Revise the teaching plan of sick sentences

Modifying a sick sentence means modifying words with obvious language defects without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, so that the sentence is smooth, correct and more perfect. What is the teaching plan for modifying sick sentences? The following is my teaching plan to correct sick sentences. Welcome to enjoy.

Modify the teaching plan of sick sentences 1

Teaching objectives

1, master the types of common sick sentences and modify the teaching plan of sick sentences.

2, can accurately judge whether the sentence is speechless.

3, can make appropriate changes to sick sentences.

Stimulate students' interest in learning Chinese and make them happy to learn.

Teaching emphasis: master the types of common sick sentences and the methods of modifying them, so as to improve the ability of modifying them.

Teaching difficulties: discrimination and modification of common ill sentences.

Teaching methods include induction, guidance and cooperative inquiry.

Teaching hours count as one class hour.

teaching process

First, the introduction of new courses.

Speech by Han Fuju (J incarnation)

Before liberation, Han Fuju, the great warlord who occupied Shandong Province, was a big idiot. But he often pretends to be knowledgeable and gives speeches everywhere. On one occasion, cheeloo University celebrated its anniversary, and he also rushed to join in the fun. Before his ass could sit still, he began to give a speech.

"Ladies and gentlemen,

What is the weather like today? Today is a good day for a speech. The people attending the meeting are very lush, it seems that there are about eight fifths! Raise your hand if you haven't arrived! ""I'm very lucky. The headmaster invited me to your school today. Giving a speech in front of all gentlemen really stands out from the crowd! " (Students burst into laughter)

"What are you laughing at? I am a lout, I can't compete with you. You are all college students and know English in seven or eight countries. I don't even know English in China. I don't know much about talking, but I can go shirtless when I want to fight. " (The students all burst into laughter)

(Show jokes to stimulate students' interest)

Second, learn new lessons.

(a), show the learning objectives:

Teaching emphasis: master the types of common sick sentences and the methods of modifying them, so as to improve the ability of modifying them.

Teaching difficulties: discrimination and modification of common ill sentences.

(2), show the exam instructions:

Can identify and correct the following common language diseases: incomplete composition, improper collocation, improper word order, redundant repetition and inconsistency.

Knowing the types of common sentences in senior high school entrance examination, let's take a look at the types of common sentences and deepen our understanding of them.

(3) Summarize the types of ill sentences:

1, the composition is incomplete

(1) Missing theme

Through this conversation, I understand a lot of truth.

(2) Lack of predicate

A, on my way to school, suddenly a beggar-like man fell to the ground.

(3) Lack of objects

A, although I am very busy, I still study problems with my classmates.

2. Improper collocation

A, the happy smiles and hearty songs of those students in middle school are still ringing in my ears.

3. Incorrect word order

First, we must carry forward and inherit the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation.

4. repetition is troublesome

A: I sincerely thank them in my heart.

5. Inconsistency

It took him about a year.

(4) Methods and steps to modify ill sentences.

1 method

(1), incomplete composition-completion (2), improper collocation-collocation specification

(3) improper word order-changing position (4) repetition and redundancy-deleting redundancy.

(5) Inconsistency-strict logic

Addition: Make up the missing elements in the sick sentence to make the sentence complete in structure and clear in meaning. (mostly used to modify ill sentences with incomplete components)

Delete (deletion method): delete redundant elements in a sentence to make the meaning of the sentence clear and avoid repetition. (mostly used to modify repeated and inconsistent sentences)

Tone (Transposition): Adjust inappropriate words in a sentence to make the sentence structure clear and logical. (mostly used to modify ill-ordered sentences)

Change (lexical change): replace inappropriate words in sentences with appropriate words to make sentence collocation reasonable and accurate. (mostly used to modify ill sentences with improper collocation)

2. Steps to modify sick sentences:

(1), Reading: Look for sick sentences with the help of the sense of language, and the awkward place to read often is the sick language.

(2) Extraction: trunk extraction. So as to judge whether the sentence is wrong.

(3) Change: add, delete, adjust and change.

(4), check: review (whether the sentence is fluent, whether there are new language diseases).

(5) Focus on the senior high school entrance examination and practical exercises.

1, Wang Min has a fever. The doctor gave him a blood test, and the test results will not be known for half an hour.

During the holiday, the aunts and uncles in the community are very concerned and take care of us. Our gratitude is beyond words!

At the opening ceremony, the athletes walked through the reviewing platform with vigorous steps.

Revise the teaching plan of sick sentences II

1. Among the following sentences, the sentence with clear meaning is () (national volume, Shandong, Henan, Hebei, Anhui and other regions)

A. Panasonic's new product, the thickness of 14 mm, gives people a visual feeling, unlike Sony's products, which has the illusion that it is slightly thinner than the actual thickness.

B. The U.S. government still supports a strong dollar, but this is just lip service or decisive measures, which economists think is negative.

The representatives of the World AIDS Conference include the directors of China CCTV and Dragon TV, and the president of Hong Kong Phoenix TV was also invited to attend the conference.

D. This murder tragedy that happened in an ordinary family is also a puzzle and discussion among relatives. No one believes that Xiaoli's mother doesn't love her family.

2. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (Hubei Volume)

A. In the article "Gardener without Nursery", this newspaper reported a touching story that a substitute teacher in Haiyuan County, Ningxia only took 50 yuan's salary every month and squeezed out a room of his own to run a school without a school building.

B. Two archaeological discoveries led by paleoanthropologist Jia Lanpo in the early days and National Cultural Heritage Administration in the recent days show that Yongding River, a natural corridor, is "the route of ancient human activities".

C the path of cold wave invading China is different every time. It depends on which part of the Arctic and Siberia has the highest cold air pressure and which part of China has the lowest air pressure.

D during this national festival, various national sports competitions were held, mainly including horse racing, wrestling, fireworks grabbing and singing. The colorful competition was warmly welcomed by the guests.

3. Among the following sentences, the one with poor language is () (Guangdong Volume)

A. If some big countries don't change their arrogant attitude in dealing with international issues, no one can predict whether there will be a peaceful day in this world.

B. The punch card system of moral education aimed at cultivating patriotic enthusiasm of primary and secondary school students is really sighing because of the understanding problems of some units and individuals.

C. Driven by ethnic hatred, the tension between the two sides of the conflict has not eased, but has intensified under the repeated mediation of the international community.

D. Usually, before surgery, doctors need to obtain scanned images of the brain of patients with brain tumors to determine the location of the tumors and understand the status of blood vessels near the tumors.

4. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (Chongqing Volume)

A. The expert group of the Ministry of Health diagnosed the patient as a suspected case of infectious atypical pneumonia according to the clinical manifestations, laboratory examination and epidemiological investigation results.

B. Now, I see the folks who have been away for many years, the hut made of stone and thatch that I grew up in the mountainous area, the rugged streets and the familiar and lovely local accent.

C. The English Broadcasting Lecture can help me a lot because I think the combination of lectures and exercises is its outstanding advantage.

D. domestic cars are low in price and suitable for people to accept. For example, the unified market price of "Urban Beibei" is only 60,800 yuan, "Engel" is 68,800 yuan, and the new "Santana" is only about 10 million yuan.

5. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (Jiangsu Volume)

A. Some people think that it is a bit inhuman for scientists to bury themselves in scientific research all day and not ask about family affairs, but the fact is the best explanation of this prejudice.

B. All kinds of fines and confiscations of government law enforcement departments must be turned over according to law, and cannot be withheld for personal use, and their sources of funds can only come from state financial allocations.

C. at dusk, standing on the top of the mountain and looking from afar, I saw the flashing place where the water meets the sky. It is a famous tourist attraction at home and abroad? Dongping village, an ancient water town.

D Now many primary schools allow students to drink water, go to the toilet and even interrupt the teacher's lecture. These behaviors, which have always been regarded as disciplinary violations, have been corrected.

6. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (Beijing Volume)

A Manchester City football team should guard against Manchester United's "terror left wing", not Dunn, not Belmadi, Wright? Phillips can't do it, only Sun Jihai can.

B. The dispatched offices of the Supervision Department of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection should take strengthening supervision as their first duty, effectively strengthen supervision over leading cadres, and prevent power from being out of control, decision-making mistakes and misconduct.

C due to the low technical level, these products are either lower in quality than similar products in coastal areas or higher in cost.

D. The editorial board of The Great Chinese Dictionary has been working hard to compile the dictionary for three consecutive spring and autumn periods in order to make the dictionary have higher quality.

7. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (Fujian Volume)

A. In today's era of commodity economy, poetry has lost its former glory and drifted away from us. It is really a rare spiritual enjoyment to read such a pure and clear ode to the motherland.

B the development of everything is ups and downs, which is determined by the internal contradictions of things and the external influences of nature and society.

C. The language of literary and artistic works is good or bad, not because it uses many gorgeous words and terms of a certain industry, but because its words are used in the right place.

D. The topics of some articles are obscure, not directly revealed by plain words, but implicitly described by some rhetorical devices or expressions.

8. In the following news headlines, the sentence with a clear meaning is () (the old curriculum standard volumes of the whole country, Inner Mongolia, Hainan, Tibet, Shaanxi, Guangxi and other regions)

A. hundreds of relatives of the victims attended this grand funeral.

B. Recently, the exchange rate of the US dollar against the Japanese yen has risen slightly.

C. On Teacher's Day, teachers hope students don't give gifts and blessings.

This is a photo taken by supermodel Sun Yan in June, 2002 +065438+ 10.

9. Among the following statements, the one that is not bad is () (Liaoning Volume)

A. "Northeast sketch is on fire!" Only by fully understanding the sketch acting skills of Liaoning comedians such as Zhao Benshan and Pan Changjiang and their effects can we grasp the profound and extensive connotation of this sentence.

B. He is an informative tabloid edited by his hometown, which is informative and readable. Hundreds of tabloids are printed every month, and they are snapped up by fellow villagers in less than an hour.

The dashboard on the shenzhou spaceship fully reflects the equipment manufacturing level and the quality of the technical team in Liaoning old industrial base.

D. He works hard and treats people sincerely. In life and work, he really used his own actions to shape great personality strength, moving and guiding people around him.

10. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (Hunan Volume)

A. As the monitoring of the ecological environment is strengthened in the production process, the pollution-free vegetables produced by the base every year are not only supplied to the main markets in this province, but also sold to Henan, Hebei and other provinces.

B. The fragmented context caused by the abuse of loanwords not only destroys the rigor and harmony of Chinese language, affects the expressive function of Chinese, but also dispels the profound and rich connotation of China culture.

C. Flowers, leaves and fruits of Zanthoxylum bungeanum contain aromatic oil, and citral extracted from aromatic oil is the main raw material for preparing edible essence and cosmetic essence, which cannot be separated from it.

D. Different from writers, photographers don't put their feelings about mountains, rivers, vegetation, cities and villages into their works, but focus directly on the lens.

answer

1. answer A (B in the b option? The food produced has always been trusted by new and old customers? The wrong use of the passive sentence means that the product is credible and the customer is not credible. Option c is a typical double-sided and single-sided error. Can't you accept tickets? Deny? Option D is an inappropriate match to expand the supply of textbooks. )

2. answer D (A? Establish? Do not match with the back, lack of object prefix. b？ Clear thinking, cheerful personality, optimistic mood and firm confidence? With what? Infected? Do not match. c？ Not allowed? With what? Making people? Semantic repetition)

Answer C (A should be? What are the expenses incurred by the managers of public welfare forests for construction, tending, management and protection? . Item b? Is it finished? With what? Progress? Do not match? Is it finished? It should be changed to? Realize? . Item d? Those who are enterprising and indomitable on all fronts)

4. the answer B (A) is not properly matched. The attributives of "a magazine" and "wild land" do not match the headword, but should be "wild land compiled by a magazine" It is also illogical to "open seven or eight spread pictures on the title page". "Title page" refers to the page with the title, author, publisher and other contents printed on the cover of books and periodicals. The title page cannot be a "seven-eight spread chart". According to the meaning of the sentence, it should be "title map", that is, the illustrations before the text of the book should be expressed as "opening the title page, seven or eight spread maps" or "opening the title map, seven or eight spread maps" C improper collocation should be changed to "peach tree, line and line". "Using the curiosity of primary and secondary school students, cheating in exams is common" should be "using the curiosity of primary and secondary school students, cheating in exams is common" or deleting "and" with commas. In addition, the word "you" is cumbersome and the deletion is concise. )

5. Answer D (A) is not properly matched, and the theme is "The task is the author himself". B improper collocation, "has dropped nine times" is wrong, and multiples cannot be dropped. C improper use, change "infrastructure construction fund management" to "rural infrastructure construction fund management". )

6. The answer C (A) is not appropriate, and it should be changed to "it has made a profound explanation in theory and detailed provisions in policy". B is redundant, "otherwise" means "if not", and "do not take urgent action" can be deleted. D is illogical, and the concepts of "radar, communication and navigation and many air traffic control centers" are not properly juxtaposed. )

7. Answer B (incorrect use of related words, the word "not only" is "and includes", and the word "but" is changed to "and includes". )

8. Answer C (A) The structure is disordered and the collocation is improper. After "stealing and looting a large amount of materials in the wire and cable factory without authorization", we should keep up with "causing the factory to lose more than one million yuan". This is illogical. Before "black-box operation", the word "opaque" should be deleted. D improper configuration or redundant components. You can change the "cover" to "protection" or delete "security".

9. answer D(A? Because? The subject of the sentence is incomplete. b？ Cultivate? With what? Level? Improper collocation. ? Big deal? The previous compound attributes should be arranged in the following customary order: 1 indicates possession or time and place; 2 represents reference or quantity; ③ Verbs or verb phrases; 4 adjectives or adjective phrases; 5 nouns or noun phrases. c？ Jerseys and sneakers? Not a ping-pong device)

10. Answer A (B) is not properly matched, and "solving the dilemma" is changed to "getting rid of the dilemma". C is not sorted properly, and the word "before" is changed to "yes". D redundant, delete "in progress". )