Sixth grade picture composition

In daily study, work or life, everyone will often come into contact with composition, through which we can gather our scattered thoughts together. Do you know how to write a good composition? The following are seven sixth-grade pictures I collected for you. Welcome to reading. I hope you will like them.

In a field, the farmer's uncle planted many seeds, including radish seeds, Chinese cabbage seeds, rice seeds and corn seeds. The farmer's uncle was sweating profusely when sowing. "Boom, boom", "Hua, Hua ……" Suddenly the sky thundered and it rained again. "Who's that? Who disturbed my good dream? I want to go up and see! " The radish doll said to herself.

Radish dolls try their best to suck milk and drill hard. But the soil is too hard, and the radish doll only drills a little. Sister earthworm saw that she wanted to help the radish doll, so she said to the radish doll, "Radish doll, I'll help you, I'll help you loosen the soil." "Thank you, Sister Earthworm!" After a while, Sister Earthworm said, "You drill, the soil is already very loose!" " "So the radish doll came out easily.

The radish doll finally emerged from the soil, revealing half of its face. The radish doll is blushing, like a shy little girl, wearing a little green hat with green lace on her head, and looks very cute. The radish doll saw the field. Now the fields are full of fruits. The farmer's uncle is harvesting crops. He said happily, "The fields are so beautiful!" "Although the farmers' uncles are sweating like a pig, they have a happy smile on their faces. Yes, hard work pays off. Can they be unhappy?

The radish doll grew up and the farmer's uncle was very happy. He hoes the grass and wants to pull it out. The radish doll is too big. The farmer's uncle asked a little girl to pull radish together, and sweat flowed from their heads. Finally, the radish doll was pulled out. Radish doll happily said to them: "thank you for pulling me out and letting me see the scenery outside!" " "

On a sunny morning, the kitten went fishing. After a while, I caught two small fish. The kitten skipped home happily.

On the way, I met a fox. The fox saw the kitten holding two small fish, and his mouth watered. The vicious fox pretended to be intimate and said, "Dear Mr. Cat, can you give me a fish?" The kitten said, "No!" In fact, the kitten has long known the fox's tricks. Seeing that the kitten refused, the fox quickly changed his mouth and said, "Mr. Cat, where did this fish come from?" The kitten said, "There is a river not far from here. The water there is frozen. As long as you make a hole with a stone and put your tail in, you can catch a lot of fish soon. "

The fox listened to the kitten and ran to the river. He smashed a small hole with a stone and put his tail in the river.

"Wow, it's so cold!"

The river was cold, but the fox bit the big fish. After a while, the fox heard a burst of footsteps. Looking back, it turned out that the hunter was coming to himself with a gun!

The fox tried to get up and run away, but his tail was frozen by the river and he couldn't move. Now the fox knows that he has been cheated and has to give in easily.

The cunning fox was deceived by greed.

In the winter morning, the north wind roared, and there was heavy snow in the sky. It was extremely cold! The diligent kitten Mimi is not cold at all. She went fishing. Mimi was really lucky. She caught two big and fat fish. She jumped happily and walked home.

Mimi passed a big tree and a sly fox came out. She took a fancy to the chubby big fish in the kitten's hand at a glance and thought: As long as you cheat those two big fish today, you can have a nice meal at night, hahaha! But what should I do? Suddenly, it rolled its eyes and came up with a bad idea. The fox pretended to kiss and said, "Hello, dear Mr. Cat, how did you catch the fish?" Hearing this, the kitten thought: The sly fox is not trying to cheat my fish. This time, I will make some efforts. I can't let you spoil it again and get something for nothing. So the kitten said to it, "I saw a hole in the lake before it froze, so I put my tail in to catch fish." I think you have a big tail and you must have caught a lot. " Convinced, the fox ran to the river, sat down at the edge of the hole, put his tail into the river, and showed a smug smile on his face.

But before long, the fox's tail began to hurt, but it held back from catching fish. After a while, its tail froze, but it held back. A hunter passed by with a gun in his hand, and when he saw the fox, he gradually approached. Suddenly, the hunter rushed up with an arrow. Hearing this, the fox started to run away in fear, but its tail was frozen and it could not be pulled out. The hunter caught the fox easily, and the fox knew that he had been cheated by the kitten. It's too late to regret!

This is a true story that happened at the station. These four men are all men, but they turn a blind eye to the five big words "mother and son get on the bus" on the stop sign and pretend to be illiterate. They are selfish at heart and don't think of others. In the distance, a mother held her children in her arms and looked at them with surprised eyes, but she was indifferent.

After reading this cartoon, I can't help criticizing these four people. I can see that one of them is an intellectual, but can't intellectuals read? The second is a soldier, but don't soldiers know to respect the old and love the young? The third is the boss, but can the boss be superior? The fourth is dentists, but don't dentists have moral qualities? Thought of here, I thought of a famous saying I just learned: See the sage Si Qi Yan, see the sage Si Qi introspection. So I began to reflect on myself, and after thinking for a while, I couldn't help blushing, because-that time I went fishing with my dad, and it was in a farm entertainment place, and fishing was free, but there was this placard everywhere in that place, "No fish without authorization." Although I saw it, I saw my father catch a lovely little goldfish and take it back secretly. Looking back at this moment, I am ashamed. In our life, there are many people like those in comics. Most of them are for self-interest and don't follow the rules. In our future life, we should follow the rules, think for others, understand that people who are caring, respect the old and love the young will certainly be affirmed and loved by people. At the same time, we should sincerely ask these uncles: "Don't you think your behavior is right?"

This unit is a composition. How to write a picture composition? Here are three suggestions:

(a) comprehensive observation, understanding the content.

Can you describe the content on the screen in an orderly way?

Then, think again. From the picture, we can see that a little girl, two chrysanthemums, a window, a desk calendar, a textbook, glasses, a pen container, a globe, an ink bottle, a sunrise and a morning glory must be written. Describe their characteristics.

Observation is the premise of writing a good-looking composition. Only when you understand and understand can you describe it. Moreover, there should be a certain order and steps in observation, and we should not blindly look at it. After you get the topic, you should first observe it comprehensively and understand the content. That is to say, we should read the full text to get a general idea, and then observe it part by part to understand the relationship between them. That is, from the whole to the part and back to the whole. )

(2) Pay attention to the observation and experience center.

Thinking: After understanding the main content of the painting, we should continue to focus on observation and understand the center of the painting, that is, the intention of the painter. What does this picture mean? What are you trying to tell us? Where did you see it?

(the key observation is to grasp the main picture, the main events, the appearance of the main characters, that is, appearance, manner, action, behavior, etc. And carefully analyze and think from the outside to the inside, from the superficial to the deep, understand the inner heart, spirit and quality of the characters, and understand the center. )

(3) Reasonably imagine and enrich the picture.

On the basis of key observation, through reasonable association, enrich the picture and highlight the center. Imagination runs through the whole process of observation, so we should pay attention to the following three problems: First, communicate the connection between people and things through imagination. Second, imagination must be based on evidence, on the content provided in the painting, and cannot be created out of nothing. Third, imagination should be focused, that is, we should grasp the main content and main characters in the picture to think, and we should not pretend to be the master. Imagination should be reasonable, not fantasy or joke.

Observe the picture carefully: from glasses, books, pen container, ink bottle and globe, you will know that this is an office and the owner is a teacher; From the open calendar, you will know that the time is September 10 teacher's day; From the little girl with a red scarf in her schoolbag, I know that primary school students sent a bunch of flowers to the teacher to express their congratulations on the teacher's holiday; Even from the little girl's every move, demeanor, students will guess that the teacher is very popular with students, and students also like him (her).

Push forward: what is the cause of the matter?

After thinking: what will be the result?

Cut-in angles when writing: from the girl's point of view, from the teacher's point of view, from the classmate's point of view, from the wild chrysanthemum's point of view.

It is important to be able to imagine and associate pictures boldly, otherwise you can only write comments on pictures, and it is difficult to write articles with rich content and emotion. Observe the picture carefully and understand it deeply; But don't be bound by the picture and block the train of thought. Only by grasping the picture, daring to jump out of the picture and expanding thinking can we write vivid and wonderful articles. For example, this painting, as long as it grasps the theme of "respecting teachers" and "loving teachers", can freely write about the people, events, scenes and feelings it has experienced. What you write is closely related to the theme, so it is closely related to the picture, so don't worry about "digressing". Of course, transitional words, sentences or paragraphs should be used between the picture description and what is written outside the picture, so that the two can be integrated.

The general steps of picture composition are summarized as follows:

Examining Pictures-From Pictures to Objects (Scenery)-Narration (Scenery)-From Objects to Reason (Scenery Lyric)

Please observe and imagine carefully according to the above methods, don't rush to write, think about writing an outline, then organize the language and write an article. Don't forget to add a striking title to your composition.

Occasionally, this stamp caught my attention. It seems to have a strong gravity, which attracted my attention.

Looking at it, I seem to be in this beautiful scenery, blue and clear. Who wants to be my mirror? Green trees and red flowers nod and smile at me. ...

Earth-our only home. You see, the blue sky and white clouds are floating on it, and the green trees are willing to make its beautiful clothes ... It's them, it's them that support the earth.

There is a famous saying that "when the first big tree was cut down by human beings, it declared the beginning of civilization;" When mankind cut down the last big tree, it declared the end of civilization. "Once upon a time, there were vast forests on the earth, with crystal clear water and fresh air. Animals and humans are very good friends. They work together, produce together and live a happy life every day. The earth is very happy. She is willing to dedicate her resources to the children who live on her. However, human beings are so dissatisfied that they abuse the resources on the earth and even hurt their friends-animals. Human behavior makes Mother Earth's face longer. Man is not aware of his mistakes yet. In order to satisfy oneself, killing people indiscriminately, chopping down trees indiscriminately and using things without restraint have finally caused a series of serious consequences. This time, Mother Earth shed tears. Her tears are sour. She wants to punish mankind.

Humans finally realized their mistakes, but saving the earth is not a one-off event. Therefore, mankind issued a call to save the earth. Isn't it? We turn "people" into "slaves" and "people"; Turn "forest" into "forest" and "wood". There are more and more people on the earth, but there are fewer trees and fewer resources.

If we don't pay attention to protecting the environment, if we don't be vigilant, maybe the last creature on earth is us, and the last drop of water is our tears. Therefore, we should cherish the natural environment on which future generations depend. Let's start from the ordinary, from the dribs and drabs, from the self, save social resources, care for the natural environment, make our home more beautiful, make our earth full of intoxicating green, and let the vibrant and lovely green seeds take root permanently in the hearts of people all over the world.

In the future, the earth will also have vast forests, crystal clear water and fresh air. Animals and humans are very good friends. They work together, produce together and live a happy life every day.

Although this is an ordinary stamp, the naked eye can only see the beautiful scenery, but it has a very profound meaning. Its picture will always be reflected in my mind, but its metaphor will be engraved in my heart more deeply.

I benefited a lot from a cartoon in the seventh book.

The name of this cartoon is "Pseudoilliteracy" and the author is Hua. The picture shows that in a station, four people pretend to be illiterate in order to take a shortcut to get on the bus, but they can't see it. They walk confidently at the "mother-child boarding place", while the real mother and son can only stand next to the sign that says "mother-child boarding place" and watch four fake illiterates pass by her.

After reading this cartoon, I really can't help but want to say to the woman holding the child: "You can't let them do this. You should learn to safeguard your self-esteem and interests. What if they are faking it? " You don't know. This is not where they should go. This regular passage is for the convenience of mother and son, and it will not let them push and shove in the crowd, which will eventually lead to accidents. "

And when I saw four fake illiterates, I couldn't help but want to scold them: "Why do you want to cut corners so much? It's also a helpless woman's way." Really shouldn't! Please try to compare yourself: that old woman may be your mother or your relative. How do you feel when you see such a scene? "

Personally, I think the reason why painter Hua painted this painting is to satirize those who don't respect the old and love the young and criticize those with low cultural quality. A person, no matter how high your achievements are outside, cultural quality and behavior are always the most important, so that others will appreciate you and be willing to know you and make friends. In this way, you can reap happiness from it.

I still remember one time, I was having a class outside and it was raining. The class is almost over, and my mother will pick me up for dinner. That time, we dragged the class out, and my mother sat in the corridor and waited for a while. After class, my mother went into the classroom to talk to the teacher, left her umbrella in the corridor and was taken away when she came out. In the corridor, I only heard shouts: "Has anyone seen my umbrella? ..... "No one answered, this is the quality of the umbrella maker.

Therefore, we must form a good habit of being polite from an early age, pick up the garbage on the ground and throw it into the trash can; We should also be educated people, not like those four fake illiterates who harm others' interests for their own sake. We regard him as a disgrace, and hope that everyone will take a warning and not be a "fake illiterate".