What is classical Chinese (composition)

First, pay attention to accumulation and lay a solid foundation

The new curriculum standard points out that Chinese curriculum should "guide students to correctly understand and use the Chinese of the motherland, enrich language accumulation, cultivate language sense and develop thinking". Life is the source of Chinese learning. The training of "100 new words" makes language accumulation, language sense cultivation and thinking development directly come from life. Ask students to record the news that happened around them that day, or what they heard, read and saw that day, with a length of about 100 words, so as to make the language concise and smooth. There is an essential difference between keeping a diary and writing something new with hundreds of words. We don't want to be long, we don't want much, we just want perfection, and we put more energy into "how to write".

Reading is a special kind of life. Newspaper clipping training requires students to newspaper clipping every day, starting from the theme, content and emotion of the article, or starting from the writing method of the article, adding comments, experiences and associations to the article. This kind of training not only broadens students' reading range and increases reading quantity, but also provides favorable conditions and broad space for students to choose reading materials and write independently, and implements the reading habit of "no pen and ink, no reading". There is an essential difference between newspaper clippings and post-reading. The latter focuses on "feeling", while newspaper clippings attach importance to students' evaluation ability, which is not only manifested in the "feeling" of writing content, but also in the "evaluation" of writing content, process and method, so as to appreciate the success of the article and establish their own composition standards.

The two courses are carried out alternately, which allows students to absorb nutrition directly or indirectly from life and also solves the problem of "what to write".

Second, news guides are easy to use.

The author thinks that composition training should go through three stages: mastering composition characteristics-mastering writing methods-improving composition ability through continuous practice. Therefore, in the designed composition training sequence (news writing training-imagination training-thinking training-language optimization training-research composition training), "news writing training" focuses on letting students master composition characteristics and writing methods, while imagination, thinking, language optimization and research.

The composition should tell the truth, the truth, the truth, and not lie, empty talk or cliche, but teachers need to repeat it from primary school to high school. With a simple and standardized structure (generally an inverted pyramid) and easy-to-master news (news) writing training, News Guide helps students quickly break into the kingdom of composition, firmly grasp the truth and novelty of composition content and emotion, and make the language concise and refined, which has since become a habit.

Strict requirements for authenticity in news writing can standardize students to write true feelings with typical examples; Strict requirements for news value can standardize students' writing new ideas and cultivate innovative spirit; Accurate, concise and vivid news writing language requirements provide training opportunities for changing students' flashy "student accent"; Observing and thinking about the process of news writing, so as to write news truly and vividly, is very helpful to cultivate students' interest and motivation in writing; Prose-style communication and complementary literary works have also found a new world for middle school students to learn literary language.

Language is accumulated by students in a subtle way, and others, including teachers, can't help, so the training of imagination and thinking ability has become the most effective composition teaching content, and the optimization of training language will be carried out after students have accumulated a certain amount of language. Guo Moruo once said: "Seek the method from the impossible, and seek the method after the law." Compared with the ordinary rapid composition method, the composition training sequence of "news leading the way" seeks the breadth and depth of thinking and the accuracy of language through the training of imagination, thinking and language optimization, and quickly dissolves the standard mode of news without causing the consequences of patterning.

Third, give this tool a four-step written form.

The author believes that writing is a dual transformation process of "divergent thinking-convergent thinking-linear thinking". That is, starting from the writing goal, giving full play to the ability of observation and feeling, and connecting all kinds of knowledge and things from life and mind is "divergent thinking"; Selecting materials, refining ideas, conceiving and planning articles is a process of "gathering thoughts" by constantly sorting out existing materials and viewpoints; The "linear" feature of language (different words and phrases can't be expressed at the same time) is reflected when things in the author's mind become words.

Based on this, the author designed the thinking composition method of 4X building blocks. Its basic steps are: item)-mystery)-thank you)-repair. This method is in line with the new curriculum standard that "we should grasp the links of material selection, conception, drafting and processing, so that students can learn to write in writing practice".

Brain map is a brand-new thinking method developed by Dr. tony bazan in England. Its main point is to write the subject words in the center; Write down any relevant arguments, branch from the central point, branch from different categories, and continue to connect. 4X building block thinking composition method, using brain map as composition tool to help students think. Step "thinking" is essentially divergent thinking. By expanding the clues of association guidance, enriching the content, connecting familiar life and knowledge fields with one thing as the trigger point, guiding students to associate things in three ways: similar association, comparative association and close association, so as to enrich the content of the article comprehensively. Guide students to combine divergent thinking with continuous thinking to make the article profound. The step of "selecting" to improve the brain map is essentially "gathering thinking", which requires students to consider whether to write or not, whether to write or skim, and whether to write first and then divide the content according to the principle of "meeting the requirements of the topic, being correct or reasonable, being novel and unique, and being conducive to giving full play to their advantages". Modern brain science research shows that the left hemisphere is responsible for processing linear information, while the right hemisphere is responsible for processing visual, structural and hierarchical information. The introduction of brain map avoids the linear shortcomings of the traditional composition outline, and makes the process of composition selection, conception and conception diverge or converge, which is more in line with personal thinking habits, and is conducive to mobilizing the coordination between the two hemispheres and improving writing efficiency. The step of "writing" is a "linear" expression of language, which emphasizes one go. The step of "revision" teaches students how to revise, emphasizes reading the composition, and lets students follow the words with the help of language sense and common sense of grammar and rhetoric.

Fourth, practice first and then guide the goal to guide learning

The original composition teaching mode (guidance → writing → marking → commenting), which is still widely used, makes students lose their dominant position, and teachers' guidance replaces students' thinking. The "News Leading" series composition training system adopts the teaching mode of "practice first and then guide", but omits the link of "guide before writing". The teaching process is as follows:

Teacher: Ask and guide students to clarify the meaning of the question.

Health: conceive and sketch the brain map to determine the content "practice first"

Student: I'm a beginner. Let's have a brief check.

Teacher: Guide and discuss evaluation criteria according to facts.

Student: Revise the "post-guidance" according to the guidance and evaluation criteria.

Student: Evaluate and revise each other and show wonderful paragraphs.

"Practice first" respects the individuality and practicality of students' writing, ensures the independence of students' thinking form and content, and writes whatever comes to mind; At the same time, it is also a process for teachers to prepare lessons on the spot, guide and summarize the different situations of different students, and form information feedback in time, so as to know fairly well and change the blindness of guidance. "Post-guidance" integrates guidance, correction and evaluation, so that students can see the characteristics of their thinking in time and modify their compositions according to the actual situation.

The teaching mode of "practice first and then guide" embodies the concept of "guiding learning with goals and promoting writing with evaluation" The "evaluation criteria" discussed by teachers and students have the function of teaching objectives, which is reflected in the revision of students' compositions in class: students revise their compositions according to the evaluation criteria and teachers' guidance, so as to get a good evaluation, thus gaining intensive stimulation and finally mastering the evaluation criteria of compositions.

Q:

What I want is a composition with the theme of "classical Chinese experience". Please find me some such model essays, which are urgently needed! ! ! ! ! ! thank you ! ! ! !

Answer:

Classical Chinese "turning point" college entrance examination perfect score composition

Taste it and say: vultures belong to the same family, called falcons, and hunt in the wild every day. Every year when there is drought, the vegetation will wither.

The roe deer and the rabbit fight for their lives, and the falcons are tired. Or fight the sky, migrate to the HarmonyOS system, and seek the top of the mountain; Or broken wing feathers, dust, deviation.

In the rotting corpse. The former is proud of the eagle, while the latter is ashamed of the vulture.

I heard here that the year of drought was also a turning point for the Falcon family. At this time, your ambition is different, and your future is different. Ownership condition

What? Just what you want.

Everything in the world, the turning point of Austria is not only here, but also everywhere. Have you ever seen a clear spring flowing in a big stone?

? It's also the turn of spring. Choose to retire, hide in the shade of stone, hide in the forest, but not famous in the world, long-term decay will not heal; Those who choose to move forward will not encounter any obstacles.

Fear, spin and hit a million times, but it turned into a deep valley and stopped the boat. Did you see the wind blocking the cliff? This change of wind direction is also

. Those who choose to avoid are scattered outside the mountain, invisible for a while and disappearing for a while; If you choose to move forward, it will take hundreds of billions of years to gain.

Red desert and flying sand cover the sky. However, the shape of things depends on the turning point.

On the other hand, in the long river of history, there is no choice but to turn around. The move of a hundred miles, the official position of Sun Shuai, is endless.

The pain of adversity. However, determined to win, but not easy, Shi Qian's heart was tortured but not discouraged, and he resolutely chose life under heavy humiliation, and finally.

The history of the swan song and the coquettish charm without rhyme made the later literati sigh. There is also the ambition of the marquis of Wu, inheriting the virtues of the former emperor and serving the country wholeheartedly.

The sword refers to the central plains, endless. Although the plan is for the street pavilion, I will not choose to retreat, and then I will set off four times. I will eventually become famous all over the world and win eternity.

Sigh.

From this point of view, most people who transfer are trapped. Only those who have ambition and never give up can become excellent people. Wandering at every little setback.

And those who returned can't be counted in thousands of years, but those who left their names are not there!

It is known that there will be people who fall into the dust and mud, those who choose to die, and those who choose to rise, and they will gain enough; Apes climbed the cliff,

There will be those who miss and break their arms, those who lose their hearts will die, and those who struggle will get magical powers. People will fall in the storm, and those who choose a peaceful life will find it.

Living in a cave, I am ignorant all my life; If you choose to stand proudly, you will walk silently, wait for the rainbow to be picturesque, and then climb the flat road and soak in the breeze. no

In order to compete for rice, Tao Qian chose to retire and give up glory, so "Back to Xi" was told through the ages; Inviolability, Wen Tianxiang.

Choosing to die and abandon an official is a burning eye and a burning heart.

Yu Yu is sighing: Everyone has his own will and can't impose it; However, it spreads justice all over the world and all over the world.

Later generations, those who are not afraid of difficulties and obstacles and are determined to be angry are none other than them!

Q:

Not writing classical Chinese, but the experience of writing classical Chinese ~ ~ (* _ *) ... hee hee.

Answer:

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There is an old saying: "If there is a blessing, there will be a curse, and if there is a curse, there will be a blessing." Consolidating good luck is the benevolence of heaven and earth, and everything is based on nature. Non-human beings can move around at will, only idealism can deceive themselves, and fantasy is based on obscenity. Don't judge heroes by success or failure, and don't judge gains or losses by merits.

Gain and loss should be attributed to the heart. Good is rewarded with good, evil with evil, and everyone will die unless God destroys them! Is trapped in his heart, lonely, make it die.

What is this? It is "small" to make the best use of things and people. Bigger than a skeleton, swimming in the universe. Playing the piano and swimming on the grass, without the burden of work, is so happy. Chai Men barking, pounding clothes, without this disorderly ear, how idle. I don't bow down for five buckets of rice. God-given opportunity, value for money!

In the past, the saints returned. If you can't bear it, you will be worried. If you go back, you won't change your fun. Eating and drinking is enough. This move is also a saint's move. Comfort your heart, lose your appearance and gain reason. It is a saint.

He who is content will not be poor. Heaven can't curse those who swallow their words. If you can't ask for anything, heaven will not be cheap. Those who can be deformed will not get sick in the sky. You can't be greedy for life, and Heaven will not die. People who can be content with the status quo can't be sleepy. Those who can produce talents cannot be immune to it. People who can set an example for future generations of the world cannot be denied. If you can't do this, God will give it to you. What do you want?

Faithfulness and due diligence are the heart. Governing the country is called learning. Security will change, that is, talent. After heaven and latitude, it is called Wen. Ji moonlight wind, called degree. Everything is one, which is called benevolence. Excuse me, sir, what can you learn from it? I'm afraid it's only one or two. And still! The world is uncertain, so you can do it with your heart. A gentleman is stupid and ashamed of his "seven feet"! The sea is wide and the fish jumps, and the sky is high and birds fly. You can't measure it unless you are a gentleman. You can't have such integrity unless you are a gentleman. The pearl hides light and flatters oneself, and the jade mountain contains brilliance. It is impossible for a gentleman to have this intention. You can't have this idea unless you are a gentleman.

The past cannot be remonstrated, but the living can still be pursued. Today's people scoff at the spread of Fu, and they don't feel that the former sages are afraid of future generations. Life has been in the world for decades, but it is rich and floating clouds. If you get your ambition, it will last forever. Big heart, let everything in the world. Empty your heart and be a good person on earth. Calm down and talk about the world. Sneak into their hearts and observe the principles of the world. Keep a correct attitude and deal with the changes in the world.

A gentleman is not distorted for "nothing" or "small profits". Instead, we should have nothing to desire and achieve a harmonious situation between man and nature!

That's right!