Write a composition with appearance, language, demeanor and action

1. About writing people's compositions, we should write about appearance, language, movements and demeanor

Father's love

Father's love is like a cup of coffee, the first sip is bitter, but the more delicious it is, the sweeter it is; Father's love is like a piece of candy, the appearance is hard, but the heart is really soft; Father's love is like a book, which is plain on the surface, but full of knowledge.

My father is strict, but he loves me deeply. I remember one time, my uncle bought me a skateboard. At that time, I excitedly came to the square with my parents to practice skateboarding. I first put one foot on the skateboard and the other foot slammed on the ground, but I couldn't stand still. The less I could skate, the more anxious I became. I didn't want to learn, so I said to my parents, "Let's go home." Dad said loudly, "no, I haven't learned it yet." How can I go home? I can't do anything halfway. " I thought to myself: Why not let my mother help me to learn? When I was about to carry out my plan, my father seemed to see what was on my mind and said to me, "You have to rely on yourself to learn everything, so that you can learn better and faster. If you are too dependent, you can't learn well." How about this? Let's compete and see who learns first, shall we? " I dared to speak out in anger and said unhappily, "OK, compare." I thought: if you don't believe it, you can learn it. You are a lot older.

It's ridiculous to watch my father's clumsy body and keep sliding on the disobedient skateboard. It's not good. My father fell. At this moment, I saw my father unhurriedly get up from the ground, squatting on the ground and watching the skateboard, as if thinking and studying. Soon, my father stepped on the skateboard, with one sole holding the direction and the other swinging from side to side. "I can skate, you see." Dad shouted happily. I bowed my head in shame and thought that my father could learn. What else could I not learn? Under the influence of my father's example, I finally learned.

On another occasion, I accidentally sprained my foot at school. My father was very distressed when he saw me limping. He helped me sit down and asked me with concern, "What's the matter?" After listening to my story, he quickly took out safflower oil from the medicine box, helped me rub the wound, and blew the painful place with his mouth and said, "Hold on, it will hurt a little at first, but it won't hurt when the blood slowly disperses." Under my father's "treatment", I gradually feel much better and my feet don't hurt ...

! Dad, I want to tell you that I love you, too. 2. Composition describing the appearance, manner and action language of the characters

My father

My black hair is mixed with a few white hairs, his face is a little black, but his eyes are bright, and that is my father.

Dad is forty years old, but he is still childlike.

When I was in the fourth grade, I learned to play yo-yo by chance, so I bought one and went home to finish my homework.

At this moment, my father saw that I was having such a good time and even wanted to have a try, so he said to me, "Son, lend your father a play." So, I handed the yo-yo to my father. Dad couldn't play at first, and the ball was always out of control, and he didn't learn it after a long time. Dad looked very anxious, so I said to him, "Wait for the yo-yo to slide to the bottom, and then pull it up." Dad tried it a few times and learned several tricks such as "sleeping" and "walking the dog"!

The more dad plays, the more addicted he becomes. The more he plays, the more interested he becomes. He doesn't want to put it down for a while. My mother looked at my father's playful manner and said, "I'm 4 years old, and my son is almost 12 years old, but I still look like an old urchin!"

""haha ... "There was a burst of happy laughter at home.

Dad not only has a childlike innocence, but also takes his work very seriously.

A few days ago, a computer was installed in Dad's office, and many games were installed in it!

I really want to have a good time. As it happens, my father is going to the office today, and I quickly begged my father to agree. I didn't expect him to say to me sternly, "How did you learn to take advantage of the public at an early age?" I ran into my room angrily, slammed the door hard, and scolded my father's back: "stubborn old man!"

"I didn't expect my father never came back after he left, so I had to go to bed.

In the middle of the night, I woke up and went to the toilet. I saw the light in the study was on. It turned out that my father was writing materials, and the wastebasket beside the desk was full. His head was sweaty. He found me, looked at me with bloodshot eyes and said, "Go to sleep quickly, there will be a class tomorrow." I knew my father's stubborn temper, so I had to say, "Dad, you should go to sleep quickly." I went to bed.

but I can't sleep for a long time. The moon, walking in the sky, the stars, blinking naughtily, while my father is still writing that material.

I am proud that I have a father who is "always playing with children" and is conscientious in his work and has a clear distinction between public and private affairs. 3. 6-word composition describing people's appearance, language, demeanor and actions

Appearance: There is a boy in our class, and if you look at him casually, you will feel nothing > _< ; But if you watch him carefully for a while, you will find that he is very much like Yan Xiaoliu in the TV series Legend of Wulin! How similar ~! ~ small round eyes. Laughing like a line, with a low nose and crooked eyebrows, is simply the embodiment of Yan Xiaoliu. If his voice were louder, it would be more like Le.

Action: He didn't answer me for a long time and stared at the dark sky outside the window. After a while. He just shook his head and said thoughtfully to me, as if to himself: "Breaking into the world, breaking into a ghost, seventeen years old is too young, ridiculous, ignorant and smells like milk." Say that finish, he gave a long sigh.

Language: Wu Song lifts the curtain and cries, "Is Uncle He at home?" Uncle He just got up, and when he heard that Wu Song was looking for him, he was in a panic, wearing a headscarf, taking money and bones and hiding them with him. He came out to meet him and said, "When will you come back?" Wu Song said, "I came back here only yesterday. If you have something to say casually, please move forward." Uncle He Jiu said, "I'll go. Please worship tea. " Wu Song said, "No, it's free." The two of them went out to the alley and sat down in the hotel, and asked the wine measurer to make twenty cents of wine. Uncle He Jiu got up and said, "I haven't got a dinner with Du Tou, so why bother?" Wu Song said, "Sit down." Uncle Ho has guessed eight or nine points in his heart, and the sommelier sifted the wine, but Wu Song didn't speak, and he just ate the wine. Uncle He Jiu, seeing that he was silent, squeezed two handfuls of sweat, but he teased him with some words. Wu Song also don't speak, don't mention the words. After several cups of wine, Wu Song uncovered his clothes, whizzed out a sharp knife and stuck it on the table. The wine measurers were stunned, and they were willing to go near. Look at Uncle Ho's pale face, afraid to exhale. Wu Song opened his sleeves, holding a sharp knife, and pointed to Uncle He Jiu: "You are a rough boy, and you know that' every grievance has its own head, and every debt has its own owner'. Don't be scared, just tell me the truth and tell me why Wu Da died, and I won't interfere with you! If I hurt you, I am not a hero! If there is half a sentence difference, my knife will teach you to add three or four hundred transparent holes! Nonsense, just tell me what my brother's dead body looks like? " Wu Song said, "Hold your knees with one hand, and look at Uncle Ho with your eyes wide open.

demeanor: It's Miss Li. Her eyes are almost narrowed into a crack, revealing a teacher's unique eye for bad children. From top to bottom, she seems to be in disbelief. Her eyebrows formed a small piece, and then her eyes stopped on my face.

Psychology: They helped each other to walk in the rain, and their hearts were full of happiness. When I got home, I was drenched all over. They simply don't go into the house, sit side by side on the small stone benches in the yard, close their eyes, lift up their faces and let the cool rain wash them away. He felt that all the dark shadows you left in your heart were washed away by the heavy rain, and he felt refreshed, relaxed and comfortable ...

Some of them were found on the Internet, others were found in composition books, and they were knocked down, which exhausted me. 4. The composition about people's appearance, language, demeanor and actions was 55 words

My cousin

I have an innocent, lovely, intelligent and lively cousin, and he has one. When my cousin laughs, he can show a pair of white and neat little teeth, which is very interesting. I like him very much.

my cousin lives in grandma's house. Once, he told his grandmother that he liked Xiaohua Mall. Grandma loves her cousin and listens to him. He told me to keep an eye on my cousin and go to the street to buy Xiaohua Mall myself. Grandma bought a lively and beautiful Xiaohua Mall. My cousin jumped up with joy when he saw the lively and lovely Xiaohua Mall, so he quickly ran to his grandmother's side, played with the lovely Xiaohua Mall, stroked it gently, and sang beautiful Xiaohua Mall songs in his mouth. Then Xiaohua Mall scratched his cousin's trousers with his claws. Grandpa saw it, picked up Xiaohua Mall and threw it away. My cousin burst into tears when he saw it. He said, "Grandpa is bad, but Xiaohua Mall is not sensible. If you want to educate him, how can you throw him away? If I am not sensible, will you throw me away? Look how pathetic it is! " Everyone burst out laughing. Grandpa quickly picked up Xiaohua Mall and said to his cousin, "Yes, the kitten is not sensible, and my brother educates it!"

On another occasion, my cousin was playing in the house. He didn't listen to his grandmother and insisted on playing with his bike. As a result, he accidentally overturned his bike and pinned his finger. He quickly broke his finger and burst into tears. At this time, grandma heard the crying and ran out of the room. Seeing this scene, she was angry and funny, so she ignored him. He stopped crying for a while and peeked through his fingers to see if grandma paid attention to him. He found that his grandmother ignored him and went to her side to laugh.

how funny and lovely my cousin is! I like him very much. 5. Write a composition with the characteristics of a friend (use language, actions, demeanor and appearance)

My friend

I have a very good friend named Zhou Qiaomei. On her white face, a pair of big eyes are always blinking, like two dazzling pearls. There is always a charming smile on a small cherry mouth under a straight nose. She is not only good-looking, but also helpful and often helps her classmates solve problems.

One day, after school, several students in the class took part in the selection test of the school's interested classes in Olympic Mathematics. Just as I was about to go to the examination room, I suddenly found that my 2B pencil was missing. What can I do? I was so anxious that I almost cried. When Zhou Qiaomei saw this situation, she immediately said, "Do you have any spare pencils? Lend it to Liu Jing first. " Everyone looked at each other and shook their heads. Zhou Qiaomei said decisively at first sight: "Otherwise, let's all help him find it together." So, several students separately found it in every corner of the classroom. However, I have searched the classroom but I can't find my pencil. At this time, the exam preparation sounded. Zhou Qiaomei thought about it and said to me, "liujing, take my pencil to take the exam first, and I'll find another way." With that, he put a pencil in my hand and pushed us out of the classroom. The exam officially started, but it took Zhou Qiaomei more than ten minutes to come. I saw that her face was red, and there were still a few beads of sweat on her forehead and nose tip. Seeing my inquiring eyes, she nodded to me ...

A week later, the test results came out, and all the nine students in the class except Zhou Qiaomei were admitted. I am very sad to see this result. Later, I learned that after we left for the exam that day, she went to the teacher's office to look for a pencil. When she came back for the exam, she was already ten minutes late, and she didn't have time to do two big questions.

She is such a caring person, a helpful person, and a person who takes the pleasure of others as her own pleasure. This is my best friend-Zhou Qiaomei. 6. 25-word composition describing characters' demeanor, appearance and language movements < P > Good uncle < P > When it comes to rag pickers, everyone will associate him with "thieves". I know an uncle who picks up junk. He often comes here to pick up junk. But everyone doesn't praise him! He, as long as he can sell everything. Even the rotten film pressed below will be dug out bit by bit, even a straw will not be spared. But he never takes what we want, even the readily available porcelain cup in front of the window is no exception. If everyone encounters any difficulties, he will give them a hand as long as he can.

I remember once, when I saw my uncle coming to pick up junk, I suspected that he had improper behavior. I ran to the kitchen and looked, ah, a cup was missing. Looking up, the window is open and the hand is just right! I guess that junk stole the cup.

I ran out and saw that there was a cup in his pocket. I decided that he was a thief. Look, his clothes are dusty, dirty and smelly, and patched. His hair is messy, his face is as black as coal, and his eyes are quite big, revealing a "sly" light, like a "thief." He saw me, pointed to the road behind him and asked in a blunt mandarin, "Little sister, is that road feasible?" I listened and thought: I have the face to ask for directions after taking something from others. I said grumpily, "I don't know! How can you do this? How can you steal other people's cups! " He looked up and said, "I didn't steal it!" " Then I squatted down to pick up junk in silence, and no matter how I scolded, there was no response.

at this moment, a man named Hanako came. The beggar had only one hand, one foot was injured, and he was covered with a rag. He pleaded with me and said, "Little girl, please! Give me some money. I haven't eaten for two days and nights. I'm starving! " Oh, what a pity! Just as I was paying for it, I found that there was only one in Zhang Yiyuan, and I hesitated. At this time, the uncle buttoned the button, pulled out a bag from his chest pocket, then carefully opened it and took out a pile of money from it. I poked my head and saw that there was only five yuan. I saw him take out a Zhang Yiyuan's, then put the rest of his wallet in his pocket, buttoned it, patted it again and again, fearing that the money would fly away. He looked at the beggar and then at the money. At last, he put the money into the beggar's hand, patted his chest pocket, and then silently picked up the junk. I was dumbfounded. I didn't expect him to be so kind as a garbage collector. Even if he didn't have enough to eat, he went to help a beggar. I regret it a little, and I don't think he is so annoying.

when I got home, I found the cup well placed on the table. I was impatient just now and didn't see it clearly ... Ah, my face was red ...

I came to the back door and saw that uncle had come to the construction site. Looking at what was readily available on the construction site, my uncle left without looking back ...

Oh, what an honest and helpful uncle! I really hate myself for suspecting that my uncle is a thief. Yes, his appearance is not beautiful, but his heart is beautiful! Although his clothes are dirty, his mind is white and flawless! I will always remember this and learn from my uncle. ■

Brief comment: The author uses the method of wanting to promote first, and through comparison: my opinion of him is compared with his actual person, and I help him.