How to write prose

2. Right and wrong.

3. Look at sociality.

4. Write a "sense of language" essay.

Write small things

Is there anything to write in the dormitory? For example, some people sleep late, some people eat delicious food, some people pay attention to dressing up, some people quarrel … Is there anything to write in the classroom? For example, a teacher is wearing a special dress or giving a funny lecture. A classmate fell asleep in class or hesitated to answer questions ... Is there any writing material in the toilet? For example, there is a jingle on the wall that says "shit is indispensable, urine has a different flavor" ... In short, as long as students have a pair of "eyes that discover beauty", there is a lot to write. For example, in view of the bad atmosphere of "someone often uses other people's things" in the dormitory, some students pay attention to observation and think carefully, and write: "Taking other people's washbasins as an example, it is not that others' washbasins are more fragrant and better to use, but because: First, some students don't bring washbasins to school at all, but use other people's washbasins exclusively; Second, there is a washbasin, but it is useless. If you use someone else's washbasin, you won't care about the loss of others' washbasins. Use it as you want, and kick it away when you don't need it. Very convenient. People who are infected with this lifestyle are not' little bullies' when they step into society, and they are extremely selfish! "

On Right and Wrong

In view of the phenomenon that a girl bought food at the entrance of the canteen and jumped the queue, some boys thought that "jumping the queue was not caught once or twice, but no female compatriot was ever caught" and lamented that "Japanese teachers on duty' prefer boys to girls'". However, another female classmate has some objections to this: "First, the saying that' girls don't get caught, boys get caught' doesn't hold water. I have met many girls who jump the queue, for example ... Second, when it comes to jumping the queue, where are the girls' opponents?" Where can a delicate woman be better than a big man? Have you ever found that on weekdays, boys push me at the window, forming a circle of countless heads? This is the status quo. If you don't arrest boys, who will you arrest? Thirdly, the author analyzes that the reason why teachers don't catch boys is that girls' love face' and' love crying', which is poor! I don't think girls' faces are worth more than boys' faces. Didn't more than ten years of education tell them how to cheat and how to save the defeat with tears? I have seen many such images in books and on TV, but they are rare in school. Isn't it inappropriate to represent all girls with individuals instead of faces? "Doing this kind of' pen-cutting' between students can not only cultivate their thinking ability, but also stimulate their desire to express themselves, so that they can' write with qi' instead of' creating feelings for the text'

Look at the sociality of society

Combine your life with the times and society for philosophical thinking, discuss social events with small things around you, and jump out of the well to see the sky. Only in this way can prose reach a new level. Students can think like this: Have you read this story I wrote at home and on the road? Which character in the book or movie is my portrait? Are there many similar people or things in society? What does it tell me? For example, in view of the kindness of the whole class in donating money to a classmate who lost her parents, some students actually thought that an American businessman donated money to invite a terminally ill nine-year-old girl in China to visit the United States in order to satisfy her wish of "seeing Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck in Disneyland", so this classmate wrote: "China people and Americans, regardless of yellow skin or blue eyes, all live in the same earth and land. Accept my concern and look forward to your smile. The word "human" structure is mutually supportive. Although the world is small, it is a big family. The land of more than five billion people is surrounded by a round earth, and the hearts of more than five billion people are concentric circles. " If students often associate freely, play naturally and write freely, then they will not worry about improving their writing level.

Write an article about "language sense"

(1) Taste the advantages and disadvantages of advertising words.

⑵ Try to find out the advantages and disadvantages of the language from the store name and brand name.

⑶ Excavate new language meanings from common sayings, old sayings and epigrams.

(4) Feel the appropriateness of language from slogans and notices.

5. Taste the refined and meaningful language from the lyrics.

[6] Learn and accumulate language from extracurricular reading.

Advantages and disadvantages of taste advertising words

Contemporary society has entered the information society, and all kinds of advertisements are overwhelming. Most advertising words are short and pithy, rich in meaning, catchy and easy to remember, which is one of the channels for our students to learn a language. For example, the advertisement of "Wan Jiale" water heater reads "Wan Jiale, Happy Family". "Great Wall" brand electric fan advertising words "Great Wall electric fan, Great Wall electric fan". In addition, some poorly written advertising words are also the material for our language sense analysis. For example, there is a saying in the hotel window that "silver moon embraces beauty". This advertising word is too vulgar, especially the word "hug", which is a bit vulgar. Why not change the word "hug" to "welcome" or "wait"? This is much more elegant.

Try to figure out the language from the store name and brand name.

When people start a business, they all hope to get a good reputation for good luck and prosperous business. Novel and unique store names and brand names are often favored by customers. For example, the name "new best" contains three meanings: new, unique and good. It embodies the good wishes of operators and places their sincere commitment to customers. Such a store name is bound to be liked by customers. Wahaha's popularity is inseparable from its image and vivid name. From the word "Wahaha", we can see the children's happy, carefree and ecstatic expressions when drinking this drink. This brand name is really vivid and lifelike. However, some store names are not elegant in life. For example, "Al Liang Tang" and "Al" mean "mistress" and "little wife" in Cantonese. It seems that in order to cater to some people's vulgar tastes, the operators have racked their brains and painstakingly chosen the name of this store in an attempt to stimulate others and consumption with "Al". I think: ladies are bound to be disgusted with this name, and it is difficult for them to be interested in patronizing it.

Feel the language from slogans and notices

What kind of slogans and notices are we willing to accept? This should pay attention to the appropriate limits of language and the language should be appropriate. Usually, exciting and inspiring slogans are hung on the railings on both sides of the street and at the gates of schools, factories and mines. Whether these slogans are accurate or not is full of motivation, which is the scope of our students' language sense composition. Sometimes when we go to the park to play, we will see signs like "No" and "No". This imperative and mandatory language will make players feel heavy and even disgusted. If the former is replaced by a notice full of human feelings, the effect will be completely different. For example, "Don't go into the grass!" It's a pity to step on the green carpet, why not take a few more steps! These two different notices give people different feelings. The former is cold and tough; The latter tone is euphemistic and gentle, with a tone of discussion, giving people a cordial and warm feeling. This shows how important the appropriateness of language is. As long as we are willing to live, we will find that there are many language phenomena in life that deserve our analysis.

Mining new language meanings from common sayings, old sayings and epigrams.

Common sayings, old sayings and epigrams in life often play the role of exhortation, spur and encouragement. However, with the development of society, some may not be the golden rule. Taste the common sayings, old sayings and epigrams in life from different angles, bring forth the old and bring forth the new, and you will understand the profound meaning of language. Therefore, we should boldly think reversely. Some people put forward a counter-proposition to the famous saying that "man is rigid without desire"-"man is rigid with desire". "Those who have no desires are also high", and "nothing" here refers to people's indifference to fame and fortune; The "demand" in the sentence "people want high quality when they arrive" refers to people's persistent pursuit of life and career. And so on: "Silence is golden"-"Silence is not necessarily golden" and so on.

Taste the refinement and meaning of language from lyrics.

Our life is full of songs, and pop songs have entered thousands of households. Our students are young and receptive to new things. Many students like singing pop songs. Generally speaking, the lyrics of a good song are subtle, refined, meaningful and beautiful. To guide students to appreciate and taste, to remember beautiful lyrics, so as to achieve the purpose of accumulating language. For example, the lyrics of "the sound of the waves is still the same": "Take away a fishing fire and let it warm my eyes; Leave a true feeling and let it stop at the maple bridge. ..... "not only permeates the thoughts and feelings of modern youth, but also contains the beautiful artistic conception of Tang poetry. The lyrics are implicit and meaningful. On the contrary, we should abandon Cantonese lyrics whose individual languages are not standardized.

Learn and accumulate language from extracurricular reading.

Extracurricular reading is an extension of Chinese classroom teaching and the main channel for writing compositions with a sense of language to absorb themes. To read a large number of literary classics, it is necessary to read and chew the wonderful chapters and fragments carefully. And write down your reading feelings. In addition, we should read some newspapers and magazines properly to taste and appreciate beautiful language materials.

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