition, deeply understand the meaning of the topic, learn from experience, sum up lessons, and not repeat the same mistakes.

4. Writing is always off topic. Hello, there are several reasons for digression:

1, improper examination. Improper examination of the topic is because the meaning of the topic cannot be correctly understood. Once a classmate wrote a composition entitled "Great Mother". This classmate wrote: "I don't know greatness, and there are no great classmates in our class." If I had to write, I would make up a great mother. ..... "This is absolutely beside the point.

How to examine the questions correctly? In two ways. First, we should correctly understand the meaning of every word in the topic. For example, the title "Remember a meaningful thing", in which "remember" means description, that is to say, this is a narrative, "one thing" is one thing, not two or more, "meaningful" is not an ordinary thing, but something meaningful to the author, and "something" is an article to remember, not to remember people, not to explain.

Not an argumentative essay. In this way, the topic will be examined clearly. The other is to pay attention to the key words in the topic. The key words in the title are often the key to the article. For example, the key word of "School in Twenty Years" is school. The theme of this article is about schools. For example, the keyword "I grew up with Xiaoshu" is very long, and the theme of the article is the growth process of Xiaoshu and me.

2. Improper structure. Improper structure means that the article can't stick to the theme in structural arrangement. Often manifested in the beginning and end can not echo well, resulting in inconsistency and digression. Therefore, we must pay attention to the end-to-end echo in the structure, which can avoid this kind of mistake very well. It's best to emphasize the theme at the end.

5. The composition requirements of the primary school composition are off topic, and it is clearly written "Please write a story about you and the book". What you wrote is "Never like reading and fall in love with reading", and it is also a story about yourself and the book, and it is not divorced from the composition requirements.

But the content is "from hating reading to liking reading", and the title of the composition is "Reading makes me grow", which is not off topic. If the content specifically says that you didn't like reading before, ask your parents if you have any questions. Now, through reading, you have not only learned to use your own brain, but also learned a lot of truth and knowledge, so you have not strayed from the topic. Mainly written to grow in reading, grow in reading.

Look at the attitude of the teacher who corrects the papers. If you are not strict and your composition is well written, you will not stray from the topic. If it is strict, it will digress by 2 or 3 points.

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