September 9, 2021 (summer vacation diary review)

It took me a week to read the summer vacation diaries of 39 children. "Shocking" and "nothing goes in vain" have been lingering in my mind. If I don't leave something behind, I will definitely have deep feelings. Deep feeling of guilt. While reading, I used a red pen to jot down what I wanted to say. I sorted out the voice input over the weekend. I finally completed a big project and finally felt at ease!

Wang Libo 44: From July 10th to September 3rd, I kept writing a diary every day. The writing is beautiful, the content covers all aspects, and it is readable. It is recommended to remove "I really do" at the end of the diary. happy".

Zhang Xihao 25: Perseverance in writing is definitely worthy of praise. If you write every word carefully and the word "play" does not appear so frequently in the diary, it will definitely be more attractive to read.

Peng Yuehan 28: With persistence in quantity and a correct attitude, the quality of the diary will gradually improve, but if "have fun" is included in every diary, it will be difficult to read It's not fun anymore.

Wang Ziyuan 46: I kept writing from July 12th to September 2nd. This perseverance has made people ignore the content of the diary. If you can broaden your horizons and write seriously, you will definitely find more fun. Highlights worth recording.

Hu Wenqi 26: Keep a diary, know how to select materials, and use words to truthfully reflect your life. Whether you are attending a calligraphy class or doing daily homework, if you can write every word carefully as always, the learning of calligraphy class will be effective.

Su Yucheng 18: I already have the habit of writing a diary. A pair of discerning eyes turns wonderful life into words, but I have to work hard to correct typos, such as "take", "uncle", "wo", etc.

Wang Shuhan 41: The attitude of insisting on keeping a diary is worthy of recognition. The mother’s comments on each entry and helping her children correct typos are particularly admirable. If you can write every word carefully, then attending a calligraphy class is worthwhile. The starting point of using idioms is worthy of encouragement, but if used incorrectly, it will make a joke.

Lu Bairui 28: The diary language is interesting and vivid, recording his colorful holiday life. Mother's comments are a magical beacon that guides children to keep moving forward.

Shi Yiyi 14: Although I only started writing a diary in August, the writing is so beautiful, every word is very clear and beautiful, like calligraphy. The best thing is that the language is interesting, each diary has a title, and the content is written closely around the title.

Chen Pengxu 9: Although I only wrote a diary nine times, my writing was neat, I could use punctuation correctly, and the content was readable.

Lan Shuhan 56: Each diary has a title, and the content is arranged around the title. You must like it. From July 9th to September 2nd, I persisted without falling for a day. It was amazing and I became the best in the class. The frequency of errors in the words "like this", "ran to" and "feeling" is a bit high.

Wang Zinuo 27: Dogs are cute and funny, and they are the ones you keep observing and recording. Although the format of the diary is wrong, there is no space at the beginning, and the writing is with a gel pen, which makes it relatively messy, the language is still very interesting. Pay attention to correcting typos such as "cook", "when" and "know".

Wang Yunxiang 50: You are the child with the most perseverance and the most obvious progress this summer. The writing is neat, the content of the diary is interesting, and you can use the idioms or words you have learned. It would be better if "Today is a happy day" does not appear in the diary.

Xu Jiayi 3: Unfortunately, the number of diaries written is too small, but I really got into it during the summer vacation. I fell in love with the language of "Dear Mr. Han Xiu" and absorbed this book. The essence of reading, I realized the true meaning of reading.

Wang Qitong 55: Wow, there are so many delicious things written in the diary. It makes my mouth water. The description is clear and clear, and I feel the luxury of life. It’s great to persevere. I started early, starting from July 7th. The language is humorous, just like a gourmet and a greedy little cat. It is recommended to write carefully to avoid wasting the calligraphy class you attended.

Zhang Hanyu 57: You are the one who has persisted the longest and is very perseverant. The content of your diary is very rich. I followed the text with you to northern Shaanxi and Liuba. I learned about your naughty nature during the holidays. But because the writing problem is too tiring to read, the writing on August 17th and August 18th is really chic and unrestrained. It really looks like a child who has taken a calligraphy class. Only those words match your personality. match.

Wang Yuhan 31: The writing is beautiful, the handwriting is neat, and the content is rich. However, the double quotation marks are used incorrectly, and the back quotation marks are written incorrectly. Please work hard to correct them.

Tang Miaoxi 15: I can keep keeping a diary and have a correct attitude, but there are too many typos, such as "just, test, later, see", which are always written incorrectly. "Then", "I" and "again" appear frequently and the sentences are not clean.

Bai Yutong 12: Each diary has a title, a complete format, and the language is lively and vivid, but there are too many words replaced by pinyin.

Shang Yutong 11: I kept the diary very well in July. Each diary entry is long in content and fluent in expression. Pinyin is not used in the article and the language is rich. Unfortunately, I did not write an entry in August.

Yang Bohan 12: I have the consciousness to keep writing a diary, but there are too many pinyin, the writing is messy, and some sentences are unreadable and incomprehensible.

Zhang Chenjingen 11: Although there are not many diaries, each one is of high quality, surpassing the cognitive level of first-grade children, allowing readers to see the children's unique thinking and cognition, and understand Children's colorful lives during holidays, and at the same time, through words, I can feel the influence of parents on their children in family education.

Zhang Yushu 41: I kept writing every day, from the holidays until the end of August. Although the content of each diary is short, the language is lively, interesting, and full of childlike innocence. The pictures that accompany the text are even more remarkable.

Liu Linxi 10: The writing is neat, the attitude is very serious, and it can truly reflect my life, but some sentences are not clear. Overall, the number of articles is still too few, which is inconsistent with your usual excellence.

Chen Zidan 21: I am very attentive and write extremely neatly, especially starting from the holiday day in July. I insist on it every day. The content selection is mostly mood diary, and there is still room for improvement.

Wang Yirong 54: You are undoubtedly the king of summer vacation diaries in the class. You are the most perseverant and never fall behind every day. Although sometimes it is a one-sentence diary, it becomes interesting because it is paired with pictures. The most amazing thing is that I rewrite the wrong words or words that have been replaced with pinyin several times every day.

Li Hanyu 50: Beautiful writing, perseverance every day, from July 10 to August 28, not even a day was spared, won the most perseverance award, but pay attention to typos, "buy, night, ah , is, compiles, knows" these words are repeatedly wrong.

Yu Mingyang 2: The diary is high-end and beautiful, and the writing is impeccable. Unfortunately, I only wrote two articles.

Hou Yutong 10: Use words to record summer vacation life, record mood, writing attitude is very serious, I just wrote well during the holiday, but unfortunately there is no record after 10 articles.

Guo Xinyu 41: From July 10th to September 1st, the length of the diary gradually increased from one page to two pages to three pages. The writing was neat and beautiful, exceeding what a first grader should have. He is a truly perseverant academic.

Wang Yimeng 10: The diary is a beautiful grid book with neat writing. Although the content of each diary is short, it is expressed clearly.

Wu Tongdi 3: Although I only wrote three diaries, the content is quite long and the language is interesting and attractive.

Lu Qingyun 14: Each article is written very seriously, and the content reflects his own life. However, in some articles, parents’ guidance is too profound, and it is too difficult for children.

Wan Binghui 35: Persevere with all your heart and change will occur. The content may be short or long, but obvious progress can be seen.

Zhu Xingyun 15: The writing is beautiful and very attentive. Every word is presented like calligraphy. There is still a lot of room for improvement in content.

Liu Yukun 4: I have carefully completed four diaries. If you insist on writing three or two sentences every day, you will definitely find more writing content.

Zou Yajie 42: She has great perseverance in persevering every day. The content of her diary is wonderful, the language is humorous, and it brings people happiness. Every word written is so beautiful.

Liu Sichen 7: Although the length is short, the content is relatively long. If you write it carefully, it will be more comfortable for readers.

Xu Ziheng (54): With the accumulation of quantity, it can be seen that there is a sense of persistence and the motivation to persevere. Some idioms are used correctly in the diary. However, the content of the diary is somewhat monotonous. For example, the same "dianqiu" was written for four consecutive days, and only the number of the ball changed; another example was what was eaten every day, which was also mentioned for several days in a row; another example was that the foreign teacher talked about What content was mentioned in class five times in a row. The word "happy" is used too much and is not new at all.