Requirements for modifying sick sentences

1. Requirements for modifying sick sentences:

(1) Find out the reason.

Before modifying a sick sentence, we must first find out the problem of the sentence, so in the face of a sick sentence, we should read it carefully several times and make further analysis. Only by determining the cause can we prescribe the right medicine.

(2) as few modifications as possible

When modifying sick sentences, we should use the method of "adding, deleting, adjusting and correcting" to make the changes as small as possible.

(3) The original intention must be retained.

When modifying a sick sentence, no matter what method is used, the expression form of the modified sentence can be slightly different, but the meaning of the sentence cannot be changed at all.

2. The identification method of sick sentences:

(1) Read the sentence and make clear the error type.

(2) Find out the trunk, subject, predicate and object of the sentence to see if it is incomplete and collocated properly.

(3) Make clear whether branches and leaves, attributives, adverbials and complements are appropriate.

(4) Appreciate the context and see whether the word order of the sentence is reasonable and contradictory.

(5) To understand the relationship, the complex sentence depends on whether the collocation of related words is appropriate.

(6) It is a fundamental principle not to change the original intention as much as possible, but to modify it on the basis of the original intention.

3. Several ill sentences that must be paid attention to:

1. "Yes" and "Yes" should be careful, whether before and after are the same thing. Avoid, prevent, avoid, imitate and see if there is anything wrong.

Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season. ("Beijing" is a "season", which is not properly matched. It should be changed to Autumn in Beijing)

There are three taboos in sleeping: first, don't get angry before going to bed; second, don't lie in the wind; third, don't eat too much. (The contradiction between "three taboos" and "taboos" in later generations)

2. Pay attention to the multiple of the score and reduce the multiple that cannot be used; When collocating prepositions, you should think clearly about the meaning.

(1) This year, the output increased by 50%, and the cost was nearly tripled. ("Minus twice" doesn't work)

(2) After technological innovation, the cost of material factory doubled, while the output value increased by 10%.

3. "Whether", "whether", "good or bad", "good or bad" and "success or failure" include two aspects. If you can't respond, you will make a mistake. Double negation means affirmation, and more than one negation.

Will is the key to success. (The word "whether" should be added before "success")

② With the alternation of the old and new systems, there will be no management loopholes. (There is one more "no", which means the opposite)

4. Accustomed to misusing words:

"The purpose is to repeat the meaning of" mainly "..."

The purpose of the US military attack on Iraq is to destroy its weapons of mass destruction. ("Purpose" and "for" are repeated)

② The applicants for the design of the emblem and mascot of this National Games are mostly young teachers and students in colleges and universities. ("mainly ..." means "most", which is a repetition)

"About ... about ... about ... about ... about ...