The teacher drew a circle for us to imagine writing a composition.

1. Comprehensive use of language pearls (circular imagination): what a big pearl! Grease-smooth beads scatter yellow and cold green light.

It lay there quietly, on an elegant and luxurious blue-purple velvet interlayer. The blue light of the beads and the blue-purple interlining are so bright and delicate that people can't help but think of the West Lake under the cool breeze and bright moon. A bright blue moon is reflected in blue lagoon at night, not in front of us? So fresh, Leng Yan and intoxicating.

Leng Yan's light and shadow make people dare not stare, even the small room is mapped on the wall. No wonder the ancients said that "stone is jade, water is pearl"! Comment: This imaginary essay focuses on pearls, their congealing and smoothness, their cool blue light, their brightness and beauty, just like the bright moon reflected on the blue lake at night in Leng Yan. Description and metaphor really make up a beautiful picture. The imagination is reasonable and the image is concrete and vivid; The language is accurate, coherent and clear.

Test analysis: It is obvious that this question needs imagination, and it is an imaginary composition about "circle". First, imagine according to the shape of a "circle". If the basic outline of a thing is a circle, it can be written by imagination.

For example, Playground Runway, Well, Pearl and Ancient Mill are basically round, so you can use your imagination to write them. When writing specifically, we must meet the five requirements mentioned later, paying special attention to the accuracy, coherence and clarity of the language.

Comments: There are many abilities in this exam, including imagination, expression and application, and comprehensive analysis. A topic that seems to be free to play is actually limited.

This kind of question is not only conducive to the expansion of students' thinking, but also requires students to expand within the prescribed scope, which is very helpful to the cultivation of students' rigorous thinking.

Our teacher drew a circle on the blackboard and asked us to write a composition. How to write a story about the circle, I hope it will inspire you. The ancient Greek philosopher Zhi Nuo once told such a story.

A student asked her teacher, "Teacher, your knowledge is many times more than mine, but why are you always a little confused about your answers?" The teacher drew a big circle and a small circle in the sand with a cane, and then said, "The area of the big circle represents the knowledge I have mastered, and the area of the small circle represents the knowledge you have mastered. The place outside these two circles is what you and I don't know. Because the big circle is bigger than the small circle, I have more ignorance than the small circle, which is why I often doubt myself.

He who admits his ignorance is a true wise man. From whether a person can correctly understand and evaluate himself, we can see the depth of his cultivation and the amount of knowledge.

People who realize that they "know very little" will only maintain a modest attitude and a strong thirst for knowledge when encountering difficulties. The more they feel good about themselves, the more they think they "know a lot", which just shows that they know little or even ignorance.

3. What do you learn to do in the sixth grade composition, such as singing and drawing? Writing a painting in the process of learning an art "Love art does not mean understanding art, and understanding art does not mean knowing art. Art is not imitation, but detachment and creation. It needs people to sacrifice for it and treat it as an infatuated lover. " I have special feelings for painting since I was a child. I remember when I was in kindergarten, my mother asked me what I wanted to learn. I said without hesitation, "I want to learn to draw." Since then, I have formed an indissoluble bond with painting. Drawing not only brings me fun, but also brings me comfort like a good friend. When I am happy, I will draw my happiness with crayons. When I am unhappy, I paint my troubles. Painting has become an indispensable part of my life. Painting has a unique charm. I like sketches and Chinese paintings very much. Among the painting methods I have studied, Chinese painting is the most mysterious one. Simple water, ink, pens and rice paper can not only draw flowers and birds, landscapes, but also animals and people. A soft one. With the shade of ink, you can show thousands of worlds, which can be tangible and give people a feeling of both form and spirit. What is even more amazing is that the ink and pigment painted on paper will not fade when it meets water. Chinese painting is really a treasure of our country. Chinese painting is not only beautiful, but also diverse and changeable. For example, if you dip the pen tip in two colors, you can make the painting have a strong three-dimensional sense by controlling the angle and strength of the pen. In meticulous painting, there is a technique called rendering. Just dip the pen in color and draw it on paper, then dip the clean pen in water and take out the color. If you need to control the number of renderings, there will be an excessive effect from deep to shallow, and the picture will be natural. The figures, flowers, birds and landscapes drawn in this way will give people a vivid and wonderful feeling. Chinese painting brings me surprise and mystery. I am willing to try my best to master the essence of Chinese painting. Drawing has cultivated my good habit of doing things seriously. Painting gives me a way to express my thoughts more than others. I often use pictures to draw what I think. Sometimes when I do math application problems, I am used to using figures or lines to express them, even a complete picture. By doing so, I will feel that my thinking of solving problems is clear. The speed of solving problems is much faster. Painting has also cultivated my keen observation, which is not only manifested in my painting, but also in my life. My mother always says that I see things differently. Painting has become a hobby of mine. Whenever I am happy, I think of painting. Whenever I am tired, I will draw; Whenever I am bored, painting will make me forget my troubles; Whenever I find it difficult to express myself in words, I will pick up my brush, ................................................................................................................................................................ I am very happy, and I can accompany me whenever I draw. In any case, I won't give up painting. 2. Learn to paint. I remember when I was in the first grade of primary school, I always liked to paint my mother's lipstick all over the wall, and I painted the snow-white wall like a flower. My mother was angry when she saw me scribbling her lipstick, but my father thought I was very talented in painting, so I was learning to paint since I was a child. I learned He Laoshi's paintings. He has a face with the word "country" written on it. He is tall and kind to others. When I first came, the teacher taught us to draw with circles. I saw the teacher holding a pen, drawing a round head on a piece of paper, and then drawing a pair of round eyes on his head. He drew two oval mouths on the outside of his head. His body is round, his tail is round and his wings are round. The teacher made a lovely bird with a circle. It turned out that painting was so interesting that my interest was immediately hooked up and I drew it on paper: a little boy made of circles stood in a circular pond and blew bubbles. When the teacher saw my painting, he smiled and said, "This little boy can do magic and stand on the water." The students all laughed, and I smiled shyly. Later, I studied painting here in He Laoshi. Teachers often tell jokes, and I hope to learn to draw every day. Time flies and my painting level has been greatly improved. At this time, He Laoshi assigned me to a sketch class to learn sketch. Sketch is to show an object in three dimensions with a pencil. It is a little difficult for me to draw the cube I see under the light with pencils of different shades. This is the most basic thing. I picked up a pencil and drew a sketch. I began to draw, but my hands trembled a little and my lines were involuntarily crooked. It took me about two hours to finish the whole painting while I was painting. The teacher saw it and boasted, "It's not bad, but it's not good enough here." I picked up the brush and dealt with my painting. After three or two revisions, I used it.

Everyone helps to write a composition entitled: The teacher drew a circle on the blackboard as a circle and a dream.

How many times have I wandered around the clothing store? How many times I hesitated to look at the delicious food and touch the money in my pocket; How many times have you spent a week or even a month on pocket money for a book? How many times have I spent the last dime on a stack of manuscript paper ... In the eyes of others, I am a cheapskate, unwilling to eat or wear. However, I know myself deeply, and everything I do is just for a dream, a dream of a long journey, and a sacred literary dream! I just want to keep this quiet place in my heart, devote my life's energy and * * *, pour all my money for it, and be indifferent all my life. I long for a rich spiritual home and hope to fulfill my lifelong dream, that's all, nothing more. Brand-name clothing, delicious food, delicacies, following the fashion and learning fashion give people temporary satisfaction and happiness. With a full mind and a healthy heart, happiness will accompany you for a long time.

How many times have I stayed up all night, tossing and turning, simply getting up in the soft candlelight with my clothes on, catching the spark of inspiration. You don't have to stick to any topic, and you don't have to care about what style. Sudden thoughts are revealed at the tip of the pen, and you can write them down at will. A clumsy article is swept away with a wave of your hand, and then you leave the case with satisfaction. How many times have I been in the library and reading room, turning over and over again, extracting over and over again, keeping my hands on the book and my eyes on it. How many times have I looked around for creative inspiration and collected information, and I came back with a full load, exhausted. However, I have been busy for several days, sorting, recording and revising. All this is just a dream, a dream destined to wander all my life, a dream that makes my heart jump high, and a sacred literary dream.

I'm going to live a poor life for a dream. I don't want the satisfaction of material life, I want to run freely in my own spiritual field. In order to realize a dream, I will wander around the world all my life, pick some rare things along the way, and then polish them and make them public. Laugh at life and perfect life between the lines; In order to realize my dream, I'm going through fire and water.

The wings of a round dream

On the stage, bright lights hit her flawless face. This tall and graceful woman, Jiang Xintian, is like the sun suddenly jumping out of the mountains, shining brilliantly and making people's eyes ache. Millions of people in the audience never imagined that 2 1 years ago, she was diagnosed as a deaf-mute child when she was less than one year old. Her desperate mother hugged her and walked sadly to the sea. The huge waves from the roaring sea wet the baby's feet, and the baby's sharp cry awakened the mother's chaotic consciousness. When she suddenly woke up, the mother, a music teacher, with tears in her eyes, made up her mind that even if her daughter would never hear the sound, she would try to embed sweet notes into her daughter's life.

At this moment, this woman who was rescued from misfortune "said" to everyone with a unique sign language: "Life always has a dream, even if it is an injured tree, give it a shade; Even a broken flower, I also want to give all the fragrance ... "

Her words kicked off the performance of My Dream by China Disabled Art Troupe, which lasted for two and a half hours.

Huang Yangguang was born in a Yao family in Shanzhai, Guangxi. At the age of five, he lost his arms because of electric shock. He takes care of life with his feet instead of his hands, engages in farm work, and paints and knits in his spare time. In the dynamic dance "Young Seedling", we can see him carrying a pole with great agility, squatting, sitting, getting up, jumping, twisting, turning, shaking and swinging, as light as a deer and as lively as an antelope.

When Zhang Jiahuan was born, the doctor sighed heavily: "Her spinal cord muscles are atrophied, and she can only live for one or two years at most ..." However, at the age of 15, she kept writing miracles on the pages of life. She can't stand, but she can swim like a fish in the sea; She didn't enter the campus, but taught herself college courses; She studied English, German and Italian just to be able to translate the contents of foreign songs in multiple languages. That night, she sang two songs "Edelweiss" and "Phantom of the Theater" in English, with a wide range and sweet songs. When she sang happily, her shrinking body in the wheelchair was as tall as a giant.

Every performer standing on the stage has a sad story behind him. They were originally unfortunate, but their parents forged an invisible wing for them with a mountain of love, and the society they grew up in shaped another wing for them with a broad mind like the sea.

These wings took them to overcome many difficulties and showed the value of life in the art world.

5. Use your imagination to write a composition about what you see, think and feel with circle as the topic. In today's composition class, Mr. Wu drew a circle on the blackboard. Let's use our imagination and say what it looks like. The students scrambled to raise their hands, and our answers were varied. Some people say it is like a huge earth, some people say it is like delicious steamed bread, some people say it wants colorful bubbles, and others say it is like a beautiful watch ... countless.

Speaking of watches, I immediately think of my beloved baby watch.

This is a birthday present from my aunt. In its round belly, there are a pair of brothers and sisters. My brother is tall and has long legs. He is the minute hand and my sister is the hour hand. My sister never gets angry because my brother runs ahead. My brothers and sisters are very harmonious, just like my sister and I. I heard that this watch was imported from Switzerland. I cherish it very much. I wear it on my little hand every day and never want to take it off.

But one day, regret happened, and a damn crack appeared on my beautiful watch. I was sad and anxious, and tried to remember when this crack was "born". Oh, I recall hearing a bang when playing parallel bars at noon the day before yesterday. I didn't care much. I didn't expect it was the sound of my watch hitting the parallel bars! I really regret being careless.

From then on, I cherish it even more. At the slightest sign of trouble, I will be more careful, and I will reach into my clothes bag for fear of adding another seam, so that I will never finish the "dangerous" game again!

Do you have anything you like? Maybe you have a soft spot for steamed bread, especially for bubbles. Spread your imagination wings quickly and remember your unforgettable story!