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Theme: Strive hard.

What you wrote:

What we have achieved must come from our struggle.

Xueba wrote:

People are taller than mountains if they don't bow their heads. All the achievements can't be achieved easily by beating gongs and drums, but we need the concerted efforts of Qi Xin. Through Qianshan, we will strengthen our ambition, backbone and confidence, advance despite difficulties and face them, and we will certainly open up a new world of career development.

People's Daily teaches you to write articles.

Theme: Strive hard.

What you wrote:

The more you face difficulties and hardships, the more you need to work hard, the more you face risk challenges, and the more you need to work hard.

Xueba wrote:

"It is difficult for a lonely walker to stand up, while many walkers are easy to move." As long as we blow the same horn, move in the same direction, be "careerists who never fall into the blue sky" and "fighters who wait for no time", hold the oars of struggle and hold high the sails of struggle, we will surely turn the blueprint into reality, turn "thinking" into "success" and continue to make progress in China with your strength.

People's Daily teaches you to write articles.

Theme: Endeavour.

What you wrote:

Time waits for no one, work hard and forge ahead.

Xueba wrote:

In the long March of time, we have passed Ganzhong Mountain and Wandao River, but we dare not be complacent. Looking ahead, there are calm and stormy waves; There are rivers running and clouds flying. In the long March of time, we still need to cross major roads and rocks, but we are full of unparalleled confidence. Have a goal in your heart, a direction under your feet, a long mountain and a wide water, and go through fire and water without changing your mind.

People's Daily teaches you to write articles.

Theme: Life is a hero.

What you wrote:

Why is life always tangled, just because I haven't read Dongpo's words!

Xueba wrote:

He hunted freely in Michigan-"I talked about being a teenager, with yellow on the left and pale on the right, wearing mink and fur hat and riding a horse to roll up Hiraoka." He sighed with nostalgia-"Think back to Gong Jin, when Joe got married for the first time, he was a hero. A white figure held his head high with a feather fan in his hand, talking and laughing, and burned the enemy warship to ashes. He missed his brother and sighed, "I hope people will live together for a long time. "