The passionate words and phrases in Xia Gan, as well as their appreciation.

What fills the whole summer is a tense, warm and urgent melody.

This is a single sentence paragraph. Not many use one-sentence paragraphs at the beginning of articles. Begin with a one-sentence paragraph, which is usually emphasized. The three words "tension, enthusiasm, and urgency" here will have a deeper impression on the reader. However, if this sentence is combined with the following paragraph, the reader will not be so focused on these three words. This is one. 2. Think about it, is this article written around the three words "tension, enthusiasm, and urgency"? Should I write a paragraph for "nervous", a paragraph for "enthusiastic", and a paragraph for "urgent"? Or is it just "nervous" without any other words? Or, are these three words summed up inappropriately? ——You don’t have to have the answer, but you should think about it

In the next paragraph, the author selects some scenes to describe. Students, think about it. Among the scenes below, what would you choose? What did the author not choose?

Flowers, grass, trees, wheat, wind, cicada, lotus, peony (please compare them one by one)

Think again, which of the following words would you choose? Which ones did the author not select?

Vision, hearing, taste, smell, touch (please compare them one by one)

Think again, which of the following rhetorics will you use creatively? What did the author not use?

Metaphor, personification, exaggeration, parallelism (please compare one by one)

Just like a pot of water on the stove gradually bubbling, steaming and finally boiling, the qianqian on the hillside The thin grass grew into a dense thick hair, and the faint green smoke on the forest belt also condensed into a long dark wall. The fluttering bees and butterflies disappeared, but in their place were annoying cicadas, lurking in the leaves and chirping loudly. The fiery red sun bakes a golden earth, and the wheat waves roll, hitting the mountains in the distance, the clouds in the sky, and the cars on the road, like waves surging against ships. Gold dominates everything in the world, and the hot wind floats across the fields, blowing the fragrance of ripe wheat. After half a year of accumulation, the beautiful spirit of spring has now become a majestic force, rolling over the fields and rising between heaven and earth. Summer is here.

As for the above paragraph, some sentences are written by ordinary people (such as "The fiery red sun bakes a golden earth"), and some sentences are original by the author. If you also want to have original sentences, Please consider the following sentence:

The waves of wheat... beat against the cars on the road

After half a year of accumulation, the beautiful spirit of spring has now become a majestic force , rolling over the fields, rising between heaven and earth.

There are also some sentences that people with a certain level of proficiency (or classmates who often do accumulation) can also use:

The thin grass, the light and graceful dance, the graceful and beautiful spirit< /p>

In the next paragraph, the author writes about the colors of summer, which students can also write. The strange thing is that in the author's mind, the colors of summer are golden, not red, and the colors of autumn are " Hot and red.” Unique enough? 2. We have learned before that scenery can be written through contrast (the first paragraph of Lao She's "Winter in Jinan"), and it is also there - however, the following paragraph is best not to be said to be a contrast, but a contrast (because there is a main theme). Secondly)

The color of summer is golden. From a painting point of view, this probably makes sense. The color of spring is cool green, like blue waves, like young bamboo, full of hope; the color of autumn is hot red, like the setting sun, like red leaves, marking the ultimate of things. In summer, when spring blooms and autumn harvests, it naturally responds to this neutral yellow - the harvest has been achieved but the hope is not yet exhausted. It is a peak season of inheriting the past and linking up with the future, and the transition of life. Look, the wheat has just been harvested! In the field, the cotton seedlings with seven or eight green leaves, the sorghum and corn holding their trumpets in the sky, and the crawling melon vines on the ground, are all bursting with vitality. At this time, they are no longer growing slowly in the gentle spring rain; instead, they are vigorously transpiring by the steaming heat of summer, making their final sprint towards autumn’s finish line.

If you want to write sentences with personal feelings, please pay attention to the following original sentences:

Nature responds to this neutral yellow - the harvest has already been achieved And hope is not yet over

The cotton seedlings with seven or eight green leaves in the field

The melon vines crawling on the ground

Let’s accumulate some more words:

Spring and Autumn Fruits, vigorous growth

Next paragraph:

The sentence "The melody of summer is tense" is Original: "Summer Melody" is difficult for junior high school students to write, and Summer Melody is "tense", which makes it more creative. This paragraph is written around this sentence. In order to highlight the "tension", the author describes the scene of peasant labor. We should notice that the word "fast" is used a lot in this paragraph. Is it tense enough? By the way, the "tension" here reflects the previous content - there is "tension" in the first paragraph.

The melody of summer is tense, and every nerve of people is tense. Look at the farmers wielding sickles in the fields, bent over and sweating, just thinking about cutting quickly, cutting quickly; when the wheat comes on the field, they also want to beat it quickly, beat it quickly. It was hard enough for them to wake up early and go to bed late. They woke up in the middle of the night and had to listen to the window paper, but the wind started. Looking outside the window, the sky was covered with clouds. Now that the wheat is threshed, it’s time to breathe a sigh of relief, and you have to quickly topdress the autumn seedlings and water them. "The Tian family has a few leisure months, but people are twice as busy in May." They carry summer and autumn on their shoulders.

There are also some questions in the above paragraph that are extremely important:

There may not be many students who will be interested in the topic and think about it. Please note that there is the word "feeling" in the title. The "feeling" of this article is much stronger than that of "Spring". In fact, the author is a drunkard and does not intend to drink. The scenery is to attract people. This article praises labor and praises labor. If we compare this article with "Winter in Jinan", we will find that the latter's scenery is to express his love for Jinan's winter, while in this article, the author's ultimate purpose is to write a praise of labor. This is one. 2. If you were writing this paragraph, what else would you think of writing? I was thinking that according to the meaning of this paragraph, it would be quite interesting to write "dog" in it: in summer, wouldn't it be an interesting scene when dogs vomit their beaks and follow farmers who return from hard work while carrying wheat? Another example is when I come back from writing and fan to enjoy the cool air. Although this section is written as "tense", wouldn't it be more "melody" if there are some breaks in addition to the tension? Do students also consider writing about other topics such as watermelon? When reading, you should pay attention to "playfulness" like drinking tea. Don't drink it in one breath. This is blasphemy to tea, and it is difficult for you to truly learn anything.

Unfortunately, literati in the past dynasties have written countless stories about spring flowers and autumn moon, but there is very little mention of summer. It is rare to find poems like "It's noon on the day of hoeing, and the sweat drips from the soil below". There are more poems like "The lotus leaves touching the sky are infinitely green, and the lotus flowers reflecting the sun are uniquely red", "The little lotus has just revealed its sharp corners, and dragonflies have already appeared." The view of standing on top. Probably, the warm spring days and the rippling autumn waves make poets and literati even more emotional; while summer is always soaked in bitter sweat. People who have a leisurely mood naturally don't like this kind of tense melody. But I want to praise loudly this golden summer between spring and autumn.

The bold words in the above paragraph were added by me. I think students need to think about it, right?

Please read "Summer Feeling" again in one breath:

What fills the whole summer is a tense, warm and urgent melody.

Just like a pot of water on the stove gradually bubbling, steaming and finally boiling, the thin grass on the hillside grew into a dense thick hair, and the faint green smoke on the forest belt also condensed into A long dark wall. The fluttering bees and butterflies disappeared, but in their place were annoying cicadas, lurking in the leaves and chirping loudly. The fiery red sun bakes a golden earth, and the wheat waves roll, hitting the mountains in the distance, the clouds in the sky, and the cars on the road, like waves surging against ships. Gold dominates everything in the world, and the hot wind floats across the fields, blowing the fragrance of ripe wheat. After half a year of accumulation, the beautiful spirit of spring has now become a majestic force, rolling over the fields and rising between heaven and earth. Summer is here.

The color of summer is golden. From a painting point of view, this probably makes sense. The color of spring is cool green, like blue waves, like young bamboo, full of hope; the color of autumn is hot red, like the setting sun, like red leaves, marking the ultimate of things.

In summer, when spring blooms and autumn harvests, it naturally responds to this neutral yellow - the harvest has been achieved but the hope is not yet exhausted. It is a peak season of inheriting the past and linking up with the future, and the transition of life. Look, the wheat has just been harvested! In the field, the cotton seedlings with seven or eight green leaves, the sorghum and corn holding their trumpets in the sky, and the crawling melon vines on the ground, are all bursting with vitality. At this time, they are no longer growing slowly in the gentle spring rain; instead, they are vigorously transpiring by the steaming heat of summer, making their final sprint towards autumn’s finish line.

The melody of summer is tense, and every nerve of people is tense. Look at the farmers wielding sickles in the fields, bent over and sweating, just thinking about cutting quickly, cutting quickly; when the wheat comes on the field, they also want to beat it quickly, beat it quickly. It was hard enough for them to wake up early and go to bed late. They woke up in the middle of the night and had to listen to the window paper, but the wind started. Looking outside the window, the sky was covered with clouds. Now that the wheat is threshed, it’s time to breathe a sigh of relief, and you have to quickly topdress the autumn seedlings and water them. "The Tian family has a few leisure months, but people are twice as busy in May." They carry summer and autumn on their shoulders.

It is a pity that literati in the past dynasties have written countless stories about spring flowers and autumn moon, but there is very little shadow of summer. Probably, spring is warm and autumn is rippling, but summer is always soaked in bitter sweat. People who have a leisurely mood naturally don't like this kind of tense melody. But I want to praise loudly this golden summer between spring and autumn.