Key points of an English composition: On Sunday, TOM came to the East Lake to fish at 6 o'clock in the morning. He fished all day and caught a fish. At night, his mother cooked fish at 9 o'clock.

Sunday ~ TOM six in the morning to the East Lake fishing. He caught the afternoon from the morning. Fishing all day, but. Caught only one fish in the evening back home, his mother put him catch the fish. Cooked. Ate a very delicious steamed fish. After dinner, At 9 o'clock. The family together, watching football games. Very Happy. Tom Spent a pleasant Sunday.

Sunday ~TOM went fishing in the East Lake at six in the morning. He fished from morning till afternoon. Fishing all day, but. Only one fish was caught, and when he came home at night, his mother caught the fish he caught. Boiled. I ate a very delicious steamed fish. After dinner, at 9 o'clock. Their whole family watched the football match together. Very happy. Tom had a good Sunday.

He wrote it himself. You have a look first. If not. Forget it ... Hehe