My sister's excellent composition

No matter in school or in society, many people have had the experience of writing, and they are all familiar with writing. Writing is a transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from a compressed, concise language that they can understand to a developed, standardized grammatical structure that can be understood by others. Still at a loss for composition? The following is my sister's excellent composition carefully arranged for reference only, hoping to help everyone. My sister's excellent composition 1

My good sister is very kind to me. I went to her house and she gave me something delicious to eat. Give me what I like, and she will teach me the words I don't know. She also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear. She also took me there to have fun. She also took out all the pencil cases, rulers, pencils, hair wipes and story books she didn't want for me. My sister is really nice. She is really my best big sister, and I really like her.

Teacher's comments: The little author closely followed the word "good" to write about her sister, told her all kinds of love for herself, and created an image of a caring little sister who was willing to share. However, after reading the whole article, I found that the little author has always called her sister "she", without introducing her specific identity, such as which relative's house or neighbor's sister she is. Moreover, the little author did not introduce her sister's appearance and other personal information, which made readers' impression of her sister still very vague. As a writer's article, it is necessary not only to introduce the appearance of the characters, but also to show their personality characteristics, and to portray the characters in depth, so that readers can firmly remember them! "I went to her house and she brought me something delicious to eat. Give me what I like "is changed to" When I go to her house, she will give me delicious food and give me what I like ". "She still took me to play in the park" was changed to "She still took me to play in the park". The pause numbers in the article are all wrong, such as "she also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear" and changed them to "she also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear". Please ask the author to correct other similar mistakes. My sister's excellent composition 2

It was cloudy that day. People's mood is also gloomy.

in the afternoon, my sister and I went downstairs to buy milk at my mother's order. We opened our umbrellas and walked slowly to the supermarket.

suddenly I heard a meow.

"did you hear that?" My sister asked. I nodded my head. "Then look for it quickly, like a kitten's voice." We looked around and heard "meow" again. "From there, quick!" My sister shouted to me.

ah! This is a dark kitten with a little white tail, crouching under the trees, shivering.

My sister gently picked up the kitten and looked at it pityingly. She seems to remember something, let me connect the cat. I have never seen her run to the supermarket so fast that she didn't even take an umbrella.

in a short time, she ran back. Holding something wrapped in several layers of bags. I saw her quickly open the bag, take out the milk she just bought and pour it into a small bowl. The whole process is only 5 seconds!

She took the kitten from me, comforted it slowly, and then fed it with milk bit by bit.

I continued to look at my sister. Oh! The long hair was gathered into a ponytail, and a few threads slipped on the face, which matched the clothes with light crushed flowers unparalleled. Gradually, I was stunned, and the sky was stunned, and I forgot it was raining. The curious sun leaned out of the head hidden in the clouds and gently enveloped her sister, which was as beautiful as an angel flying from the sky.

in the sun, her smile is very bright. My sister's excellent composition 3

This year, she is 15 years old. She has black hair and always combs it neatly. On her white face, a pair of big eyes are bright and clever.

These days, there are always two words on my sister's lips: "Lose weight!" As soon as she has time, she looks up ways to lose weight online, but her mother says that her sister is in poor health and still loses weight. So my mother put a password on the computer, so my sister went running instead. But I think there's nothing wrong with being a little fat, and it looks cute!

Besides figure, what worries my sister most is the acne on her face. Recently, my sister's forehead is covered with many pimples, large and small, which can be compared with the stars in the sky. My sister was in a hurry and asked her mother to take her to see Chinese medicine. Mom said: "It's normal to get acne at this age, so you don't need to see Chinese medicine." When my sister saw that her mother couldn't count on it, she secretly went online to check the "acne tips". She found that eating pig blood soup can get rid of acne, so she asked her mother to cook pig blood soup for her. In fact, my sister hates eating pig's blood. She held her breath and ate a big bowl of pig's blood soup to the bottom! Unfortunately, it doesn't work after eating. My sister still won't give up, asking people around. A few days ago, she excitedly brought home a heavy bag. I saw that the bag was full of "acne cleanser" and "magic acne water". In the evening, my sister carefully read the instructions and carefully painted and wiped her face. Finally, she went to bed hopefully.

My sister always says, "Beauty is a lifelong thing." It seems that my sister's figure and fighting "pox" are also a lifelong career. My sister's excellent composition 4

I have a sister who was born only one year and one day in January before me. Probably because we are only one year apart, I never call her "sister" and she never pays attention to it.

She has brown curly hair. Because of this curly hair, she has been teased by many people for many times. Her face is authentic yellow skin. Compared with the "black" skin that I like to cross from Africa, it is a paradise and a hell. Under her two thick and curved eyebrows, she has a pair of big watery brown eyes, a delicate nose and a small mouth, which are evenly arranged in a chubby place.

Although she looks very ladylike, she is often confused when doing things. Her name is Xue Hongjuan, but her classmates call her "Xue Honghong". Why? Listen to me slowly: once, some people didn't hand in their math homework. When the math team leader checked one by one, he found a book with the name "Xue Honghong" on it. This was confusing. There was only one Xue in his class, so now there is another "Xue Honghong". The math team leader was puzzled. After checking, he found that there was no Xue Hongjuan's book, so the math team leader took the famous book named "Xue Honghong". Xue Hongjuan looked: "This is my notebook. What's the matter?" Team leader pointed to the name, "oh, why did I write my name wrong? A clerical error is purely a clerical error. " Xue Hongjuan defended herself. From then on, students began to call her "Xue Honghong".

I remember another time, she said she would cook us black rice porridge. As soon as I heard this, I was so happy that I said to her, "Xue Hongjuan, put a little more white sugar, it will be sweet." She nodded and said, don't worry. As a result, she treated salt as white sugar and put it in the pot. He also said to me with a laugh: "Oh, I'm sorry, it's wrong."

alas, elder sister is really an idiot! My sister's excellent composition 5

She has a beautiful face. Big round eyes, curved like a crescent moon when laughing, a straight nose, red and moist lips, and neat white teeth when laughing. This person is my sister.

My mother is very busy at work, and my sister taught me all my homework. She is a very patient person. When she encounters a problem in her homework, she will carefully analyze and explain it to me step by step. If she doesn't understand it again, she will speak it twice. In short, she will teach it until I know it. After the homework is finished, she will give me some problems that I usually make mistakes, and she will carefully check my homework. My sister is also responsible for the rapid progress in my grades!

My sister is also a humorous person at ordinary times. She sometimes makes funny faces and sounds, which often makes me laugh. She often takes me out to play and always buys me delicious food. Once she goes out, she always gains a lot. My sister loves me very much. Once I went out to play, my sister went to the toilet. I waited for her at the door. Two people came over and installed me. I'm sorry and left without saying anything. My sister just saw this scene and rushed to help me seek justice: "Changzhou is now evaluating a civilized city. It's uncivilized of you to do so!" The man quickly apologized to me. After this incident, I found that my sister loved me very much.

So, I will repay her with good grades and make her proud of me! My sister's excellent composition 6

I like as many people as the stars in the sky, such as my brother and aunt ... But the one who haunts me most is my sister.

My sister is tall, with black and shiny hair, big watery eyes and two eyebrows like the moon. What beautiful eyes! And a glib mouth. There are two rows of white and flawless teeth in your mouth.

On a fragrant morning, I went to my sister's house to play. As soon as I arrived at my sister's house, my sister said to me, "Yiman, today we will take jiaozi!" " Hearing this sentence, I immediately jumped three feet high. I started to package jiaozi, because it's my first time, so I won't. So, my sister gave me a demonstration. First of all, my sister carefully picked up a prepared flour slice, and then put a little water on it with her hand. Then use chopsticks to put a piece of stuffing into the slice. Finally, put the horns of jiaozi together, and a jiaozi will be wrapped. So, I also made a jiaozi like my sister. However, in a short time, jiaozi leaked the stuffing. When I saw it, I sat glumly on the sofa. My sister came to comfort me and said, "Yiman, everyone will experience failure. As long as you persist, you will succeed." So, I repackaged several jiaozi. This time is different from last time, jiaozi didn't miss anything. My heart is full of joy.

This incident tells us not to give up halfway, but to get up from where we fell! My sister's excellent composition 7

She is very beautiful, with a pair of small eyes, long black hair, a pink cherry mouth and a red face. Guess who she is? That's right She is my sister, and I like her best! Sister has one advantage, that is, helping others! Let's listen to the story of my sister helping others!

One day, my sister and I were playing in the civic square. At this moment, my sister and I heard a child crying. My sister ran over and saw that it was a group of boys bullying a little girl. The little girl's legs were bleeding, and she sat on the ground and cried, "Mom! Mom! Where are you! Someone bullied me! Whoops ..... "As for those boys who have already fled, only the little girl is crying here alone. When my sister saw this scene, she couldn't help rushing up to help her up and pat the little girl on the dirt. She also helped the little girl to put on a band-aid, sing a beautiful song, sing a beautiful song to the little girl, and tell jokes. After a while, there were no tears on her face, only a happy smile! Just then, the girl's mother came, and when I saw it, I quickly told my sister to run! But my sister didn't choose to run away, but went up to the girl and said to her mother, "You are the girl's mother!" A group of boys made you cry just now! I just help her. " I just saw it. Thank you so much! "Later, my sister and I went to play happily again!

This is my sister, a helpful person, and I'm really proud of her. My sister's excellent composition 8

I have a very good sister. She is 15 years old, a senior one, and she is 165CM tall. She has fair skin, big eyes and a towering nose, which gives people a generous and delicate feeling.

My sister is not only beautiful, but also versatile. She likes playing chess very much. Every time at grandpa's house, after dinner, my sister and I set up chess and prepared to compete. It's sad! Every time I was eaten by her. However, I didn't lose heart and fought again. Moreover, the more fierce the Vietnam War, we all learned from the enemy's tactics to come up with operational strategies. Game after game, we are both smarter than before.

My sister loves not only playing chess, but also listening to songs, especially a series of news or reports about singers. She never misses a single one. If you don't believe me, you can even tell the date by asking my sister. From then on, the songs that came out of her mouth were superb, just like those sung by singers, so beautiful!

Although my sister sings very well, she is determined to be a fashion designer, so she is trying to learn drawing and sketching. However, my sister is drawing three-dimensionally now, but she is still drawing again and again, saying that she is thinking about the future.

This is my beautiful and versatile sister who thinks about the future. My sister's excellent composition 9

Look at her, as far as her appearance is concerned, she has curly hair. Oh! By the way, she is self-invited, with small eyes and chubby face. Her expressions and movements are quite rich: when she is happy, she will squint her small eyes, press her face with her index finger, and stick out her tongue to make faces at you. When you answer her question, you will put your arm around your neck and say, "You are so smart!" " If you help her, she will put her arms around your neck and say, "You are such a good man!" " What I can't stand most is her hands: when I am happy, she will gently pinch my face and ears; When I am unhappy, I will pinch my face and ears hard.

when she is naughty, she also has many interesting stories! Once when I went back to my hometown, my sister was busy playing and accidentally stepped on chicken manure. When my aunt saw this, she flew into a rage and said to my sister, "Why are you so careless?" My sister said, "It's not my fault, blame the chicken." My aunt asked, "Why?" My sister said, "Because chickens are unsanitary." My aunt said, "Then go and educate the chickens." My sister really pretended to walk up to the chicken and said, "Little friend, you should pay attention to hygiene in the future and don't pee everywhere!" " I laughed so hard that I said, "My sister, why do you call chickens children?" The people next to you are all bent down with joy. My sister's excellent composition 1

She has a melon face, a pair of bright eyes embedded under her dark eyebrows, a high nose and a talkative cherry mouth. She likes to laugh, and there are two dimples beside her cheeks when she smiles, which gives people a very kind feeling. She is tall and thin, which is very attractive.

She is gentle and always convinces others by reasoning. Every time when I make a mistake, she never hits me or scolds me. She always persuades me carefully and gives me reason, which always makes me convinced, speechless and ashamed.

she is not only beautiful in appearance and language, but also more beautiful in heart.

once, my little sister from a neighbor accidentally hurt her leg while playing. Suddenly, her pants were dyed red with blood, and my little sister burst into tears with fear. When my sister saw it, she immediately ran over and did not hesitate to wrap the wound with her new white jacket, and then carried her fast.