Poetry sighs a quatrain on earth, which has its own Jianghu spirit.

I thought I had read all the poems in the world, and it was hard for me to sigh when I read new ones. Just like meeting people, when I saw Bai Yueguang at first, I was critical of later people.

But this poem is an exception among exceptions.

Flute complaining words

Modern poet Wang Shiyi (Yin Nai)

Xiao complains that Xiao is not true, and the old rain in the rivers and lakes is scattered into dust.

There are only two lines of tears in my life, half for life and half for beauty.

Reading on the rooftop, I was amazed when I read the last two couplets. Are there any such Jianghu poems in modern poetry? That kind of tenderness, warmth and affection for the country gradually germinated in the flute and flute, and gradually stirred up under the rainy night in the rivers and lakes. It seems that only in this case can the poet's feelings of home and country be aroused incisively and vividly and be sad for a long time.

The second couplet is the poem that caught my attention.

There are only two lines of tears in my life, half for the country and half for the beauty.

Seeing this poem, I can only "blame myself for being uneducated, and I can fix everything in the world in one sentence" and "lie in the trough" three times!

There are only two lines of tears in my life, half for my country and half for my beauty. The beauty here not only refers to beauty, but also includes people who express their affection for children in the rivers and lakes, as well as gentlemen, upright people, pillars of the country and people who can turn the tide. Since Chu Ci, the metaphor of vanilla beauty has continued to the present, which is one of the elegant ties of our national cultural feelings.

Such a fluent poem is like vernacular, but it is also a poem, which is its beauty.

I think a good poem is like this, for example, it is natural and fluent in spoken language, expressing true feelings, but expressing sentences that ordinary people can't say. Compare Bai Juyi's easy-to-understand vernacular poems with Han Yu's grotesque poems. For another example, comparing the natural, lively and agile Chengzhai style with the Jiangxi Poetry School, we know that the natural expression of true feelings, whether poetry or composition, is more valuable than the expression of adding new words and strong worries.

Wen Huaisha confessions have something to say:

"Favorite approachable poem-Wang Shiyi: There are only two lines of tears in my life, half for life and half for beauty; These two sentences are quite in line with my life feelings. Unfortunately, as a modern poem, this work has serious injuries, that is, the words "life" and "ordinary life", so I revised it and put together the two sentences of Lu Lun and Liu Yanshi in the Tang Dynasty, saying: "The sunset shines on the window, and the dark dust rises, and the black silk scarf is sparse. "There are two lines of tears when I am old, half for life and half for beauty. "

It can be seen that when you copy many articles in the world, it depends on whether you can copy them. Well copied, the United States said: take doctrine, turn it into your own use, that is, innovation; If you don't copy well, it's a trick, a joke, and worse, you'll smash your own signboard.

I feel the same as Wen. I like these two sentences, but I don't think it's that important to hurt this poem. The meter of poetry did not exist originally, but was added later. Before it became an established rule, it was tested in past dynasties. Put this shackle on poets to make them dance more standardized, but for some talented poets, this rule has really become a shackle, so don't touch it.

Nature is the truth of everything in the world.

According to people's comments, Wang Shiyi's early poems are full of sadness and beauty, and contain ancient worries. In other words, I really felt this way when I read this song "Yuan Di Ci". After reading this poem, a sense of desolation arises spontaneously, but it is beautiful, so I won't forget it and will recite it soon. A good poem never worries about reciting. Read as much as you like, and you will recite it naturally.

"Young poetry is flourishing, auspicious and rich, premature aging, not poor. It's a pity that you are less than twenty years old, and the word "bald head" was used in the first volume of poetry. "

Chang Dundun warned, but also, not also.

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