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The second theme of composition guidance: clear and concentrated intention

Misunderstanding perspective

The core of narrative is the feelings that the author wants to express. Only when the author has a stirring emotion in his heart will his articles have touching charm. However, in students' writing, it is common that there are still countless things to express after writing dozens or even hundreds of words. The result must be that the center of the article is vague and the theme is unknown. Theme is what we usually call the central idea. The role of the theme in the article, like the human soul and the commander-in-chief of the army, dominates the whole article and is a very important factor in writing a good article. Distinctive and correct, simple and concentrated, profound and novel should be our most basic pursuit when dealing with the theme of composition.

? The concrete manifestation of vague center and unclear theme is the lack of necessary connection between the materials selected in the article, like a pile of shells scattered on the beach, which looks crystal clear, but it is always difficult to form a harmonious whole; Some articles are chaotic and inconsistent, just like a modern steel building, but a classical roof of China is built on it; Others are lyrical and empty, saying a lot of nonsense, just like a panacea for all diseases, and ultimately nothing can be cured. If someone or something in our life interests us, touches us, inspires us and arouses our association, then we will have an idea of reflecting things and expressing our feelings. On this basis, further thinking about "what do I want to tell others", the previous hazy feeling will be clear and prominent, so the theme of an article was born. So life is the foundation of the theme, and thinking is the key to the theme.

If the theme is expressed in one sentence, it should be a very clear affirmative sentence, a general sentence. For example, the theme of "take one step, take another step" is expressed in this way: as long as the big difficulties are broken down into small difficulties and solved one by one, the huge difficulties will be overcome and finally win.

A lesson from the past-a lesson from the past

Tolerance is a poem.

I almost forgot when I learned to write tolerance, whether it was a blank space printed by a nap on my desk after a night of rain or a page flashing in my pupil. I have no way to know, and I can't know. In my heart, tolerance is indescribable but warm. If I have to describe this word, I think it looks like a poem.

? There are ancient and modern poems, so tolerance also has the classical beauty of "all rivers run into the sea, with great tolerance" and the modern rhyme of "what is wider than the sky is the human mind". The interweaving of classicism and the present is enough for generations to taste and taste slowly. Only by understanding its meaning can we truly appreciate the beauty and nourishment of the word "tolerance". Perhaps tolerance has achieved a different theme and different types of poems in everyone's mind, but the thoughts and feelings she expressed are all aimed at sublimating a person's spiritual charm and personality. Poetry creates human hands and recites population. Isn't tolerance just like her?

Sometimes I wonder how much I have achieved when I criticize others for their lack of tolerance and the sea. I tried to improve myself and tolerate others' mistakes, confusing the red line between tolerance and cowardice, making a mess. Others laugh at my cowardice, and I am also confused about the bottom line of tolerance. What is the purpose of tolerance? When I grow up, I know that tolerating others does not mean conniving at others. Since the definitions of tolerance and poetry are roughly the same, then tolerance should be like poetry, which is strong and rough, gentle and gentle, and "the river is full of waves" and "the river is full of sharp corners". What we pursue is peace and friendship with others, and stumbling is inevitable, but we must have a bottom line in our hearts.

After entering junior high school life, the pressure of learning makes some words that were originally clear and distinguishable gradually abstract and fade away until they are forgotten, and so is tolerance. I also want to pick her up again, put her in my palm and feel her with my body temperature, but I only feel her cold as a word, but I can't feel her beauty and exquisiteness. I'm starting to think I've changed? Or has the word changed? I want to talk to someone, but no one can find her. I meditated, and finally I found her in a whole new world. There are children's innocent smiles, lovers' sweet kisses, mothers' husbands and godsons, and poems with voices flowing from familiar windows. As I approached, I saw a boy reading a poem there, and his eyes were wet. It was me when I was a child. Looking at me at that time, I giggled and imagined myself saying no for the first time. Good things go up in smoke.

I stood up, scene after scene, so lifelike. ...

Upgrade opinion

This is a semi-propositional composition, which requires candidates to supplement and write "tolerance is". The proposer hopes that the writer can express his understanding and experience of tolerance by compiling topics, and then start writing. The word "yes" in the title can be a real reference or a figurative word, and topics such as "Tolerance is the gold of personality", "Tolerance is the blue" and "Tolerance is the black and white key of the soul" can be drawn up. As far as this article is concerned, the author has done a good job in selecting the topic, but it is specific to the idea of the article.

Cut to the chase. The beginning of the article can not only show the talent, but also highlight the theme appropriately, and can not be confused around the pen, which also dilutes the theme of the article.

Cut it properly. The topic "forbearance is poetry" and "forbearance" is the ontology of metaphor, which is the focus of writing. For example, in the second paragraph of the article, the "ancient and modern poetry" part cannot be properly expressed and inked according to the points of the article. Although the starting point is good, it's just a deliberate sidestep.

? Correct selection of materials. The key word of the article is tolerance, but in the article, "I finally found her in a brand-new world", and the selected content seems to have nothing to do with tolerance, which leads to the scattered theme of the article.

? Simplify writing. The author of the article wants to express his views on tolerance through his own understanding in life, but the language of the article is not fluent enough, and the sentences are tortuous, which leads to the unclear thinking and structure of the article and affects the prominence of the thought.

? A reasonable ending. The end of the author's article is poetic enough, but it seems to have little connection with the content of the article. Some people look at flowers in the fog, and the ending is the most important review pen, which needs to be dealt with again.

? Upgrade example

? Tolerance is a poem.

Tolerance is a fishing fire in the dark night, which can't be described, but it gives people a kind and warm feeling. If I have to describe this word, I think tolerance is like a poem.

? "All rivers run into the sea, with extraordinary bearing" is a beauty of bearing, and "what is wider than the sky is a man's mind" is also a beauty of bearing. Perhaps, in everyone's mind, tolerance is a poem with different themes and different contents, but the thoughts and feelings she expresses are all aimed at sublimating a person's spiritual charm and personality.

? Once, I didn't know tolerance, and I recited tolerant lines, but I didn't know the true meaning of tolerance. I talk about tolerance. How much did I do when I criticized others for not having a tolerant heart and a broad mind? Sometimes I try to improve myself, tolerate other people's faults and confuse the red line between tolerance and cowardice. I am confused. Where is the bottom line of tolerance? What is the purpose of tolerance?

As I grow older, I know that tolerance comes from inner broadness and is a principled appeal. Yes, tolerance should be like a poem, with strong and rough atmosphere tolerance, gentle and humble smile, heroism of "going to the east of the river to make waves" and joy of "Xiao He just showing its sharp corners". What we pursue is peace and friendship with others. It is inevitable to stumble, but we must have a tolerant bottom line in our hearts.

? After entering junior high school life, I have more tasks to learn, which makes some of my original clear concepts gradually abstract and fade away until they are forgotten, and so is tolerance. I also want to pick her up again, put her in my hand and feel her beauty and delicacy. I'm starting to think I've changed? Or has the word changed?

? I decided to start from myself, let the melody of tolerance move and look for it with tolerance. Finally, I found her in a whole new world. Here, there is a teacher's tolerant comfort, like a strict seven-character quatrain, with a hint of goodwill reminder in severity. Here, there are students who don't care about each other, like a poem full of modernity, with harmonious freedom. Here, I have my own liberation, the opportunity to grow and the release of my soul.

Tolerance is a poem, in which I grew up and completed the rhythm of my thoughts.

? Meiwenyin island

Red sweet potato

lin qingxuan

When I was a child, I once quarreled with mainland children. They scolded, "Sweet potato! Sweet potato! " We will say, "What an old impression! Old man! " I was confused about these two terms, so I went home and asked my father. He opened an old map, pointed to Taiwan Province Province and said, "Taiwan Province Province is really like a sweet potato with a red heart. You are the children of this sweet potato! " I pointed to the mainland and said, "So, the shape of this mainland is a big taro, so mainlanders are taro's children?" My father smiled, caressed my head and said, "Silly boy, we are also from the mainland, but we are early."

? Then he drew powerfully from our distant hometown in the north with a pen, and implicated it in the south of Taiwan Province Province where he lived. I realized for the first time that taro and sweet potato turned out to be very similar plants, not as different as we thought; I also know for the first time that the hometown where it snows in the northeast is also full of sweet potatoes with red hearts!

? Where I live, there used to be an old man selling sweet potatoes in the alley. Those sweet potatoes are very small, but they always seem to record the words in their hearts. Sometimes I buy a sweet potato from the old man and eat it when I come back from a walk. It tastes like honey, but it's a little bitter, because the old man's face always reminds me of the wind and frost I ran through in the fog.

? The old man is a veteran who survived the chaos. His hometown is in a remote county in Shandong. Once we argued about sweet potatoes. The old man insisted that the red-hearted sweet potato in Taiwan Province province was not as good as the red-fleshed sweet potato in his hometown. His reason is: "There is a lot of rain in Taiwan Province Province. How can sweet potatoes be as sweet as those in my hometown?" The sweet potato in my hometown is really as sweet as honey! "The old man speaks as if he had returned to his hometown and stood in the sweet potato field. Looking at his expression, I really know that although sweet potato is humble, it is connected with the land of homesickness and will always show new buds in the world of acacia.

? After the harvest, my father gave me a big bag of sweet potatoes. After a long time, I suddenly remembered the old man selling sweet potatoes in the alley, so I took him to the alley to see him off. I didn't expect the old man to sell beef noodles because few people eat sweet potatoes. I reluctantly carried the sweet potato home and threw the bag on the ground. A sweet potato jumped out of the bag and broke, revealing bright red flesh and blood. Why are these ignorant sweet potatoes still red after 30 years! Won't you change the color a little?

The old man and his father grew up in the same era and have different backgrounds. They are just small and insignificant people in the great era of displacement. Perhaps only the broken red sweet potato can record the color in their hearts. The color is like sweet potato flowers in the morning. They used to hug each other with humble light bulbs to keep warm. They can live humbly in the bonfire of the world because they have the pride of their hometown in their hearts.

? When I was ten years old, my father took me to the city for the first time and passed by a construction site. Father recognized several sweet potato leaves among piles of bricks at a glance. We followed the leaves and finally found a root that was almost completely buried. Father said, "Look at this sweet potato. As long as there is soil on the roots, it can grow. " Now that I think about it, the sweet potato buried in the construction site had a life experience of escape. Because its feet are on the ground, suffering cannot bury it. Compared with the sweet potato I planted in a flowerpot on the balcony of a high-rise building, it has a different fate and different happiness, just like we are far away from a hundred years of war and live in a seemingly secret and safe building, but we have the sorrow of soil erosion.

? The starry night is quiet. I stood on the balcony, carefully carrying the red sweet potato in the coagulation basin. I found that it absorbed the dew at night. On the thin leaves, water droplets appear one after another, and each leaf is breathing silently and carefully. At that time, I almost heard a big era with mud. The crazy songs and humming of the previous generation were buried in that small flowerpot, and only the sensitivity of the quiet night could be heard.

? Comment and analysis

The article wrote that "I" quarreled with other children, and my father told me the origin of the title "sweet potato"; Write about the old man selling sweet potatoes in the alley; Write a sweet potato seedling on the construction site; Write "I" and condense the sweet potato in the balcony basin ... "Sweet potato" is of course a clue to writing, but isn't it a bit messy? After careful analysis, we find that there is a hidden line in the article, that is, the old man selling sweet potatoes and the parents who left their hometown are deeply attached to their hometown. With the help of the carrier of "sweet potato", the author wrote their hardships in the predicament, which set off their hometown complex and sublimated the object of the article from one or two people to a group of people and a generation, and its theme was naturally clear and profound.

? Writing training

The theme of the composition

? Please write a narrative of about 600 words with the theme of "The Story of Me and the Book".

? broaden one's scope of mind

If this article is a narrative, it should have an attractive and vivid story. First, what is a "book"? Is it Four Great Classical Novels, foreign masterpieces and campus novels, or "Selected Excellent Compositions of Middle School Students" and "Special Teachers Teach You to Write Compositions"? This is the content that must be explained clearly in the writing process. You should choose books that are meaningful and have your own feelings. Secondly, the title of Me and the Book means that this book grew up with me, which requires us to write clearly the content of a good book, which is why I grew up. Of course, it is more important to write clearly the specific performance of a good book that makes me grow up. For example, a collection of essays made me like writing when I was tired of it, and I won a prize in a writing competition. Classic myths often make me intoxicated in stories, and at the same time let my imagination spread its wings. Third, to write this composition well, we must have true feelings, which is what we usually call emotional expression. We should rely on real life. In our daily life and study, which books left a deep impression on you and really influenced you during your growth? With this support, you can write articles with true feelings and impress yourself and readers with emotional people. If you don't read deeply at all, just write a book casually, it will only give people the feeling of moaning without illness. In short, the theme of "I love books" should run through every link of the plot development.

? Material kit

? ● epigram

Teenagers only know how to play, but don't know how to study hard. When they are old, they regret why they didn't know how to study hard when they were young. -Yan Zhenqing

My feelings for books are like friends for many years, and there will always be sadness or joy in the morning and evening. -Yu Qian

? Books or medicine, good reading can cure fools. -Liu Xiang

A lazy youth, a lousy age. -"Han Yuefu Long Songs"

? Don't be idle, white and sad! -Yue Fei

Try to know all the words in the world and aspire to read all the books in the world. -Su Shi

Birds flap their wings before flying high, and people learn before making progress. Li Kuchan

? Not cold, not awake, not quiet, not far away. -Zhuge Liang

? Don't do it with little evil, and don't do it with little good. -Chen Shou's "The History of the Three Kingdoms"

? I am familiar with 300 Tang poems, and I can recite them even if I can't write them. -Sun Zhu's Preface to 300 Tang Poems

? ● Story

? Wen Yiduo drunk books

Wen Yiduo is addicted to reading, and he is "drunk" at first sight. On his wedding day, the new house was decorated with lights and colorful, and it was very lively. Early in the morning, relatives and friends came to congratulate each other. Until the bride's sedan chair arrived home, people still couldn't find the groom anywhere. I was so anxious that everyone looked everywhere and found him in the study. He was still wearing an old robe and was fascinated by a book in his hand. No wonder some people say that he can't read, and he will be "drunk" at first sight.

? Hua guessed the ledger.

? The famous mathematician Hua has a different way of reading. He took a book, didn't read it from beginning to end, but thought for a while, then closed his eyes and meditated. He guessed the layout of the book, then thought about it and opened it. If the author's idea is consistent with his own guess, he will stop reading. The guessing reading method of flowers not only saves reading time, but also cultivates one's thinking and imagination, so as not to make oneself a slave to books.

? Hou copied the book.

Hou, the master of crosstalk language, only attended primary school for three years. Because he is diligent and studious, his artistic level has reached a perfect level and he has become a famous language expert. On one occasion, in order to buy the joke book "The Waves" of Amin Dynasty that he wanted to buy, he went to all the second-hand book stalls in Beijing but failed to buy it. Later, he learned that Beijing Library had this book, so he decided to copy it back. In winter, he braved the heavy wind and snow and ran to the library to copy books for 18 days in a row. A book of more than 100,000 words was finally copied by him.

? Zhang Guanghou eats books.

Mathematician Zhang Guanghou once saw a paper about deficient value, and thought it was very useful for his research work, so he read it again and again. This paper has more than 20 pages, and he has read it repeatedly for more than half a year. Because of repeated groping, clear black marks were left on the white pages. His wife joked with him that it was not reading, but eating books.

Gorky kept the book.

Gorky, a world writer, has a deep affection for books and loves them like life. Once, his room caught fire. The first thing he picked up was a book, and nothing else was considered. He almost burned to death to save the book. He said: "Books enlighten my wisdom and soul and help me stand up in the muddy pond. If it weren't for books, I would sink in this muddy pond, and I would be drowned by stupidity and filth. "

? Examples of excellent exercises

? The story of me and this book

Today, I have nothing to do. I took "Water Margin" off the shelf and leafed through it at will. There is a bookmark in the book. When I turn to that page, I can't help but drift to that Sunday when I see the section of "outwitting the birth outline" ...

? That was last semester. After finishing my homework on Sunday, I took a water margin from my mother's bookshelf. Unexpectedly, I couldn't leave without reading it, so I just took the book and went back to my room.

? I didn't expect such a wonderful world in the book. I only knew that the program in Animation City was good. "Wang went to Yan 'an mansion privately ..." I muttered softly, and I couldn't help secretly applauding the author's words. " Hey! The book suddenly closed. I turned around and saw that it was my mother. "Don't look, do your homework! "My mother's life is hard to break. I wrote my homework for a while. I remembered whether Wu Yong's coup was successful or not, and I picked up Water Margin involuntarily. But I was worried that my mother would raid again, so I hung my homework on the water margin as a sheep's head, and listened to my mother's movements all the time through the triple door with my ears. I'm afraid this is the highest state of "half-hearted". As long as there is the slightest sign of trouble, I will immediately "change my face."

? "good! How nice! " Watching Song Gongming Sanda Zhujiazhuang Festival is really exciting. I didn't expect to "sneak into the room with the wind, quietly." I don't know when my mother has stood behind me. Great, I was caught with a "stolen book"-my Water Margin, and my mother confiscated it.

? Later, when my parents were not at home, I stole the book back to my residence and enjoyed a "water margin dinner" when I was writing my homework. My mother caught me again and had a "fried meat with bamboo shoots". Touching my swollen ass, I stumbled back to my room, still mumbling: "Song Gongming has three fights with Zhujiazhuang Village, and blind bears have three fights with water margin." (My dear mother's name is "bear")

? Later, in our Chinese class, we learned the lesson "Lv Tihai hits the town of Kansai", and the teacher asked us to tell the characters and stories of the Water Margin in a competitive way. It's time for me to show my talent. Teachers' admiration and classmates' admiration are all on me. I am so happy!