Composition guidance course for the fourth grade of primary school

The first part of the fourth grade composition courseware: the teaching plan of the fourth grade composition guidance course in primary school

First, the teaching objectives

1 Through guidance, practice and comments, students can master the writing method of grasping the characteristics of characters and showing people by things, and stimulate their sense of success in practice.

By recalling, describing and praising his excellent qualities, let him know how to appreciate his father and feel his affection.

Second, teaching preparation

Composition paper, crayons and courseware

Third, the teaching process

1) loudly praise: classmates, who can tell the truth to the teacher? Who do you love most at home?

Mother is the kindest and gentlest relative who gave birth to me and raised me. Her selfless love for us may still be visible and tangible. However, according to the report of scientific research, in a family, the father's image and personality have a far-reaching impact on the child's life. So, I think, today, with the theme of "Dad is real-",we will go into the world of Dad and give a spiritual gift for the upcoming Father's Day.

The teacher first makes a psychological survey: those who think that dad is a good dad raise their hands; Dad makes you raise your hand proudly; The teacher took the lead in praising his father; (Slide) Who dares to praise Dad loudly? (Really-get to the point with Dad)

2) Fan Wen leads the way: praise your father. You can't shout slogans in vain. You should grasp the place that impresses you most, that is, the characteristics of the characters. (blackboard writing) The meeting is well-founded and solid. How to grasp the characteristics of characters? Read this composition first (the teacher recites, and the students think: What kind of person is dad? Where are the characteristics of dad written? (point out the characteristics) (praise the teacher)

Learn to appreciate: it can be seen that if a character wants to leave a profound influence on people, he must grasp the characteristics of this character in appearance and personality. What's your dad's image? Somebody say something. What's your father like? Can you describe your father in the following sentences? -Sentence pattern practice (choose one)

Affectionate memory: transition: Just now, we grasped the characteristics of the characters and said, Dad, your composition has been half successful. However, the expression of a character's personality characteristics is not a few concise descriptions such as appearance, but a person can only show it through real and concrete things, which is called-showing people with things. (Writing on the blackboard) Especially when this matter is critical, it is particularly important to describe dad's language, movements and demeanor. Let us deeply remember our father, a proud father. Draw it in the form of a stick figure, and say dad in your heart while drawing. Teacher Mai can get extra points for teaching a good composition.

The expression of true feelings: students say things and teachers comment. (Projection display result)

Pen-loving tip: students practice calligraphy, teacher award.

Summary: Students, on the road of our growth, my mother gave us meticulous love in the image of a gentle woman. This kind of selfless love is like a trickle, which warms our hearts and is branded in our hearts. However, the father's role in the social family is under heavy psychological pressure, and his love for his children is often more serious and profound. Let's pay more attention to observing and studying our father in our life and learn more from our father and other relatives. This is a lifelong lesson given to us by the teacher after these two classes.

The second part of the composition courseware for the fourth grade: the whole composition guidance for the first volume of the fourth grade.

Exercise goal:

This composition training is to record a scene, with the purpose of training observation ability and writing expression ability. It is required to select a scene for orderly and careful observation, and then write down the most detailed and impressive places in a certain order.

Train the ability to observe things, learn to grasp the characteristics of things and write clearly in a certain order. Through multi-channel search, we can understand and introduce the beautiful natural landscape, so that students can feel and love beauty from it and learn to capture beauty! Find and discover the beautiful natural landscape around you, express it in your own language and share your exercises.

Teaching process:

First, review the text writing methods

Looking back at each text in this group, it is like a magnificent picture scroll, but we feel that nature is so wonderful. It has been said that there is no shortage of beauty in the world, what is lacking is the eyes that find beauty. In this lesson, let's find the beautiful scenery around us and record it. Beauty is around us, which requires us to have a pair of eyes that are good at finding beauty and observing.

Learn and exchange the writing methods of watching tide, burning clouds, bird paradise and burning clouds.

Second, group communication.

1. What natural landscapes have you seen? Recall the beautiful scenery you have seen, communicate in groups, and then the teacher will name them.

2. Communicate with the whole class. Instruct students to speak orderly and express clearly.

Third, guide the practice

1. After learning this set of texts and listening to the introduction of students, we know that beauty is around us. Today, let's write down the beautiful scenery we found.

2. Search your memory. Which natural landscape impressed you deeply?

3. What impressed you most about this landscape? What are you going to write? Students think and recall.

4. Scenery refers to the scenery and things that can be appreciated, that is, the landscapes, flowers, trees, buildings and some natural phenomena in a certain area, such as wind, thunder, rain and snow. Description of scenery is an important part of narration. The ultimate goal of scenery writing is to express the theme of characters and articles. To write a good landscape, we should first pay attention to observation and have a clear and specific understanding of the landscape we have written. In the specific description, we should pay attention to the following aspects:

(1) Pay attention to the seasonality and local characteristics of the landscape. All the year round, spring, summer, autumn and winter; Within a day, day and night, morning and evening; The scenery is different in different seasons and at different times. Different places have different scenery. We are observing and describing the scenery.

We should pay attention to the characteristics of these two aspects.

(2) Pay attention to the static, dynamic, color, size and quantity description of the scenery. Static description refers to the static description of the scene, while dynamic description refers to the description of the motion state of the scene. Writing the color of the scene is a description of the color.

(3) Pay attention to the foothold and order of scenery description. People's positions and angles are different, and writing the same scenery will be very different. Therefore, to observe and describe the scenery, we must first choose a good foothold.

First of all, write the scenery in a certain order and observe it carefully and emphatically. It can be from far to near, from top to bottom, from left to right, from front to back; It can also be the whole first and then the part; You can also write in chronological order of the scenes. The scope of "one place" cannot be too large. You can write a corner of the park, a scene of the campus, a small courtyard in front of the door, a fountain in the park, a small flower bed on the campus, a rockery and so on.

(4) Pay attention to association and imagination, write out your feelings and express your feelings with scenery, so that the article can be written vividly and interestingly.

Fourth, students' homework and teachers' patrol guidance.

5. After writing, students communicate with each other in groups, learn from each other, put forward suggestions for revision and revise their own exercises.

Example:

Donghu mei

East Lake is a famous scenic spot, very beautiful!

One day, we went to East Lake to play. When we walked into the gate, we saw the vast lake shining in the sun. The water surface of the East Lake is like a mirror, so clear that you can see the bottom of the lake and so green as a piece of jade. Yachts occasionally stir up waves and scatter beautiful water patterns.

We took a yacht and crossed the middle of the lake to Moshan. The students swarmed up to the top of the mill. Climbing to the top of the mountain and looking up, a pavilion stood in front of us. This pavilion is about three stories high, with a conical top. The corner of the pavilion on each floor is tilted upward like eight sharp teeth. On the horizontal plaque on the top floor, there are three dragon and phoenix characters "Zhubei Pavilion".

We walked into the "Zhubei Pavilion" and saw four red pillars surrounded by stairs in the middle. We climbed the stairs to the top floor, looked around and had a panoramic view of the East Lake. Looking north, there is no edge in the wide lake; The airship on the lake, like a shuttle, left a silver ribbon; Looking south, rows of tall buildings are neatly arranged. The whole Moshan is lush and beautiful.

We reluctantly walked out of the "Zhubei Pavilion". There is a scarlet boulder in front of the pavilion, engraved with the inscription of Grandpa Zhu De: "East Lake will make West Lake beautiful for the time being, and East Lake must be better than West Lake". I think Grandpa Zhu is right. The natural scenery of East Lake will soon be

More attractive.

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The author of this paper grasps the characteristics of East Lake to observe and describe it. When describing water, he grasped the characteristics of "flat and green" of the lake; When describing the mountains, I grasped the characteristics of "Zhubei Pavilion". It's really connected by mountains and rivers, and the scenery is pleasant and beautiful. When describing the scenery, we also grasp the combination of static and dynamic. When describing the lake, it not only describes the static state of the lake: "as flat as a mirror"; It also captures dynamic descriptions: "yacht stirs waves" and "beautiful water patterns". When describing the scenery of Moshan Mountain, it not only describes the static scenery of Zhubei Pavilion, but also describes the dynamic scenery of airship tourists. The combination of dynamic and static is everywhere, which makes people feel immersive.

Our campus

Our campus is beautiful and tidy.

The teaching building is a sky-blue three-story building. Its shape is very beautiful, like a concave word, and the concave place is the classroom. Every classroom is spacious and bright. There are four rows of desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two blackboards, the front is the teacher's platform. The layout of each classroom is different. Each has its own characteristics. Some classrooms have beautiful pictures hanging on the walls, some classrooms have study gardens, and some classrooms have colorful patterns and rich articles written on the blackboard behind them. The protruding places on both sides of the teaching building are places for teachers to rest and work, as well as conference rooms, laboratories and reading rooms.

There are four flower beds in front of the teaching building. There are magnolia trees, peach trees, willows, poplars and so on in the two flower beds next to them. I like that tall and beautiful willow tree best. Spring breeze blows, wicker flutters with the wind, as if groups of fairies dressed in green are dancing. It's really beautiful.

The two flower beds in the middle are rhombic. There are clusters of lovely flowers in the flower bed. There are winter jasmine, azalea, camellia, rose and so on. I admire those Chinese rose flowers most, which are red, light red, bright red and pink, with different colors, some half-opened, some full-opened, and different shapes. In spring, a strong fragrance of flowers attracts many bees to buzz around the flowers.

There is a playground in front of the flower bed. Inside the playground is a lawn, like a green blanket. There stands a tall flagpole in the middle. A five-star red flag rises from the top of the flagpole and flutters in the air with the wind. There is a slide in the easternmost part, and all the junior children like to play. There are two bunkers next to the slide, which are used by students for long jump. There are two basketball stands in the north-south direction. When the weather is cold, the students all take the ball to shoot. Around the playground is an oval concrete runway about 200 meters long.

How happy we are to study in such a beautiful campus!

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This composition is well chosen, grasping the most representative "teaching building", "flower bed" and "playground" which can best reflect the characteristics of the school, and showing the beauty of the school. The author has clear thinking, clear organization and detailed content, which left an unforgettable impression on readers after reading it.

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What attracted you most when you walked into the gate of Pinghu Children's Palace? Happy electronic amusement park? A quiet library? No, no, it should be that beautiful fountain!

Around the fountain, there is an oval white cement railing. In the center of the pool stands a lifelike statue. Look, a big carp, with its tail fin up and its chest up. Fish scales sparkle in the sun, like sparkling pearls!

A little boy was carrying a big carp, pursed his ass and tugged at its pectoral fins. Looking at his attentive expression, I seem to hear him sing "yo-yo"! On the left, there is a naive little girl. She stood on tiptoe, tugging at the dorsal fin of the carp with one hand and waving to everyone with the other, as if to say, "This big carp is really heavy, please come and save us!"

The statue sits on a reddish-brown base with white spots. The unfolded hexagon is like a lotus flower. At the lower end of the base, it seems to be a hexahedral pagoda, rooted in the center of the clear pool water. Looking at it, I seem to see a few naughty little goldfish jumping out of the water in a small pool and making several big ripples for the pool water.

In the mouth of a round carp, six streams of water spray into the air. When it is scattered, it hangs down like a big bead curtain, and it is like a festival fireworks. The water splashed on the little boy's head, so sweet and melodious, much like the sound of "ringing a bell": "Ding Dong Ding Dong". The water sprinkled in the small pool is crisp and beautiful, much like a musician playing a sonata of Ding Dong in Spring! Water, sprinkled on the girl's head, makes the little girl look more lovely; The water spilled on the big carp, and the big carp seemed to jump happily?

I looked at the jet of clear water column, as if the water splashed on my body and got into my neck, and suddenly I felt so cool and refreshing, which made people feel particularly relaxed and comfortable. The misty mist reflects colorful rainbows in the sun, adding unparalleled magic color to the fountain!

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This is a masterpiece describing a scene. According to spatial order, the author gave a vivid description of the fountain from outside to inside and from top to bottom. Therefore, the article is clear and gives readers a three-dimensional sense.

The article firmly grasps the description of fountain characteristics. Moreover, when describing scenery, imagination and association have been fully developed. The article is tangible, color and sound; Describe the combination of static, dynamic and static, and the combination of static and dynamic is clever; Scenes blend, and a group of statues in the pool are vividly written and interesting.

Rain scene

On Saturday afternoon, the sky was overcast and there was no sun in sight. Suddenly the wind blew.

The wind blew the leaves flying all over the sky. After a while, it was getting darker and darker. Suddenly, a light flashed across the ground from the depths of the dark sky, and there was a "bang" thunder, which also stung my ears. Then, the sky flashed and thundered, and then it rained cats and dogs. The rain fell to the ground, splashing, and the spray jumped high like beads and fell to the ground. Suddenly, the rain washed the ground clean like a cleaner. It kept raining, and after a long time, it gradually became smaller, as if someone had fallen from the sky and scattered pink beads all over the world.

When the rain stopped, Grandpa Sun smiled again. Seven-color rainbows appeared in the blue sky, like a beautiful ribbon and a colorful bridge, spanning the sky and hanging high.

The scenery after the rain makes the beautiful and clean Guangzhou city more charming.

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The little author wrote the scene before and after the rain in just over 200 words. It is mainly because the little author usually pays attention to carefully observing the changes of the scenery before, during and after the rain, in order to write such a short and pithy article.

fog

Early in the morning, I don't know when it started, and the fog like smoke curling from kitchen stoves and fluttering green gauze rose, getting thicker and thicker, covering the whole world, which seemed a bit ethereal. People around here seem to be able to do tricks. In an instant, they disappeared into the vast fog and became small black spots. You will feel that you are sandwiched between them and there is a tangible and intangible wall. The tall buildings in the distance only show the roof, which is really a mirage!

Fog, like a naughty little doll, secretly hides the light of the sun like a sword. The magic weapon of the sun was stolen, and people saw its true face clearly, blushing with shame and hiding in the dense fog.

The fog drifted everywhere, as if tired of playing, and gradually faded away. This time, the sun became proud again. It shed thousands of golden and silver rays on the earth. The earth lost its "ethereal" and "mirage" and became very bright and happy. The whole world is quarrelling again.

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The little author of this paper takes fog as the main body and describes it in the broad background of the world. It is difficult to describe fog, such as frontal description. The author grasps the relationship between fog and other things, and compares the characteristics of fog with the movement changes of other things. Such as people, buildings, the sun, etc. All the articles are related to fog, and its movement changes reflect that fog is "like drinking cigarettes", "like green gauze" and "ethereal", which is more vivid and vivid. It can be seen that the little author has a rich imagination and pays great attention to observing things at ordinary times.

The third part of the fourth grade composition courseware: composition guidance in the second volume of the fourth grade

1, write about campus scenery, events and things.

2. Write the truth in the process of growing up

3. Write down your observations and discoveries about nature

4. Look at the pictures and write your imagination (orphans in ruins, crying in war)

5. Write about people and things that love life.

6. Write about country life and your own feelings.

7. Write about someone you admire.

8. Free expression

A beautiful passage:

I came to the playground in spring. The grass on the playground sticks its head out and breathes fresh air. Poplar trees have sprouted on the playground, showing great vitality. The weeping willows next to the poplar trees pull out new branches, and the breeze blows, swaying as if doing radio exercises; I don't know where it came from on the thin wicker. Looking at it, it seems to be green. Their waist is so soft, and the breeze holds up the lower tip, neat and beautiful; Looking at it from another angle, it hangs down together like combed hair. I can't help reciting He's "Singing Willow" poetically: Jasper is dressed as a tree, and thousands of strands of green silk hang down. I don't know who cut the thin leaves, but the spring breeze in February is like scissors.

I came to the garden in the northeast corner of the campus. Ah, how beautiful! There are camellia, Chinese rose, a bunch of red and bauhinia? Colorful, competing to open. Look, how well the peach blossoms are blooming in the west! Pink. Pink. It consists of five petals, and the yellow stamens are embedded in the pink flowers, which is very conspicuous. The pink flower hides under the green leaves, like a shy little girl. The breeze blows slowly, the peach trees in the north sway gently, and bees and butterflies fly around the peach trees, from one flower to another. Everyone loves the scenery. Ah, what's that smell? With a faint fragrance, I came to a small tree with purple flowers. They say it's called bauhinia. Bauhinia is small, dense and lovely. That flower is a string, blooming on the branches, like pearls. The most special thing is that bauhinia blooms first and then leaves. Do you think this is strange? In the east, there is an unknown flower, which is also a bunch of flowers, but it is red. I was told to pull out the stamens and suck the juice inside. Very sweet. Some camellias are open and red, like the morning glow in the sky; Some are in bud, and the flowers are splitting. The whole garden is like a brocade woven by a fairy.

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Campus spring scenery (1 unit)

Our campus is located in the "Chair Mountain" valley surrounded by mountains and rivers, which is very hidden. Stepping into the campus, you can see a teaching building, sitting safely on the green "sofa" like a giant, very quiet.

Our campus is not very big, but there are flowers and trees everywhere. Against the backdrop of mountains, there are charming scenery all year round: spring, pink and green; In summer, flowers and plants flourish; In autumn, chrysanthemums are fragrant; In winter, pine trees are green and white. But what I like best is the spring scenery on campus.

Miss Chun walked into the campus quietly, gently and silently, and the campus was full of vitality. "Wildfire didn't consume them, but they grew taller in the spring breeze." The grass also broke ground and laid a green carpet on the campus. Look carefully, they are tender and furry, very gratifying! The bare trees have also sprouted new branches and buds. That bud, like a green pearl, is bright and dazzling. Willow hangs down its silky wicker and gently shakes it in the spring breeze, as if waving to people. Several Chun Yan flies freely over the campus, and a group of birds chirp among the trees, as if to say, "Spring is coming! Spring is coming! " In the flower bed, all kinds of flowers compete to open, bright red, delicate white and tender yellow, forming a colorful picture scroll, emitting bursts of fragrance. In the shade, earthworms loosen the soil day and night, and ants crawl around looking for new nests. Flowers, trees, birds and insects are bathed in the warmth of the sun's father-in-law and enjoy this beautiful spring.

The campus full of spring has created a beautiful learning environment for us. Hard-working gardeners-teachers are preparing lessons carefully and feeding us these flowers with hard work and sweat. The students are seizing this precious time to study hard. Some students concentrate on listening to the teacher; Some concentrate on writing; Some students stood by the window, staring at the sky, dreaming of the beautiful sunrise; Some are reading aloud, and the campus is full of reading sounds. During the break, the students enjoy the vibrant spring scenery in the garden, and use the beautiful spring scenery to carry out various activities, such as high jump, long jump, football and table tennis? The breath of spring is so fresh that students are intoxicated by this spring.

Ah! Spring brings vitality to the campus, brings us joy and creates a beautiful learning environment. We should seize this beautiful spring, study hard and make ourselves a pillar of talent?

Campus scenery (1 unit)

Spring girl came to us quietly, the ice and snow melted, everything revived, and green grass, green leaves and various colorful flowers formed a vibrant spring scenery for the campus.

On the campus lawn, you can see the green grass sticking out of the soil and looking at us happily, as if to say, "Dear classmates, we meet again!" " The round mushrooms watered by the spring rain also showed smiling faces.

On both sides of the main road of the campus, poplars stood there motionless, like a sentry on guard. Zhishishang

A round new leaf has grown, which looks like a small green peach from a distance. Those beautiful and bright flowers bloom together, which makes people feel particularly comfortable.

Whenever the class is over, the sweet bell comes, the students "fly" out of the classroom like birds, and the campus is suddenly full of joy. The table tennis table is surrounded by people, cheering and jumping for joy, which makes the campus full of vitality and joy.

Beautiful spring, beautiful campus, what a beautiful picture.

Miss Chun arrives at the campus (unit 1)

Spring girl quietly came to the campus with light steps, seeing off her old winter mother-in-law, adding infinite vitality to the campus.

As soon as I entered the school gate, a faint fragrance came to my face. It turns out that the roses in the big flower bed made us intoxicated slowly. Come closer, it shows a pink face, and then look aside. A few slender and unknown yellow flowers seem to be more beautiful than anyone else. On the edge of the big flower bed, a circle of serrated small trees surrounded the flower bed, protecting the flowers like guards. In the middle of the flower bed, the grass "wildfire didn't devour them, but they grew taller in the spring breeze" can't wait to break through the ground and paint Yuan Ye green.

I took a few steps forward and went down to the basketball court. Next to the flag-raising platform, several mighty cypress trees stand upright and have great momentum. A closer look shows that its leaves are like caterpillars, and there are thin thorns on its branches. When a gust of wind blew, they danced like disco.

Standing on the flag-raising platform and looking down, there is a towering tree on the playground, probably much bigger than me! Miss Chun left the tree's clothes in emerald green. Although Grandpa Tree's body is uneven, there are lovely birds nesting on it. Singing to grandpa Lao Shu every day, even teacher Chun laughed!

Since teacher Chun came, the campus has taken on a new look. Miss Chun, you really know how to do magic!

Campus in Spring (1 unit)

The south campus in spring is really beautiful.

Walking on the wide playground. There are lively figures and children's cheerful laughter everywhere. Everyone is like a bird out of the cage. You chase after me and play the game incisively and vividly.

Looking around the playground, the neat street trees are extremely lush in spring, and the green is particularly dazzling. A spring breeze blows, and the fresh green seems to be nodding like a human being, as if to tell everyone, "A year's plan lies in spring, don't lose this infinite spring."

The old teaching building in front of the playground looks like a weather-beaten old man, radiant in the bright sunshine. Go through the gate of the high-rise building and enter the teaching building, where there are more than 30 classes, various laboratories and guidance offices. As soon as the class begins, the teacher's cadence explanation and the students' reading sound will come out in the classroom. After school, it's quiet here, except for the lights in the teacher's office. There are banners everywhere in the corridor, like talking teachers, reminding us to be civilized students and study hard at all times.

Coming out of the teaching building, you will notice that there are six big blackboards embedded in front of you, learning from Lei Feng, welcoming the Olympics, planting trees and loving trees. The breath of March paved the way. These are the blackboard newspapers that we copied after school.

After enjoying the blackboard newspaper, turn around and you will find two flower beds under your feet. Although the flowers are not in bloom yet, if you come near, you will find that the brand-new leaves are light green. You seem to have just opened your eyes and looked curiously at all the teachers and classmates on campus. I think, if there is a spring rain, the flower beds will be colorful and fragrant.

This is the campus in spring. In this campus, I will live up to this beautiful spring, study hard and be the pillar of the motherland in the future.

Campus Spring (1 unit)

What will the campus look like when spring comes? Let's go and have a look!

The big trees on both sides of the playground quietly send out green lobular seedlings. The most striking thing is that big poplar tree, which is the tallest tree on campus! Every spring when it grows leaves, the branches are covered with clusters of white flocs like cotton, which is very fun! Some students put white tidbits in a box, probably because they want to do something.

Birds in the tree are also flying in the air, twittering as if to tell people that "spring is coming, spring is coming!" " "The grass that slept next to the roots for a winter has emerged from the ground and is scrambling to grow. It seems that I'm afraid I won't get the first prize! The flowers in the flower bed have grown green leaves after the drizzle, emitting a faint fragrance. These flowers and trees look like a colorful carpet from a distance, adding a little green to the campus.

In front of the big tree is a colorful Olympic wall with the heads and photos of Jingjing, Beibei, Yingying, Nini and Huanhuan, among which I like Yingying the gazelle best! Because it represents a beautiful blessing. Some athletes are also introduced on the Olympic wall!

Spring on campus is really beautiful! Those flowers and trees add vitality to the campus. As long as you carefully observe the campus in spring, you will find interesting things. Let's welcome the beautiful spring!

Talking to Mom and Dad (Unit 2)

Dear mom and dad, hello! Mom and dad, you raised me with great pains. When I was growing up, I made you happy and made you sad. I have a lot to tell you from my heart.

I am an obedient child. Every time you are not at home, I consciously do my own thing. I remember one time, my father changed shifts with others and didn't come back, and my mother worked overtime. You haven't come back after I finished my homework at home alone. I am really hungry. After I cooked my own meal, I ate my first white rice without vegetables, and then went to bed according to my usual rest time. Give me a compliment when you get home. I was in high spirits and didn't sleep for a long time.

You have taught me to sweep the floor and wash dishes since I was seven years old. Now I have done a lot of housework, shared housework and lightened the burden for you. You made me a girl that everyone praised. I sincerely thank you for your love: "thank you, my good father and mother!" " "

However, I recently found out that you don't allow me to make friends with some of my favorite classmates, saying that you are afraid that I will catch some bad habits. I don't understand. I have the ability to tell good from bad. I have my own opinion. Do you have any relatives, friends and colleagues? And why can't I have my own sky? Can I grow up in your garden forever? I hope everyone will give me more freedom, more understanding and support!

Dad, mom, I will be a good boy, I hope you are happy!

Teacher, I want to tell you ... (Unit 2)

Teacher Zhang, in my eyes, you are an amiable, knowledgeable and persuasive teacher.

At the beginning of school, I saw Mr. Zhang leading us to clean up and take us to report. I know Mr. Zhang will continue to take us. I am very happy!

I remember when I was in the second grade, my Fuyuan Lane Primary School was going to be demolished, so I had no choice but to transfer to Tongpu Street Primary School. Because some students are far from home, it is not safe to cross a big road on their way to school, so Teacher Zhang told us, "Be careful when crossing the road." After listening to this, the students all realized Mr. Zhang's deep love for us.