An appreciation of the good old stories in Chengnan

1: "I was just playful when I was a child, and I didn't succeed in studying. It's too late to regret it. My brother is a good student. He ranks first in the exam every year and is ambitious. He said that he has grown up After graduating from college, I still have to go across the ocean to study. Oh my God, my useless brother has no ability, how can I afford it? It’s too late!” He sighed, “It’s a last resort. Little sister, do you understand what I’m saying?”

Appreciation: This paragraph is so thick. What the man with the lips said was really~~~~~~~every word showed his helplessness. I deeply regret my current wrong actions, but I can't help it because of the pressure of life. Therefore, it can also be seen that the social environment at that time was also very unfavorable, and people were forced to embark on the road of stealing.

2: I can’t tell the difference between the sky and the sea. Does the golden-red sun rise from the blue sea? Or does it rise from the blue sky? But I like reading this lesson very much. I read it over and over again, as if I was lying on a boat or sleeping on a cloud. I can memorize it now. My mother often praises my father and Song’s mother for my hard work and good reading. What I like to read, of course I can read well. For example, those lessons from last semester: "A man has hands, feet, a knife, a ruler, a dog, a cow, a sheep, and a second hand..." I hope to forget them as soon as possible!

Appreciation: From this paragraph, we can not only see "my" love for this article, but also vaguely feel "my" hope for the sea, blue sky and fiery red sun. , with strong expectations for these things, we can see how cute and well-behaved Xiao Yingzi is!

3: I thought to myself and walked away. I couldn't help but walk to the opposite side and stand in front of the broken brick wall of the empty grass field to see if Fang Decheng and Liu Ping would ask me to join the football team. The ball rolled to my feet. I quickly picked it up and threw it to them. It rolled to the wall further away, and I ran over to pick it up for them. This time Liu Ping kicked the ball very high, and he even boasted: "Look how good I am!" But this time the ball fell from a high place into the tall grass. "Yingzi, don't you love picking up balls? Go pick them up for us now!" Liu Ping said sweating.

Appreciation: One sentence: "Don't you love picking up balls?" What a clever way to easily push the matter to Yingzi. Moreover, based on the context, we can know that the house is haunted. Liu Ping must be timid in his heart. He doesn't have to pick it up and call Yingzi. After picking it up, the ball still belongs to him. It seems that he can still park it!

4: ‘’Dad’s flower has fallen, and I am no longer a child. ‘’

Appreciation: My father has passed away. I am the eldest child in the family. I have to take on the important responsibilities of the family and be a big child.

5: I stood in front of the camels and watched them eating grass and chewing: such ugly faces, such long teeth, such quiet attitude, when they chewed, their upper teeth and lower teeth interlocked The ground was grinding back and forth, steam came out of the big nostrils, and white foam covered the beard. I was stunned and my teeth started to move.

Appreciation: This short paragraph describes the camel's expression and movements of chewing fodder in a very specific and detailed way. I seemed to really see a camel hunched over, eating grass, grinding its teeth and making a "squeaking" sound. After grinding, some white bubbles will come out and hang on the camel's mouth, which is a lot of fun. I realized from "I was so stunned that my teeth started to move" that Lin Haiyin was very interested in camels, loved them very much, and was deeply attracted by them; it also made me see the two combs in her hair. The braided Xiao Lin Haiyin looked at the camel, his eyes straight and his teeth grinding rhythmically. Let’s look at the sentence “Steam is coming out of the big nostrils”, which fully illustrates the author’s love for camels. If she didn’t like camels, would she observe them so carefully? This is the brilliance of Lin Haiyin - he does not use a word "love" in the whole paragraph, but expresses his love through his own movements and the movements of the camel.

6: I have seen the madman in Hui'an Pavilion several times. Every time she stood at the door, Song Ma or Ma would quickly squeeze my hand and say softly: "Madman!" As I walked past the wall, if I looked back, they would pull my arm hard to stop me. In fact, that madman is just a big girl with a big braid of pitch pine, just like the big girl from the Zhang family and the Li family! She always stood leaning against the door wall, watching the people passing by.

Appreciation: This paragraph made me realize the author's kindness. Her mother and old nanny Song Ma were very afraid of and disgusted with the lunatic in Hui'an Pavilion, and they looked down upon the lunatic. And what about the author? From the short sentence "Actually, the madman is just a big girl with big braids of pitch pine hair", I read that the author did not regard her as a madman, but thought that the madman was a big sister with big braids and very thoughtful thoughts. of innocence. The second half of the sentence "like the eldest girl of the Zhang family and the Li family" shows the beauty of the author's childhood thoughts. She does not pity the madman, but treats the madman as a normal person... I wonder if the author still has such a situation. Where is the innocent heart?

7: So I sang the Li song for five years, and now it’s the students’ turn to sing us farewell:

“Outside the long pavilion, beside the ancient road, the green grass stretches to the sky.… Question When will you leave, don’t linger when you come! At the end of the sky, in the corner of the earth, acquaintances are scattered, life is rarely about reunions, but there are many separations..."

I cried, and all of us graduates cried. . How much we like to grow taller and become adults, but how afraid we are! When we go back to elementary school, no matter how tall or big we grow, teacher! You will always treat us as children!

Appreciation: This paragraph describes Lin Haiyin's teacher-student relationship with his teacher, and also describes the author's ambivalence about both longing for and fearing the future. From "I cried, we graduates all cried", we can feel the author and classmates' nostalgia for the school and their concern for the teachers. From the sentence "You must treat us as children forever", I can feel the author's inner love and gratitude for the teacher. She hopes that the teacher will always educate her, and she also hopes that she will always be the teacher's student. . This passage does not contain fancy words or long speeches, but it allows us to feel the most affectionate and touching farewell described in simple language.

8: Dad and Mom are in the yard. Mom is holding her little sister, and Dad is cutting flowers and grass. He said that the oleander has too many leaves and the flowers will bloom less. Some leaves should be removed. He tied the branches with strings again, so that the few oleander trees were not so scattered. He then tied thin ropes to the morning glory on the wall and nailed them high up on the wall. The morning sun shone on the wall, and the morning glory was in full bloom. But it was not morning now, so a few morning glory bloomed. Already withered.

Appreciation: From this passage, I realized "Dad's" "love for flowers". He cares for flowers so well and knows so much about gardening. Moreover, "Dad" loves flowers so much, so he must have a very good temper and a very good temperament. Then, a picture of the sunset unfolded: "Mom" hugged "Sister" and looked at the flowers. Where is "Dad"? He was trimming flowers in the yard with scissors, string and nails. From time to time, the sound of "Dad" making while trimming flowers could be heard. Um! It is really like a family painting drawn with life as the paper and taste as the pen.

At the same time, this is also a transitional paragraph. At the end of the paragraph, it is written "The morning glory has withered." We read a sense of sadness and desolation, which leads to the following article...

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9: Yesterday I went to see my father. His throat was swollen and his voice was hoarse. I told my dad that during the graduation ceremony, I would receive the diploma on behalf of all my classmates and give a speech of thanks. I asked my dad if he could get up and attend my graduation ceremony? Six years ago, when he participated in the farewell party for graduating classmates in our school, he once asked me to study hard. Six years later, he also received the graduation certificate and speech of thanks on behalf of his classmates. Today, "six years later" is here and I was actually chosen to do this. Dad was hoarse, took my hand and said with a smile: "How can I go?" But I said: "Dad, if you don't go, I am very scared. You are under the stage, so I won't panic when I go on stage to speak.

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Appreciation: In a flash, six years have passed. In those years that passed quietly like water, Yingzi spent a wonderful childhood and spent six years of happy time. The years passed quietly like water, and life was like The song is beautiful. Shadow's golden childhood was in those six years, and the beautiful childhood was in those six years. Six years ago was the beginning of childhood, and six years later, it is the happy end. You must still treat us as children! As we grow older, our innocent heart, our young heart, our heart that longs for childhood, our heart that recalls childhood, will never change as we grow older. , and it hurts more easily.

10: Excerpt: Before returning to her hometown, Song’s mother said: “Yingzi, you are old, you can’t quarrel with your brother anymore! He is still young. Aunt Lan followed the four-eyed dog into the carriage and said, "Yingzi, you are old, you can't make your mother angry!" The man squatting on the grass said: "When you graduate from elementary school and grow up, we can go see the sea." "Although, these people have disappeared as I grow up. Are they lost with my lost childhood? My father no longer treats me as a child. He said: "Yingzi, go and send these money to Uncle Chen who studies in Japan. " "dad! ”

Appreciation: Song Ma’s child disappeared, Aunt Lan’s heart was taken away, the man in the grass was arrested, father also left quietly, mother also became closer and closer to Yingzi. Far away... Yingzi's family is wealthy and can afford to hire servants and raise children. However, as her father becomes ill, the family gradually declines. The death of the ancestors and the pedantry of the court gradually led to decline. Yingzi's childhood fell with the collapse of the pillars of the family and the withering of the flowers.

11: Entering the house, it was quiet. Yes, four younger sisters and two younger brothers were sitting on a small bench in the yard. They were playing in the sand. The oleander next to them had dropped several branches at some point, and they were scattered on the ground. It looked very unseemly. It was because my father did not have a child this year. Clean them up - pruning, binding and fertilizing.

Appreciation: The younger brothers and sisters are playing with the soil, but Yingzi cannot play with them. The younger brothers and sisters pick bright flowers, but Yingzi cannot follow them. The younger sisters climbed on their mother's lap and acted coquettishly, but Yingzi couldn't do the same. When she grew up, it was like walking into a zoo, surrounded by cages and iron bars that separated animals and people, and separated childhood and reality. The grown-up children no longer have freedom. They used to run all over the world, but now they have three points and one line, two points and one line, and no line at all. The original running has become running, walking, and standing still. Father, there is no guarantee of life, no stable happiness. No more, no more, and the flowers have withered.

12: I woke up, still lying in bed, watching the flowers dancing in the sun. There were a lot of small, tiny dust. Song Ma came over to dust the window sill. With the dancing of the feather duster, there were more dust in the sunlight, and the flying became more lively. I quickly pulled up my back to cover my face. I'm afraid that the dust will make me cough.

Appreciation: Lin Haiyin has a characteristic in writing books, which is that he pays great attention to the description of details. Even though the dust is so small, he writes it vividly and gives it life. Such meticulous writing skills make the article gripping and unforgettable after reading it. Song Ma's movements are so simple, raising her arms, making a handsome feather duster, and the dust is dancing in the air, but Lin Haiyin makes it so simple. Seeing all this, Song Ma's movements are vividly described, and the dust is described in more detail, which is really amazing

13: A foreign car is coming from a distance, and the car is dark yellow. The small lamp shone on the shadows of Xiuzhen and Niuer. They continued to run forward regardless of me. Xiuzhen turned around and said, "Yingzi, go home. I'll give you a letter when we get there. Go home." Bar! Let's go home..." The voice became quieter and farther away. The foreign car passed by, and the large and small shadows were once again covered in the dark night.

18: Huang Baner’s teeth patted the donkey’s buttocks, and the little donkey walked forward, leaving clear hoof prints on the thick snow. Huang Banerya ran behind the donkey, shouting: "Get, get, get, get."

There was a string of small bells around the donkey's neck. In the fresh air after the snow, It sounds so nice.

Appreciation: The main content is that Song’s mother’s little girl died and the little girl disappeared. Song’s mother was very sad. When Song’s mother and Yingzi were looking for the little girl to rest, they saw someone buying one. There is a kind of food called "Donkey Rolling", which is cooked yellow rice noodles, breaded with brown sugar, and rolled in mung bean flour. It is very fragrant. When the little girl can't be found, Song Ma rides The donkey is gone. Through the childish eyes of the protagonist Yingzi, it shows the world the joys and sorrows of the adult world. There is a kind of innocence that cannot be expressed, but it expresses the complex emotions of the world. Watching "Old Things in the South of the City", I feel a little warm in my heart, because it is rare to see such exquisite things, because she does not deliberately express anything, just calmly depicts the old Beijing in the eyes of a child, scene by scene, just like Life speaks for itself. So calm and gentle, so pure and indifferent, so long-lasting and fragrant, so full of the smell of human fireworks, but without any pursuit of fame and fortune.

I read a lot, hope you can adopt it...