Write a narrative with the title "Calling for Responsibility"

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A mother's call rippled with love; A call from a friend opened a closed heart. The earth calls us to be alert, and the times call us to move forward. Calling is a reminder, a concern and a guide. Call comes from thinking, call comes from true feelings. Call for responsibility, call for strength, call for the return of swallows, call for childlike innocence ... In life, how many beautiful feelings are condensed into a call, and how many regrets are looking forward to a call. We often feel each other's call, and we have sincerely called. ?

please write an article on the topic of "calling". ?

Requirements: (1) Self-determination of ideas, self-formulation of topics and self-selection of styles (except poetry). (2) Not less than 8 words.

The hints on the topic of writing instruction have clearly explained the scope and content of material selection to us. We just need to choose one of them and conceive the writing. For example, we can take "calling for green" as the topic, and we can write from the front that human beings are making constant efforts to save green; It can also be conceived from the opposite side. In the past, people lived in harmony with nature. Now, only because human beings wantonly cut down forests, nature punishes people with deserts and floods. Seeing the emptiness of human heart and the numbness of society, I call for the green of human mind. With such a conception, a deeper meaning is written. Narrow the extension of the topic, increase the connotation, grasp one point, write deeply and thoroughly, not only to write the phenomenon, but also to reveal its essence. To write an argumentative essay, the examples should be detailed and concrete, so that readers have to send out a heartfelt call.

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Calling for love

Only by giving love can the dying see the rebirth of life; Only by giving a love can children who are out of school have books to read; Only by giving a love, can we feel a little warmth in the cold winter.

I once read a report that a young man in his prime was unfortunately knocked down by a car and fell in a pool of blood. The driver who caused the accident escaped, and soon many people surrounded him, but they just "stayed put" and no one helped. What's more, some people "appreciate" it with great interest and gloat. Finally, the family members came and called for a car, but no car stopped to send people to the hospital. In the end, due to the missed opportunity, the young man finally died because of the untimely rescue. After reading this report, my heart can't be calm for a long time.

The onlookers are so numb. What kind of cruel scene is this? This is such a puzzling behavior! Where is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation, which has lasted for thousands of years and is willing to offer love? Is that no one is willing to give a little love, so that the young man lost his life, not worth it. As long as everyone gives a love, maybe the young man's life is still in this world.

In Hunan Satellite TV, there is a program called "Go Forward". Because of this program, how many out-of-school children have returned to school! How many people gave their love to save poor children. Let people know that there is still love in the world. Every episode of this program uses some stars to challenge difficult projects. If they succeed in the challenge, they can get some money from investors to build a Hope Primary School. They were a little afraid in the face of challenges, but they went forward bravely when they thought of their children. The two hosts on the location are not the stars who are idle. Some stars failed in the challenge, so they relied on their love to complete the task instead of the failed stars. Facing so many challenging projects, facing this horrible project and thinking about children without books, they bravely overcame their fears and won one hope primary school after another. Children's breath, they feel, do their best to give the most sincere love.

This winter is the coldest year in many years. Many people died in the snowstorm in the south. And how many people didn't eat or wear, in this critical situation, the whole country called for people's love. In this cold winter, it brought warmth to the victims. They were warm and we were happy.

People are in need of help all the time. As long as each of us gives a love, there will be fewer poor people in the world and more lives will be reborn.

comments: this article belongs to the medium of the second volume. The examination of the questions is accurate, and the established "call for love" is full of modern significance, suitable for the meaning of the questions, fluent in sentences and substantial in content. The deficiency of this paper is that it is not written according to the parallel structural mode, and the content plate is not clear enough. Score: 16+16+4+36.

The call of love

Senior three (3) Xie Jiayi

The call of love is air, which surrounds us! The call of love is rain and dew, which moistens us! The call of love is sunshine, which warms us!

the call of love touches people's hearts!

A big earthquake turned a cheerful town into a dead city! There are countless lives or souls in thousands of rubble! One soul struggling with death!

An ordinary mother and a lovely child were trapped in the rubble. Originally, they could sit comfortably by the fire. The mother looked after her beloved child and knitted a sweater for her, but ruthless disasters buried them deep in the rubble! Mother for her hungry child, weak, she broke her finger with a knitting needle, blood flowed out, and she fed her child with her own blood! But when the search team found them, the mother passed away, leaving only her deep love for her children! And the crying of the child, as if to call his mother and wake her up with love!

The call of love melts the ice and warms people's hearts!

In p>28, the Spring Festival ushered in a snowstorm that has not happened in 5 years, and everything was blocked by ice and snow! It also cut off the way home for those who are looking forward to going home. The general secretary expressed condolences to the local people at work and greeted the passengers stranded at the station. On the highway, the militia sent clothes and food to people who were blocked on the road! Clear the way for the people who go home to shovel snow!

"Thousands of miles are frozen, Wan Li snows", what a cold weather it is. When everything is frozen, people's hearts are so hot. What makes their love fire burn and make concerted efforts to fight the snowstorm! What melted the ice and snow and warmed the world? It is love, the call of people's love, and their loud call, which makes this cold world become a warm world.

the call of love spreads all over the mountains and keeps people's hearts forever!

There is a song that says, "As long as everyone gives a little love, it will become a beautiful world!"

yes, love is an eternal theme. Just as the call of love spread to every corner of the world.

Cong Fei is a singer with physical disability, but his love is not lost because of his physical disability. He subsidizes countless poor children to study, so that they can also get the opportunity of education and contribute to the country in the future!

Someone said, "Good people are safe all their lives!" But this sentence has no spirit in this kind-hearted and loving good man Cong Fei!

the hateful devil took him away! But when he was critically ill in the hospital, even if he didn't have enough money to treat him, he would let the poor children study!

Although Cong Fei is gone! I didn't leave any brave words before I died!

but I heard his call, that selfless call, that warm call, in every corner of the world, in every inch of land in the mountains! It is so tactfully, but it is so magnificent!

let love go! Let the call be loud! Let the warmth spread all over this land!

Only the call of love can awaken the lost soul!

Only the call of love can make the society develop harmoniously!

Only the call of love can make the world a better place!

let's take action! Let go of love! Warm you, me and him!

Comment: The intention of this article is in line with the meaning of the topic, and it gives a good answer to the question "What to call". Calling for love is in line with today's social reality. The parallel structure mode is adopted, and the content plate is clear and natural. Each part is led by sub-arguments, and the selected examples can prove their own views. The content is more substantial and the language is fluent. The alliteration sentence at the end is quite imposing and appealing. The deficiency lies in: because there is no good reason to clarify the problem, it is quite suspected of adding examples. We must strengthen the training of argumentative reasoning. Score: 19+19+7 = 45

Call for civilization

Anonymous

On campus, I have seen such a very striking slogan: "If things are rude, they will not be born, and the country will be rude and restless." Every time I see this slogan, I have to recite it several times in my heart and ask myself sincerely: "Have I acted with courtesy and been a man with courtesy?" Yes, this is such a good inspirational slogan. She always warns us that civilization is so important. Let's call for civilization together.

it's rude to fail. This is the basic requirement for us to do things. Civilization will do everything smoothly, and it will be difficult to do things without civilization. When you think about it, you will understand that when you do things, you can raise the banner of civilization high, and others will give you three points of courtesy. There is an old saying in China: Politeness travels all over the world. Because you are civilized, you must bring respect to others, and respecting others will inevitably bring respect to you, so that what you do can be said to be successful. Here, civilization is the passport for you to do things, the bridge for you to succeed, the booster for your career success and the lubricant for your brilliant career. Therefore, to act in a civilized way is to win the prosperity of your career with your own cultivation.

people are rude and not born. This is in the same strain as "things are rude and can't be done". When your career is civilized, you will win personal dignity, and your living environment will change greatly, and your living environment will also be greatly improved. Therefore, if people have civilization, the living space will be greatly expanded, and the meaning of life will be well guaranteed. It can be said that civilization is the guarantee of the quality of life, and civilization is the accelerator of the sublimation of the meaning of life. May we all put the word civilization into every step of life development, thus greatly expanding our living space and truly becoming a capitalized "person".

China is rude and restless. Things are developing, and they are universally related. Doing things needs civilization, being a man needs civilization, and so does a country. "Chinese and dogs are not allowed in" is the pain of a nation that has lost its national dignity. Therefore, we should strive for self-improvement and get rid of the label of "the sick man of East Asia" completely. "There is no peace in the country" is something that everyone in China does not want to see. Today, the waking lion of the Chinese nation is welcoming guests from all over the world with a brand-new attitude and embracing this beautiful world. Let the world know about China and let China go to the world. This is the attitude of China today. With this beautiful gesture, we succeeded in bidding for the Olympic Games, our Shenzhou V and Shenzhou VI ascended to heaven, our comprehensive national strength was enhanced, our international influence was enhanced, and the ice on both sides of the Taiwan Strait was broken. The sons and daughters of civilized China have never held their heads so high as today and said loudly, "I am from China!"

in a word, the world without civilization is dark, and only civilization can see the light. Whether it is doing things, being a man, or building a country, the truth is the same. What do you say?

Comments

The established viewpoint of "calling for civilization" is to advocate that we should build a civilized country, a civilized society and a civilized world. In campus, society and other public occasions and families, we must be civilized, polite and polite. Or international communication, or various interpersonal relationships, it is very necessary to create an atmosphere of courtesy. It can be said that this topic is very extensive. When the idea is written, use a slogan, "Things are rude and can't be done, people are rude and not born, and the country is rude and restless." As a sub-argument, it closely revolves around the center of "calling for civilization", fully demonstrates the power of civilization, makes its call more convincing, and adopts the common parallel structure, with clear plates and clear at a glance.