How to write a composition?

I suggest you start your composition from yourself.

Self-existence-the root of successful writing

Xu Jingde of Sichuan Pengshan Qinglong Junior High School

Silver

Calm is the basis of successful writing. Any successful composition must be self-centered first, and then it may be others', everyone's, national and world's. The so-called self in composition is simply to communicate with others in words. Talk about the people you want to talk about, what you like to talk about, how you feel, and tell yourself that you like Tao. Specifically, it is necessary to "have the mind of the self in the composition, the personality of the self in the composition, and the living thought of the self in the composition".

Let's look at the following three compositions.

Example 1

May we always be together

Ma Huilin

I came to Dongdong's grave, packed my things and lit paper money silently. Dongdong, I came to see you. Think about the past, I'm really sorry, I was always so overbearing, and eating and playing was always the first. Dongdong, now, I regret fighting with you and robbing you! Today, all eat and no play! Look, there are your favorite chocolates and butterscotch, as well as robot cats and Bobby dolls. ...

Dongdong, do you remember? That spring, in the warm sunshine, we sat on the grass and said happily, "We will be together forever." But, Dongdong, it's only been a year since you said this. How did you go to that faraway place and never come back? How could you leave me and your good friend cruelly? Have you forgotten our wish? Dongdong, I brought you a Barbie doll specially today. Let her represent me and be with you forever.

Ah, it's a whirlwind. Paper scraps are spinning in the air, floating and floating. Dongdong, are you there? Did you hear me? Are you here to see me? You must stay a little longer. ...

Old people say that people have souls. When people die, they become ghosts and appear at night. It's terrible. But I really hope so. At least your soul can come to me at night, right? In that case, we can be together again I am timid, but I am not afraid, really.

Oh, by the way, did you come to see me the night before yesterday? I saw you. I'm glad that we are together again. You told me that you missed me, too, but it's a pity that we didn't realize our wish. We all cried. But after a while, you gradually disappeared. I was in a hurry, crying and shouting, "Dongdong, don't go …" The crying woke my mother, who said I was dreaming. Is this a dream? This is not a dream. You came to see me, didn't you? I am sure it is.

How time flies! It's spring again, and everything is new. Dongdong, what about you? Buddhism says that people will be reincarnated after death. Where have you been? Tell me, I will come to you, even if I go through all kinds of hardships.

I want to be with you forever.

(Excerpted from Fun)

Dial one

This composition is successful, and its success lies in having a "self-mind", that is, affection. It is love to come to the grave with sacrifices in winter and winter; Apologizing in front of Dongdong grave is a kind of feeling; Recalling the promise that "we will be together forever" is love; Buy Dongdong a Bobby doll, let it represent "I" and Dongdong together forever, or love. It is because of deep affection that when I saw the whirlwind, I thought Dongdong heard the call of "I" to meet me; It is because of deep affection that I stubbornly believe that dreams are the real encounter with winter and winter! If it weren't for my extreme affection, how could the timid "I" say that I hope to meet ghosts in winter and winter at night? If it weren't for the extreme affection, how could the weak "I" say, "Where have you been reborn? Tell me ... I will come to you even after all the hardships. " It can be said that the composition is all about feelings, and it is a pile of bricks that are "self-centered". This is the basis for the success of this composition. We can even say that without this profound "self-awareness", there would be no such composition.

When each of us has a strong "self-will", why not write it in our composition?

Example 2

Catch eels

Sheng Haitao

On Sunday, I waited for my brother Xiao Tong to catch eel at home. After a while, someone outside was shouting "Brother, brother." As soon as I heard it, I knew it was my brother Xiao Tong. So he immediately picked up his pocket and walked out of the house.

When we came to the field, we rolled up our sleeves and trouser legs, and then took action. I raised the first grass, which is a good sign. There is an upside-down loach. I proudly shouted, "Little boy, come and watch your brother catch loach. Without some skill, we can't catch it! Look carefully and learn from your brother. " When Xiao Tong came over, I held my hand high and pressed it to the loach. The loach was pushed into the hard mud and couldn't get in, so I caught it. Although the loach was caught, I was forced to eat shit. My face and body are covered with mud. Even so, my mouth was not soft and I said, "How's it going? Is your brother highly skilled? " Xiao Tong said with a smile: "It's really high, it's really high, especially the sentence' dogs eat shit' just now. How about another one? " "Foreign" didn't show up, but was ridiculed by him. I was really depressed.

After a while, he found an eel. I also shouted in my voice: "Brother, come here. Listen, brother, you can't catch eels without technology! Come and see clearly and learn from your brother. " Seeing me approaching, he stretched out his right hand and easily caught the eel in his pocket. He also proudly said: "I would rather take it lightly than repeat the same mistakes!"

Suddenly, I blushed. Being a brother is worse than being a younger brother. It's embarrassing. I secretly made up my mind to show him what I can do today. So I turned the grass faster. After lifting a grass, I "wow": a super fat loach! It's time to show yourself. I called my brother to my side and said, "I have gentle hands, too." As he spoke, he held the loach carefully and muttered something, saying, "Loach Loach is falling asleep. I'll bake it for you." I found this loach.

I am so happy that I have to put it in my pocket. But it slipped out of my hand. In an instant, I got into another piece of grass. I am very depressed, but I am happy again. I said, "Xiao Tong, look down and I'll give you a needle bucket." Then he tiptoed to the haystack. I gently took the grass away. Wow, not only a loach, but also a slender tail. Ha, and an eel! I said excitedly, "Look, little boy, your brother is really a blessing in disguise." I looked back at Xiao Tong proudly as I spoke. But he pointed to the grass in panic and said, "No, it's not-"

I turned my head and looked, "Ah", that's not an eel, it's a snake! I was so scared that I threw away my pocket and ran quickly to the ridge.

People were so scared that the loach and eel they caught were gone. It' s really "losing the wife and folding the soldiers". Not worth it!

My brother and I went home empty-handed.

(selected from Pengshan Literature and Art)

Dial two

The composition tells the story of "me" and my brother catching eel fish. "I" found the loach, so I shouted "Learn from my brother" to my brother. As a result, the "re-taking" caused the dog to eat shit, which caused a burst of ridicule from my brother. After being countered by my brother's "treat sth lightly", "I" expressed myself by humming "Gentleness" and "Holding Loach". Then the loach ran away, and he was frightened by the snake. He also did not forget to say something like "a blessing in disguise, a blessing in disguise" and "the loss of his wife and soldiers" to show that he had read two ancient prose and heard two stories. Show my innocent and lovely personality, lively and active, good performance and perseverance. It is precisely because of this incisive personality that the composition shines brightly. If there is no such incisive personality in the composition, not only "I" is not "I", but even this composition is nothing to read!

Everyone has his own personality, and the way of doing things and speaking is naturally different. However, when our classmates started writing, they abandoned all their personalities and lost the chance of success in writing in vain. Unfortunately, like Sheng Haitao, when writing, there is "self-personality on it". How nice!

Example 3

A dime

Qi Zhang

That day, my mother and I went to Pengshan by bus.

Not long after the car drove, three more people came up. Two young men came up first, got on the bus and went straight to the back of the car, where there were two seats left. Later, an old woman in rags came over with a basket containing some small oranges. Seeing that there were no seats left, I had to stand.

The conductor looked at her, stood up and said, "Grandma, come and sit here." Then he went to the back to collect money. When he turned around, an old dime fell out of his hand. Everyone saw it, including me But nobody picked it up. It was the grandmother who struggled to move her body and picked it up. The old woman pinched the money in her hand and said, "Here is the money, conductor." The conductor is collecting money and transferring money. He looked at the money in the old woman's hand. Instead of picking it up, he said to the driver, "Stop the car." When the bus stopped, the conductor said, "Madam, please get off first." Say, open the car door and let grandma go down. Grandma said, "I'm going to Pengshan." The conductor said, "I see, get off first!" " "After grandma got off the bus, the conductor immediately closed the door. He said to the driver, "Drive." The car started.

The people in the car were very angry and said, "Why did you drive the old man out of the car?"

The conductor said, "Hum, does anyone take a dime for a ride?"

Mom said, "What's with the ten-cent car? I can't hide my money! When you lose money, people pick it up and give it back to you. You still ... "

The conductor's eyes widened in surprise.

"The leng wear stem? Stop the car and let grandma come up. " Someone among the passengers shouted.

The bus stopped, but by this time the waiting time had gone a long way and the road was being repaired. The road is too narrow to reverse. Do we have to wait for grandma to come step by step?

The car started again. In the car, no one spoke for a long time.

(Selected from Youth Quality Education Newspaper)

Dial number three

The most valuable thing about this composition is "the thought of having a living self in the depths". It shows the author's precious thinking: why was the old woman who didn't receive the money finally driven off the bus? Because grandma is poor. Because of poverty, I won't pick up money; Because you are poor, you must be a "car rider with a dime". Why is the conductor enthusiastic at first, and then cold? Because he only recognizes money and not people. He is "enthusiastic" about money and "indifferent" to people. The little author appeals in his heart, don't be too poor to love the rich, don't judge people by their appearances, don't humiliate the poor, and don't just recognize money and deny people! A dime is profound because it reflects the human soul; A dime is precious because of the precious thinking of the little author. Composition is successful because of this "profundity" and this "preciousness". Without this "profundity" and "preciousness", this composition is meaningless.

When we talk at ordinary times, whether about ourselves or others, we will always have "living thoughts about ourselves" in it, or be happy for ourselves, or be unfair to others, or just remind others ... or feel, or be sad, or praise, or belittle ... The same should be true for writing, but after reading some students' compositions, we can't see any "living thoughts about ourselves", which is what we often call "no center" or

Reveal inside information

Calm is the basis of successful writing. The composition of "Lost Yourself" is boring. It's like attending a lecture. The speaker just recites words and sentences without expression. Can you not be sad? Students must have this feeling, the same article, Zhang San read, you listen to upset; Li Sinian, you are deeply touched. The reason is that Li Si injected "self-mind" when he was studying. Students, find the "lost self"!

It is easy to use yourself in composition. I have seen it with my own eyes and heard it with my own ears. Why is it so hard to write? What you personally feel, think about, unforgettable and difficult to express? Without yourself, it is difficult to "weave", "copy" and "recite". Why choose "difficult" instead of "easy"?

Self is the happiest thing in composition. Say what you want to say, say what you want to say, tell the truth you long for, express your feelings, speak freely, and change your heart with your heart. Can you be happy? Can you leave yourself to others to learn, talk about something untrue and express your feelings about the outside world? Why give up "happiness" and seek "bitterness"?

It is the actors on the stage who wear other people's clothes, say other people's words, do other people's things and express other people's feelings. It seems that there is no "self" at all-in fact, there is a "self" in the bones, that is, the actors' understanding and feelings about their roles. If an actor completely loses his "ego" to act, he can't do it anyway, let alone perform.

If you want to succeed in your composition, you must find your "lost self", which is equivalent to finding the hope of success in your composition.

How to find the "lost self" In short, as Wang Yuhai said, let "composition" have "self-awareness"; Let "above composition" have "self-personality"; Let "in-depth composition" have "living thoughts of self".

Students, find yourself lost!

Practical design

Change your composition without me to mine.