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-"Water Melody and Pang Fuyou" Confucius pointed out to his son: "This is the fruit of your family." -"The Son of Yang" is lame alone, and father and son protect each other.

-"A blessing in disguise is a blessing in disguise." When you lose money at dusk, your family is extremely wise, but you doubt your neighbor's father. -"Naoko Doubts Neighborhood" Fiona Fang said: "Duke Zhou and Confucius went out of the world and moved around, such as Wan Li.

Duke Zhou did not learn from Confucius, and Confucius did not learn from Duke Zhou. "-"Chen Yuanfang waits for Yuan Gong "1. Zhang Xiaoxiang, Pang You's father, welcomed the dust in the snow, leaving a lingering charm in the wind.

Who wrote the tragic story and blew the horn of the ancient city building? The lake and the sea are full of heroism, so you can light candles to see Wu Gou.

Leaving the place where you like to burn rhinoceros, the waves are floating all over the sky. I remember that year, Zhou and Xie, rich in the Spring and Autumn Period, Xiao Qiao's first marriage, and the sachet was still unsolved, which made him swim well.

The sunset at the rock head of Chibi and the grass beside the Feishui Bridge are so mysterious that people are worried. I will go with the wind and swear to flow.

Yang's son Yang's son is nine years old and very clever. Junping Kong thought of his father, but when his father was away, he shouted.

In order to set fruit, the fruit has bayberry. Confucius pointed out to his son and said, "This is the fruit of your family."

The son replied, "I haven't heard that peacock is a master of poultry." A blessing in disguise is a blessing in disguise. Liu An is close to the fortress, and there are good artists. The horse died without cause, and it belongs to Hu.

Everyone hung up, and his father said, "Why isn't this a blessing?" After living for several months, his horse returned to Hu. Everyone congratulated him, and his father said, "Why can't this be a disaster?" The family is rich and good, and the son is easy to ride, but he broke his stomach.

Everyone hung up, and his father said, "Why isn't this a blessing?" After living for a year, the Hu people entered the fortress, and the Dingzhuang people played with strings. The man near the fort, the deceased was nineteen.

This alone is lame. Father and son protect each other. Naoko suspects that Han has rich people, so the wall is broken.

His son said, "If you don't build it, you must come in." The old man next door said so.

That night, as expected, a lot of property was lost. The family was very grateful to Zi Cong, but they suspected that the theft was the old man's next step. 5. Chen Yuanfang will wait for Yuan Gong, Liu Yiqing, Chen Yuanfang and Yuan Gong at 1 1.

"What did you do?" Yuan Gong asked, "Your father, who is the official on the mountain, praised him and what did he do?" Fiona Fang said: "My father is too tall, so he should comfort the strong with virtue;" Give goodwill to the weak, let people do things with ease, and over time, people will respect him more, "Yuan Gong said." Those who go alone are doing this.

I didn't know your family was lonely and your father was lonely. Fiona Fang said: "Duke Zhou and Confucius came from the same world and traveled like Wan Li. Duke Zhou does not learn from Confucius, and Confucius does not learn from Duke Zhou. "

2. (Thanks) Father Thanks in Classical Chinese Whenever Tomb-Sweeping Day comes, I will think of my respectable and lovely father. It has been six years since he left us. At this time, I will go to worship him a few days in advance, add some shovel to his grave, chat with him, report peace, and reassure my father under the grave. My father is a medical worker. Although he didn't do anything vigorous and earth-shattering in his life, he is the most respected person in Fiona Fang.

I remember my father's last visit was on a dark rainy night. A Kazakh child in a neighboring village accidentally drank pesticides. This village is more than 30 kilometers away from the county seat, and the traffic is very inconvenient. It must be too late to send it to the county hospital. The victim's family is very difficult. At that time, even a hundred dollars could not be raised, and the family could only cry around the convulsive child. A young man invited his father and said that his father was a bodhisattva. So, someone volunteered to ride a motorcycle to pick up his father. At that time, my father was old, suffering from lung cancer and recuperating at home. He hasn't seen a doctor for more than half a year. It is said that a five-year-old boy drank pesticides by mistake. In spite of his mother's stop, he got on the motorcycle without wearing a raincoat.

Unexpectedly, the road was slippery when it was dark, and the young man rode his motorcycle too fast. He had an accident on the road. His father was thrown out and broke his left leg. My seventy-year-old father fainted at that time. It was a young man who met his father. He was scared out of his wits. Fortunately, the second group of people sent by the victim's family arrived, and they discussed how to send his father to the county hospital. At this time, the awakened father endured severe pain and asked the men to carry him to the child's house in time to see the child first. Seeing that the child was saved, the father was admitted to the hospital.

During his stay in hospital, the victim visited his father in the hospital many times.

And put forward that the hospitalization expenses should be borne by them, but they were politely declined by their father, and even one hundred eggs were returned. At that time, we didn't understand my father and thought that my father was senile and not worth it! If there is no charge for a visit, forget it. Why are you so kind? Besides, my father's hospitalization is not at public expense. Father smiled and said, "His family is really in trouble. Let alone asking them to pay 2000 yuan, even if it is 200 yuan, it may not be possible to borrow it. What happened that night was just an accident. Don't force others to do it You are still young, and you have a long way to go. No matter what happens, you must think about it from the other side's position, so that you can live up to your conscience. "

My father's words are not brave words, but I feel deeply. His principle of dealing with people has been inexhaustible in my life.

I want to send my father a bamboo slip on Father's Day, which can be engraved with about 400 words. I want to find an article in classical Chinese. Fu Weisheng rules the world with filial piety. What's more, my loneliness is more serious, and only my body and shadow comfort each other every day? But because grandma Liu is like a sunset in the western hills. My grandma Liu, thanks to her promotion, can't wait. My grandmother has no minister and looks after each other.

County persecution, never stopped serving her, not nine years old, accusing me of evading orders, I served her and took medicine. I'm pregnant with the crow feeding back. Some time ago, Tai Shoukui. I lived at the cost of my life, knowing in my heart that I was appointed as a doctor. I was very lonely. I refused to satisfy my little wish until I had a son very late.

I am forty-four years old. There are no close relatives outside, not just people in Shu and Yizhou. My bitterness; The state official urged me to die first, hoping that I could fulfill my wish to support my grandmother. If I don't have a grandmother, I will try my best to pay my respects to your majesty.

The days are long and the breath is weak. After I arrived at the secretariat, I was honored that there was no servant to take care of the portal at home, so I was educated. My grandmother Liu is six out of ninety this year.

Catch Feng Chengchao.

It was founded in the Jin Dynasty. Four years old, you pity me for losing my father and being sick? But with Liu's dying. People with humble origins and low status like me. Politeness is because no one takes care of my grandmother. Liu Shu is lucky, even today, when his family is in decline, his blessings are few, and Liu is sick every day. I will report the above difficulties on the table.

Original text. be willing

If she is humble and sincere and doesn't care about honor, it is impossible to spend the rest of her life. The accusation is humble; I will obey my own affairs and stay in bed all the year round. Former satrap Wei Xiao disobeyed, especially. I am invincible.

My loving father died because he was afraid of dogs and horses. My uncle forced my mother to change her original ambition, but I was lonely and powerless. My uncle seized my mother's ambition, but the days of filial piety and dedication in front of Grandma Liu were running out. In addition to thanking the imperial court for its kind reception. I really want to obey the emperor's will and serve my country at once. I want to have a look. Now I am a humble prisoner of national subjugation;

Chen Qingbiao (Shimi)

I said it in confidence. Grandma Liu, however, has long been very ill and lonely, so she will not live today, and she will live alone.

Spoil life, don't give in to life, and go to no.

I'm afraid at night, I have no brothers. If I am old,

I work in the East Palace. Your Majesty still has a long way to go.

Thank you for taking it as the best answer. Give points.

No uncle. The article describes the great kindness of my grandmother in raising herself, but tells her not to. How dare she hesitate for other purposes? I want to believe in Mercedes-Benz, and I want to listen to the whispers. minister

To support ownerless. The State Council is coming. Living alone, my loving father saw his back. Servants often get sick when they are young. The door is weak and as thin as cicada's wings, which is really beyond my ability to sacrifice and repay the court.

Having an affair. I have few illnesses, and I have no answers.

Children, until adults are independent. However, the edict is urgent and strict, and it is really humble to appoint me as a horse washer.

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My courtier Shimei issued a statement, inspected my courtier and accused my courtier of being slow. It is precisely because of these that I really can't bear to leave my grandmother and travel far. I served as a prince, and I was over-promoted. I have no intention to show off my honor and integrity, and live together. I have been a doctor and a doctor. Our three generations have represented Wenda, and respectfully submit this form. Our life is in danger, but we deliberately ignore it. Today, I am conquered people, and I am lonely. Originally, my career was accessible. This figure was witnessed by officials from Huda and Liangzhou, and I recommended my liegeman as Xiaolian.

Grandma Liu's situation is very embarrassing, which is known by the non-loners in central Sichuan and the herdsmen in Erzhou. She advised my ministers to go on the road, did the work of ministers and raised them by themselves. She often lay in bed until she died. There are few ministers.

Things are different, and if you don't abandon them, you will die. Bird incident. The imperial court issued another imperial edict. I am well-known, but my complaint has not been approved, and my life is very generous. My grandmother is 96 years old this year. The county magistrate urged me to hit the road at once, but I was still pitied, nursed and bathed. Neither an uncle nor an uncle, he can't walk at the age of nine. I don't have a grandmother, I'm a scholar, and I'm Brother Xian. I have a degree of advance and retreat. A close relative who has never made meritorious service outside. Liu Suying was ill and longed for sparks. This article is regarded as one of the representative works of lyric writing in the history of China literature. Four years later, all the old people. I am on the horns of a dilemma.

I think the holy dynasty ruled the world with filial piety. Lonely and helpless. I'm so shocked that I won't take office for the rest of my life, but my grandmother Liu's illness is getting worse every day. The imperial edict was severe, and I suffered misfortune when I was a child. Later, Ci recommended his liegeman to be a scholar. He had a rest at night and showed his true feelings. He was dying. As he should support his grandmother's righteousness, he personally raised me and refused to take office. Chen Mi is forty-four years old this year.

Therefore, we can't just waste the distance, except the minister washing the horse.

The minister's hard work is unstable, even for the humble. Born in June, Qingming political enlightenment. I was just born six months ago, and I will tie a grass ring to repay your kindness when I die. Is it urgent? Besides, when I was young, I used to be an official of Shu Han. I was an admirer and a doctor. There is a saying that "it is unfilial to read Shi Mi's Chen Qingbiao without shedding tears", and I poured out my difficulties that I could not do. How dare I miss Chen Qingbiao written by Shi Mi to Emperor Wu of Jin Dynasty in the Western Jin Dynasty? As for its establishment, even the gods of heaven and earth can see clearly, and officials are doomed. I served the soup. Mother and grandson. The imperial edict is quite special, which cannot be reported by the first minister; If my grandmother hadn't taken care of me, she would have reported Liu's short life. Soon she was generous and tactful, and let her grandmother Liu Neng get away with it for the rest of her life. I hope your majesty will forgive my stupid and sincere heart.

4. Send my father's ancient poems to the children in the village to play by the stream-Lu You

After the rain, the stream leveled the bank and watched the children in the village play late.

Bamboo and horses are sonorous, and kites are whistling in the wind.

In the third winter, I learned from Confucian scholars temporarily, and thousands of lotus roots were also cultivated from elders.

Literacy is roughly equivalent to paying tribute, and you don't have to work hard for fame.

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Mourn for my parents and give birth to me. The Book of Songs

-Poor my parents. It's too hard to give birth to me and raise me!

What's wrong with having no father? What's wrong with not having a mother? The Book of Songs

-Who should I rely on when my father is dead? Who will protect you without your mother?

My father gave birth to me, and my mother bowed to me, caressed me, nursed me, cared about me, answered me, and went in and out of my abdomen. The Book of Songs

Mourn for my parents and give birth to me. The Book of Songs

What's wrong with having no father? What's wrong with not having a mother? The Book of Songs

A father's virtue is a son's legacy. Strict words

Parents are highly respected; Give children a good education. Motto couplets

Don't be happy with children, and don't sigh without children. Han Yu

Everyone knows that it is good to have boys and girls, but they don't know that men and women will make people old. Wang Jian

All parents in the world; The rarest person in the world, brother. Motto Lian Bi

Being a parent is the best in the world; Being a child is the greatest filial piety in the world. Motto Lian Bi

My father gave birth to me, and my mother bowed to me, caressed me, nurtured me, nurtured me,

Take care of me and answer me. The Book of Songs

Father is not kind, son is not filial; A brother who is not a friend is disrespectful; Husband is unfair.

This woman is not smooth. Yan Zhitui [Southern and Northern Dynasties]

There are no virtuous fathers and brothers in life, no strict teachers and friends outside, and few people can succeed. [Song] Lv Gongzhu

Parents do whatever they want, and I will continue to describe it; I cherish the thoughts of those parents. Motto Lian Bi

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[Qing] Song Lingyun's memory of his father

Wu's book is broken. What do you hate everywhere?

The dream soul is not afraid of Chang 'an, and has borrowed the wind to ask for daily life several times.

Xicifu

one

As night falls outside the window, everything is covered with black veil.

Look up at the waning moon and look down at my father.

Don't regret being born with a broken heart.

Meet in a dream and wake up with tears.

second

Autumn locks the heart deeply, and the fallen leaves lament.

Lonely lights shine in the moonlight, missing the long night of resentment.

The full moon is full, and the loving father sleeps under the spring.

When is the reunion? Soul will meet in a dream.

There are no virtuous fathers and brothers in life, no strict teachers and friends outside, and few people can succeed. [Song] Lv Gongzhu

Leisure Thought in Beiguo

There is grass in front of the mountain and behind it. You cover the door when you go out all day. Every time I think of the flesh and blood beside me, I come to see the savage's children.

I know that when I die, everything on earth has nothing to do with me. But the only thing that hurts me is that I failed to see the reunification of the motherland. Julian Waghann Beiding Central Plains Day, don't forget to tell Nai Weng about the family sacrifice! Show it to your son.

Let the wheel of time rest on the thin body.

Run over back and forth

Let the burden of life fall on the scarred shoulders.

Hold on tight

You have no regrets.

As always, walking on the bumpy road.

Silent and persistent

Your son is the hope of your life.

It's your inner support.

Countless tragic days

You gave it to your son.

Silent teaching theory

You are persistent forever.

For my son.

Open up the road of life

Ah, father

You released your son.

Sail of hope

And you, that's it.

The river that carries my life

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My father is a bright light in my heart, a mentor in my study, a good partner in my play, my pride, my pride. ...

My father is a beacon in my heart, my father is my teacher, my father is my good partner, and my father is also my pride and pride.

When I was in primary school, all three people in my family were studying, and only one person was working, and that was my father.

When I was in primary school, all three people in my family were studying, and only my father was working.

I remember when I was about to sign up for school, my father always went out early and came back late so that all three sisters could study. Every day when I sleep, my father works on the construction site. When I woke up, my father was on his way home. When I was at school, my father was already working on the construction site. My father's right foot was burned three times on the construction site. Every time I stand in front of the door and watch my father limp on the construction site, my heart is pulled by something. I really want to cry. Only crying can vent my feelings and guilt.

Remember the name of the school. Dad can read it to my three sisters. I always go out in the morning and return it at night. Whenever I go to bed, my father is working. When I woke up, my father was on his way. When I went to school, Weng was already at work. My father's right taste is focused on my work, and every time I stand in front of the door and watch my father hovering over it, what is my heart? I believe I want to cry, and only crying can vent my feelings. This is my fault.

Now I am in middle school. There are two people studying in our family, and only one person is working, that is, my father.

Today, there are two people studying in my family, one is working, and that is my father.

I remember my father always didn't go home in the morning and evening before school started. Although there are only two people studying in our family now, the family situation is getting worse and worse. Father works until two o'clock in the morning every night and starts working before five o'clock in the morning. Dad was too tired, so we discussed with mom and asked dad to rent a room in the factory first, and then tried to solve the rent problem later. We all agreed and decided to rent a room in the factory first.

Remember the name of the school, dad often doesn't go home every morning and evening. Although everyone is studying at home now, the more bleak the home is, my father works until two o'clock every day and gets off work before five o'clock. My father was too tired. I discussed with my mother. My father rented a room in the factory first. After paying the rent, I decided to rent a room in the factory first.

It was Saturday, and my father should have come back. As expected, father came back. My mother told my father to rent a room in the factory first, but my father refused, saying that he had no money to pay the rent. My mother gushed that my health is very important and I will find a way to pay the rent in the future. The three of us held our own words, and finally dad gave in. During that time, my father was really tired and even his hands were worn out.

Today is Saturday and Sunday. Dad has already paid it back. Sure enough, Weng came back. My mom told my dad that his dad rented a house in the factory first, but my dad refused, so he asked Yunhe to pay the rent. As mother said, he is heavy and has a picture of the back of the house. My mother and son are talking to each other, but my father died. During that time, my father was very tired and my strength was exhausted.

To sign up, the money is finally enough. On the day we signed up together, my father's left shoulder was touched by the faucet of the car, which was very painful, but my father didn't say it, but I could see it from his painful eyes. I asked my father with concern, "Dad, are you all right?" Dad smiled bitterly and said to me, "Nothing, let's go and sign up." Later, my father hurt more, and I hurt all over. I am often sad and pray for my father every day. Dad finally recovered, and I jumped and jumped with joy!

If you want to be famous, you have enough money. On the day of naming, my father's left shoulder was touched by the front of the car, which was very painful. However, I can see from my father's bitter eyes that I earnestly asked my father, "Dad, what are you doing?" . "The father said with a wry smile," nothing, my name. "."Stepfather is more painful, and my whole body aches. I pray for my father every day. My father recovered, and I jumped for joy! !

Although my father is not very tall, he takes good care of us. He will always be a self-improvement person in my eyes. He will always be the most selfless and greatest person in my eyes. He will always be my pride, my pride, forever. ...

Although my father is not tall, he told me to come to me. He will always be the one who takes a breath in my eyes. He will never come to me. He will always be my pride, my pride, forever. ...

Space is classical Chinese.

6. "Father" reading answer 1. Pay attention to the following words. The threshold is wide, steep and cheap. 2. How to understand "I feel that my father's footsteps are stepping on my heart and making a heavy sound"? 3. What can show my father's love for me in this article? 4. How many times did the author write his tears? 5. What kind of father does this article describe? Reference answer:1.k ? n chu ? d ǒ u pi á n2á n2. My father wants me to study, although he works hard. I am both moved and heavy. 3.(2) Borrowing money for his son to go to school; 3 send your son to the station on an empty stomach; Buy hot noodle soup for my son and a pot helmet for myself. 4. Be grateful. 5. Be kind and hardworking, and do whatever it takes to study for my son.

7. Gao Linguang's translation of classical Chinese urgently needs someone to ask a gentleman to educate his children.

One day, a person came to apply for a job, and the host said, "Our family is poor, and there may be many places that are impolite to our husbands. What do you think? " The gentleman said, "Don't be so polite, I don't care at all." The host said, "Can you eat vegetables?" A: "Yes."

The host said: "There is no heavy work at home. You can clean the yard and open and close the door. Is it okay for the old gentleman to do it? " A: "OK." The host said: "sometimes family members, women and children have to buy odds and ends, and Mr. wronged can go." A: "Yes."

The host said, "If so, that would be great!" Later, Mr. Wang also said: "I also have a sentence, I hope the host will not be surprised." "What did the master ask him? Mr. Wang said, "I am ashamed that I didn't study hard when I was a child!" "The host said," Why do you say such modest words? "

The gentleman said, "I dare not bully you. I don't know a word! " "Xiao Gong and Wu Liang extorted money, and the Shu people called it hammering. A gentleman is good at nailing. He saw a freshman urinating next to a pot pool, so he grabbed him and scared him, saying, "You are at school, it is impolite to urinate in the pot pool without authorization." "

Ordered the gatekeeper to be humane: "Take him to Minglun Hall for interrogation. This is the biggest disrespect and should be guarded. " The student begged him to say, "Students are willing to admit punishment when they make mistakes."

The gentleman said, "Fortunately, it is a small hand. If it is a big hand, it will be fined 12 silver. Solve the small hand and punish five or two. "

The student said, "I only have one piece of silver on me, which weighs twelve taels." I am willing to give you half. " Mr. Wang said, "Why do you want to separate? Give it all to me. "

The student said, "The teacher made it very clear that the solution is five taels, so why twelve taels?" The gentleman said, "Never mind, even though you gave it to me, I'll let you relieve yourself by the basin and give you five taels of silver in the future. Don't tell anyone, I'm afraid it will destroy my study rules. "

No concubinage. I have an amazing wife who has read a lot of books. Her husband is going to marry a concubine, saying, "It happened before. Qi people have a wife and a concubine. "

The wife said, "If I am like you, I want to find another husband." Her husband asked, "Has this ever happened before?" The wife replied, "There is a woman named Cheng in Henan who has two husbands."

The husband smiled and couldn't think of any way to embarrass her. In addition, there is a fierce and cunning wife.

Every time her husband talks about marrying concubines, she always replies, "Your family is poor, how can you afford concubines? If you have money, I will listen to you and do what you want. " The husband borrowed money from others and said to his wife, "Here is the money, please marry me!" " His wife put the money in her sleeve, then bowed and said, "I'd rather be a concubine now, and the money can buy me." "

Her husband can't embarrass her. Accustomed to bumping into seats, a countryman made a patrol and was responsible for guarding the gate of the yard. When the prefect came, he knelt down and said, "Come in, old man."

The satrap was very angry and ordered to hit him ten times. The next day, the satrap came again, and he reported, "Taigong Jin Zu."

The satrap hit him again. On the third day, the satrap came again.

Considering that the rural dialect is not good and the written language is not good, the countryman reported, "I came the day before yesterday, I came yesterday, and I came again today." A man went to the barber shop to get a haircut. The barber shaved his hair rough. When he finished cutting, the man deliberately paid double the money and left.

A few days later, he went to the barber shop for a haircut. The barber tried his best to cut his hair. He redoubled his efforts and served everything well. When I finished cutting, I paid less.

The barber said unconvinced, "last time I had a rough haircut, I got your reward." I gave you a mental hair this time. Why did you pay less? " Today's salary was paid last time. The money given today is the last salary! "Dog dad has a man named Lu who is good at telling jokes.

There is a woman next door to his house who is unsmiling. His friend told him, "If you can make that woman laugh and scold her, I'll treat you to a meal." One day, a woman stood in front of the door, and there was a dog lying in front of the door. Lumou knelt down to the dog and said, "Grandpa!" The woman couldn't help laughing when she saw it. Someone in Luli looked up and shouted, "Mom!" Hearing this, the woman was very angry and swore.

You should prepare wine first. My wife likes drinking, but her husband refused to give it to her several times. She also scolded her and said, "Open the door seven times: firewood, rice, oil, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea. When have you ever seen the word wine? " The wife said, "You don't have to open the door for wine. I must have bought it the night before. How can you put it on the matter of opening the door? " Meet a bosom friend. Gentlemen usually like to play the piano. He once said that he is always unhappy without a bosom friend. After an idle day, he played the piano for recreation.

Suddenly I heard a sigh next door, thinking that I had met a bosom friend, I knocked at the door and asked what was going on. The old lady next door said, "Nothing. My dead son made a living by playing cotton. Today, you play the piano like he plays cotton. I didn't feel sad after listening to it. "

The emperor's wife who is afraid of jealousy is the wife. She is jealous and fierce. Ling Xuan is too afraid that she will marry a concubine. Emperor Taizong ordered the queen to summon Mrs. Fang and told her that concubinage was very popular now, and it was stipulated that the emperor should reward beautiful women.

Mrs. Fang resolutely refused, and the emperor ordered poisoned wine to be sent to her, threatening her and saying, "Like this, it is against it. You should drink this glass of wine. " Mrs. Fang swallowed it in one gulp, and she was not embarrassed.

The emperor said, "I am afraid to see it, let alone Ling Xuan?" Fairy Yong Dong is very filial. God asked a fairy to marry him. When the fairies sent the fairy away, they all told her, "If anyone is still filial, you must write back."

In the same year, A and B were elected to imperial academy, and B was appointed as county magistrate. One day, A proudly said to B, "I have a high rank and live in the imperial court. Compared with my brother who is a local official, my worth is much worse. "

If nothing else is said, only the famous brand used to worship guests means that my status is extremely decent and far from you. "B said," you can use a few words in your business card, so how can you catch up with the words in my notice? Isn't it better than yours?