How to imitate subtitle courseware in composition

Composition: How to write novel and eye-catching subtitles?

In recent years, fragment composition has gradually been favored by students. Typical material selection and specific content are conducive to concentrating pen and ink, reproducing wonderful pictures in many aspects and reflecting the theme of life in all directions. If you add a concise and eye-catching subtitle to these fragments, the article will be more clear. So, how can we draw up a novel and eye-catching subtitle?

First, a few words present the beauty of refinement and conciseness.

Subtitle is a special concise summary form of the article, which needs to be carefully scrutinized and refined to be brilliant and moving. First of all, the subtitle must be concise and to the point, grasp the main points of the content, so that readers can see the text at a glance. For example, the article "Pursuit" refines the three opposite subtitles of "cruel reality", "powerful performance" and "moving brilliance", and reproduces the bitter course of a blind woman who is physically disabled and determined to perceive the world with her hands instead of her eyes and finally succeed. The concise wording and strict interpretation are admirable. Secondly, the subtitle must be concise, appropriate, alert and intriguing. For example, "I am in the third grade" is a competitive and joyful "I", and the subtitle only uses two words: "open struggle", "infighting" and "fun together". There is only one sentence in each episode of "The joys and sorrows brought by modern science and technology": "Happiness" means that trains speed up and travel is convenient; "Anger" is hateful in viruses, attacking computers; "Sadness" is obsessed with games, and his performance declines; "Joy" is both interesting and vivid in audio-visual teaching. Similarly, there are four-word phrases such as "sweet and sour", "spring, summer, autumn and winter" and "honor and disgrace", which are short and powerful. Making full use of them often gives people the beauty of simplicity.

Second, clever combination and clever introduction, the pursuit of eye-catching freshness.

On the basis of sticking to the theme, we can also spread the wings of imagination, open the treasure house of accumulation, and combine ingenious quotations to create a group of novel and ingenious subtitles. You can choose music, such as "Sonata for Dormitory", which is a song to enjoy relaxation and tranquility, an exciting song to listen to a football match, a song to miss home after the teacher reprimands you, and a serenade to review your lessons after lights out. What a dynamic and romantic group of youth dance music! The situation can be used, such as three colors of dormitory, starting with the atmosphere. The three subheadings "Red-Excited Sleepless Night", "Gray-Always Helpless" and "Black-Dead of Night" give people an orderly and situational aesthetic feeling. Poetry can be quoted, such as "I deeply feel the call of the environment", which describes three fragments: "a dead vine and a faint crow", "a small bridge with flowing water" and "a thin horse with an ancient road and a west wind", respectively revealing "Give the old crow a beautiful and lush green!" "Let's clarify this river!" "Return the promised land of the old horse!" These are full of yearning for green, and have produced a far-reaching theme calling for environmental protection; Clever use of terms, such as Math House, describes three interesting things, namely "direct ratio → inverse ratio" between "I" and my father's age and rice bowl, "circular inequality" in which three people in my family restrict each other, and "linear function Y=KX" in price rise and shopping increase, which subtly reveals "metabolism, generation after generation" and "impossible absolute freedom". You can also borrow the original words in the article and skillfully use attractive methods such as nicknames to win with novelty and beauty.

Third, it has distinct levels and shows internal logic.

Subtitles should also show the internal logical relationship of each part of the article, so that these relatively independent fragments can depend on each other and concentrate on serving the theme. Generally speaking, it can form two relationships: juxtaposition and stratification. Reflect the juxtaposition of all aspects of things at the same level. For example, in the Sonata of Life in Grade One, the three subtitles of "Big joke", "Football is crazy" and "Fierce sprint after school" changed the venue, and a group of detailed and vivid shots were selected from the classroom, playground and on the way home, which made a group of naughty, cute, energetic, intelligent and studious boys jump from the paper and make people laugh. Another example is the Six-sided Rubik's Cube, which compares the six sides of the Rubik's Cube to six teachers. They are humorous, serious and rigorous, or serious and cheerful. Read it as if they were standing in front of you, talking to you and teaching you. For example, in the article "Looking for the Lost World" and "Spring of Meditation", I "vaguely realized what I lost"; In the hot summer, I am ashamed to pick up nickels, but my face is very hot, but I don't know what I have lost; In the autumn of depression, I cheated. The four broken sentences continue to break sentences and advance step by step, laying a good foundation for pointing out the main idea at the end. Of course, students who are good at conception can also skillfully use creative methods such as step by step, suspense and playing hard to get. In a word, readers should be moved and put it down as soon as they see the subtitle.

Besides, what should a good composition title pay attention to?

First, pay attention to formal beauty.

Formal beauty is the most intuitive beauty, and a topic that is unconventional in form is the first condition to attract attention. Therefore, we must pay attention to the following points when drafting composition topics:

1. Beautiful posture:

In other words, when drawing up a topic, we should pay attention to the formal beauty of the topic, just like a beautiful girl standing in public, giving people a brand-new feeling, "Where are those lost times in front of me?" .

(1) Use spaces or connectors in the topic: For example, "Mom? Black land? Small stone mill, inferiority? Conceit? Self-improvement, God's whip-maternal love, opponent-model, etc.

② Use foreign fonts in the title, such as "Made in China" and "Kara is OK forever".

(3) Use antithetical sentences in the topic, such as "Be determined to speak first, cultivate one's morality first" and so on.

(4) Borrowing news headlines: For example, some themes are just like news themes, with a leading theme before the theme and a subtitle after the theme.

⑤ Use the mathematical formula in the topic, such as "1+1"; 2““、“7— 1=0“、“ 1 & gt； 6 "and so on. , abstracted from simplicity in the form of equality or inequality, and received special expression effects that pure language could not achieve.

⑥ Use blank space: that is, leave artistic blank for readers to think about and fill. For example, with your gentle flattery and counterattack ...-A letter to Comrade A Q, the blank space in the letter is hidden, but the reader can understand the main idea with a smile according to the meaning.

2. Vivid images:

If the graceful posture only reflects the "figure" of the subject, then the lively image reflects the temperament and character of the subject. Just like a person with a good personality and elegant temperament, he is often cute.

Vivid topics are easy to arouse people's interest and make people read the full text curiously.

(1) using metaphor. For example, using metaphor, honesty is a bridge of communication, opportunity is a fish, and friends are productive forces.

Use rhetorical questions such as "Is honesty out of date", "Why do you sell dog meat" and "Hang a sheep's head";

Use anthropomorphic "leave some honesty to keep yourself warm", "chalk self-report" and "Sunday face" and so on;

Use puns, life is "sincere" and so on;

With exaggerated "spring can be put in a vase" and so on;

Use comparative "nobody" and "great truth".

"Anti-theft door is not anti-theft" (with "door" as the title), the word is looped, which means the opposite.

② Apply, process or transform idioms, poems, two-part allegorical sayings, article titles, movie titles and songs. For example, using idioms and homophonic "chess" as the topic, "having fun in chess" and so on;

Change the idiom "escape in the fog", "young people who have been vaccinated against war" and "the premise of official thinking" to satirize the corruption of several leaders in a certain unit.

Turn the two-part allegorical saying "innocence" into "onion mixed with tofu-clear and white" and other topics.

Poems titled "Honesty" "If you die, honesty can't be thrown away" and so on;

"I am honest, I am beautiful" and "Song of the Greedy Palace" with lyrics as honest topics;

Imitate the famous saying "Honesty" with the title "Honesty to cultivate one's morality, faith to cultivate one's morality" (Zhuge Liang has a famous saying "Quiet to cultivate one's morality, body to cultivate one's morality");

Imitate the title of the article "On the Surprise of Our Nation" and so on.

(3) Ironically, there are "saying the wrong thing", "tofu maker" and "contractor".

3. Rich literary talent:

"Words without words are not far away." Articles with strong literary color are often regarded as masterpieces and favored by people, and topics with strong literary talent are even more intriguing and charming.

(1) With the help of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign poems, famous sentences, lyrics, beautiful prose sentences, etc. Or reference, or application, or conversion, etc. For example, the words in Su Shi's "The Moon" titled "Shui Diao Ge Tou" are called "Children * * * Chanjuan", and the words in Li Yu's "Yu Meiren" titled "Building a small building with the spring breeze last night", as well as "Xiao He's flowers are showing sharp corners" and "One river's spring water flows eastward". Color style of color advertisements, etc.

② Use various figures of speech. For example, the use of dual "Mavericks overtake Clippers, Wizards cover the sun" and "Being close to life is very commendable, and efforts must be made to improve quality".

It can be seen that this kind of topic not only has a certain literary color, but also leaves room for aftertaste.

Second, the skills of writing questions

As the saying goes: "Buddha depends on gold, man depends on clothes", and the composition also depends on the title. This is an era that attaches importance to packaging, just like a good book with a good cover and a high-quality product with exquisite packaging. A good title can get attractive and eye-catching effect, so students should not take it for granted. In recent years, college entrance examination proposers always provide materials and put forward a topic, so that candidates can write their own compositions according to the materials. This not only examines the students' ability to establish a center from the perspective of choice, but also examines their general expression ability.

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1. The scope of the title should be as small as possible, but not too big or too broad from its own point of view; Reasonable innovation, do not stick to the rules. If the title is too big, you can limit it with subheadings.

2. The title should not be too long. If the title is too long, it will appear loose.

3. The title should be implicit, and thinking should be included in the title of the image. Implication can play an infinite role and deepen the impression and experience of the marking teacher on the content of the article.

4. Draw up a good theme, interpret the theme into a vivid story, and express a novel and unique idea with the story [it can be imagined appropriately, but it should be related to real life].

5. Be good at association when drafting questions. Association is a thinking process in which a person infers something or something from other people, other things or other things related to it. There are three main ways of association:

[1] correlation, from table to chair [spatial correlation].

[2] Similar to association, from silkworm to teacher [similar dedication].

[3] On the contrary, Lenovo, from happiness to trouble [is essentially the opposite]

In short, if association is to be rich, to be integrated into the vast space-time, and to be reasonable, it is necessary to grasp the connection points between things.

(2) the principle of writing topic:

1, Qiao: the topic of the composition is closely related to the conception and conception of the article, and the two complement each other. Smart ideas and smart ideas will formulate smart themes, and vice versa. That's what the so-called "the article is half finished" means. For example, in the composition of the college entrance examination in 2000, some candidates wrote that "a flower is a world" and a flower is a world. There are countless flowers in the world, and there are also ambiguous \ \ \ \ "World \ \ \". How can the answer be one? It is both relevant and informative, giving people a broad imagination.

2. Qiao: the topic is like the packaging of goods. Clever packaging will win the favor of customers. Similarly, unexpected topics will make people fall in love at first sight. The topic is novel and unique, and it will be very attractive.

For example, in the national college entrance examination composition of 1995, a candidate wrote such a question: "You accuse him+he accuses me+I accuse you = you can't treat others correctly".

For another example, someone told a story like this: "Once upon a time, two brothers slept under a mosquito net, sleeping at both ends. There were mosquitoes in the tent, and no one was too lazy to rush. The two brothers were bitten by mosquitoes and couldn't sleep, so they used the cattail fan prepared by their mother to drive away only the mosquitoes at their own end. Come and go, mosquitoes still sting people in tents. \ \ \ \ "If you write an argumentative essay on a topic based on this story, you can start from the following angles:

From the fact that the two brothers only care about their own heads and ignore each other's heads, they can draw the following conclusions: "caring for others" and "not taking the lead as beggars".

From the fact that the two brothers didn't unite to drive away mosquitoes, they can draw the conclusion that "Qi Xin can work together to kill mosquitoes" and "the consequences will be unbearable if we separate teams".

From the moment when the two brothers didn't completely drive mosquitoes out of their accounts and only cared about peace, they could draw up "seeing farther" and "Those who are short-sighted, quit! 》

From the consequences of the two brothers driving away mosquitoes, we can draw the conclusion that "selfishness will eventually harm ourselves."

Mother has prepared a cattail leaf fan for them, but they can't drive away mosquitoes. We can draw up that "teenagers should cultivate their ability to live independently".

The above topics are drawn up according to different discussion angles, and they are more relevant. But to mark new ideas, these themes are really lacking, which requires repeated thinking and careful consideration. If we think so, it is futile for the two brothers to drive away mosquitoes. This is not mathematically 1+ 1 = 2, but the actual effect is 1+ 1 = 0. So the title "1+ 1 = 0" is even more interesting.

(3) the method of writing the topic:

1. Be unconventional

We in China have attached great importance to names since ancient times. "When the emperor visited Yu, he was very happy and gave Yu a good name. "When we write an article, we should also give it a" good name ". People usually read the title of the article before reading the text. The title of the article is bad and disgusting, so people stop reading the text; The general title of this article did not arouse people's interest. It is very wrong for readers to lose interest in reading because of bad headlines.

Curiosity is a psychological characteristic of people. The content of the article is new and the title of the article is also new. Therefore, being unconventional should be taken as an idea to draw up the title of the article.

A female classmate wrote a good article for a Chinese newspaper. The content is that she goes to the tap to get water, and there are many people waiting to get water, so she puts her bucket in front. A little girl in kindergarten "has a penguin-like breast" criticized her. When she was embarrassed, the little girl said, "Big Sister, if you are in a hurry, you get the water first, and I'll go to your original place." Originally, it was an interesting article. She used "a little thing" as the title, and the editor changed it to "Little girls educate big girls", which added a lot of color to the article.

2. Find the cleverness in your own shortcomings.

In daily life, we often have such experiences: we are not surprised that a smart person has done a smart thing or a smart action; When a clumsy person does a clever thing or a clever action, we will feel strange.

So is the title of the article. Sometimes using seemingly clumsy titles can attract people's attention more than using clever titles. This kind of title contains cleverness in clumsiness and sees cleverness in clumsiness, which is indeed more diligent than cleverness in cleverness.

When a classmate writes about her deskmate, there is nothing new. One thing is that when the group is on duty, because there will be a sports meeting tomorrow, other students will go to the playground to watch the fun, and she will clean the classroom alone at the same table. Another thing is that her deskmate can't do problems in the English exam. She wrote the answer on a piece of paper and handed it over, but her deskmate didn't read it. This little thing is nothing, but she used her brains on the title. She avoided the general title of "The Man I Worship" and the artistic title of "A Flash of Light", and chose a seemingly clumsy title-stupid deskmate. The word "stupid" is really well used, which not only shows the good character of the deskmate, but also shows her love for the deskmate.

3. Find the strangeness in the ordinary.

Just as a girl in flowery clothes is more conspicuous among a group of girls, a plain title is more conspicuous among many fantastic titles.

One of my classmates took part in an essay contest, which wrote about how three generations of her extended family lived in harmony, focusing on how sisters-in-law from different families could unite, respect their elders and take care of their children. She drew up a simple and clear title for her article-"Aunties" and won the prize in the competition. Besides the content of the article, it also has something to do with the title.

A classmate saw the Yellow River with his own eyes when visiting relatives during the holiday. He was deeply touched and wrote it in his composition. What kind of title should I draft? He used the method of "I saw the Yellow River". This title fully shows the reverence and pride of a middle school student who was lucky enough to see the cradle of the Chinese nation with his own eyes after hearing and reading the Yellow River.

Arouse suspense

The titles of some articles completely reveal the theme of the article, but readers are only particularly interested in the theme it reveals. Such a title can certainly arouse readers' desire to read.

However, sometimes the title reveals all the contents of the article, but the reader is no longer interested in reading. When readers read the headlines, they know that a problem has been decided, that someone's fate has been known, and that something is over, so they don't want to read the text any more. In this case, another method of drawing up the title is used-causing suspense.

Only put forward the topic in the topic without writing the conclusion; Only the characters recorded in the book name have unknown deeds; The title only shows some clues, and the success or failure is unknown, which will arouse readers' suspense and be anxious to know the following.

According to the fact that boys and girls can't communicate normally in some places, a tabloid in China compiled three articles: one is that boys and girls helped each other through a voluntary work to level the sewer, and the gap between boys and girls was leveled, with the title "The ditch was leveled"; Once, through a class basketball match, the boundary between boys and girls was broken, with the title "Crossing the" 38th Parallel "; The other is the head teacher, who, after careful consideration, finally stopped the boys and girls from dancing together and joined the Youth Friendship Round Dance with the title "Dance music is playing again". The titles of these three articles have played a suspense role for readers.

The following are several self-made topics in the composition of the college entrance examination in recent years for your reference:

Miracles can only be seen in dangerous land, flowers and thorns of life.

On "Rose with Thorns" and "Flower Umbrella"

Water town bridge and five-ring flag

Sister's round face and dew on the lotus leaf

It's raining. I'll do it.

Baptism, him and her

"Red Raincoat" and "Starting from purifying the land under your feet"

Words and hands, under the buttonwood tree

The topic of bark "explosion"

5. Use rhetoric.

[1] Contrastive expressions, such as: born in sorrow, died in happiness. If you get this word, you will get more help, but if you lose it, you will get less help. One of the candidates used a choice question consisting of comparison, "Am I a genius or an idiot? If memory can be transplanted, this topic is in sharp contrast, which implies the advantages and disadvantages of memory transplantation, and despises those who are willing to be "machines for recording scientists' theories and thoughts" and "human mini-memory banks" without opinions, which is very attractive.

[2] For example, in 2000, a candidate put forward the topic "Life is also an answer sheet". The examinee compares life to an answer sheet and divides it into "multiple choice questions, fill-in-the-blank questions and question-and-answer questions". Finally, he pointed out that "in this life test, the answers seem colorful, but it is far from being as simple as expected to hand over a satisfactory answer sheet", which is novel and unique.

[3] Exaggeration, with the topic of "frustration"-"That obstacle shattered me"

[4] rhetorical question, 1999 college entrance examination, "If memory can be transplanted"-"Who am I? 》

[5] Ask questions about "efficiency"-"What did I do today? 》

[6] Metonymy is about "paying attention to life"-"listening to your own heartbeat", which refers to a unique personal experience.

[7] Duality, with the theme of "environmental protection"-"a head of white hair, green mountains and green rivers"

[8] personification, with the theme of "tree"-"sigh of the tree". Taking Environmental Protection as the Theme —— Journey to the Earth

[9] Gao Hu's theme is "Book"-"Farewell to comic books! 》。 Take "Pay attention to life" as the topic-"Add some bitterness to life! 》

To quote that poem, "If memory can be transplanted"-"Where was the lost time before me? Where are the descendants behind me? " -Chen Ziang's Youzhou Taige expresses the confusion of memory transplantation.

Others include:

Come back! Mom} "; The most authentic style, "people are ambitious and determined to struggle"

Imitation words, "overcome fragility and start from the heart"; Self-contradiction, "the dead sea is immortal" and so on.

Mathematical formula:

It is intuitive, eye-catching, philosophical and attractive to use mathematical form as a title to express the main ideas to be expressed, which often leads to unexpected results.

For example, the identity in mathematics ["diligence × high technology = getting rich"]

Inequality [achievement ≠ quality]

Absurd formula [99+ 1 = 0], where "99" stands for qualified product rate and "1" stands for unqualified product rate. Through this absurd formula, the article reveals the importance of quality consciousness.

There are many ways to create new topics. These are just topics, waves in the ocean. As long as you choose them carefully, your face will glow.