How to write a telegram of condolence when an old man dies?

The telegram of condolence is a style of expressing condolences to the deceased and their relatives. This is a more rapid and solemn way to mourn the dead than a condolence letter.

At present, post offices in many places have started this kind of haircut business, which is more and more widely used.

It is usually written like this: the title is written with the words "condolence telegram", and the recipient or recipient should be indicated at the beginning. The text reads condolences to the deceased and greetings to the relatives of the deceased. You can also write down whether to attend the farewell of the body or send flowers on behalf of the deceased.

At the end, write "Comrade * * * is immortal" or "Comrade * * * is immortal", and finally indicate the name or unit of the generator, as well as the date, address and contact number. The text should be highly concise and should not be delayed.

Example: Send a condolence telegram to Comrade * * * to handle the funeral, and pass it on to his relatives: I was shocked to learn that Comrade * * * died unfortunately, and all comrades in our unit were extremely sad.

Express deep condolences to Comrade * * and cordial condolences to his relatives.

Comrade * * * has struggled for the cause of the Party all his life and is a model for future generations. We should turn grief into strength and strive to do all the work well.

Please present a wreath to Comrade * * * in the name of all comrades in our unit (send it with money).

* * * Forever comrades! Mailing address and telephone number * * * * * * * year * month * * *.

What is a composition?

Composition is a narrative method that expresses a theme through words through human thinking and language organization.

Composition is divided into primary school composition, middle school composition and college composition (thesis).

Composition genres include: narrative, expository, practical and argumentative.

Narrative is a style with narration and description as the main forms of expression and characters, narration, scenery and objects as the main contents.

Classification 1. From the content and form of expression: ① Simple narration.

② Complex narrative.

2. From the perspective of different writing objects: ① Narrative mainly written by people.

(2) Narrative narrative.

(3) Narrative based on landscape writing.

(4) Narrative mainly tells things.

The overall view of the six elements is: time, place, people, the cause, process and result of the event. Write 1). Determine the center and write the profound meaning.

We should try our best to dig out the philosophy of life contained in the written events or find out its bright spots, think repeatedly and determine the central idea of the article.

Is that he is good at writing profound meanings from ordinary little things.

2) The six elements of the article should be clearly explained.

The occurrence of a thing can not be separated from six aspects: time, place, people, cause, process and result of the thing, which is the so-called "six elements". Only by explaining these aspects clearly can readers have a clear and comprehensive understanding of the things described.

3). Speak methodically and clearly.

Arrange the materials in a reasonable order according to the time.

There are three kinds of general narration: direct narration, flashback and interpolation.

4). Be detailed and appropriate, and highlight the key points.

The materials of general events are divided into primary and secondary, which can reflect the center of the article. This part should be written in detail, and the secondary content can be slightly written or not, which will leave a deep impression on readers.

5). Make things concrete.

Whether you can make things specific depends on whether you are good at describing things layer by layer, that is, dividing things into several stages and writing out the development and changes of things in these stages.

Only in this way can the content of the article be concrete and vivid.

6). Rendering environment, vivid and touching.

Everything can't happen and develop without the environment. Grasping the characteristics of the environment to write will render the atmosphere, express feelings and make the article more vivid and touching.

First, why narrative can generally be divided into several types, such as remembering people, narrating, writing scenery and chanting things.

Remember people, to show the thoughts, feelings and personality of the characters; Narrative, writing the meaning of events, these meanings can be political and ideological, can also express a certain philosophy, or a certain interest; To write a scene, we should express some personal feelings or profound feelings through the description of the scene; Chanting about things, or revealing some pleasure of life in the world, or expressing meaning with things, shows one's feelings for some people and phenomena in society.

So we always write narratives for a certain purpose and always express some thoughts and feelings, which is actually what we usually call "the theme of the article". The theme is the soul of the article, which runs through the article like a red line.

Narrative without a clear theme can only be a running account, so to write a good narrative, we must be clear about "why", that is, the theme should be clear.

We should pay attention to three points when defining the theme: First, we should be positive, that is, the determined theme, thoughts and feelings must be healthy and meaningful.

B, to be focused, an article can only have one theme, and the full text should be written around this center.

Some students want to write this and that when they write. As a result, the articles written are either aimless or have several centers, and many centers have no centers.

C, it can be implicit, not necessarily straightforward.

The theme should be included in the specific narrative and description, and it is generally not appropriate to reveal it with obvious words. For example, the industrious quality of characters should be expressed through concrete things and vivid details, and it is not appropriate to label characters with the word "industrious".

Another example is to describe a meaningful thing. It is not appropriate to talk about its "meaning" in an empty and abstract way, but to show it naturally in a specific plot.

Engels said that the more hidden the meaning of the event and the character, the stronger the artistic charm of the work.

Second, what you say is what you write, and what materials should you choose to write a narrative.

Three criteria should be adhered to when selecting materials: first, typicality, that is, choosing materials that can fully express the center; The second is authenticity, that is, selecting real people, stories and scenes, including artistic truth from real life; The third is reality, that is, selecting materials with realistic positive significance.

In the specific operation of material selection, the most effective method is to expand association and combine life, that is, when selecting materials, you can choose people and things you are familiar with and contact with from any aspect such as family life, school life and social life through association.

For example, when writing "Thank you for your love for me" (1995 composition topic of Nanjing senior high school entrance examination), we might as well start to communicate, and choose the love materials given to me by grandparents and parents from family life, teachers and classmates from school life and enthusiastic people such as neighbors, passers-by and police from social life.

When selecting materials, we need to carefully cut them to be meticulous and appropriate, so we should pay attention to two points: First, we should cut off similar materials.

Some narratives use more than one material to express the center, so these materials should express the center from different sides. If they show the center from the same aspect, some of them are "similar" and should be deleted.

Second, we should pay due attention to the details.

Materials that are not closely related to the center should be written briefly, and materials that are closely related to the center should be written in detail.

Third, how to narrate is how to write an article concretely, which involves the structure, expression, wording and sentence formation of the article.

Let's talk about the structure of the article first, that is, what structure is used to express the narrative to be written.

Including how to write this article in several layers, which materials should be written first, which materials should be written later, which should be written in detail, which should be omitted, how to arrange the transition, where the stage is located, where to echo, how to start and how to end, and so on.

From the whole narrative, the common structures are sequence, flashback and insertion.

Xu Shun is based on the occurrence, development and process of things.

Including the following situations: first, it is described according to the passage of time; Second, according to the development of things to describe; Third, according to the process of cognitive development; Fourth, describe it according to the author's whereabouts.

Flashback is to put the end of things, or a prominent highlight. ...