Feedback on fraud prevention essay of more than 400 words

This is a story I heard. The protagonist of the story is my cousin. She now works in a company in Beijing. The following are her original words:

July 10, 2013 is a day worth remembering. After I was unemployed for more than a month, I finally found a satisfactory job. It's early. I arrived at the company at eight o'clock. I had just sat down and was about to wait for the personnel to come and do the onboarding. Then my cell phone rang. The caller ID was Wuhan, Hubei, and the number was ****. I answered the call in confusion. May I ask? Is it Li Moumou? One of the characters is relatively rare. He pronounced it wrong and I didn't correct him. I said, "Yes, you are?" The person on the other end had a rough male voice, claiming to be from the Wuhan Public Security Bureau in Hubei Province. He asked me to find a remote place to talk on the phone, and then said that they had recently arrested a group of drug traffickers. Some of them used my bank account to commit crimes and hoped that I would cooperate. My heart was full of fear and fear, but I calmed down and asked: "What bank is it?" He said: "Beijing Everbright Bank", "This is impossible, I don't have an account number of Everbright Bank, do you know my ID number?" ?

The other party reported his ID number, and it was indeed my ID number, but I deliberately said it was not. What should I do? He said, "I hope I will cooperate. Then we will go to your company to find it." you. "Then I hung up. The entire call started at 8:19 and lasted 1 minute and 53 seconds. I hung up the phone and I was happy. I haven't applied for employment yet. Do you know where my company is?

But how did my mobile phone number and ID number get leaked? Maybe I was looking for a job recently and submitted too many resumes, so the information was leaked! Hey, this society is unsafe, there are too many scammers and too many tricks, so it’s hard to guard against them. !

Why did he call so early? Maybe it’s because everyone is less alert in the morning, so it’s easier to lose things in the morning

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In short, I hope everyone will be more vigilant, stay calm beforehand, and ask more why? If you are a scammer, there must be loopholes. In addition, you must keep your information and do not let scammers take advantage of it!

I think my cousin is very smart, she saw through the scammer’s tricks and didn’t let him succeed. She used her personal experience to teach me a vivid lesson. Scammers are everywhere, and we cannot harm people in society. We must be wary of others! I hope everyone can be more vigilant in the future to prevent scammers from succeeding.