Write a detailed description composition of about 200 words.

1. Character description He has a oval face. When he is angry, his face is long, much like a horse.

When he faces you alone, he always puts on an understanding and loving look, and at the same time keeps shaking his head, looking like a big floating lamp from a distance. His eyes, you know? It's big, dark gray and deep. That horse's face looks very uncomfortable. He likes to make eyes at everyone when he speaks. Be careful not to let it hit you, it will make you dumbfounded.

His arms and legs are as thin as bamboo poles, and his clothes hang on his body like sheets. He is erratic and has a mysterious temperament, which determines that when we play all horror dramas, he will wear a wig to play the female ghost. My mother works as a teacher in a health school.

She has big bright eyes under her bushy eyebrows and a nagging mouth under her straight nose, but she has a caring heart in her chest. Teacher Sun is the math teacher in our class.

She is of medium height and looks like 35 years old. An amiable face, always so kind.

The eyes seen from those black-rimmed glasses are always so bright and kind. Her language is always so profound, so wonderful and makes people laugh.

The female teacher's surname is Song. Because she is young, she is only 20 years old at most. So we all call her Miss Song, and some female students kindly call her Big Sister. Teacher Xiao Song is tall and dressed simply.

There are two arch eyebrows on the face of melon seeds, a pair of bright and sharp eyes embedded under the arch eyebrows, and a glib mouth. Teacher Xiao Song tied two long ponytails and dragged them to his shoulders.

Feng Cheng is a classmate in our class. He is not tall and his eyes are big and bright. In particular, he has two big ears and two thick lips, just like a big clock.

To this end, the students gave him a nickname-"Big Clock". Coincidentally, since the second grade, Feng Cheng has kept the classroom open and locked in the class every day, just like ringing a bell. This nickname is called "Open".

Zhang Shan, my deskmate, is very delicate and watery, but she ended up with the nickname "Zhang Luneng". Li became a member of the Health Committee of the "Second Bar" because she was nosy.

Although she is small and short, her voice is very high. No matter who did something wrong, she will get to the bottom of it and make you apologize.

Therefore, I secretly changed her name to "Mera". The classroom stopped talking as soon as the invigilator came in.

He has a high nose, bright eyes embedded under long black eyebrows and a thick beard under his nose, which makes people know that he is a strict invigilator. He glanced at the classroom and then began to speak: "Students, today is the time for you to report your primary school achievements to your motherland. Do the problem carefully, and don't be careless at all. After receiving the test paper, you should see the questions clearly, don't glance left and right, whisper, answer questions carefully, and strive for good results. "

My father is a humorous person. My father is short, thin and thin, with white skin and black hair. Anyone who sees him will think that he has permed his hair in the barber shop.

His colleagues say that he is a fallen Christian, and I think so. Artist, a famous binding artist in five provinces of Central and South China. His solo exhibition was well received by many celebrities.

He is also a funny man, especially fond of joking. I don't know if all artists are humorous, but I think my father is full of humorous cells. No matter how busy and tired he was at work, as soon as he entered the house, to be exact, he said that as soon as he saw me, he immediately smiled and I danced with him.

"Contact with the world" is my greatest hobby. A girl of 12 years old, naughty and stubborn, with a delicate nose and a small mouth that likes to sip at ordinary times. This is me.

In a corner of the bookstore, you will meet a woman who is holding a book and looking at her with relish, smiling for a while, as if she heard the cheers of the winner; Then he frowned as if he were lost in thought when he met a problem. She, that's me, a small frequent visitor to the bookstore.

My mother especially likes reading and studying. My mother is a farmer. She is busy all the year round and has no leisure time.

Her hands are always black and rough. Mom is still a self-taught farmer college student. It's amazing! Her face has a pair of beautiful eyes, dotted with childish long eyelashes, like two crystal grapes.

Hei Hu, the child, has a strong head and two big eyes, and is very energetic. His brow wrinkled tightly from time to time, forming a question mark between the two; Sometimes I stretch happily, like an exclamation point.

His red face sparkled like an apple ripe in September. His ears are white and red, his helix is distinct, and his outer ring and inner ring are very symmetrical, like a carved work of art.

Her small mouth contains rich expressions: when you are happy, tilt your lips and make a face; When you are angry, you can catch a small oil pan by pouting. Words from this mouth sometimes make people angry and choke, but sometimes people can't help laughing.

Miss Li has beautiful hair, black and bright, thick and dense. When she stands in the sun and shakes her head gently, her hair will flash with colorful rings. Our classmate Xiaohong is wearing a big braid, which is black and bright, with a pair of big black eyes embedded under his thick eyebrows. She looks beautiful.

Look, this middle-aged teacher wearing a black gabardine tunic suit, black wide-brimmed glasses and a smile is our respected Chinese teacher, Miss Chen. Teacher Chen is knowledgeable and has rich teaching experience. He is always so relaxed, lively, lively and interesting in class.

We especially like listening to his composition class. His lectures are always so funny, humorous and fascinating that we are all interested.

We unconsciously fell in love with composition and gradually understood the "mystery" of writing. His figures have doubled; The previous purple round face has turned gray-yellow, adding deep wrinkles; Like his father, his eyes are swollen all around, which I know. People who farm by the sea blow the sea breeze all day, which is generally the case.

He wears a broken felt hat on his head. He is.

2. The 200-word segment about character description is the most important category in description, including appearance description, action description, dialogue description and psychological description.

Appearance description, also called portrait description, refers to the description of characters' appearance, modality, posture, clothing and so on. A basic requirement of appearance description is to reveal the personality characteristics of the characters, because a person's inner mental state will be expressed through a certain appearance, and the most typical one is Lu Xun's description of the image of leap soil in Hometown: this is leap soil.

Although I knew it was leap soil at first sight, it was not my memory. His figures have doubled; The previous purple round face has turned gray-yellow, adding deep wrinkles; Like his father, his eyes are swollen all around, which I know. People who farm by the sea blow the sea breeze all day, which is generally the case.

He wore a worn felt hat on his head and only a thin cotton-padded coat on his body. Holding a paper bag and a long pipe in my hand is not the red and round hand I remember, but thick, stupid and cracked, like pine bark. This kind of appearance description profoundly reveals the tragic fate of Runtu, especially echoes the appearance of Runtu as a teenager, and highlights the theme more profoundly.

But the description of appearance is not necessary for every article, it depends on the needs of the content of the article. A good appearance description must be conducive to embodying the central idea and expressing the characteristics of the characters. Only in this way can we achieve good results.

Action description is to describe the character's character with specific actions with typical significance, such as The Little Red Army on horseback: During the Yan 'an period, a comrade asked Comrade Chen Geng such a question: "Mr. Chen, I heard that you have two fears in your life, Liao in the Kuomintang and Peng in * * * *. Is it true? " Chen Geng nodded calmly and acquiesced. Comrade He, who stood by, said, "Mr. Chen has a third fear ..." Chen Geng punched him and everyone calmed down. Comrade Chen Geng was so excited that his eyes were red that it was not convenient for everyone to ask any more questions.

Known as one of the "Three Masters of Huangpu" in the Huangpu era, people only know that he is a hero who is fearless of ghosts and ghosts, but he is afraid of Mr. Liao. During the second revolutionary civil war, it was said that he was afraid of Mr. Peng. But no one knew that he had a third fear.

It was not until the night after the national liberation that Comrade He died that Comrade Chen Geng expressed his "fear" for the third time. "Get out of the grass.

But many things get harder and harder in the end. As the saying goes, a hundred miles is half ninety! "Comrade Chen Geng deeply recalled the past. He said that it was not until this time that he admitted the word "difficult" in life. It was a late autumn with frost and snow, and the sun had set.

Feeling very tired, he left behind, dragging the thin horse slowly forward, and the horse was also very tired. Suddenly I came to a little red army left behind.

This little guy who looks only twelve years old has a Sichuan accent, a round face, a pair of big eyes, two thin lips and a slightly upturned nose. Wearing a pair of broken sandals, my feet are blue and red with cold.

Chen Geng approached him and said, "Come and ride for a while, little friend." The little guy took out a nonchalant expression, stared at Chen Geng's thin face with a beard and said with a smile, "Old comrade, my physical strength is much stronger than yours. Get in the car and go. "

Chen Geng said in a commanding tone: "Go up and ride for a while!" The child said in a stubborn tone, "If you want me to race your horse, let's have a race." The child straightened up and made a sign to run.

"Well, let's go together." "You go first, I'll walk slowly and wait for my companion."

Chen Geng is very helpless. He took out a small bag of highland barley noodles from his body and handed it to the kid, saying, "You ate it." The boy took out his dry food pocket, patted it gently and said, "Look, it's more bulging than you."

Chen Geng was finally persuaded by this boy, so he had to climb on horseback and go forward alone. I don't know why, Chen Geng always can't calm down at this time.

In his mind, a series of children appeared. From going to the seaside, walking on the streets of Guangzhou, to the Hong Kong pier, all the dolls he handled came straight into his eyes.

Chen Geng suddenly shouted: "No, I was cheated!" He turned his horse's head and kicked it in the stomach, running all the way. When Chen Geng found this boy, it was already late.

When Chen was carrying the child on horseback, a hard object touched his left hand. When he touched it down, it turned out to be the bulging dry food bag of the kid, which contained a black Achyranthes bidentata bone with several tooth marks on it.

Chen Geng understood everything. Just then, the child stopped breathing.

Chen Geng held the child's body tightly in one hand and gave himself a mouth in the other: "Chen Geng, you big idiot, how can you be worthy of your class brother!" That's why Comrade Chen Geng dare not make fun of children, listen to their illness, or cry ... (selected from People's Daily 1983 10.03) In this article, he described what the little Red Army did before his death firmly, powerfully and deeply, and profoundly revealed the inner world of the little hero of the Long March, shining with brilliant thoughts. Dialogue description refers to a method of expressing characters' thoughts and feelings and shaping characters' images through communication and dialogue between characters. For example, in Kong Yiji, Kong Yiji said, "Stealing books is not stealing … stealing books! ..... Can the scholar be stolen? " "Not much, not much, how much?" "Not Too much" profoundly reveals Kong Yiji's pedantry and poverty as an old intellectual, which is a true portrayal of declining intellectuals.

Psychological description refers to a method of describing people's inner spiritual world, describing people's thoughts, feelings and ideological struggles, and is the main means of revealing people's inner spiritual world, shaping people's image and expressing central ideas. For example, the opening paragraph of Lu Xun's Hometown describes the scenery of my hometown and my mood like this: "Since it is the end of winter; As we approached our hometown, the weather was gloomy again. The cold wind blew into the cabin, and I looked out through the gap in the canopy. There were several desolate villages lying far and near, lifeless.

I can't help feeling sad. "This is to express people with scenery description.

3. Write a paragraph (two paragraphs) about the details of the central sentence, each paragraph should be preceded by a central sentence, 1. My grandfather, my grandfather, has gray hair and a pair of kind eyes on his square face. My grandfather likes playing tennis. He plays tennis as soon as he gets up and finishes cooking every afternoon. If there is no room, he will watch others play. My grandfather likes not only playing tennis, but also watching TV, but often. However, my grandfather was not annoyed and accompanied me to watch children's programs. My grandfather not only loves sports, but also works hard. Every morning, he goes to buy breakfast. He cooks lunch and dinner, and sometimes he waters the flowers. My grandfather is also very concerned about my study. Every time he told me to do my homework carefully, don't be careless, but I was always careless, and this bad habit never got rid of. My grandfather said, "Doing a problem is like an exam. There are not a hundred mistakes in Beijing." 2. "This is mine and this is mine." As soon as I heard the voice, I knew it was my deskmate-Chen. He was nine years old. He is a humorous boy. He looks cute, with long hair in front and short back, and thick eyebrows. He looks neat. The most interesting thing is his small flat eyes, which makes him feel funny. He has another one, too His mouth smells "delicious, delicious", but when the teacher asked us to smell the flowers and plants, his nose wouldn't listen, and the whole class just couldn't smell it. He also has a special mouth. When he is sad, his mouth immediately purses up and he can hang a bottle, but when he is happy, his mouth suddenly opens and he laughs loudly. Another thing that makes us all curious is his ears. Listen to the teacher. But he listened to those uncivilized words with relish. He likes telling jokes very much. For example, he will tell a simple thing in humorous language to make us laugh. Once in class, the teacher told us about the poor little hedgehog. The whole class was fascinated by the middle story, but he laughed at it. A classmate asked him why he was laughing. He said that he wanted to be a gorilla, which scared the bad girl to death. Listen to him. The students all burst out laughing, but the teacher frowned at this moment. I could see that he was angry. When Chen saw this scene, his head shrank back, as if he were a timid turtle. He looked cute. He is such a clever and naughty boy.

The poor old woman is about 70 years old, with unkempt hair, sallow and emaciated, and weak body, as if a breeze could blow her down.

Her face is criss-crossed, and it seems that there is no meat, leaving only the skin with black spots in the yellow, which is tightly attached to the prominent bones. There is only a glimmer of light in my eyes, and I am stunned and stunned, and there are remnants of tears. The big back behind him is out of proportion to his thin figure, and her legs are still shivering in the cold wind, so cherish it.

Although she makes a living by picking up garbage, she devoted her life to her children. Now, she has been abandoned and betrayed by her children. What a great mother she is!

5. There are 10 200-word paragraphs about the details of the characters, such as a paragraph in the text of My Uncle Mr. Lu Xun: "They helped the rickshaw driver into the car, one squatting and the other kneeling. His father took tweezers to clip out the broken glass for the rickshaw driver, and his uncle washed it with boric acid water."

This description vividly reflects the excellent qualities that uncles and fathers care about and love working people. The description of a series of small gestures, such as helping, squatting, kneeling, clamping and washing, fully shows uncle's meticulous and enthusiasm.

See the truth for details. This kind of detailed description enriches the characters' images, endows them with flesh and soul, and highlights their distinctive personalities, thus making them more vivid.

Detail description plays an extremely important role in expressing characters, narrating events and reappearing environment. Writer Lee Joon once said, "Without details, there is no work of art..

The description of true details is an important means to shape characters and achieve typicality. "Writing is like seeing a person, and writing a scene is like being in the environment. This is the main purpose of detail description.

1. Detailed description: Childhood. When I was a child, I was infatuated with watermelon. Now that I'm grown up, sometimes I really miss that cold feeling. Street stalls or melon shadows on the screen come into view, and the moment when I ate melons in my childhood reappears in front of my eyes: in summer, the brilliance of the rest of the day sinks into a corner of the sky, and the summer heat gradually disappears.

Under the blowing of the evening breeze, people's spirit is particularly comfortable. At this time, the fragrance of watermelon filled the streets, sometimes thick and sometimes light, as if nothing had happened.

I (about five or six years old) put my arms around my knees and squatted on a small bench like a cat catching a mouse. My small black eyes glanced at the watermelon spinning up and down in the water. Across the water, the sweat on my face has already dried up, and "Qianchuan" hangs like a waterfall.

Mosquitoes "swim around" in their ears and don't care. Under a bright smiling face, there is an expectant heart waiting-My Sweetie in a melon seed shell.

Until the watermelon was cut into pieces: I saw watermelon seeds embedded in red melon meat like black pearls; The melon meat is a little cold; Melon juice flows down the mirror-like melon surface, one drop, two drops; The texture on the surface of melon is like the fine lines on the surface of painted porcelain ... The happiest moment is that the iced watermelon is held in your hand, and it seems that there is a cold current floating back and forth all over your body. 2. The fragrant mud flies yellow, the northwest wind whistles, and the residual snow rolls on the road.

Although it is early spring, the weather is still very cold. She, leaning against a poplar tree at the school gate, was as motionless as snow sculpture.

The sudden ringing of the bell. Her dim eyes sparkled with longing.

A group of children, singing, walked out of the school gate without her son; Another group of children talked and laughed and set foot on the road without their son ... The figure was sparse, scattered and gone. The creaking iron gate locked the silent campus.

She was dizzy and could hardly stand up. She stumbled over and held her hands tightly on the iron fence. "For what?" An old man in a message came out with a democratic face.

"bright! My little light! " Like breathing, like crying. "School is over."

"Know the way ..." She murmured in a low voice with glassy eyes, lowered her head feebly, slowly released her hand, and took out a candy wrapped tightly with body temperature from the pocket of a long-breasted cotton-padded jacket: "Uncle, please ... give it to the child." "What's your name?" "Wang Xiaoliang."

"What grade and class?" "Today, just after my eighth birthday." "I asked what grade and class."

The old man is getting impatient. "Oh ... maybe ..." She shook her head again.

The old man looked at the neurotic woman strangely. "Who the hell are you?" What he answered was the tears in his eyes and the back that hobbled away. The old man sighed in confusion and seemed to understand something.

In the afternoon, this bag of candy finally reached Wang Xiaoliang in Class Two, Grade Two. The child was very surprised. I haven't tasted this favorite toffee for a long time.

His little hand rubbed his clothes back and forth, thought about it, and respectfully sent one to each child, two to his good friends and five to his teacher. "Eat!" He shouted and jumped happily, even throwing off the prostitute with his mouth open.

The students shared the joy with him in the laughter of hip-hop. Only the teacher quietly turned around ... After school, Xiao Liang was still immersed in joy and skipped home. Suddenly, he stopped and felt the candy left in his pocket, and a sense of fear came upon him.

He seemed to see it again: now mother raised her slender eyebrows and whispered something in her father's ear. Dad grabbed a stick and came up to him angrily. He looked blankly, not knowing what to do.

He patted his pocket hard, but it was bulging at first sight. He lowered his head, sucked his fingers, thought for a long time, and looked around. He quickly buried the sugar in the snowdrift by the side of the road and specially inserted a small stick.

Xiao Liang slept soundly and sweetly that night. He dreamed that his old mother came back with a smile, and now her mother is hanging her head and leaving. I'm so happy.

Next day, Xiao got up early. As usual, he emptied and rinsed the bedpans of the whole family first, then washed rice, added water, poked fire, sat in the pan, and then slipped out with a cold steamed bread on his back.

He wants to digest his candy quickly. I don't want to. Overnight, the ground temperature rose, the ice and snow melted, syrup and snow water mixed together and penetrated into the earth.

On the wet ground, there are some crumpled candy paper and small sticks as marks. Xiao Liang blinked and couldn't help rolling down tears.

He squatted on the ground sadly and looked blankly. After a while, I couldn't help reaching out my chapped little finger, picking up some dirt and putting it on the tip of my tongue-he smiled again: that dirt, My Sweetie's.

Summarize several common detail descriptions: (1) portrait detail description, that is, portrait detail description. For example, in Daddy's Caregiver, the portrait of the patient is a detail.

It is this detail that drives the development of the plot. (2) Description of language details, that is, a detailed description of the typical language of characters.

For example, in "Deer Fetus Hitting Kansai Town", after Lu Da killed Kansai Town, he faked his death. This is a language detail, which shows Lu Da's character characteristics of being brave and resourceful. (3) action detail description, that is, a thorough and detailed description of the typical actions of the characters.

For example, in "Rutiha Punches Kansai Town", there is a paragraph about Luda borrowing money to help Jin Lao's father and daughter.

6. Describe the details of my classmate in the character composition 200 (character description fragment)

Look at her dark face, revealing an indomitable character, with a pair of glass ball-like eyes shining under her thick black eyebrows, carefully observing her opponent's every move, alert and flexible. The uneven outline outlines her unremitting pursuit of table tennis. Although she is short and not strong, she is still crazy about sports. Just like her shocking name-Thunderstorm Point, the thunder keeps coming!

Her opponent is now classmate Q. She lifts the table tennis board without weakness, shrugs habitually, twists her neck, squats professionally, raises her head slightly, reveals daunting eyes, and smiles and says softly, "Serve!" The yellow ball shot at her quickly, and she bent down without hesitation, waved her arm and hit it back with a bang. Who knows, the opponent is not to be outdone, and it is a direct shot. She frowned warily, stepped back with her left foot and gave the ball a hard push with her right hand, never leaving the ball for a moment. The opponent directly "killed the ball", which made her hard to prevent and lost a goal!

"Damn it!" She gritted her teeth, reached for the towel, wiped her sweat and threw it back.

"Boy, not bad!" She clenched the board, gently threw the ball into the air and lifted it at lightning speed, leaving two crunches. The opponent is a capable person and difficult to deal with. Time has passed for a long time, and there is no winner. She is a little worried that the yellow ball is like a small flame, which makes people panic. Although she flashed left and right, her opponent did not move.

She was annoyed and the sweat on her forehead was burning. She roared, her eyebrows sweated together, and the ball "brushed" and hit the opponent's key, and the opponent staggered back. Suddenly lost a goal!

7. The composition describes the details in 200 words. My family has a little white dog. It is covered with snow-white fur and feels soft, like wearing a clean white sweater. A pair of big eyes turn straight, like two black gems; There are small ears on the top of the head, and the nose is flat and often wet. Grandma said that this is a sign of dog health; The pointed tail is very flexible and often swings from side to side, but if you hurt the little white dog, it will bark with its tail between its legs, which is a bit like "running away with its tail between its legs" in the book. I like watching little white dogs eat best. One day, I took a piece of meat. The little white dog saw it and ran around me. I spit out the meat, and the little white dog jumped up and bit with his mouth open. Then it presses the meat with its front foot and tears it bit by bit with its teeth. It was really delicious, and it soon fell down. After eating, it licked its mouth with its tongue, as if remembering the delicious meal just now. You can also contribute.

Little white dog is fun to sleep. When the weather is warm, the little white dog likes to sleep on the ground, with his front legs extended forward and his hind legs extended backward, or lying comfortably with his feet pointing in the same direction. When winter comes, the little white dog is afraid of the cold. He buried his head tightly between his legs and curled up to sleep. If the little white dog is happy, he will sleep on all fours and his stomach will swell with breathing. The little white dog woke up and stretched himself. He stretched out his front feet for a long time, took a deep breath and arched himself. It's very cute.

Mother sometimes sits in the living room knitting a sweater. When she was not careful, the wool ball rolled to the ground. When the little white dog's ears move, it rushes over like lightning, and its flexible big eyes keep looking for it. Then, when he jumped, he held the ball tightly and played happily. It jumps around, rolls the ball to the left, rolls it to the right, and slaps it with its front paws, just like a child playing with a ball. How interesting!

8. Describe the details of the characters. 200 my sister

My sister is 5 years old and goes to kindergarten. She has a round head, bright eyes under thick eyebrows, an angular and eloquent mouth under a pointed nose, and two deep dimples are printed on that lovely face.

Everyone in the family dotes on her, especially her father. Every time I see my sister, I have a smile on my face. Sister can be regarded as dad's "pistachio".

But she is also very naughty and often makes me scolded by my parents. Once I bought a new box of crayons, and my sister saw it and pestered me to play with it. I ignored her, held it up and pretended to be very proud. My sister reached for it, but she was too short to reach it, so she stamped her foot. After a while, she stopped arguing with me for crayons. I thought she would "back down", but I didn't expect her to cry to me with her "good weapon". Dad heard the crying and ran over and asked, "Are you crying?" No matter what I say, my father doesn't believe me, which makes me speechless. The result was scolded again.

Sometimes, my sister is smart, too. One day, my parents went out to the street, and my sister and I stayed in the house to look after the house. We watched TV for a while and felt bored. My sister said to me, "Sister, let's fall in love between teachers and students!" "I said happily," well, I'll be a teacher and you will be a student. "Sister readily agreed. I took out my clipboard and wrote on it: "How much is 8 more than 4? "This is what my sister learned in kindergarten. I called my sister's name and asked her to answer this question. Suddenly, my sister didn't say a word. Maybe she didn't know how to do this problem. I followed my teacher's example and seriously criticized her. My sister said unhappily, "You have the wrong number. You should like me best. No matter what I did wrong, you won't criticize me. You hate other students the most. " Say that finish also make a pair of cool, very noble appearance. I was furious at that. How can a "teacher" shield a "student" like this? So, I threw down the clipboard and said loudly, "No more playing, no more playing, just ..."

Before I could finish, my sister had a brainwave and ran out quickly, leaving my checkers beads at the door. I didn't know what she was doing, so I went out to have a look. Unexpectedly, my foot fell on the beads and my foot was skinned. My sister quickly took the medicine box to wipe my medicine, and smiled and said to me, "The fall was not very serious. Don't tell my parents in the future. "

This is my sister-Tian Jie.