I helped my father correct his drinking problem.

My father's nose is like sorghum, his ears are like jiaozi, and his watery eyes are glib, giving people a refreshing feeling. But he also has one of the biggest shortcomings-he loves to drink and is addicted to alcohol.

Once, we went to visit relatives. My mom asked me and my sister to watch my dad. Unexpectedly, as soon as the wine was served, he opened the lid and filled the middle-aged people present with glasses. He had a few drinks before we talked about him. We reminded him, but he turned a blind eye and continued to drink and laugh. But we feel uneasy because mom told us when she went out on Wednesday-never let your father drink. What should I do now? Let's help dad hide it regardless of the willy-nilly. But dad can't drink too much. What should I do? I used my quick wits and came up with a plan. We told my mother that we were "lenient in confession and strict in resistance". We dragged our father to his house and told her the whole story. Mother said, "Why are you such a disobedient father? Do you know how many people have accidents because of drinking? He just has a short memory. "

When can my father's drinking problem be changed? If this drinking problem can be corrected, mother can save a lot of heart.

Fourth grade of Dahantun Primary School, Wenfeng District, Anyang City, Henan Province: 1430067234

-350 words

Rule number two: Dad, don't drink.

When he came home from school at five o'clock, his father and classmates invited him to a restaurant for dinner. When I left, I said to my father: Dad, stop drinking! . Dad said: I know, but I'd better do my homework with peace of mind. After that, I finished my homework on Saturday and Sunday. My mother let me eat. I said, yes, I know, but I still won't go. My mother told me several times in a row before I went to eat. I said, mom, how about we find a rule today? Mom agreed. Mother sent me a card. I called NNNNNNNNN several times to find it. Today I said: Mom, you can read novels and cross talk. I'll take a look around. Bye. Mom said: Be careful on the road. I'm back. I'm reading children's words for a while, and then I go to bed.

Level 2: 16945

-200 words

Article 3: Dad loves to drink.

My father is 38 years old. Although he is two years younger than middle age, he has a belly that can hold three bottles of old white wine, which I admire very much. Whenever dad hears the word "wine", he will cry. What I admire most is that he drinks for Laura, regardless of the quantity.

Once, my father was almost exposed at a party. Fortunately, my mother and I arrived in time and pulled him back. It was xx's wedding reception. My dad knew, and immediately pulled it over. He was doing it leisurely. After a while, the table was full of people, and people were chatting. A man on Dad's desk said, "Who are you?" Dad smiled and said, "I am a friend of the groom's father." Coincidentally, the groom's father is sitting at that table. He's just silent. Let's go Just as his father was chatting happily with others, the groom's father said, "Who are you? I don't know you. " Dad also said, "I don't know you either." He laughed at once. Said, "I'm the groom's father." At this time, dad was confused. Fortunately, my mother and I arrived in time, otherwise, ...

When I got home, my father also said, "Damn it, I didn't drink a mouthful of wine." Hearing my father's words, my mother and I both laughed. I don't know when my father's drinking problem will be changed.

Level 5: 1430067234

-400 words

Article 4: Dad drinks.

It's time for dinner. Dad habitually picked up the cup, walked into the kitchen, picked up the jar, poured it into the cup, then picked it up and walked to the table.

Dad put the glass next to a plate of peanuts prepared by his mother for him. He didn't rush to drink, but ate something first. When the food was almost eaten, he picked up the wine and put it in front of his nose to smell it slightly. Then he put his lips to the mouth of the cup and took a sip. He frowned at once. Is this wine delicious? Or does it taste spicy? I saw him immediately put down the cup, picked up chopsticks, picked up peanuts and put them in his mouth. At this time, his eyebrows spread out and he chewed leisurely. After that, he ate some vegetables, took a big drink from the cup, put down the cup, picked up chopsticks and ate a lot of peanuts. At this time, his father, who was already a bad drinker, turned a little red and talked more. ...

I feel that my father is in a very comfortable mood at this time. I think this must be the best leisure time for my father's day.

Grade four: I am a tree.

-350 words

Article 5: Stop drinking, turtle dad.

"ouch! It really hurts! " Sister rabbit and little turtle accidentally bumped into each other. Sister Rabbit quickly apologized to Little Turtle, but no matter what Sister Rabbit said, Little Turtle kept crying. Sister rabbit gently stroked the little turtle's forehead and asked, "Little turtle, what's wrong with you?" Did you hit something? Does it hurt? " I saw the little turtle sobbing and shaking his head. "If not, then why are you crying?" Sister rabbit asked again. "Dad is gone, Dad can't be found," said the little turtle hesitantly. Just then, Father Tortoise appeared. He stumbled, hitting a tree for a while, tripping over a stone for a while, bumping around like a blind man who couldn't find his way. Soon, Father Tortoise was bruised and fainted on the grass. Sister Rabbit and Baby Tortoise ran quickly, picked up Father Tortoise and went straight to Dr. Sheep's house. Dr. Yang bandaged Father Tortoise and said to Sister Rabbit and Baby Tortoise, "It's nothing serious, just rest for a few days." But all this is caused by Mr. Gui's drinking. You must not let Mr. Gui drink any more, otherwise the consequences will be more serious. Suddenly, Baby Tortoise carefully tugged at Sister Rabbit's clothes and pointed to Father Tortoise sleeping in the hospital bed. It turned out that Father Tortoise woke up. He rubbed his eyes and stretched himself. After waking up, I saw the little turtle crying, so I asked, "My dear son, why are you crying?" The little turtle said, "Dad, can you stop drinking?" "Father Turtle suddenly realized. He held his son in his hands and said, "I'll never drink again!" ""When he spoke, the whole room was filled with laughter.

From then on, Father Tortoise stopped drinking, and the baby Tortoise family lived a happy life.

Xu Shishi, Grade 5, Hua No.6 Middle School, Huaxi District, Guiyang City, Guizhou Province

-550 words

Article 6: Dad who loves to drink.

My father has a big round belly. According to my mother, my father used to be very slim. Now, he has grown so big because of drinking. The last thing dad wants to hear is that others say he has drunk too much; My stomach is so big; You, it's alcoholic hepatitis now; Look at you, your nose is alcoholic hepatitis. Dad can make a lot of jokes when he drinks.

I remember that day, others invited us to drink. I'm so happy. Of course, my father is also happy, because someone is drinking with him again. When they got there, everyone praised dad for drinking. Dad is so excited! My face is full of smiles, but I am happy when I am happy, so I must be modest! "No, you can also drink! The waiter brought the white wine, and dad poured a cup and tasted it. " This wine is 52 degrees! ""this sentence will blurt out. I was surprised when I looked at the bottle. The newspaper clearly stated that it was 52%. My dad is great.

Oh, the fun is yet to come! Dad finished the first cup, poured another one, and said, "Brother, I propose a toast to you. I wish you a wide range of financial resources." Then, he dried 52% of the liquor in one gulp and began to boast, "How much can 52% of the liquor do in one gulp?" I really want to laugh. Later, I gave my father a table of respect and became inarticulate. He still wants to drink, and my mother and I will stop him. But he told us to leave. My mother and I were very angry and left. On the way back, my mother said to me, "Look! Every time I drink it, it is very powerful, and the first one is down. " Mom's language is really accurate. Someone called to say that dad was drunk. It's so irritating. They sent their father home and danced disco alone. Twist, twist. I'm really worried that he will fall. Mother asked me to persuade him to go to bed, or something might happen. I didn't convince my father until I finished speaking.

This is my father who loves to drink. I wish he would drink less. This is too harmful to his health.

First grade Tang of Yifu Primary School in Jiashan County, Jiaxing City

-650 words

Article 7: Dad who loves to drink.

Grade 3, Qiaodong Primary School, donggang city, Dandong, Liaoning: CoCo Lee Town

-700 words

Article 8: Dad, please give up smoking and drinking, ok?

Dad, I've always wanted to say something to you. Actually, you can quit smoking and drinking, okay?

I remember when I was three or four years old, every night, you came home from work almost every night, and you could smell your alcohol from a distance. You always come home drunk, and your mother sometimes scolds you, but you always disagree.

You always smoke, too If so, you can smoke several packs a day. Are you happy? Trouble? Still calm ... you always pick up a cigarette, light it, and then smoke it. Do you know that smoking can cause tuberculosis? The news said that the death rate of tuberculosis in China has soared recently. If I get tuberculosis, what should my mother and sister do?

Dad, just for this family, please promise me: don't smoke and drink any more, okay?

Grade 3: Lu Li.

-250 words

Article 9: Dad, stop drinking.

Dad, stop drinking. Zhu Qianyun, Class 3, Grade 4, Hangzhou Road Primary School, Qingdao, is late at night. Why hasn't dad come back yet? How can it be? After a while, I fell asleep. In a daze, I found my father staggered into the room. After a while, my father coughed a few times and saw my mother helping my father to the bathroom. After a long time, dad came out. But, why hasn't my mother come out yet? I looked through the door. Ah! Mom is picking up the stolen goods that dad vomited. At this moment, I really want to shout, "Dad, stop drinking." My heart was about to explode, so I went to the study, found a piece of paper and wrote, "Dad, you didn't expect your daughter to write this letter to you." Dad, please stop drinking. As you know, drinking is harmful to your health ... "Then, I looked for the newspaper like crazy," Found it "and shouted in my heart. I put the letters and newspapers in my bag, put them on my father's desk, and then slept contentedly. In the evening, I had a dream that my father was reading my letter and his face turned red ... Later, my father finally gave up drinking.

-400 words

10: Dad is drunk.

Yesterday my mother took someone to dinner on her birthday. Yesterday, because my mother's relatives and friends were here, I didn't stop him from drinking in order to give him enough face. Later, after the birthday party, my father began to get drunk. I was really wrong this time. I regret letting him drink. He didn't joke with my mother this time, but with me. I finally understand why my mother stopped giving it to him. There are two meanings, one is harmful to my health and the other is annoying.

We went home together after my mother's birthday party. It was only 8: 30 when I saw it. I was going to watch TV on the sofa and was sleeping. I didn't expect my father to joke as soon as he came up. My father has a characteristic that he makes money when he is drunk. On the other hand, I also want to make my father drunk. Dad said he would give me ten dollars, which made him make a joke, and I regretted it. Dad gave me ten yuan, and I was so happy. Let me do this and that. He told me to open the door first. Later, he said that if the door was unlocked, I would give him 50 yuan. I don't agree with his little threat. As soon as I get angry, I will give it to him 100, 10, and immediately go to my mother to cry. ...

Dad immediately said, what's the matter? As soon as I shook hands, he went down to smash the computer desk. Later, he kept coaxing me, but I lost my temper. I ran to the living room to watch TV, and my father said I couldn't watch it. I went to bed at once. After I went to sleep, my dad followed me and gave me my money back. I twisted my head like a stubborn donkey and ignored him. He said, you don't want money, here you are. I said categorically: no, you don't want it, it doesn't matter if you throw it in the trash can. I don't care. Dad said angrily, don't forget. Don't ask me for money in the future. I said, I won't ask you for it. I told my mom I broke up with you, but you didn't give it to me. I asked my mother for it. I don't want your money. Dad muttered and left, sometimes remembering to say something.

The next morning, my mother gave me the money, and I was still angry. I took it and threw it on the floor. We were supposed to have breakfast together, because I went with my mother, and then I went to my grandmother's house to make it up.

Do you think dad hates getting drunk?

Grade 5 of Wendong Primary School in Lixia District, Jinan, Shandong Province: Xun Jinger

-750 words

Article 1 1: Dad, please drink less.

The sound of "knocking" came from the stairs, which gradually became bigger and bigger and closer. When the sound moves to a place, it stops and burps. Suddenly, with a bang, the door opened and a man came out. He blushed so much that he wanted to turn off the duke. It's hard to change shoes, like a stupid bear; I staggered over and had to hold the wall and slide slowly; Mouth kept "ha ha ha-"gasped. So it's dad.

Dad plopped down on the sofa, then slowly turned around, like an innocent child crawling on the sofa, and then staggered and shook badly. I was shocked, as if my father was going to roll off the sofa. Bang, dad finally lay down, glared at him again, stood up, picked up a blanket in front of him, covered it, and stared blankly at the ceiling. Dad is lying on the sofa again; At the same time, with a hiccup and a long sigh, Li ignored me and watched TV by himself.

Dad is drunk again.

In my impression, my father has been drunk more than once, either not drinking or as drunk as mud. Once, my dad was so drunk that I can't describe it, which was worse than the drunk driving king reported on TV. Dad was so drunk that he didn't even know his own home. He kept kicking the door before going home. Mom doesn't know what happened. As soon as she opened the door, dad rushed in and fell to the ground. I have been complaining about my mother since I got up, saying why not open the door for him? Mother was very angry and said angrily, "don't you have a key yourself?" Hearing this, my father was very angry with my mother. Mom cried, so did I. But dad went to watch TV himself.

Dad, drinking is not good. Didn't you say that your stomach has been upset recently? Then why drink it? Drinking will not only hurt your health, make you uncontrollable, but also hurt your family. What's more, it may cause an accident. Didn't you just hit two rickshaws after drinking and driving last time? This is the result of drinking too much. Dad, drink less and drink more!

Grade 5 of Tongshan Primary School in Shengzhou City: After Siqi.

-700 words

Article 12: Dad who loves to drink

Dad has many hobbies: drinking, making friends, smoking and so on. Especially fond of drinking. Speaking of his drinking, our family has a headache. Every time I get drunk, my mother says, "Drink less tomorrow." Dad said, "Good." The next day, I put what he said behind me.

Once, my father came back drunk and walked unsteadily as if he were going to fall. My mother and I saw it and immediately ran out to help my dad back to the house. Dad burped and the room immediately smelled of alcohol. My mother and I struggled to help my father into the bedroom and let him lie down and sleep. Just as my mother and I were watching TV and saw the best part, there was a "wow" in the bedroom. My mother and I heard the noise and ran into the bedroom, only to see my father spit out all the wine and food he drank. It's all over the floor and the whole house stinks. After my mother and I covered our noses with our hands, we dragged my father to the toilet to flush the vomit on our clothes. As a result, the water was magnified and rushed to his face. He woke up with a start and said, "What stinks?" My mother and I both laughed and cried.

On another occasion, my father invited some friends to eat fish at Lezhi Temple in the evening. After dinner, dad paid the money and said to his friend, "You go first." After his friend left, my father took me away on a motorcycle. On the road, whenever a car with headlights meets my father, my father will scold: "Damn thing, can you drive?" If you turn on the light and shake your eyes, you are responsible for the accident. . . . . . "I almost laughed.

Another time, my father went to live with a friend. My father drank a lot of wine and staggered on his way home. Suddenly, with a bang, I rolled into the ground, my hands turned upside down and I was still bleeding. After a few minutes, his friend called us and asked, "Did Zhang Bin go home?" We said, "No, didn't he go to give birth to you?" His friend said, "He left thirty minutes ago." Hearing this, my mother and I hurried to find him with flashlights. When we reached the ridge, we found a dark thing in the field. We took a photo, and it turned out to be dad. My mother and I woke him up. When he woke up, he saw his hand turned upside down, bleeding and said, "It hurts." My mother and I are angry and funny.

Do you think my father is a standard Brewmaster? When will my father get rid of the bad habit of drinking?

-800 words

Article 13: alcoholic dad

Wine bug "Dad, shh! Don't read this article aloud, you can only read it silently in your heart, otherwise my father will hit me when he hears it. There are three bugs in my family, the "net bug" mother, the "wine bug" father and the "lazy" me. These three kinds of bugs have their own specialties. Together, they form a family. At home, what I admire most is the "alcoholic" father. Although dad is a doctor and knows the harm of alcohol, he is always "dangerous" with alcohol. No matter how much wine he drinks, he won't throw up. I'm most afraid of him getting drunk, because once my father gets drunk, he is simply "unconscious" and always wants to hug me. I have been scared to cry by him several times! Dad really makes people laugh and cry. Once, the teacher asked us to write a composition entitled "The person I admire most", and my father quickly "stepped forward": "Write about me! "You?" I thought to myself: What can you do besides drinking? "Just write me a few bottles of beer and drink a few more glasses of white wine!" Dad is really cheeky. My mother and I were really angry and funny at that time. Dad also pays attention to an "atmosphere" when drinking. He won't drink unless there are more than two people with him! So, dad often goes out to buy people drinks, but it's okay. At least he won't make his home smell like a winery. Actually, I'm surprised, too Dad drinks so much wine, why can't he stand a beer belly! Probably my mother and I ate all the delicious things rich in vitamins, so poor dad had to drink them! Dad drinks all kinds of wine and tastes all kinds of wine as soon as he drinks. The momentum of drinking is really amazing. Every time dad comes back drunk, it is the beginning of a fierce "war"! This is my "alcoholic" father, alas, he is simply married to wine.

-600 words

14: Dad, I know your heart.

Dear Dad:

Hello, since childhood, you are like a strong tree, supporting this family. Give me a lot of love and warmth, and raise me to grow up healthily. However, I was too young to understand these things before, which always made you angry.

I remember once upon a time, you always nagged from the moment I woke up until I closed my eyes at night. At that time, I was very annoyed with you and had a lot of things to do. So, against you, you won't let me watch TV, but I must watch it. You won't let me lie down and read, but I just lie down and read. Unfortunately, it happened to me. I am nearsighted, and my beautiful eyes are wearing a pair of glasses. I really regretted not taking your advice at that time.

After this, I gradually understand your painstaking efforts. I began to listen to you. I totally listened to you, too. Dad, I finally understand your difficulties. My grades in all subjects have improved. How can you leave your persuasion?

Dad, you are the best father in the world. However, I don't agree with the way you taught me. Would you please listen to my opinion? My suggestion is:

1. Dad, please don't open my password book casually in the future, okay?

Dad, please don't open my "treasure chest" casually in the future, okay? Because there are my secrets and things that are very precious to me, please leave some space for your daughter. These are not worth your "reconnaissance".

Dad, if you don't always lose your temper at home because you are unhappy at work, will you? Because I am not a punching bag, I also have dignity. Besides, what's wrong with the world?

Dad, if you can accept these suggestions, you will be the best and most perfect father in the world in your daughter's eyes! Dad, I understand your heart, and at the same time, I am looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes;

Work goes well, everything goes well.

Your daughter: Pan Jiameng

April 6, 20 1 1

Fifth grade of Baoqiao Primary School: Pan Jiameng

-600 words

15: I don't want my father to travel.

A few days ago, my father just went to work at the Shandong construction site. I often miss my father and hope he will come back soon.

Usually at home, my father is the best to me and always satisfies my wishes. Every time I can't do math problems, my father is teaching me patiently.

I remember once, I had a high fever. My father is taking care of me hard, helping me buy medicine and driving me to the hospital. When I got to the hospital, the doctor wouldn't let me have an injection, but only let me take medicine. However, my condition has never improved. Every night, my father went outside to get snow, made an ice pack for my head, rubbed alcohol and cooled me physically, but it still didn't get better. I burned for days and nights, and my parents couldn't sleep well every night. On the day of registration, I still had a fever and my mother had to go to work. When I was at home, my father had to send my mother to help me register.

On the first day of school, dad left. When my father is at home, he brings infinite happiness to our family, often makes us laugh and helps my mother with housework. My family lives in Poly Xinyu in Nanhu. My father drives me to school every morning and picks me up after school. Dad sees me off every day. After a long time, my neck hurts badly, but he still sends me to pick me up every day.

Dad is getting older and older. Sometimes it hurts here and there, and it is not good for many days. Dad was working in other places, and he called me one night. I was already very tired. Dad sends me short messages as soon as he is free, telling me how his life and work there are. He also told me that it would be some time before he came back, and he would bring me a small gift and earn money to buy me new clothes.

I often want to use magic to draw my father back, but that's impossible. That's just my wish. It's impossible.

I really hope my father will come back and live with us soon.