My opinion on finding the meaning of composition

What is the meaning of giving up one's life for justice? It is to safeguard justice. Wen Tianxiang put it well: No one has died since ancient times, but the so-called sacrifice for justice means sacrifice for justice. The word "sacrifice one's life for righteousness" comes from Mencius, that is to say, life is very desirable, but justice must also be upheld. And we must lay down our lives for righteousness. Life is important, but how many people in ancient China sacrificed their lives for righteousness? Tan sitong, for example, didn't pay attention to his life. Life is only once for everyone, but he chose justice and awakened the sleeping people of China with his own blood. Some people say he is ignorant. In fact, he is ignorant.

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The so-called upholding justice and being upright, in my opinion, is only a matter of degree with writing about people who gave their lives. If faced with the loss of life and justice, which side would you choose? However, only those who truly participate in justice will choose justice. Even if you have great ambition to safeguard justice and have no idea of giving up your life for justice, you will fail sooner or later.

Before that, we should have a correct understanding of what is benevolence and righteousness, or we will sacrifice our lives for a worthless thing and be laughed at by future generations. Nowadays, many people insist on justice every day, but when it comes to danger, they forget it. Now we should vigorously advocate the spirit of sacrificing our lives for righteousness and not let it disappear in the Chinese nation. ....

Comments: This paper introduces the meaning of "sacrifice one's life for righteousness" in detail, and quotes Wen Tianxiang's poem "No one has died since ancient times, and Tan Sitong's example" sacrifice one's life for righteousness "to advocate that we should carry forward this spirit. The center is very clear. However, there are some problems in the language and the content of the article is not sufficient. It is necessary to strengthen the basic language skills and further enrich the content of the article.