Revise incorrect sentences

1. Parallel phrases appear, which may be due to improper collocation, improper classification, improper word order or unclear semantics

1. Relevant departments promptly criticized, educated and dealt with the very few incidents of disrespecting sanitation workers' labor, making unreasonable troubles, and even beating and insulting sanitation workers. (Inappropriate combination, "incident" cannot be "criticized and educated")

2. Our hometown is beautiful and fertile. The land here is fertile and is especially suitable for growing fruit trees, cotton, and sugarcane. In addition, it is also suitable for planting pear trees and jujube trees. (Inappropriate classification, "pear trees and jujube trees" are both "fruit trees")

3. The entire factory staff discussed and listened to the factory director’s report on improving business management. (The word order is inappropriate, it should be "listening and discussing", there is a time sequence relationship)

4. Recently, the New District Court concluded this case, and Xiao Zhang, who was operating in breach of contract, was ordered to compensate the plaintiff Haoluyuan Trading Company for economic losses and legal fees of more than 3,000 yuan. (The semantics are unclear, whether "economic losses and legal fees" are calculated as "more than 3,000 yuan" or "litigation fees" alone are "more than 3,000 yuan")

2. Multiple attributives and multiple adverbials appear, possibly It’s an inappropriate word order

1. Criticism and self-criticism are effective ways to correct mistakes and improve one's ideological level. ("Effective" should be moved before "Method")

2. Yesterday, many representatives talked enthusiastically with him in the lounge. (You should adjust "enthusiastically" before "talk to him")

3. This training course was jointly organized by the National Staff Education Commission and the State Economic Commission at the end of May this year. More than 200 employee representatives from all over the country participated in this training. ("Joint" should be moved before "organize" and give way to time adverbials)

3. Quantity phrases appear, which may be due to unclear semantics, repetition, inappropriate word order, or improper wording

< p>1． The student union cadres of the three schools met in the teaching office to study the implementation of the second classroom activity this semester. (The meaning is unclear, whether it is "three schools" or "three student union cadres")

2. The prices of domestically produced cars are low and suitable for the common people. For example, the market price of "Urban Beibei" is only 60,800 yuan, the price of "Ingel" is 68,800 yuan, and the new "Santana" is only 100,000 yuan. about. (Repeat, "hundreds of thousands yuan" is an approximation, and "about" cannot be used anymore)

3. Carrying out criticism and self-criticism is an effective method to correct the party's style and enhance the party's cohesion. (Improper word order, "a" should come before "effective")

4. Huaneng Group's No. 3 Power Plant underwent renovation of boiler equipment this year, increasing power generation per ton of coal by 1.5 times and reducing coal consumption by 1.2 times. (Inappropriate wording, "reduce" cannot use multiples)

5. After the completion of China's first Computer Integrated Manufacturing Systems Engineering Research Center, colleagues at home and abroad praised its advanced functions, and more than 23,000 people visited it. (Inappropriate word choice, "person times" is a plural quantifier and cannot be the subject)

6. At five or six o'clock in the morning, the streets leading to the airport were lined with tens of thousands of farewell crowds. (Inappropriate wording, "crowd" is a collective noun)

4. Prepositions appear, which may be due to improper collocation, confusing structure, reversal of subject and object, and incomplete subject

1. When they encountered difficulties, they did not feel depressed. Instead, they gained strength from everyone's trust and care and built up the confidence to overcome difficulties. (Inappropriate collocation, it should be "from...")

2. On March 17, six members were expelled from the International Olympic Committee due to a bribery scandal. The next day, newspapers around the world made detailed reports on this incident that shocked the international sports world. (The preposition is improperly used, it should be "right")

3. The name Jiao Yulu may be unfamiliar to young people, but it is very familiar to people over forty years old. (The subject and object are reversed, it should be "for young people" and "for people over forty years old")

4. Why has this phenomenon of wasting talents not attracted the attention of relevant departments so far? (The misuse of prepositions has caused the subject to be incomplete, and "for" should be deleted)

5. Related words (conjunctions) appear, which may be Improper collocation, incompleteness, improper word order

1. Only by fundamentally solving the problem of who we are can we serve the people better.

(The related words are not properly matched, they should be necessary conditions, use "only...")

2. No matter how meager your gift is, it is like a heavy weight in the hearts of farmers. (The correlative words and adverbs are not collocated properly. The definite "such" should be used here, and the indefinite "how" should be used after "no matter" and "no matter")

3. Although he is a farmer, he usually likes to study, knows a lot of words, and is also good at making yangko. (The related word is incomplete, "but" should be added before "usually")

4. Because the technical level is too low, the quality of these products is either lower than similar products in coastal areas, or the cost is higher than those in coastal areas.

(The position of the associated word is inappropriate and the subject is inconsistent. The associated word should be before the subject, and "not" should be moved before "quality")

5. Nowadays, "alphabetic words" such as "Ah Q" have spread throughout the Chinese character culture circle, not only entering textbooks, but also active in various media. (The word order is inappropriate, there is a progressive relationship, the more serious ones should be placed later, and it should be "not only active in various media, but also entered into textbooks")

6. Inappropriate wording, ungrammatical sentences, lack of organization, and procrastination will make the meaning ambiguous, misleading, and even incomprehensible. (Inappropriate word order, it should be "confused or even misunderstood")

6. Pronouns appear, which may be unclear or repetitive

1. This exquisite lantern will be given as a gift to the guest with the highest score today. (The meaning is unclear, who exactly "he" refers to is unclear)

2. When the old man was 80 years old, he still clearly remembered his brother's evaluation of himself when he participated in the student movement: a warm-hearted person.

(The meaning is unclear, whether "self" refers to the "old man" or the "old man"'s "brother")

3. Due to this traffic accident, traffic on Huaihai Road and Wanping Road was closed for nearly three hours. (Repeat, "for this reason" means "because of this traffic accident")

4. We must come up with our own genuine computer game software, otherwise, without new software, it will be difficult to resist unhealthy pirated software. (Repeat, "otherwise" means "if this is not the case", which is repeated with "no new software")

7. If a long object appears, it may be that the center of the object is incomplete or mismatched

1. In order to comprehensively promote the use of rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and accelerate the development of pig raising, the county held three technical training courses for breeders. (The object and center are incomplete, so "experience" should be added)

2. Understanding sandstorms and understanding sandstorms is to prevent sandstorms from a scientific perspective and reduce the losses caused by sandstorms. (The object and center of "reach" are incomplete, and "purpose" is added after "loss")

3. Now, I see the folks who have been away for many years again, the mountainous area where I have been used to living since I was a child. The unique huts made of stone and thatched grass, the rugged streets, and the familiar and lovely local accent (improper matching, "see" and "local accent" do not match)

8. Multiple occurrences. The predicate may be mismatched or the subject is changed

1. This cultural station has become a place to educate and help underachieving young people, rescue and cultivate delinquent youth, and has been praised by superiors many times (improper collocation, "Cultivation" does not match "failed youth")

2. Although this factory is small in scale, it has won the Provincial Science Conference Award twice and been awarded the title of Provincial Quality Product three times, and its products are sold throughout the country. All places and Southeast Asia. (Changing the subject, "factory" cannot be "awarded the title of provincial quality product")

3. We also like children, pinch a handful of flowers until the flowers and leaves. When everything was gone, he threw it into the mountain stream with a sorry feeling and floated away with the water. (The subject was secretly changed. The subject in the front was "we", and the subject in the back was changed to "flower", so it should be changed to "put them away". Throw it into the mountain stream and float away with the water")

9. Questions and negative words appear, whether it may be inappropriate or not

1. Of course, the spirit of Lei Feng must be given new meaning. The connotation, but who can deny that there is no need to learn from Lei Feng now? (A double negative is added to the question, turning it into a triple negative, which is illogical)

2. In recent years, Wang Fang has been talking about it almost all the time. He did not forget to collect and organize folk songs and accumulated a large amount of information.

("All the time" is equivalent to "all the time", which is used here with "forget" and contradicts with "accumulated a large amount of information")

10. The emergence of fixed structures and definitions , maybe the structure is chaotic

1. The "Consumer Rights and Interests Protection Law" is very popular among consumers because it strengthens people's awareness of self-protection and protects consumers' rights and interests to the maximum extent. (There are structures of "for..." and "by...", but there is no structure of "received by...", so the word "su" must be removed)

2. So far, people cannot completely control natural disasters. The quality of agricultural harvests is largely determined by the quality of natural conditions. (should be "determined by")

3. It is a method of writing the ending of an event first, and then narrating the occurrence and development of the event in chronological order, which is called flashback. ("It is" should be removed)

11. Classical Chinese words and written language appear, which may be repeated

1. The plan to set up card collection on transportation trunk lines must be discussed and approved by the local people's congress standing committee and made public to the public. ("Zhu" means "Yu", "Yu" repeats with it)

2. The opening ceremony of the Athens Olympic Games was brilliant and top-notch, and was universally praised by world public opinion. ("Kan" means "can", and "can" is repeated with it)

3. After listening to his statement of the truth, I thanked him sincerely in my heart. ("Sincerely" means "in the heart", repeat)

4. In order to ensure that the dictionary has a high quality, the editorial board of the "Chinese Dictionary" focused on controlling key procedures during the three years of compilation. ("Work hard to cultivate the code" means "compile", repeat)

Note: Similar incorrect usages include "die prematurely", "overspoiled", "defend the laurel", "make the humble house full of flowers" "Bright" etc.

12. Phrases in which the word "的" appears may have unclear semantics, improper collocation (subject change), or improper word order

1. It was getting dark, the wind was blowing outside, and there were fewer and fewer pedestrians on the street. The umbrella repairer was very anxious. (The meaning is unclear, "umbrella repairer" may be "umbrella repair customer" or "umbrella repair master")

2. On the evening of August 3, 2003, the first umbrella ceremony was held at the Temple of Heaven in Beijing. During the emblem release ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games, the Hall of Prayer for Good Harvests was brilliantly lit that night, making it even more majestic. (Inappropriate collocation, misuse of the word "的", secretly changing the subject, causing "light" and "majestic" to not match, the word "的" should be deleted)

3. The Hunan Provincial History Museum recently exhibited tens of thousands of newly unearthed cultivated rice from 8,000 years ago. (The word order is inappropriate. "Pray for unearthed" should be adjusted to "eight thousand years ago")

13. There are two-sided words, which may be inconsistent and illogical

1. Whether the electronics industry can develop rapidly and widely penetrate into all walks of life, the key lies in accelerating training and cultivating a group of specialized technical talents. ("Can" is a two-sided word, inconsistent with what follows)

2. I was filled with fear, worried that disaster would befall my aunt. ("worry" and "no" are illogical)

14. Words such as "avoid", "prevent", "prevent", "avoid", "avoid", "forbidden" appear , may be illogical (opposite meaning)

1. In order to prevent such traffic accidents from happening again, we have strengthened traffic safety education and management. ("Prevent" and "Never happen again" are unreasonable, "no" should be removed)

2. Three taboos when sleeping: The first taboo is not to be angry before going to bed, the second taboo is not to eat a full meal before going to bed, and the third taboo is not to lie in the wind. (Replace either "bogey" or "cannot")

15. There are polysemy words such as "go", "rebirth", "keep", "no", "go", "and" etc. Or polysemous phrases, the meaning may be unclear

1. The notice from the county said that Township Chief Zhao should report before the 15th of this month. (Whether it means "go before the 15th" or "go on the 15th", the meaning is unclear)

2. Amidst the noisy gongs and drums, this famous old school finally ushered in its new life. (The meaning is unclear whether it is "new classmates" or "new life")

3. In this election of village committee directors, none of them interfered with Wilde's rights.

("无" has the properties of both adverb and verb, resulting in unclear semantics)

4. People in the CIS countries looked down upon the 2002 World Cup. (The meaning is unclear whether it means "cannot see" or "look down on")

5. He secretly deposited the money into two banks behind the back of the general manager and deputy general manager. ("和" has the nature of a preposition and a conjunction, resulting in unclear semantics)

6. The Ministry of Education issued a notice on the scope of the national unified examination for admissions to general colleges and universities, pointing out that there are no requirements for the teaching content of junior high schools in physics. (It is unclear whether it is "the entire junior high school teaching content" or "a part of it")

16. Words such as make, let, order, be, and be appear, which may mean that the subject is incomplete and the subject is incomplete. Object reversal and improper word order

1. After repeated explanations by the old director, his anger gradually subsided, and finally a smile appeared on his face. (The subject is incomplete, so the subject of the verb is "old director", so "pass" should be removed, or "make" should be removed, and "cai" should be moved after "he")

2. At the beginning of this year, the United States and Britain assembled a formidable military force, which once clouded the Gulf region. (The subject and object are reversed. "Deterrence" itself means "to frighten" others. The use of the word "order" creates a reversal of subject and object. It should be changed to "shock")

3. In order to strive for high speed, we must pay close attention to the modernization of science and technology, put it at the forefront of production and construction, and use advanced science and technology to advance the national economy. (The word order is inappropriate, it should be "use science and technology", "improve the national economy" and "improve")

4. Unlike writers, photographers do not pour their feelings about mountains, rivers, vegetation, cities, and countryside into their pens, but focus directly on the lens. (The word order is inappropriate, "无" should be moved before "Bar")

5. Our great motherland is no longer a country that is divided and ravaged and plundered at will. (The word order is inappropriate, "any" should be moved after "by someone")