How to write a personal statement

Describe the train of thought: introduce yourself first, then write your own honor and personal specialty, and finally write your own feelings about the school and your own guarantee. Specifically:

Hello! My name is XXX, and I am an excellent student in Class XX of XX Middle School. I apply for the qualification of your independent entrance examination. Tsinghua University is a famous institution of higher learning, and it is my yearning knowledge palace. My parents took me to Beijing in junior high school, and we went to Tsinghua campus. My parents introduced me to the history, celebrities and achievements of Tsinghua, and I decided to apply for Tsinghua in the future.

I have excellent grades and comprehensive quality. I was among the best in every important exam in senior high school. Senior one didn't win the first prize of Wantuo Experimental Scholarship, and the academic level test was A except for chemical operation skills. My major in mathematics and physics is outstanding, and many exams are the first in my grade. I won the second prize of "Hope Cup" in the first year of senior high school, the third prize of the rematch in the second year of senior high school and the first prize of "Hope Cup" in the second year of senior high school.

I have the potential for innovation. I like to think about problems from multiple angles and directions, and I like to solve math and physics problems in different ways. Sometimes my method is simpler than the reference answer. I observed and summarized the changing law of people flow in school canteens and bathhouses with time, and obtained the best action time for eating and bathing in school.

Wide range of interests and hobbies, strong self-learning ability. I haven't taken any extracurricular classes since junior high school. I like reading novels and essays in my spare time. I have borrowed most of the books I am interested in from the school library, and I buy Readers and Youth Digest almost regularly. I whistle and imitate pop songs.

High school for three years, adhere to the campus, self-care ability. I clean my dirty clothes and shoes by myself. I never bring them home to burden my parents on weekends. I tidy up my desk and bookcase and clean my room with my parents in my spare time on weekends. I love life. A serious illness in grade two made me deeply feel the importance of good health. During my school days, I took part in morning exercises every day without interruption. I live on 12 floor, with more than 200 stairs. In order to exercise the strength of my right leg, I insisted on taking the stairs home.

I am enthusiastic about public welfare undertakings, actively participate in volunteer activities organized by the school, go to nursing homes to chat with lonely old people, clean up and clean up the garbage in the community. There is an English couple living downstairs in my house. When they first arrived in China, they found it difficult to communicate in Chinese and their lives were inconvenient. On Friday night of the first semester of senior one, I taught them simple Chinese and translated community notices for them. After half a year, their ability to communicate in Chinese improved obviously, and we became good friends.

I was born in a small town in central Hunan, and my parents' hometown is in the countryside. I witnessed the process of changing their destiny with knowledge, and came to Shanghai six years ago through the introduction of talents. Shanghai is very prosperous, but there are still many underdeveloped places in China. Every time I go back to my hometown with my parents, the poverty and backwardness in the countryside affect my heart. I am determined to become a successful person by studying hard, not only for the happiness of myself and my family, but also for the happiness of millions of people in Qian Qian.

I admire Tsinghua's motto of "striving for self-improvement, respecting morality and carrying things", like Tsinghua's "rigorous, diligent, realistic and innovative" style of study, and I am eager to be taught by the famous teacher Tsinghua. As a science student, I love mathematics and physics, and my achievements in mathematics and physics are also outstanding. I have strong logical thinking and reasoning ability. I dream of entering the electronics major in Tsinghua for further study. I believe my dream will come true through my own efforts!