500-word composition for the sixth grade of primary school: sloppy

Keywords: Xiaomahu Primary School, grade six, 500 words

Words: 500 words composition

This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.

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This composition is about 500 words in grade six of primary school. The title is "Little Carelessness". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Niuniu is a famous horse in our class. Once Niu Niu was going to be late, and he left with his bag. When I got to school, I opened my bag and saw that it was my mother's cosmetics. You see, he usually does things so carelessly. One day, the first class was math. Teacher Wang asked, "Dad is 35 years old, which is five times the age of his son. How old is his son? " Without thinking, Niu Niu shouted, "Son 175 years old!

Teacher Wang said, "Is this Dad's grandfather or Dad's son?" Niu Niu's words made Xiaohong's mouth crooked. Xiaoming laughed until tears came out. Xiaogang slapped the table with his hand. The second class is Chinese. Teacher Li asked, "How to make a sentence for the word determination?" Niu Niu remembered how sloppy she was, so she thought about it. With the teacher's consent, he wrote on the blackboard: "I will make up my mind to get rid of the bad habit of carelessness." Since then, Niu Niu has kept her promise, studied and worked hard, stopped being careless and got better grades. At the award ceremony, the calf won the prize. Teacher's comment: "Niu Niu Xiao Niu's words made Xiaohong's mouth crooked. Xiaoming laughed so hard that tears came out. Xiaogang laughed and slapped the table with his hand." This sentence is very well written and vividly reflects the absurdity of Niu Niu's jokes. The little author carefully observed and showed everyone a different smile. The composition mainly depicts the carelessness of cows and calves and takes care of the theme. Several examples cited in the composition are typical. Coupled with the humorous language in the composition, it is very interesting to read and makes readers laugh and cry at the carelessness of the calf. What the author should pay attention to is that the composition is not divided into paragraphs and the level is not very clear. Remove the second "de" of "Niu Niu Xiao Niu's words made the little red mouth next to her smile crooked". (China famous teacher: Teacher Wang) 2009-8-24 19:34:00