Detailed description of watching movies and writing compositions

1. The composition of characters in film and television works should be described in detail in about 800 words. My favorite revolutionary film and television work is "Easy", which tells the story of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression period.

The protagonist of this work is Uncle Zhao. It mainly tells the story that Uncle Zhao accepted the task of protecting the golden Buddha statue, and the Japanese launched all-round forces to take it away. Therefore, this is a huge task, but Uncle Zhao risked his life to successfully complete this task.

What impressed me most in this work was that several grandmothers used the slippery Japanese fighting method, which was both convenient and neat. They put the beans in the dustpan and the Japanese officer came. They opened the door and poured the beans out of the dustpan. Beans rolled down like a river, and Japanese officers could only retreat and could not move forward. Finally, the Japanese officers got a "good" ending. I sat in front of the TV, laughing and clapping again and again.

Although this film and television work is very funny at first, it can make me realize the bravery of revolutionary martyrs in the Anti-Japanese War, let alone a powerful young man. Even grandma, who is not afraid of sacrifice, took part in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression. I was most impressed by their clever way of defeating the strong young Japanese officers.

My favorite film and television work is Hands Up. Students, what about you?

2. Detail description and composition Balzac said: "Only details constitute the value of a work." Lee Joon once said, "There can be no works of art without details." True detail description is an important means to shape characters. The purpose of detail description is to make the article vivid, let the author see the true colors of people, and the scenery can give people a real feeling. So how can we write the details of the article? Generally speaking, we can start with the following points: First, choosing typical details is the key to show the theme and soul of the article, so we must choose. For example, the portrait in "Kong Yiji" describes that he is tall, his face is blue and white, his wrinkles are often mixed with scars, and there is a messy lotus flower on his white beard. Although I am wearing a robe, it is dirty and torn. It seems that it hasn't been mended or washed for more than ten years. This paragraph captures the typical details of "gown". Wearing a gown is a symbol of literati in the imperial examination era, and Kong Yiji's gown is "dirty and torn", which shows his poverty and highlights Kong Yiji's pedantry and numbness. Second, mobilize all kinds of senses. Careful observation of things to make the details vivid, we must mobilize our various senses and observe things carefully. For example, the following paragraph describes flowers: the crescent moon on the horizon exudes a faint glow and quietly sprinkles in the garden. In the dim moonlight, the colorful flowers and green leaves look dim during the day. At this time, a few newly blooming epiphyllum exudes a faint scent, which is refreshing. Ah! There is another flower in bud. Will it bloom? I watched it for a long time, and suddenly, the bud moved ... Finally, a small hole was quietly opened at the tip of the bud, and then the small hole was slowly opened, and the petals were stretched and mined one by one. Fragments of flowers are carved like crystals, and even the veins of flowers can be clearly seen. The author gave a detailed description of Epiphyllum. The whole process of texture, smell, color, grain and bud opening is exquisite and vivid, which makes people feel like they are in the scene. Third, carefully temper the text. In the description of details, we should choose the right words and carefully temper them, so that less wins more, or even a vivid word. For example, the following sentences are appropriate: ① He opened the door gently and squinted through the door to see what I was doing. (2) a gust of wind swept. (3) The leaves on the tree floated all over the floor, and a leaf whirled in the rain and fell to the ground. Fourth, clever use of rhetoric, clever use of metaphor, personification, parallelism, exaggeration and other rhetorical methods can enhance the vividness of language, turn abstract into concrete, and turn intangible into tangible. For example, Zhu Ziqing's description of the spring rain in "Spring": like ox hair, like a flower needle, like rain silk, densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof. For another example, write about mother watching children sleep: What kind of eyes will mother look at me later? It was the first ray of sunshine in the morning stroking the delicate flowers, it was the tenderness of the spring breeze in March to the clear water, it was the reflection of the summer sunset on the tender willow, it was the attachment of the moonlight on the autumn night to the bamboo, and it was the dialogue between the winter sunrise and the grass! Fifth, write details from different angles and at different levels. The same detail can be considered from different angles and at different levels. For example, I also wrote that the mother watched the child sleep. The above example is written from the perspective of the mother's eyes. We can also write from the perspective of "I": I opened my eyes slightly and my mother really stood in front of my bed. She just stood there with a blanket in her hand and looked at me with waiting eyes. What's that look? I suddenly have a strange feeling under the shining eyes. I seem to be a baby, sleeping soundly, moving my mother's face to happiness; After a while, I seemed to become a beautiful rose again, so excited that my mother couldn't help laughing; After a while, I seemed to become a colorful painting again, and my mother was so intoxicated that she enjoyed it there! We can also use associations to write details. If you write about a mother watching her child sleep, you can think of the works of Shi Tiesheng, Turgenev, Bi Shumin and others. For example, I opened my eyes slightly and my mother stood in front of my bed. She just stood there with a blanket in her hand and looked at me with waiting eyes. What kind of eyes are those! I have seen it in Shi Tiesheng's "I and Ditan", and my mother's eyes are silent blessings; I have seen quack quack quack quack quack quack in Turgenev's "Quack, quack, quack, quack, quack quack, quack quack quack", and I have seen it in Bi Shumin's "My Five Samples". A mother's eyes are a treasure that cannot be abandoned! You can also write details through the environment from different angles. Because the activities of the characters and the development of the plot must be in a certain environment, and the description of the environment when necessary is also a detail. For example, the snow drifted all night, and the biting wind didn't give people a chance to stop, and the broken dead branches crunched in the snow. Morning in the country is so cold and quiet. Composition is life. Observation is to pay attention to the details of life; Thinking should be inspired by the details of life. If you want to write a successful detailed description, you must observe life with keen sensibility, and then you can write a successful detailed description with the help of five methods: selecting typical details, mobilizing various senses, carefully honing words, skillfully using rhetoric and changing different angles. Thank you for learning from yourself.

The detailed description of the composition that day shocked me.

The rain outside the window is sparse, and I look at the gloomy sky in the faint rain and fog. A drop of rain turns biological dust into wisps of light smoke, which blend and flow in the hazy drizzle. In the faint smoke, the most sincere and flawless touch buried in the bottom of my heart emerges in front of me like a movie.

It was a gloomy rainy day, and all the pedestrians in the street hurried away. The willows on the roadside drooped with sparse leaves and bowed their heads, which seemed insignificant in the biting rain. I stood under the eaves to shelter from the rain and stared at the gray sky quietly.

Suddenly, a beggar in rags caught my eye. He was wearing patched rags, and his unkempt hair was soaked by the rain. His black eyes are full of wrinkles, and his thin and rough face after the world is like a desolate Gobi, lifeless. Her bare feet were bruised and she limped on the cold road. It's like

He suddenly stopped and looked down-it was an old and shriveled can, which clicked in the wind and quietly stuck on the smooth and shiny road. He was dazed, paused, gradually bent his thin back, stretched out his withered hand like a branch, and picked it up carefully. He clutched the jar tightly in his hand. He walked forward seriously. He saw the dustbin and his eyes showed relief. He gently and solemnly put it in the dustbin, and then dragged his thin body with satisfaction and gradually disappeared into the hazy rain curtain.

The air seemed to solidify, and my mind was suddenly shocked. Looking at the incomparably tall body and the incomparably pure mind, tears gradually filled my eyes, full of eternal admiration and emotion.

That day, my heart was shocked. My life has also been shocked. He, a beggar in the rain, will always be a bright light in my heart. His heart is more like the rising sun that shines forever, rising bit by bit and illuminating my heart.

4. Composition "Detail Description" She hides a pair of black and thin eyebrows under her neat bangs, a pair of loyal eyes blink like stars, a row of thick and long eyelashes on her eyelids, and a thin lip under her straight nose. Her skin is a little dry, but it is still stained with a faint red cloud. Her white coat wraps her boneless body, a pair of golden blue jeans and a golden bow.

One morning, she came with countless rays of sunshine and a fresh and cool breeze. The breeze blew her black hair, and something called joy filled her pale eyebrows. A pair of phoenix eyes gleamed slyly, flickering like two black gems. Under the small and exquisite nose, a red cherry is charming and smiling like a flower. The fiery red coat tightly wraps the weak body like water, clean jeans and red and black sneakers, making a restless rhythm.

5. A vivid composition describing my little Embryo Cat in 400 words. My family has a little Embryo Cat, whose name is "Zaizai".

"Zaizai" is gray all over, with a small nose and mouth, watery eyes, sharp ears and a thin tail. How cute! Zaizai woke up early in the morning. When I went to have breakfast, he had jumped into the chair. Zaizai didn't eat in the morning, but made him dinner at lunch. He eats a small bowl of rice and a little fish every meal, and jumps into the chair when cooking dinner at night. The chair was under the table, which made him look safe, but as soon as he pulled out the chair, he fell to the ground at once. In the sun, it always squints and stretches from time to time.

It has the best relationship with me, and sometimes it follows me everywhere. Last time, I put a toy train on the ground and drove it. I was scared away at once. Gradually, it became bolder and bolder, overturning a carriage of the toy train.

Once, when it was playing at the gate, a big dog found it and the big dog came running at once. "Zaizai" ran to its nest, which was really thrilling! Boy, it would be great if you could understand people. I have a lot to say to you, but unfortunately you don't understand.

6. Look for individual details in the details. Author: Zhao Changhe's Chinese Forum for Middle Schools, No.012009.

Abstract: In many texts of Chinese textbooks, the description of details reflects the author's writing personality and originality. In this paper, some typical details in the textbook are analyzed and discussed in detail, and a scientific summary is made.

[Keywords:] Chinese teaching materials detailed text research teaching methods

First, the details, freeze the moment that never dies.

We often have such a reading experience. The passage of time tends to dilute our reading impression of a work (part), but there are always some characters whose voices, words and deeds will be indelibly fixed in our minds. We can't forget the image of "compass" when Sister-in-law Yang Er appeared in Hometown: when she mentioned the middle-aged leap soil, the muddy cry of "master" always shocked our hearts directly from our eardrums. In Blessing, Sister Xianglin became a beggar's puppet, and in Back, Fat Dad bought me an orange painting. These meticulous descriptions not only have an indelible freeze-frame effect, but also have a superb portrayal of the characters' personalities. Take the laughter in the Grand View Garden as an example. They are also smiling. Shi Xiangyun is outgoing and cheerful when she smiles, Lin Daiyu is reserved and delicate when she smiles, Jia Baoyu is pampered and tolerant when she smiles, and Mrs. Wang, Aunt Xue, has a subtle smile, which is different from subject and object. Although she didn't directly laugh at Tanchun for welcoming the Spring, Tanchun involuntarily buckled her bowl because of her extroverted and provocative personality. The performance of the silence of the Spring Festival is the withering of the heart.

There are many vivid descriptions of "hands" in textbooks, and every movement of these hands naturally completes the description of the characters. In Lianhua Lake, Mrs. Shui heard that Shuishui was going to join the army, and Zi cut her finger in the vibration and sucked her finger with her mouth in disguise. Water sister-in-law that kind of overjoyed mood, that kind of calm and introverted personality, are shown in the unconscious movements of her hands. Chairman Lang in Ji Fang's "Between Waves" is great wisdom and courage; In "Back", the tearful father's love is tightly grasped in the hands of struggling to climb the podium; In "Hometown", Yang Er's sister-in-law puts her hands between her moustaches to show off her dissolute willfulness. "Looking at each other with tears" in Lin Yuling and "Holding hands" in Silence mean that literati are lingering and talented people are affectionate; It is kind, honest and timid to "hurriedly" touch foreign money, "sway" to pay foreign money and "dare" to hold steamed bread. Uncle Kang's series of "grabbing", "pulling", "wrapping", "blocking", "grasping" and "pinching" are violent, fierce and greedy.

Second, details, rendering, paving the way for showing personality

Details can make a certain aspect of a character's personality magnified and highlighted in repeated rendering and layers of bedding, and also reveal the changes of the character's situation. Show a change in personality.

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7. About the composition of the detailed description, we threw our clothes by the river, plunged into the river, and immediately began to fight for water and chase.

You see, we are divided into two teams, one is the "enemy" and the other is the "Red Army". A pair of small palms splashed water on each other, and everyone's face was covered with crystal beads.

The water blurred our eyes, so we all stepped aside, wiped them off with our hands, and then "attacked" violently. The whole river suddenly became noisy, shouting and laughing, and merged into a cheerful symphony.

Tired of playing with water fights, I chased after them in the river. One chased, the other ran, and crossed the water. A small body is as slippery as a loach and can't be caught.

The songs and laughter on the river are now far away from the two sides. We naughty boys will come to Xiaoshiwan in small groups, take off our pants and go into the water naked, regardless of their parents' repeated advice.

Diving, vertical dragonflies, water fights, tumbling over the river, chasing around in the water like a little loach, shouting and beating, I really can't say it. Several children, barefoot, treading water to play in the heavy rain! Red is a singer. When she sings, she picks up the rain from the sky with her hands.

Xiao Yu and Ding Ding, who followed her, stepped on the rain stream on the ground, swinging their arms rhythmically, and looked up from time to time to let the rain wash their faces. At this time, my heart itched, so I quickly took off my shoes, rolled up my trouser legs and rushed out of the door.

I just ran behind Honghong and plopped. I fell on my back and the splashing water fell on Honghong. Hong Hong turned around and said with a smile, "Hit Reservoir Dogs!" Say that finish, paddle with your feet and hit me.

Without getting up, I quickly raised the water to my flushed face with both hands and shouted happily, "Come on! Come on! " Red can't stand it. She cried, "Oh, my God!" She quickly covered her face with her hand and turned her head back. "reinforcements are coming!" With cheerful cries, Xiao Yu and Ding Ding came at me.

I immediately put my hands and feet together and threw a series of water columns at Xiaoyu and Tintin. "Hee hee hee-!" "Ha ha ha-!" The endless rain curtain echoed with our happy laughter.

Others: 1. If the blackboard is a vast sea, then the teacher is a sailor on the sea. At the moment when * * * rings, you are like a ship, turning the textbooks parked in the harbor into pulp with the teacher's whip.

On the desk, problems piled up. Your posture is lifelike, like a flying bird, drawing a beautiful arc on the platform-ships pass by ... there is no cloud floating in the sky, just like your bright heart. 2. Hope comes from disappointment, and rise begins with worry. As a poet said, people who feel hungry must digest well, people who feel anxious must be efficient, and people who feel crisis must make rapid progress.

Don't wander under the tree, don't meditate in the rain, and don't cry in the dark. Look forward, don't look back, as long as you face it bravely and raise your head, you will find that the haze of scores is just a short rainy season.

Looking ahead, there is still a bright day, and people will not feel confused. 4. The soft sunshine hangs obliquely on the branches and leaves of pine and cypress, which looks so quiet and solemn. On the green lawn and the white cement road, the footsteps are so light, but everyone's heart is so excited and thoughts are surging.

The ocean of life is not as blue as Xizi Lake. As time goes by, it is sometimes as calm as a mirror, sometimes the waves splash, and sometimes the waves soar into the sky ... People often become stronger after being tested by big winds and waves. 6. When you are immersed in warm air, birds and flowers, green mountains and green waters, fertile fields, you will be intoxicated; When you face the golden autumn season, you will be ecstatic.

Have you ever thought that abundant spring scenery is heroic after severe cold baptism, but the beautiful scenery in autumn is the crystallization after melting in hot summer? 7. If you want to harvest fruits in the autumn, then in the early spring when the chill invades people, you should roll up your trouser legs and tirelessly open up wasteland, sow seeds and cultivate until the day of harvest.

8. Life is a winding path in the mountains, with bumps on the side and cliffs on the side. If you fall, cry if you want. What are you afraid of? Stop pretending! This is honesty, not weakness, because crying does not affect the road, but it can increase a sense of caution.

The mountains are full of flowers and the scenery is pleasant. If you are intoxicated, smile happily, don't pretend to be reserved! This is honesty, not pride, because smiling does not affect the road, but can increase self-confidence. 9. Love is the sunshine in winter. People who are hungry and cold feel the warmth of the world. Love is a clear spring in the desert, and people who are on the verge of despair have seen the hope of life; Love is a shower sprinkled on the long-term arid land, which makes the lonely and helpless people get spiritual comfort immediately.

10, days always pass through your fingertips like spun yarn, and slip away inadvertently. Those sadness and misuse, with the waves gently faded, leaving the joy and smile, will always remain in the depths of memory.

1 1, the melancholy mood vanished. 12, faded memory.

13, another peaceful home is smoking. 14, some memories are burned, some memories are buried in the bottom of my heart, and the age of innocence is like flowing water across the golden age.

15, I want to melt in the pink peach petals and erase the worries in your heart all day. 16, I completely read my parents' hearts.

17, maternal love is a masterpiece that I can't finish reading all my life; Motherly love is the sky that I can never fly out. Zhang Weiwei 18, when yellow autumn leaves are swaying in the wind, they float outside the school gate in late autumn. In the moonlight, my father's shadow is very long, and my skinny father is wrapped in a huge windbreaker, and my heart is sour.

19, the true feelings in the world are like a big net, which warms people's hearts all the time, just like maternal love, which is endless. 20. Time is a poem, a philosophical poem of the richest man. Time is a camel carrying the dreams of countless people.

2 1, the fate of the ship lies in drifting; The fate of sails lies in chasing the wind and waves; The fate of life lies in grasping and believing in life, so that you can be innocent of youth. 22. Past events are like songs. In the journey of life, despite the ups and downs and regrets, you have not lost the beauty of your youth. Believe in yourself, there is always hope. Let's remember that sentence.

8. Composition details see the truth in small things.

In our life, there are many seemingly insignificant things. But behind those little things are all kinds of feelings.

In an extracurricular activity class in my second grade, my best friend Li Jia and I played "Stone Wars" on the playground.

While we were playing, suddenly, angel lee hit a stone on the back of my head. At first, I just felt a little pain and didn't care. But then it became more and more painful. I touched it and saw, oh, my God, blood! I quickly told angel lee that she was shocked and asked me to apologize and help me to the infirmary. Along the way, some students asked me about the situation, some students reported to the class teacher, and some students said they would call their parents. They surrounded me and saw their sincere concern. Although I have a headache, I am very happy. The school doctor gently took out medical gauze, medical tape, cotton swab and alcohol from the drawer and bandaged my wound. The head teacher is very busy and has arrived. Li Jia told the head teacher the ins and outs of the matter and asked the teacher to forgive her. The teacher sighed and said nothing more. It was a long time before he said, "Don't play this dangerous game again, remember?" We nodded silently.

When I got home, I told my mother about it. My mother said, "well, you children are annoying sometimes." The teacher cares about you as much as her mother. Don't bother the teacher in the future. "

A drop of water can reflect the brilliance of the sun; A little thing is enough to show a strong teacher-student relationship!

9. The composition describes 800 words in detail, and the description process does not exceed 5 minutes. Detail description is the golden key to make the characters alive.

"Character" is the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' exercises are often one-sided, neither personalized nor vivid, and the whole article appears dry, boring and lacking in appeal. If you read these works carefully, you will find a common problem: you often just pursue writing something completely, ignoring vivid, concrete and nuanced details.

Detail description has a wide range and various functions, but it mainly depicts characters and shapes their images. Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives, characters will lose their flesh and blood, and there are no details. Writer Lee Joon said: "In revealing a character's personality characteristics, a detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene." As the saying goes, "the spirit is seen in the nuances."

The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the description of details. In Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q, the first sentence of Ah Q was described in detail: "When it was time to draw a circle, the hand just shook with a pen, and the man spread the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. " The details of this behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflect Ah Q's personality characteristics ―― he stuck to the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not think that Ah Q is ridiculous, pathetic and pitiful? How can we not "mourn its misfortune and anger it" and then think deeply about the national inferiority?

Not only China writers, but also foreign writers. For example, Balzac's Eugenie Grandet wrote that before Grandet died, when the priest sent the gilded cross to his lips and asked him to kiss the icon of Christ, "he made a terrible gesture and tried to hold the cross in his hand, which cost him his life." Only this detail vividly depicts the ugly image of the insatiable and untiring miser. It is the detailed description that makes the characters lifelike, and the whole article is full of vitality and strong appeal.

Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, and it is not just to write "fine". A good detail description must be useful, true and typical. It must express the mental outlook of the characters and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the personality characteristics of the characters and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the personality characteristics of the characters. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, and details are in colorful life. Be a conscientious person in life and always pay attention to the people and things around you, especially the objects you describe. On the streets of Shaoxing, Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun concentrated on observing short-sleeved gangs and long-sleeved guests before "painting the soul of the silent". In the dark coffee room in Dublin, Joyce coldly looked at the wandering * * *, liars, mental patients, beggars and rich people, brewing Ulysses that shocked the world. Throughout the ages, great writers have always devoted their lives to catching people and things that make the soul tremble and casting them into chapters that will last forever. Capture the details, use the details, make this golden key work for you, and make your article shine!