Pupils write paragraphs at the beginning of their compositions.

1. Who has a good beginning and end when pupils listen to the night talk?

Charming, graceful, some lingering, some melancholy, lingering, lingering melancholy and lingering. Close your eyes, savor carefully, and listen quietly, just like a slow stream, coming slowly along the winding mountain road, lingering and spreading, over and over again ... In the boundless darkness, listening to such sounds of nature seems to be crying, like resentment, and it is quiet all around. Listen carefully, the smell is seeping into your heart ... the ink sky.

A person, stop at the window for a long time. I don't need anything, just like this, in silence, listening to such music, enjoying such tranquility ... Say goodbye to the hustle and bustle of the day, get rid of the troubles of the day, and when the night comes, hide yourself in the dark and in silence.

The tenderness of the night glides gently across the cheeks and then seeps into the heart quietly. At this moment, the heart is undefended, lonely and fragile. I don't know why, every time I hear this song, there is always inexplicable sadness, which always touches the softest place in my heart. That kind of gentle penetration, clever and effortless, captured. The loneliness in the bones slowly diffuses, diffuses, and the whole is lost and immersed ... The years have gone and taken away a lot, and the petals are scattered in the running water bit by bit.

Life is like a play, with one story after another, wonderful or ordinary. At the end of the song, people are scattered and prosperous. In retrospect, there are many memories and feelings ... the sound of nature came from a quiet night and swept into my heart.

On such a night, such a state of mind, such a slow diarrhea in my heart, such as running water, such as resentment, such as songs, as unreal as real ... In silence, listening to such faint charming music, faint feelings, slowly spread ... Who will listen with me on the same night? ● Youth is the blood drop of will and the nectar of hard work-Mika; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning-gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness-as solid as gold. Faith is the pillar of towering buildings. Without it, it's just a pile of scattered bricks. Faith is the bed of a surging river. Without it, there is only a tidal wave. Faith is the beacon of blazing fire. Without it, there is only a cold firewood. Faith is the main engine of ocean-going ships. Without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame.

Standing on the coast of history, tracing back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on both sides of the Zehe River and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.

● Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.

● If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, then it must be the rising sun in my heart. How much laughter friendship has aroused and how many tears friendship has dried.

The harbor of friendship is warm and affectionate, and the breeze of friendship sails. Friendship is not an emotional investment, and there is no need for dividends and dividends.

(Friendship can be changed into other words) ● Yingying Moonlight, I have the clearest glass; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; Long life, I want to pick the most important thing in the world-perseverance. If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird.

Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings. Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will disappear.

(The lines can be changed in other words) ● Perseverance is the condensation of a stone and a sand on the levee of a thousand miles. Only by accumulating little by little will there be grandeur without seeing the head before and the tail after; Perseverance is that spring silkworms spin silk one by one, and only by persisting one by one can they break out of the cocoon and see the brilliance again; Perseverance is the sail of a long-distance ship. With sails, the ship can reach the other side of success. Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.

The true nature of the heart should be like this. Success, like the moonlight shining on flowers, the deep pool is slightly blue, regardless of good or bad, regardless of the detachment of success or failure, is a post station that raises its whip and rides a horse to climb high; Defeated, still dripping water wears away the stone and merges into the sea. There is a kind of pride that is poor and strong and does not fall into the blue sky. There is a kind of stubbornness of "being a self-taught person, being a self-reliant person".

Rong, Jiangshan is still the same, the painting style is still the same, just like the sea and mountains, familiar with the years, flashy and arrogant; Bear the burden of humiliation, Han Xin, snow pine, like a fairy with feathers, know how to take a step back and broaden the horizon, and refuse to give up eating because of choking. ● Happiness = material/desire.

This is the happiness equation put forward by American economist Samuelson. From an economic point of view, the greater the material consumption, the smaller the desire and the greater the happiness, which is in line with the old saying of China people that "contentment is always a pleasure".

On the contrary, what happens if a person's material consumption is limited and his desire is infinite? Mrs Loizai has so many "dreams" and so many "intoxications". How can she not be miserable and sad? Russian writer Chekhov said: "there are big dogs and puppies, and puppies should not be disturbed because of the existence of big dogs." All dogs should bark and let him use the voice God gave him.

● Maturity is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, a mellow but not greasy voice, a calmness that does not need to look at others, an atmosphere that eventually no longer appeals to the surrounding, a smile that ignores the hustle and bustle, a kind of extreme indifference and nothingness.

Five pupils wrote wonderful compositions. At the beginning, they mentioned in their masterpiece (Perfect Sunny Day): I want to fly, and my heart is so tired.

I don't know when, young hearts are always eager for independence. How many times, I tried to escape from the shelter of my parents' wings, open up a thorny road alone, and sharpen my wings in the wind and rain.

Perhaps, God discovered my greed and let me enter this full-time high school, and finally I can get rid of my mother's nagging.

The tall teaching building, the carefree canteen, the crowded supermarket and the strange faces all make me novel and excited. However, when everything is familiar, an unbearable loneliness and emptiness occupy my heart. Heavy study makes me feel depressed and dull, and my weak body makes me feel groggy all day. I feel very uncomfortable and want to go home once, but the lofty aspirations of the past made me endure.

Autumn seems to come early, and I feel a chill as soon as I enter autumn. The cold wind of rustling blows aimlessly, making the window sing with the gap.

I sat in my seat reading a magazine and saw an article about maternal love, which reminded me of my mother. .

I used to study late at night. At this time, my mother will serve my favorite mung bean soup, look at me kindly and finish the soup bite by bite. Then make my bed and advise me to go to bed early; Sometimes I get angry outside and lose my temper in front of my mother. My mother never cares, but comforts me and makes me feel better. Before. .

Only then can I realize the beauty of nagging. Those annoying words in the past are so warm in retrospect.

"Bell-"* * interrupted my thoughts after class. I quickly came to the telephone booth and dialed my home phone number. Mother's kind voice came from the other end of the phone.

"Hello, who are you looking for?"

"Mom, it's me." I whispered.

"* *, how are you at school? Be careful whether you are in good health or not. It's cold now, pay attention to adding clothes. Are you used to eating? . . "

"Well, everything is fine. . "I cried as I spoke.

Once, I thought I was a person who would not be emotional or shed tears. However, in front of my mother, I shed tears openly.

On weekends, sitting on the bus home, I feel particularly cheerful. I realized that no matter how far I fly, I will never leave my mother's sight like a kite.

Mother is a thread tied to my heart. The longer and farther you pull, the more painful your heart will be.

My masterpiece (Perfect Sunny Day) mentioned that I want to fly, but my heart is so tired.

I don't know when, young hearts are always eager for independence. How many times, I tried to escape from the shelter of my parents' wings, open up a thorny road alone, and sharpen my wings in the wind and rain.

Perhaps, God discovered my greed and let me enter this full-time high school, and finally I can get rid of my mother's nagging.

3. Pupils write well at the beginning and slightly ahead at the end, OK! - .

The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.

It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.

Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized.

Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.

3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural beam.

No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination.

The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law". As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development.

There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here. 2. Echo from beginning to end.

The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail.

For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once."

Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point".

For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are." At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties.

-Remember the spinning wheel. "4. Famous aphorisms.

Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".

At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere." 5. Lyric discussion.

Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing.

There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid."

Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings. The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable.

The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits".

Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green? At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then starts a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article begins with "Go", "Today" and "Tomorrow"

Then, he skillfully used the beautiful sentence in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge, which triggered thinking about life without green, leaving room for imagination. Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma.

If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on. Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect.

In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam". Migrate and train the ancients.

4. The composition written by the primary school on campus has a beginning and an end, and there are wonderful paragraphs. Where does it begin and end? Morning on campus-a new starting point of life, where there are youthful dreams and hopes. I love you, my alma mater-Gejiu No.2 Middle School.

I love the morning, the school and the campus in the morning, because it is wonderful and beautiful.

My school is located on the beautiful golden lake, close to the mountains and waters.

It was a dawn morning, the darkness of the night had not been opened, the grass was still sleeping, the flowers were smiling and dressing up for tomorrow, the birds had not woken up, and the campus in the morning was very quiet.

There are still a few stars twinkling in the sky, and fireflies are flying, adding color to the silent campus.

The curtains were opened instantly, the moon sank, and the stars gradually lost their original colors with the darkness, but she was so sweet with a little smile.

Several big trees stand on the campus, staring at the rising sun in the east.

Day, gradually bright, I see the campus at this time, just like a colorful fairy tale world, there are endless fairy tales, but also ugly ducklings, how amazing it is. Also like an exquisitely carved crystal ball, "you can look carefully and don't be ridiculous."

On the mountain, the snow-white ribbon floated away, and the grass was awakened by the crystal dew. Although some people don't want to, they still straighten their backs, flowers open lovely smiling faces, birds chirp and young trees wake up. At this time, the silence of the campus was broken, a few laughter came, and the campus began to be lively.

I don't know when Xia Hong dyed the sky red, so soft. Under the red flag, the red scarf fluttered like a flame, making a promise to the red flag.

On the playground, the students are exercising seriously. The brisk rhythm of "one, two, three" is accompanied by the vigorous figure of the students. ...

When classes began, the school was silent. In addition to the sound of reading echoing in the air, there are teachers' tireless lectures, students' scrambling to answer, and teachers and students' bursts of laughter, just like a spring melody.

Ah! Morning on campus-a new starting point of life, where there are youthful dreams and hopes. I love you, my alma mater-Gejiu No.2 Middle School.

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5. The beginning and end of pupils' wonderful compositions are 1. Life is like poetry, and poetry is hard to appreciate; Life is like tea, and the fragrance of tea is full of affection; Life is like a song, which is hard to stay in the depths; Life is like wine. Being drunk will make you laugh.

2. Life is an ocean of love, and everyone is breathing and feeling love. Life is like the night sky, in the wonderful moment of the meteor, people feel magnificent beauty; Life is like a trickle, in the wonderful moment of wearing a stone, people feel the beauty of persistence ... but the most beautiful thing in the world is love.

3. If spring is a group of cheerful seasons, then sunshine is the rhythm of smart jumping. Spring, the messenger of green and the symbol of hope; Sunshine, gentle angel, a symbol of light. With spring, it is full of vitality and flowers; With sunshine, people will feel warm and comfortable.

6. Composition, a good sentence at the beginning of the college entrance examination composition, the classic nine methods 1, parallelism into the topic, the first sound: parallelism can increase the momentum of the article, catchy, and make the article full of rhythm and charm.

2, the whole scattered staggered, dexterous into the topic: the combination of whole scattered sentences can make sentences flexible, add a sense of melody and rhythm to the article, and give people a sense of beauty. 3, the quotation is elegant and heavy: quote the previous sentence, follow the literary grace of the quotation, and skillfully lead to the topic. 4. Delicate description, image into the topic: the description language is flexible and innovative, which can break the stereotype of description and the dullness of narrative, and make the image description elegant and fascinating. 5. Epilogues pop up, opening the topic: The opening of epigrams is eye-catching.

6. The opening of the dialogue is fascinating: a deep Zen dialogue leads to the connotation and introduces the point of view of the article. 7. The opening of the case is concise: the opening of the article is concise and famous. 8. Symmetrical opening is neat and lively: the article begins with a group of symmetrical sentences, which reflects the examinee's superb language skills. 9. Poetry begins, highlighting the inside story ".

7. It is not easy for primary school students to have a good start and a good ending. Remember to adopt! Know-it-all "Xing Huijing Yuan Xinping's class, she is always ready to help others and help others solve problems.

She-chubby face, long eyelashes, watery eyes and black hair. She is my classmate, a lovely little girl-Xing Huijing. Xing Huijing has a strong self-care ability, can do almost anything, and is also very enthusiastic.

Therefore, in class, when people encounter difficulties in life, if you call her, she will definitely help you. On one occasion, Feng Jiayi's bench suddenly opened its mouth and bit her angrily. She suddenly cried out in pain. At this time, our "know-it-all" comrade arrived at Feng Jiayi's side at a speed of 100 meters after hearing the shouts.

She asked Feng Jiayi to stand up, then knocked and knocked, and fixed the stool. When she left, she said to Feng Jiayi in a tone of lesson: "Comrade Xiaofeng! I'll tell you two things: first, take care of your stool and public property.

Second, touch carefully and sit carefully. Don't make it angry again, or look, it bit you today! "Feng Jiayi blushed. This is our "know-it-all", a lovely chubby girl, a classmate that the whole class depends on.

Look, someone has asked her for help again! "Know-it-all, come here!" "good!" Praise my Chinese teacher If someone asks me, "Who do you admire most?" I will answer without hesitation: "My Chinese teacher." My Chinese teacher is surnamed Wei. He likes news and writing.

So far, he has published more than 20 articles in newspapers and periodicals. Teacher Wei not only writes well by herself, but also is good at teaching us to write compositions.

[Transition sentence: connecting the preceding with the following] "You can write down anything new or meet someone who impressed you." This is what he often tells us.

On the morning of 201210, in the second quarter, Mr. Wei was giving a lecture. Suddenly, his cell phone rang. It's my mother. My mother said yesterday was Sunday. I forgot to take my math test paper when I went back to school. My mother is afraid that the math teacher won't know. Let Mr. Wei explain to the math teacher.

Teacher Wei said nothing. After about an hour, Mr. Wei's cell phone suddenly rang again. It was my mother. My mother said that she was worried that I couldn't keep up with others, so she sent me the math test paper, which was in the school janitor's room. She also asked me if I was in class, so it was not convenient for me to get it.

Teacher Wei said that he is in class now, so he can let me go down and get it. I immediately "knocked" and ran downstairs ... then Mr. Wei talked to me.

He knows that my home is in Beiliu, and it takes my mother at least an hour to drive from home to school. It's just a test paper, which may be insignificant in the eyes of others, but my mother was very anxious and sent the math test paper to the school and my hands in time.

Miss Wei thinks my mother is a great mother. Teacher Wei's heart seems to be deeply touched by something.

So, he said to me, "Does mom love you?" "love!" I don't think about it. "Then you can write a composition about it."

Teacher Wei made suggestions. "All right ... all right."

I mumbled something [I'm afraid I can't write a composition, paving the way for the teacher to guide the composition]. "good! The teacher teaches you. "

Teacher Wei put forward writing requirements for me, such as the title, the beginning and end of the article, how to write the key parts and so on. He also told me to write it in time and give it to him when I finished.

I nodded my head. The next day, on the 30th, I gave my exercise-"Mom gave me a test paper" to Miss Wei.

Teacher Wei said my homework was ok, but many places needed to be revised. He pointed at me again.

I nodded knowingly and immediately revised my composition. After I corrected it, Miss Wei read my composition again.

I thought it was almost enough, so Mr. Wei asked me to copy it with manuscript paper. On 3 1, I put the exercise "Mom gave me a test paper" into the submission box of the school red scarf radio station ... I wrote my own things in my own words, which is how the original composition was written.

I can't help but cast an admiring look at Mr. Wei. For the first time, everyone's life is full of many firsts, which may make you go back and forth; Maybe it will make you laugh; Or attending the meeting will make you burst into tears ... they are all like footprints, printed on the road of our growth.

Of course, I am no exception. Many ups and downs have passed away with my growth, but only one thing still lingers in my mind. Growing up, in the eyes of others, I have always been a typical introverted person, afraid to contradict anyone and dare not compete with him.

I usually have a bad temper, but I dare not get angry. However, one day, I don't know why I got into a fight with my classmates. It was the hardest fight I had at school.

At the beginning of last semester, a very popular female classmate came to the class. Her name is Wang Min. She is about my height and slightly fat.

She has the same personality as Duan Ruiqi, and is also a "tigress" in the eyes of boys. I hate her rudeness and bullying, but I hate that she always speaks ill of me in front of my classmates. Even if there is no grudge, she always has a hard time with me, let alone targeting me alone. Even others, she won't forget to demonstrate for herself.

That day, near noon, I came to school early to do my homework. Just as I was absorbed in what I was doing, Wang Min suddenly kicked the door open, scaring me to draw a long arc in my exercise book. Before I could clean it, she strode towards me and grabbed my pencil case as if looking for something in it. But when she saw that she didn't find what she was looking for, she slammed it on the table and the pen in her head fell apart.

I was very angry and shouted at her, "How did you touch someone else's pencil box!" " "She frowned and snorted, and then reached out and slapped me twice. The fire in my heart suddenly rose to the top of my head, and I couldn't help it any longer.

I stood up to teach this smelly girl a lesson. Just as she turned around, I pushed her to the ground and told her to wait for her.