Facts speak louder than words. Look at the picture and write a short passage.

People celebrate Earth Day in different ways. In the picture 1, a man is trying in vain to erect a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, while in the picture 2, a couple are happily planting trees.

The message here is clear: "Actions speak louder than words." Our earth is suffering serious damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate action should be taken, such as stopping cutting down trees, to improve the environment.

Action is also important in other fields. It is more meaningful to donate books and sporting goods to children in need than to shout empty slogans. We should strictly and consciously obey the traffic rules and stop at the red light instead of complaining about traffic jams. Only when our words and deeds are consistent can we make a difference in anything we want to accomplish.

This article is a composition with pictures, giving the title, pictures and content requirements, and asking to write an argumentative essay. The main content is to ask people to talk less and do more practical things. Actions are more practical than slogans. The content is close to students' life, and students have something to write. Moreover, students are familiar with this type of composition, so the text structure is not a problem for them.

Writing score 1. Caption: In the first picture, there is a tree surrounded by stumps. A person wants to hang a slogan on this tree, but he can't; In the second picture, a couple are planting trees. The reason for the two methods in the article is that our earth has been destroyed, and we should take action to protect it instead of shouting slogans there. 3. The enlightenment of the two pictures: do more practical things and talk less, give an example.

The highlight of this example is prominent in the center, complete in key points and clear in structure. Many advanced words, sentence structures and cohesive devices are used. Their application not only clearly describes the main points, but also realizes the diversity of expression and makes writing smooth.

Advanced vocabulary: celebrate, in vain, convey, suffer serious damage, pay lip service, take practical measures, affirm, praise, be strict and voluntary, make a difference, and adopt empty slogans.

Sentence structure: 1. In the picture 1, a man is trying in vain to erect a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, while in the picture 2, a couple are happily planting trees. (adverbial clause)

The message here is clear: "Actions speak louder than words."

3. Should we just talk about it or take practical measures to protect it? (general questions)

We should take immediate action, such as stopping cutting down trees to improve the environment. (passive voice)

It is more meaningful to donate books and sporting goods to children in need than to shout empty slogans. It is difficult to do sth. )

6. We should strictly and consciously obey the traffic rules and stop at the red light instead of complaining about the traffic jam. (The present participle is used as an adverbial)

7. Only when our words and deeds are consistent can we make a difference in anything we want to abide by. (inverted sentence)