Can the transfer from public to private pending review be revoked?

Yes.

Log in to the company's online banking with reviewer authority, and choose to withdraw if the review fails.

For example, Agricultural Bank of China: If you do not choose to send without review when submitting a corporate online banking transaction, the transaction will be displayed as pending review. In this case, you can delete the transaction in the "Entered Transaction Query" or "Transaction List" menu in the original transaction menu (for example, delete the transaction in "Payment→Single Transfer→Entered Transaction Query") and then re-operate. When submitting, choose to send without review.