In 211, the Chinese test center for the senior high school entrance examination combed six: the answer to modifying the sick sentence is urgent! ! ! ! ! ! !

The relevant requirements of curriculum standards and textbooks for modifying ill sentences are: discriminating and judging the correctness of sentences; Modify the sick sentences from the aspects of incomplete components, improper collocation, incorrect word order and chaotic structure; Revise the words and phrases with obvious mistakes in the exercise; Find out the sick sentences in the paragraph and modify them; Use symbols to modify sentences with speech disorders.

The principle of modifying ill sentences is to change fluency and correctness, and the original meaning of sentences is unchanged without language modification. The types of questions are mainly multiple-choice questions. It is the basic coping strategy to correctly grasp the sentence structure and understand the types of common sick sentences and their modification methods. In review, we should pay special attention to four aspects of language diseases: incomplete components, improper collocation, incorrect word order and chaotic structure.

perspective of typical examples

The underlined parts of the following paragraphs are all ill-chosen, please correct them.

① A new pattern of mass cultural activities "singing red songs, reading classics, telling stories and spreading proverbs" is taking shape in our city, and creating and sending red short messages has become a common practice. ② Bayu culture and Hongyan culture are the origins of creating red short messages, and encouraging Chongqing people to create is to stimulate Chongqing people's recognition of their own culture. ③ By sending red short messages, we can further improve the quality of Chongqing citizens while developing and inheriting culture.

(l) The words in the first place are redundant, and _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ should be deleted.

(2) The collocation in the second place is improper, so _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

(3) The component in the third place is incomplete, so _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ should be added at the end of the sentence.

(4) The word order in the fourth place is improper, and it should be adjusted to _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

(Chongqing senior high school entrance examination questions in 29)

Answer: (1) Delete "the situation" or "the pattern" in the first place (only "the pattern" can be deleted). (2) In the second place, the word "source" should be changed to "source". (3) In the third place, "the activity of" should be added at the end of the sentence. (4) In the fourth place, the positions of "development" and "inheritance" should be changed.

perspective: this is a test to modify a sick sentence in a paragraph. There are four underlined sentences in the whole paragraph, and the proposer lists four common causes at the end of the paragraph, so that candidates can modify them respectively. Because the causes are listed in the test questions, the difficulty of revision is reduced to some extent. Therefore, to solve this question, candidates only need to modify it one by one according to the cause.

Analysis of Common Mistakes

In the following sentences, there is no ill-chosen expression: ()

A. Maoming in midsummer is a harvest season.

B. whether students' thinking ability can be cultivated is an important criterion to measure the success of a class.

C. By studying "Fire Safety, Caring for Life-A Letter to Parents" issued by the school, all our parents received an education.

D. During May Day this year, there were too few garbage bins in some scenic spots in our city, which led to tourists littering. In this regard, we believe that the scenic spot management department is not without responsibility.

(29 Maoming City, Guangdong Province Senior High School Entrance Examination)

Answer: B

Analysis: This is a multiple-choice question, which requires candidates to choose one that is free from language disorders. The proposition sets up language disorders from three aspects and requires candidates to analyze them. Sentence A is not properly collocated. "Maoming" is not a "season" but should be changed to "Maoming's midsummer (season) is a harvest season". Sentence C is incomplete and has no subject, so "pass" or "make" should be removed. If sentence D is not correct, we should remove "not" or change "not without" into "not without". Candidates may lose points because of wrong choice if they don't know the cause of the sick sentence.

ability improvement exercises

intensive compilation of the test questions for the senior high school entrance examination

1. Among the following sentences, the one that has no language defects is ()

A. The students are full of confidence in whether they can get good grades.

B. As soon as he entered the playground, he felt a warm atmosphere and happy smiling faces.

C. We should thoroughly implement the spirit of central decision-making and accelerate the economic zone on the west side of the Taiwan Strait.

D. The information on the Internet is not only rich, but also convenient and quick to search.

(29 senior high school entrance examination questions in Fuzhou, Fujian)

2. Among the following sentences, one that is not ill-chosen is ()

A. Through thirty years of reform and opening up, our life has undergone earth-shaking changes.

B. According to a report by Xinhua News Agency on June 13th, the number of patients with influenza A (H1N1) in China has decreased by 1.2 times.

C. food safety has become a major issue related to the national economy and people's livelihood.

D. Affected by the financial crisis, about 2, to 3, large and small factories closed down in Guangdong alone.

(29 senior high school entrance examination questions in Hechi City, Guangxi)

3. One of the following sentences is ()

A. Seeing graduation photo in front of me, Xiaoxin can't help but think of everyone playing together and reading at the same table for three years.

B. In the face of influenza epidemic, governments at all levels have taken timely preventive measures to ensure the safety of people's lives.

C. Being able to choose the right destination after graduation is a sign of a person's maturity.

D. No matter how perfect the wings are, birds can never fly into the blue sky without the help of air.

(29 senior high school entrance examination questions in Liuzhou, Guangxi)

4. The following two sentences each have a linguistic defect, please modify them in your favorite way and keep the original intention.

(1) The ancient China Qigong has been used in competitive sports, which can adjust the nervousness that athletes often have before the competition.

(2) Sincerity is not only as real as bread in life and truth in thought, but also breeds nobility and simplicity.

(29 senior high school entrance examination questions in Fuxin City, Liaoning Province)

5. Modify the following sick sentences.

(1) We must carry forward and inherit the perseverance and pioneering spirit of Emperor Yan of Shennong.

(2) Whether to pay attention to reading in and out of class is the key to learning Chinese well.

(29 middle school entrance examination questions in Enshi Prefecture, Hubei Province)

6. There are two ill sentences in the following paragraph, please find them and correct them.

① in July this year, there will be a total solar eclipse in the middle and lower reaches of the Yangtze river in China.

② The total solar eclipse lasted for more than two hours.

③ The astronomical spectacle of total solar eclipse will have a certain impact on the natural environment and social life.

④ To this end, Jiangsu is carrying out a series of popular science publicity activities on total solar eclipse.

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during the may day holiday, we went for an outing together. Green fields, green willows, colorful wildflowers and other plants have deeply attracted us. We ran and danced, and the laughter spread far and far ... This outing brought us closer to nature and increased the fun of life.

Modified sentences:

(29 Qingdao City, Shandong Province)

8. Two underlined sentences in the following paragraph are ill-chosen, please modify them one by one. (The word order can be adjusted, words can be added, deleted or replaced, but the meaning of the original sentence cannot be changed.)

① The Yanhe River is not only a sea-going waterway in Huai 'an, but also a trunk waterway in northern Jiangsu. In recent years, Huai 'an has accelerated the construction of the Yanhe waterway regulation project and opened a high-speed waterway connecting Huai 'an and Lianyungang. (2) With the official navigation of the Yanhe waterway, it will play a great role in promoting regional economic integration in the Yangtze River Delta.

modify ①: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

modify ②: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

① China is a country with a cultural tradition of 5, years, and the Chinese nation has been a "harmonious" nation since ancient times.

② It can be said that China's philosophical wisdom is embodied in the word "He".

③ It is not only the basic spirit and characteristics of the Chinese nation, but also the highest value standard of China's philosophy and China's culture.

(1) Please choose one of the three words given in the first sentence, and write it on the line below.

(2) There is a lack of punctuation in the second sentence. Please write the punctuated sentence on the horizontal line below.

(3) There is a linguistic defect in the third sentence. Please write the revised sentence on the horizontal line below.

(29 senior high school entrance examination questions in Shaanxi Province)

(29 senior high school entrance examination questions in Xianning City, Hubei Province)

II Special simulation training

1. In the following sentences, the one with clear meaning is ()

A. She made two children's favorite toys from waste.

B. I'll convince my teacher to go with you for this performance, so that you can play better.

C. striding towards a prosperous and rich hometown.

D. Scientists in China have made use of the scientific data detected by Chang 'e-1 satellite's flight around the moon, and obtained many achievements.

2. Among the following sentences, the one that is not ill-chosen is ()

A. The spirit of "loyalty, patriotism and perseverance" of Qu Yuan can be passed down through dragon boat races and dumplings.

B. What a beneficial influence my first teacher has on my approach to literature and my love of literature!

C. The vitality of a literary work lies in whether it can provide readers with rich, novel and high-quality spiritual food.

D. Now that medicine is developed, it may not be possible to transplant memory.

3. Among the following groups of sentences, the group that is not ill-chosen is ()

4. The following sentences are ill-chosen, please correct them.

(1) Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses were unearthed from Lintong, east of Xi 'an, more than two thousand years ago.

correction:

(2) In order to prevent this kind of air leakage accident from happening again, we have strengthened safety education and management.

Correction:

(3) Since June 1, 28, the sale, use and production of ultra-thin shopping bags with a thickness of less than .25mm have been banned nationwide.

correction:

5. Please point out the faults in the following advertising words. (1) Everything becomes smaller except its function. (Copier advertisement) (2) Moisturizing day cream is especially suitable for any skin. (cosmetics advertisement)

6. The following is a short message from a student to the teacher. There is something wrong with the letter. Please help me correct it.

Carnations in May are not as elegant and holy as peonies, nor as famous as lotus flowers. They just silently exude a refreshing faint fragrance, just like your love.

(1) The word "elegance and holiness" fails to capture the characteristics of peony. Please replace it with an idiom. (2) There is something wrong with the underlined sentence, please correct it.

7. The following is a passage in a junior high school student's exercise. There are mistakes in the underlined parts. Please correct it as required.

But who has seen the real nature now? In the Arabian Peninsula of West Asia, A is filled with gunfire; On the Loess Plateau in China, B the Yellow River water rolling eastward is mixed with thousands of mud and heading for the Bohai Sea; In the Amazon plain of Latin America, c tens of thousands of trees fell down calmly under the chainsaw ... Who saw nature crying?

(1) The collocation in place A is improper, please correct it.

(2) The language in B is not concise, please delete the redundant words.

(3) There is a word in C. Please replace it with a suitable word.

8. The following four slogans were collected by students in the street during the comprehensive learning activities, and one of them is ill-chosen. Please find out and make corrections.

a. cultural milk nurtures new seedlings on campus, and artistic spring moistens the flowers of the motherland.

B. The standardized language is the through train of the information superhighway.

C. Warmly congratulate Qixing Restaurant on winning the title of "Famous Hunan Cuisine Shop in China" in a row.

D. Let the ideal fly Qi Fei, and let the hope be with the spring.

9. There are errors in the underlined part of the following paragraph, please correct them.

① Daya Bay in winter is a season of blooming flowers and beautiful scenery. It was born in the spring of reform and opening up after 3 years of wind and rain, and it embodies the painstaking efforts of several generations of nuclear power people. At this time, Daya Bay nuclear power base is full of vitality everywhere.

(1)(2)

1. The following paragraph is ill-chosen, please correct it as required.

① The TV series The Journey to the West is being filmed in a new version, and I am a little worried. (2) The Journey to the West has several versions, and some can only be seen as science films or even romantic films. I'm really worried that this time I will make a common fault, but I'll just take the classic works as science fiction again. (3) I have seen a lot of newly filmed TV dramas with the theme of classical masterpieces. They often have a presumptuous understanding of the original works, and pursue modernity excessively, but they have eliminated the cultural charm and cultural value of the original works and lost the profoundness of the cultural connotation of the famous works.

(1) The word order of the first sentence is improper, and it should be changed to:

(2) The sentence style of the second sentence is mixed, and it should be changed to:

(3) The verb-object collocation of the third sentence is improper, and it should be changed to:

(proposed topic/Xiang Liqiong)

Reference answer:

I Senior high school entrance examination questions. (2) Add "quality" after "simplicity", or change the second "and" to "and" or "and". 5.(1) Switch "carry forward" and "inherit". (2) Delete "whether". 6.② Delete "duo" or "about"

④ Delete "series" or move "series" after "publicity". 7. Green fields, green willows and colorful wildflowers deeply attracted us. 8.① Salt River is not only a sea-going waterway in Huai 'an, but also a trunk waterway in northern Jiangsu. (2) (delete "Suihe") The official navigation of the Yanhe waterway will play a great role in promoting the regional economic integration in the Yangtze River Delta. 9.(1) Advocating (2) It can be said that China's philosophical wisdom is embodied in a word "harmony". (3) It is not only the basic spirit and characteristics of the Chinese nation, but also the highest value standard of China's philosophy and China's culture. 1. After three years of junior high school life, (adding "we") has had some initial life experiences, which can arouse many beautiful memories in our hearts and inspire us to constantly improve ourselves and know ourselves (transposition). What is particularly unforgettable is the inculcation of those older teachers. (1) "We" can be inserted before "three years" or "already"; ② You can delete both "old" and "old".

II Special Simulation Training

1.D2.B3.B4.(1) "More than 2, years ago" should be placed before "cultural relics". (2) Remove "no". (3) It should be changed to "production, sale and use". 5.