The text of Lesson 23 in Volume 1 of Fifth Grade "Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick"

This is a text in the first volume of the fifth grade of the Jiangsu Education Edition. It is adapted from some chapters of "Water Margin". The language of the article is bright and concise, the narrative is written in a few strokes, and it is lifelike and lifelike. I took it with me. Come to the lesson 23 of the first volume of fifth grade, "Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick". Lesson 23 of Volume 1 of the fifth grade "Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Rod" Text Chapter 1

Lin Chong was framed by Captain Gao and was sent to Cangzhou by Kaifeng Prefecture. One afternoon, two policemen escorted Lin Chong to Chaijin Village.

Chai Jin was overjoyed when he saw Lin Chong and hurriedly asked the villagers to kill chickens and sheep and entertain him generously. During the dinner, a guest came to report: "Master Hong is here!" Chai Jin said, "I just want to invite Master Hong to come and sit with us."

Lin Chong turned around and saw the person coming with his chest out and his head tilted. Wearing a headscarf. Lin Chong thought, Zhuang Ke called him the instructor, he must be Chai Daguanren's master, he quickly stood up and bowed to salute. Coach Hong ignored him. Chai Jin pointed at Lin Chong and said to Coach Hong, "This is Coach Lin." Lin Chong stood up and gave up his seat, but Coach Hong didn't give in and went to take the seat. Instructor Hong asked Chai Jin: "Why do you, a high official, treat a prisoner so favorably today?" Chai Jin said: "This martial artist Lin is no better than anyone else. He is the instructor of the 800,000 Imperial Guards in Tokyo." Instructor Hong sneered twice: " Just because high-ranking officials like to use guns and sticks, prisoners who have been exiled often come to cling to the grass and trees, pretend to be martial arts masters, and cheat you with food and drinks. How can you be so gullible?" Chai Jin said: "Oh, you can Don't underestimate him." Coach Hong jumped up and said, "I don't believe him. If he dares to compete with me, I will admit that he is the real coach." Lin Chong said, "I don't dare." When Coach Hong saw him giving in, he thought he really didn't know how to use a gun and a stick, so he became more and more determined to fight with him. Chai Jin said: "I also want to see the skills of the two instructors. Master Lin, please don't refuse."

The moon has come up, illuminating the outside of the hall like daylight. Everyone came to the open space in front of the hall. Coach Hong first took off his clothes, picked up a stick, weighed it, played with it alone for a while, and then shouted: "Come on! Come on!" Lin Chong had no choice but to pick up a stick from the ground and said: "Ask me for advice."

Coach Hong wanted to swallow Lin Chong in one gulp, so he banged his stick on the ground and rushed towards Lin Chong. The two coaches went back and forth under the moonlight and exchanged hands.

After fighting for four or five rounds, Lin Chong jumped out of the circle and shouted: "I lost!" Chai Jin asked: "I haven't seen the two of you compete yet, why did you lose?" Lin Chong Said: "The villain is wearing a wooden yoke, so he has lost." Chai Jin quickly asked two policemen to open the yoke, and said with a smile: "Please use your skills and try again." Instructor Hong Whenever you pick up the stick, hit it. Chai Jin said, "Hold on! The competition between the two coaches is different. This ingot of silver can be used as a lottery. Whoever wins will take it." As he said this, he threw a large ingot of silver weighing twenty-five taels on the ground.

Coach Hong hated Lin Chong and wanted to win the ingot of silver, so he used all his strength to use the "set fire to the sky" move. Lin Chong raised his stick horizontally and used the move of "plucking grass to look for snakes". Coach Hong jumped up and shouted: "Come! Come! Come!" He raised his stick and hit his head, and Lin Chong stepped back. Coach Hong's first blow missed. He stumbled and raised the stick again before he could regain his footing. Lin Chong saw that although he was aggressive, his steps were messy, so he picked up the stick and swiped it, and the stick hit his calf bone. Coach Hong was caught off guard and fell to the ground with a "plop" sound, and the stick was thrown far away. Everyone laughed when they saw this scene. Lesson 23 of Volume 1 of the fifth grade, "Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick" Text Part 2

No further words. He was detained by Zhishen and stayed with him. After traveling for seventeen or eighteen days, he was only about seventy miles away from Cangzhou. There are people living all the way there, so there is no secluded place. When Lu Zhishen found out what he had learned, he took a rest in the pine forest. Zhishen said to Lin Chong: "Brother, we are not far from Cangzhou. There are people on the road ahead, and there is no secluded place to go. I have inquired about the Sa family. I am breaking up with you now, and we will meet again in the future." Lin Chong said "Senior brother, when you go back, you will know from Mount Tai that the kindness of protection should be rewarded generously." Lu Zhishen took out another one or twenty taels of silver and gave it to Lin Chong. I'll cut off your two heads on the road. For my brother's sake, I'll spare your life. Now there's no way to go. Don't be evil." The two said: "How dare you? They are all sent by the Taiwei." However, when they were about to part ways, Lu Zhishen looked at the two gentlemen and said, "Are your two bird heads as hard as these pine trees?" The two replied, "The little heads are the skin and flesh of the parents, wrapped with some bones.

Zhishen swung his Zen staff and hit the pine tree with a single blow. There were two-inch deep marks on the tree, and all of them were broken. He shouted: "You two birds! But you have evil intentions. I will teach you not to touch this tree." generally. "Waving his hands, dragging the Zen staff, he shouted: "Brother, take care. "I'm going back. Dong Chao and Xue Ba both stuck out their tongues and couldn't get back in for a long time. Lin Chong said: "Shang Xia, let's go on our own. "The two gentlemen said: "What a wise monk, he broke a tree in one go. Lin Chong said: "How straight is this? A willow tree in Xiangguo Temple was pulled out even by its roots." "The two of them just shook their heads and realized that it was true.

The three of them immediately left the pine forest and walked to noon. They saw a hotel on the official road. But they saw: an isolated village on the ancient road, and a hotel on the road. On the bank of willows, the brocade is hanging at dawn; the wind blows against the green curtains. Liu Ling lies on his back in front of the painting bed, and Li Bai sleeps drunkenly on the wall. Prime Minister Jin Diao was also here. The three of them came into the hotel, and Lin Chong asked the two gentlemen to sit at the head. After half a day, they only saw a few seats in the shop. The bartender was sifting through the wine, moving around in a hurry. Lin Chong sat with the two men for half an hour, but the bartender didn't come to ask. He was impatient and knocked on the table and said, "How do you do this, owner of the shop?" You deceiver, if you see that I am a criminal, you will not pay attention to me. I must not eat you for nothing. What is the reason? The master said: "You don't know my good intentions." Lin Chong said: "If you don't sell wine and meat to me, what good intentions do you have?" "The shop owner said: "You don't know that there is a rich man in my village. His surname is Chai and his name is Jin. He is called Chai Daguan here and is called Xiao Xuanfeng in the world. He is a descendant of Chai Shizong of the Great Zhou Dynasty. Since Chen Qiao abdicated the throne, Emperor Taizu Wude gave him an ironclad oath at home. Who dares to bully him? He dedicated himself to recruiting heroes from all over the world. He kept thirty or fifty of them at home and often asked us to pay him in the hotel. : If there is an exiled prisoner, you can ask him to come to my village, and I will help him myself. Now I sell wine and meat to you, and my face turns red after eating. He says that you have your own expenses, so he won't help you. I mean well. Lin Chong heard this and said to the two gentlemen: "When I was teaching the army in Tokyo, I often heard people in the army say that Mr. Chai Daguan's name was mentioned, but it turned out to be here." Why don't we go to Him. "Dong Chao and Xue Ba thought: "In this case, what loss do we have? Then he packed up his parcel and asked Lin Chong, "Master of the hotel, where is Chai Daguan's village? We are about to look for him." "The shop owner said: "Only in front, about three or two miles away, and around the corner by the big stone bridge, is the Dazhuang Courtyard. "

Lin Chong and the others thanked the owner of the shop, and the three of them went out. Sure enough, they saw a big stone bridge three or two miles away. After crossing the bridge, they found a flat road. They had already seen the village emerging from the shade of green willows. The courtyard is surrounded by a stream, with big weeping poplar trees on both sides, and a white wall in the shade. When I turn to the front of the village, I see a big courtyard! But I see: the door faces the yellow road, and the mountains are connected with thousands of green dragons. Peach blossoms bloom on the Wuling River, and thousands of flowers bloom in the Golden Valley Garden. In the Juxian Hall, there are beautiful flowers at all seasons; in front of the Baihua Hall, the imperial edict gold medal is hung in the hall, and the house is covered with red and green tiles. With its nine-level high hall and its painted pillars and carved beams, it is truly a Sanwei Jingshe. It is not the residence of a noble family member of the current dynasty, but also belongs to the family of a previous emperor.

The three of them came to the village and saw the broad road. On the Banqiao, there were four or five villagers sitting there, enjoying the cool weather. After the three people came to the bridge and saluted the villagers, Lin Chong said, "Brother Xiangfan, let me know that there is a prisoner in the capital. In Prison City, a man named Lin asked for an audience. "The dealers and guests said together: "You are not lucky. If the high official is at home and has food, wine, money and wine with you, he will go hunting this morning. Lin Chong said: "I wonder when you will come back?" "The banker said: "Maybe I'm not afraid of going to Dongzhuang to rest. You may not. Lin Chong said: "I am not lucky enough to meet each other, so let's go." "I said goodbye to all the villagers, and went back to the old road with the two gentlemen, feeling very sad. After walking for more than half a mile, I saw a group of people and horses galloping up to the village from deep in the forest. I saw: Everyone is handsome, and every one of them is a hero. Dozens of horses are neighing in the wind, and two or three embroidered flags are flying in the sun. There is a thin and light bow decorated with gold sparrows; in the lion pot, there are some straight arrows with jade eagle feathers; there are a few small deer-driving dogs; there are several pairs of eagles carrying rabbits and velvet ribbons, and the brocade eagles take off their hats. Looking for protection, the wind is strong, and there is a cold light on the saddle. When the drum is drawn, the sound is heard. The saddle is tied to the birds, and they are just like the beasts in the mountains. Just like Han Wu arriving at Changyang, a group of people and horses galloped up to the village, holding an official in the middle, riding a snow-white curly horse. The man on the horse had dragon eyebrows and phoenix eyes, white teeth and red lips, and a mustache covered by three teeth. , thirty-four or five years old.

Wearing a soap gauze corner cluster flower scarf on the head, a purple embroidered collared robe with a round breast, an exquisite jade-embedded sash around the waist, and a pair of gold-threaded green soap boots on the feet. Bring a bow and a pot of arrows, and lead everyone to the village. Lin Chong looked at it and thought, "Do you dare to be from Chai Daguan?" He didn't dare to ask him, so he hesitated in his heart. I saw the young official on the horse riding up and asked: "Who is this guy with the shackles?" Lin Chong hurriedly bowed and replied: "This villain is the instructor of the Tokyo Forbidden Army. His surname is Lin and his given name is Chong. Because of evil When Gao Taiwei was sent to Kaifeng Mansion, he was sent to Cangzhou for questioning. He heard from the hotel in front that there was a man named Chai Daguan who was recruiting talents, so he came to meet him unexpectedly. Meet." The official rolled his saddle and dismounted, flew closer and said, "Chai Jin is missing." He bowed on the grass. Lin Chong responded quickly. The official took Lin Chong's hand and walked up to the village. When the villagers saw it, they opened the village door wide and Chai Jin invited him to the front of the hall. After the two recited the rituals, Chai Jin said: "Xiao Ke has heard about the great name of the master for a long time, and he did not expect to come to this humble place today, which is enough to fulfill his lifelong wish." Lin Chong replied: "Lin Chong, a humble man, heard about the great name of the master and spread it all over the world. Yu, who is disrespectful? I don’t want to be here today because of a criminal, so that I can meet you and be blessed.” Chai Jin repeatedly gave in, and Lin Chong sat at the guest table; Dong Chao and Xue Ba also sat down. Chai Jin and his companions each took their horses and went to the back of the yard to rest. Chai Jin called the village guest and asked him to bring the wine. When I didn't move, I saw several villagers holding out a plate of meat, a plate of cakes, and a pot of warm wine; another plate, holding out a bucket of white rice, with ten guan of money placed on the rice, all of which were about to come out. Chai Jin saw him and said, "The villagers don't know their superiority. How can you be so careless when your teacher is here? We are about to go in. Bring the fruit box and wine first, then kill the sheep and treat each other. Then go and clean up." Lin Chong stood up and thanked: " You don't need to give too much to a high official, this is enough." Chai Jin said, "Don't say that. It's rare for the teacher to come here. How can you be rude?" The banker didn't dare to disobey the order, so he brought out the fruit box first. Chai Jin stood up, holding three cups in one hand. Lin Chong thanked Chai Jin and finished drinking. The two gentlemen drank together. Chai Jin said, "Master, please sit down inside." Chai Jin then untied his bow bag and quiver, and invited the two gentlemen to drink together. Chai Jin immediately took the chairman's seat, and Lin Chong took the guest seat. The two gentlemen were under Lin Chong's shoulders. Talking about some gossip and the activities in the rivers and lakes, I didn't realize that the red sun was setting in the west. Food, wine, fruits, seafood and delicacies were arranged and placed on the table before everyone. Chai Jin personally raised his glass, drank it three times, sat down and called, "Here comes the soup." After eating one soup and five or seven glasses of wine, the banker came to report: "The teacher is here." Chai Jin said: " Just invite us to sit on the ground to meet each other. Bring us a table." When Lin Chong stood up and looked, he saw the teacher coming in, wearing a headscarf crookedly and sticking out his chest. He came to the back hall. Lin Chong thought: "The banker calls him a teacher, he must be the master of a high official." He bowed hastily and sang: "Lin Chong would like to participate." The man ignored him and did not return the courtesy. Lin Chong did not dare to raise his head. Chai Jin pointed at Lin Chong and said to Coach Hong: "This is Lin Chong, the gun and stick coach of the 800,000 Imperial Army in Tokyo. Please meet me." After hearing this, Lin Chong looked at Coach Hong and bowed. Instructor Hong said: "Stop bowing and get up." But he did not bow in reply. Chai Jin looked at it and felt very unhappy! Lin Chong bowed twice, stood up and asked Coach Hong to sit down. Teacher Hong also refused to give in, so he went to sit down at his head. Chai Jin saw it and didn't like it. Lin Chong had no choice but to sit down on his shoulders, and the two gentlemen also sat down.

Instructor Hong then asked: "Why do the officials treat the troops with so much courtesy today?" Chai Jin said: "This one is no different than the others. He is the instructor of the 800,000 Forbidden Army. How can master be so disrespectful?" Hong said. The instructor said: "Because the senior officials are so good at using guns and sticks, soldiers often come to lean on the grass and trees. They all think that I am a teacher of guns and sticks. I come to the village to lure some wine, food, money and rice. How can senior officials be so serious?" ?" Lin Chong listened and remained silent. Chai Jin said: "Mortals can't change each other, don't underestimate him." Coach Hong blamed Chai Jin and said, "Don't underestimate him." Then he jumped up and said, "I don't believe him. He dares to fight me. I knew he was the real instructor." Chai Jin laughed and said, "That's fine! That's fine! Master Lin, what do you think?" Lin Chong said, "I don't dare." Instructor Hong thought to himself: " That person must not know how to do it, and he is timid in his heart." This made Lin Chong more and more angry. Chai Jin first wanted to see Lin Chong's ability; both wanted Lin Chong to defeat him and kill the guy. Chai Jin said, "Let's have some wine and wait until the moon comes up."

At that moment, he ate Wuqi again. A glass of wine, but the early moon came up, shining into the hall like daylight. Chai Jin stood up and said, "Two instructors are competing with each other." Lin Chong thought to himself, "This Instructor Hong must be Chai Daguan's master. If I can knock him down with one stroke, he will not look good.

Seeing Lin Chong's hesitation, Chai Jin said: "This Coach Hong has been here not long ago, and there is no opponent here." Martial Arts Master Lin didn't want to refuse, and Xiao Ke also wanted to see the abilities of the two coaches. "When Chai Jin said this, he was just afraid that Lin Chong would hinder Chai Jin's face and refuse to use his skills. Lin Chong was relieved when he saw Chai Jin say that he would go ahead. Only Master Hong stood up first and said: "Come on, come on, come on. !And you make a great look. "All of them were coaxed out of the open space behind the hall. Zhuang Ke brought a bunch of sticks and placed them on the ground. Coach Hong first took off his clothes, tied up his skirt, tied the sticks, made a flag and drum, and shouted: "Come on, come on, come on, Come! Chai Jin said: "Martial Master Lin, please give me a duel." " Lin Chong said: "Officials, don't make fun of me. He also picked up a stick on the spot and said, "Master, please teach me." " Coach Hong looked at it and wished he could swallow him with a gulp of water. Lin Chong took the stick and used Shandong Big Beat to beat the general in. Coach Hong whipped the stick underground and came to snatch Lin Chong. The two coaches went underground under the bright moon. The fight is really beautiful. How can I see it is Shandong Da Lei, but I see: Shandong Da Lei, Hebei's big gun. The big gun is spraying from the hole, and the big gun is coming out of the python's nest.

It looks like uprooting a strange tree, holding spears and sticks like dead vines everywhere. Two dragons compete for pearls in the sea, and a pair of tigers compete for food in front of the rock.

The two coaches fought on the bright moon. Four or five people joined the baton, and Lin Chong jumped out of the circle and shouted: "Have a rest." Chai Jin said: "How can the instructor not use his skills?" Lin Chong said: "I lost." Chai Jin said: "I didn't see the two of you competing, how could you lose?" Lin Chong said: "The villain only has this shackle, so Quan should lose." Chai Jin said: "It was Xiao Ke who lost his mind for a moment." ” He laughed and said, “This is easy. "He asked the banker to get ten taels of silver. The time was approaching. Chai Jin said to the two escorting men: "Xiao Ke is brave. I have troubled you to look down, so I can unshackle Teacher Lin. There will be business in the prison camp tomorrow. , all on Xiao Ke, and given as gifts of silver. "Dong Chao and Xue Ba saw Chai Jin's arrogant character and did not dare to disobey him. They were forced to do favors and received ten taels of silver, so they were not afraid of him leaving. Xue Ba immediately opened Lin Chong's protective shackles. Chai Jin said with great joy: "This time the two teachers try again. "

When Coach Hong saw him, he was timid in using the stick. He was bullying him in his heart, but he was waiting to use the stick when he picked it up. Chai Jin shouted: "Stop! "He asked the banker to take out an ingot of silver, weighing twenty-five taels. Suddenly, it came to him. Chai Jin said: "The two coaches are competing, not to compare with others. This ingot of silver is a profit; if you win, you will This money goes. "Chai Jin only wanted Lin Chong to show his ability and deliberately threw the money on the ground. Coach Hong blamed Lin Chong for coming and wanted to fight for this big money. He was afraid that he would lose his energy, so he used the stick to do his best to make a show, and spit out the door. , Called to set fire to the sky, Lin Chong thought: "Chai Daguan only wants me to win against him. " He also held the stick horizontally, making a portal, spitting out a posture, calling it the posture of pulling grass and looking for snakes. Teacher Hong shouted: "Come, come, come! " Then he brought the stick cover in. Lin Chong looked back, and Coach Hong rushed in, raised the stick, and brought it down again. Lin Chong saw that his steps were messed up, so he jumped the stick from the ground, and Coach Hong was caught off guard. With that jump, he turned around and the stick hit Mr. Hong's head. He threw the stick away and fell to the ground. Chai Jin was overjoyed and asked Mr. Hong to get some wine quickly. Everyone laughed together. There was a struggle. The villagers smiled, supported Coach Hong, and walked out of the village with shame on their faces.

Chai Jin took Lin Chong's hand and went into the back hall to drink. The gift comes and is given back to the teacher. Lin Chong is willing to accept it, but he can't refuse it, so he has to accept it. It's just that it's embarrassing to bully others, and you won't be willing to stand by and get hurt. Only then will you know that pride is shameful.

Chai Jin stayed with Lin Chong in the village for several days, and treated him well with wine and food every day. After staying for another five or seven days, two gentlemen urged Chai Jin to set up a banquet to see him off. , and wrote two letters to Lin Chong, saying: "Cangzhou Dayin is also on good terms with Chai Jin, and he is also on good terms with Chai Jin. But after reading these two letters, you will definitely look down on the instructor. "Immediately, he took out twenty-five taels of silver and gave it to Lin Chong. He also gave five taels of silver to two men and drank wine all night. At dawn the next day, after breakfast, he asked the banker to pick three. Lin Chong still put on the shackles for his luggage, and said goodbye to Chai Jin. Chai Jin sent him out of the village to say goodbye, saying, "I'll have someone send winter clothes to the instructor in a few days." Lin Chong thanked him and said, "How can I repay my gratitude to such a high official!" "The two gentlemen thanked each other.

The three of them took the road to Cangzhou. At about noon time, they arrived at the city of Cangzhou. Although it is a small place, there are six streets and three cities. There are six streets and three cities. The state government office issued an official document, and Lin Chong was introduced to see the state official Dayin. Lin Chong was immediately taken in, and the reply was sent to the prison camp.

The two gentlemen took the reply, said goodbye, and went back to Tokyo. Lesson 23 of Volume 1 of Fifth Grade "Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick" Text Chapter 3

"Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick" This is a classic, the text is long, and there are too many things worth exploring in the article Well, when designing the lesson plans, I started by analyzing the character traits of the characters and understanding the personalities of Lin Chong and Coach Hong.

For example: When he first met Coach Hong, Lin Chong bowed to salute, stood up and offered his seat, which showed that Lin Chong knew etiquette and was very humble. In the martial arts competition with Coach Hong, you can gain an insight into Lin Chong's detailed psychology. Coach Hong exerted all his strength and came up with a "fire to the sky", Lin Chong saw the flaw at a glance and "horizontally" with the stick, and the first round was even. In the second round, Coach Hong was even more aggressive and struck head-on. Lin Chong just stepped back slightly to avoid the attack. He really knows himself and his enemy, and is very resourceful. In the third round, Lin Chong saw that Coach Hong's position was in disarray and "before he could gain a firm foothold, he raised the stick again." So with a "swing" and "sweep", Coach Hong fell to the ground and ran away in shame.

With only three moves, Lin Chong, a man of great martial arts and noble martial ethics, appeared on the page, ready to appear. Then let the students consider their general thinking characteristics while reading the text carefully. After studying this article, they can easily form a mindset that Lin Chong is a good guy and Coach Hong is a villain. In order to prevent students from "labeling" the characters, during the teaching process, I considered that students should be allowed to analyze the two characters, Coach Hong and Lin Chong, in a diversified way. Therefore, I designed this teaching session: Is Coach Hong useless? The purpose of this design is to achieve the effect of "one stone stirs up thousands of waves". Soon some students noticed that "Professor Hong's face was full of shame." Then I took advantage of the situation and asked what was "shameful" about? What is "ashamed" of? After Coach Hong leaves, what will he say and write again? This allows students to view this character comprehensively. Uncover their different inner worlds. Lesson 23 "Lin Chong beats Coach Hong with a stick" in the fifth grade volume Part 4

The lesson "Lin Chong beats Coach Hong with a stick" is a classic, with a long text, and there are many things worth exploring in the article. During the teaching process, I started by analyzing the character characteristics of the characters. First, I asked the students to read the text and experience the characters of Lin Chong and Coach Hong. Then, I asked the students to carefully read the text, grasp the characters' movements, expressions, and language descriptions, and explore reveal their different inner worlds. After students have a certain understanding of the text and characters, they can discuss freely and talk about what kind of people they think the characters in the text are. For example, when studying the character Lin Chong, I asked the students to read the text themselves and then freely discuss "What kind of person is Lin Chong? And tell me the reasons." After intense discussions, the students rushed to express their own opinions. Some think he is a witty person, some say he is a brave person, and some say he is a thoughtful person... When it comes to reasons, the students combine the text with their own opinions , everyone’s answers were wonderful, pushing the atmosphere of the entire class to a climax. This learning method that allows students to cooperate, explore, and find answers together with questions not only improves students' interest in learning, but is also a vivid embodiment of "student independent learning."

Based on the previous students’ grasp of the characters’ personalities, in the final inquiry session, I designed a question like this: “Why did the menacing Coach Hong lose to Lin Chong in the end?” On the surface, this question seems , seems to be the same as the previous step of understanding the character, but it is not. In fact, the students' understanding of the characters' personalities in the previous link was only superficial. They simply knew what personalities these characters had, but they did not have a real in-depth understanding. Through the discussion of this inquiry question, students can further understand that Coach Hong's failure was due to his arrogance and arrogance, and that Lin Chong won the competition precisely because of his wit, bravery and observation. Mastering these, students can understand that "character determines success or failure", so that students will have a deeper understanding of character.

In the teaching of "Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick", I try to give full play to students' learning initiative and use cooperative inquiry methods to make students interested in learning and gain something from their learning.

Lesson 23 in Volume 1 of the fifth grade "Lin Chong beats Teacher Hong with a stick" Text Chapter 5

Fei'er is looking for the joy of discovery "Lin Chong beats Teacher Hong with a stick" teaching reflection on leading students to analyze words and sentences to feel the characters of Lin Chong and Teacher Hong Based on the characteristics, ask the students, this article is selected from the classic "Water Margin", please silently enjoy the scene of the fight between Lin Chong and Coach Hong, and compare this article with the "Bullfighting Guessing" we wrote last week In comparison, let’s see if the author writes well. What’s so good about it?

The scene of the battle between the two sides is written in two lines, which is very clear. So, the students and I read the seventh natural paragraph together, and the students suddenly understood. It was said that the last bullfighting game was written in this way, but it was only after the teacher's reminder. Now I understand more clearly that when writing about two-way activities such as playing table tennis and basketball, we need to do it back and forth in two lines, and we have to step forward with our left and right feet to walk steadily. Write the audience's reaction to enhance the atmosphere of the scene. The text said that everyone laughed, which tells us that there was no deep hatred between Lin Chong and Hong Shutou. It was Chai Jin who aggravated the conflict on the field. Coach Hong wanted to win both money and face, so the fight on the field reached At the climax, the atmosphere was tense, but when everyone smiled, the atmosphere relaxed. Coach Hong lost face and walked away, and the fight ended. Therefore, for the bullfighting guessing game we wrote about last time, we should also write about everyone’s reactions and our own psychology as an audience. When writing about fighting, I used a lot of verbs, which was very accurate.

So, we organized the children to look for verbs from the fourth natural paragraph to the seventh natural paragraph, and found twenty or thirty of them. After tasting it, I found that the author's wording was very precise and highlighted the character's characteristics. Write Moonlight to move things forward. The story begins one afternoon when the fight was going on. The moon had already risen, illuminating the outside of the hall as if it were daytime. Tell us that the story is constantly developing, and it is precisely because it is like daylight that we can see clearly and fight! Going back and forth under the moonlight also implies that things are developing. The environment in which the story takes place often sets the stage for the occurrence and development of things. In the class at that time, the students discovered seven or eight good things, such as writing the fighting scenes and also describing the psychology of the characters to bring the story to a climax. It can also be seen that Coach Hong is eager to win and is arrogant.

Regarding these findings, we not only guide them to taste the content and enter the spiritual world of the characters, but also talk about what is good about writing in connection with reality, so that they can connect with reality and modify their own works. Students will not Happily, the class passed quickly. To be honest, my understanding of "Water Margin" is not deep, let alone comprehensive, so I just made another attempt based on my own foundation and the foundation of students to learn classics from the perspective of learning writing, so that students can feel The joy of discovery.

Thoughts after reading "Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick"

Recently, I listened to the class "Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick" by Zhang Lei. I appreciated the elegance of the famous teacher and felt the strong flavor of Chinese language. I am still chewing and savoring it. "Water Margin" is one of the four classic classics in my country. It is very successful in language and character creation. In terms of language design, it is known as "a part of Dream of Red Mansions, half of Water Margin..." and can be regarded as one of the treasure houses of Chinese literature. classic.

"Lin Chong Beats Coach Hong with a Stick" is adapted from a chapter in the classic "Water Margin". It is a typical representative of "Water Margin" in terms of language use and character creation. Teacher Zhang attaches great importance to the inheritance of this cultural value, allowing students to carefully consider and read the language of this classic work, and then deeply feel the personality characteristics of the two classic figures Lin Chong and Hong Jiaotou. The teaching is under macro-control and meticulous. Down to the smallest detail.

1. Diverse readings, a strong sense of language

"Reading aloud is understanding. Reading aloud is discovery." Reading topics, understanding the refinement of language; reading appearance, understanding characters through appearance the inner world; read the character’s language and actions aloud, and understand the character’s personality. During the reading, you will discover the mystery of the author's use of words to form sentences; during the reading, you will discover the author's ingenuity in character creation, plot arrangement, event narration, and structural layout. There are also many forms of reading aloud. There are reflective readings with questions, expressive readings with insights, and performative readings with actions. Starting from their own perceptions, students can empathize with their feelings, imitate their shapes, and imitate their sounds, so that they can read vividly and fall in love with the text. In a context full of humanistic scenes, students take the initiative to step into the inner world of the characters during reading. They not only understand the character's personality, but also truly improve their sense of language and reading ability.

2. Ingenious design and originality

Teacher Dou understood the content by reading it aloud over and over again, understood the character of the characters in the immersive language environment, and got to know Lin Chong and Hong Coach. If you just think of her design intention in this way, I think it doesn't really express her original intention. Because, under normal circumstances, most teachers can think of learning about characters through reading aloud. The wonderful thing about this class is that on the surface, Teacher Zhang seems to be trying to help students understand the characters and their personalities in a specific language environment, but in fact, he is training students' language and sense of language based on the characters and language in the text, so as to understand the characters. , the process of understanding personality, and use this lesson as a key training material in the instrumental aspect of "training students' sense of language and language in specific contexts". I think the goal of Teacher Zhang's lesson is very focused - language, sense of language training. For example: "Come, come, come" guides students to read the first two together, or the last two together, or read word by word, from light to heavy, or from heavy to light. Wait, over and over again, different reading methods, in the students' emotional reading, they read out different expressions and different characters.

Through this class, students not only master the knowledge content contained in the text itself, but also develop their sense of language. Students take the initiative to explore, learn to read aloud, and develop truly solid listening, speaking, reading and writing skills. Not only can they understand the characters' personalities, but it also improves students' Chinese literacy.