Language use

The following is a school’s regulations on arbitration appeals for a badminton invitational tournament. There are five inappropriate uses of words. Please find and modify them. It is required that the revised text be accurate in meaning and consistent in style.

The arbitration committee accepts appeals from each team on various penalties during the game. Complaints procedure: 1. If each participating team has any objection to the referee's decision and requires an appeal during the competition, the leader of the participating team will immediately file an appeal with the chief referee. 2． If other students who are watching the game have objections to the referee's decision and request an appeal during the game, they should write a written appeal within one day after the game ends, and include supporting materials. After both parties write their names, they will submit it to the arbitration committee for a decision. .

Answers (1) "Hurry" is changed to "immediately"; (2) "One day" is changed to "24 hours"; (3) "Put up" is changed to "Attach"; (4) "Write your name" is changed to "sign"; (5) "Bring it to" is changed to "hand over".

20. Below is a snippet from a text message someone sent to a friend. There are five inappropriate uses of words in it. Please find and correct them. (5 points)

I learned last night that my mother was seriously ill and was hospitalized, in urgent need of surgery, and had insufficient funds. I miss you very much. I am grateful to ××× for sending you 5,000 yuan to do my best. Please accept it. I will definitely visit the hospital when I have free time in the future. I wish the old man a speedy recovery!

20. "My mother" is changed to "Your Majesty" (or "Lingci"); "Funds" is changed to "Expenses"; "Thanks" is changed to "Please"

(or "Excuse me"); "accept" is changed to "accept"; "come" is changed to "go".

20． The following is the text of an invitation letter prepared by a school’s anniversary party committee. There are five inappropriate expressions. Please find and correct them. (5 points)

Dear alumni! The towering nine ranks, the five continents of peach and plum trees; the years are like a song, and the grace is long and graceful. On March 1, the school will celebrate its 90th anniversary. On the occasion of celebrating the school's anniversary, I would like to extend my sincere greetings to the alumni who have cared about and supported the construction and development of the school for many years. I invite you to visit us despite your busy schedule to express friendship and seek development. ***Xiang held a grand event. Papers are short but love is long, I hope you will come to the meeting. You are welcome to visit the campus after the meeting.

2 0. (5 points) ⑴Change "birthday" to "birthday" ("birthday" is mostly used for respected people).

⑵ "Big Day" is deleted (colloquial, wrong occasion).

⑶ "Hope to be there" should be changed to "I hope to be there", or "Looking forward to your arrival".

⑷ Change "you" to "you".

⑸ Delete "paper is short but love is long" ("paper is short but love is long" is often used in letters). (1 point each)

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20. The following is a fragment of a classmate’s language communication in daily life. There are five inappropriate expressions in it. Please find and correct them. (5 points)

Yesterday morning, I visited your father at your house. Unexpectedly, as soon as he entered the humble abode, he had been waiting at home for a long time. Before leaving, I gave him my masterpiece and said I would come back if I had any questions. He happily agreed.

20. ① "Your father" is changed to "Your father"; ② "Humble house" is changed to "Your home"; ③ "Waiting" is changed to "Waiting"; ④ "Masterpiece" is changed to "Humble work" "; ⑤"Inquiry" is changed to "Ask for advice". ("Your father" is a modest way of referring to one's own father. When referring to someone else's father here, it should be changed to "your father". "Hanshe" refers to one's own home, so it should be changed to "your home" here. "Gongwai" means respect. The word can be changed to "waiting". "Masterpiece" is a word of respect, and it should be changed to "inquiry". It can be changed to "ask for advice" here, so it is used in life communication. Suitable for colloquial use) (1 point each)

20. The following is the main part of a college student’s cover letter. There are several inappropriate expressions in it. Please point out 5 of them and revise them. (5 points)

I am a 2018 engineering computer graduate from xx College. During my time in school, I consciously abide by school rules and disciplines, respect teachers, and unite classmates; I study hard and work hard, and my grades are outstanding. I have won many awards Received college scholarship. I grew up in a rural area, and rural life has honed my hard-working and persevering qualities. I believe that my qualities and abilities are exactly what your company needs. On this occasion of choosing a career, I sincerely look forward to cooperating with your company and making great contributions to its development.

Thank you for taking the time to read my cover letter, and I look forward to your patronage.

20. ① "Outstanding" is changed to "outstanding" or "excellent". ② Change "required" to "required". ③ "Cooperate with your company" is changed to "Join your company" or "Become a member of your company". ④ Change "great contribution" to "contribute my strength" or delete "great". ⑤ "Patronage" is changed to "patronage" or "approval". (5 points. 1 point for each correct finding and correction)

20. The following is a self-recommendation letter written by a college student to a university professor. There are five inappropriate expressions in it. Please find and modify it. (5 points).

Dear Professor:

My name is Liu Yunting. My foolish brother Liu Fengting is your former student. He has great appreciation for your character and knowledge, which makes me admire you for a long time. I hope you will be lucky enough to accept me as your disciple. I have purchased all of your works from Hui Cun. Now I am sending you an essay. Please read it. Thank you very much!

Sincerely, Liu Yunting

20. The following is a letter There are five inappropriate parts in the main content. Please find out and make corrections. (5 points)

I am a hard-working high school student with a special liking for Chinese. I accidentally discovered the bound edition of your publications. I still keep them at home and read them often. I think the publication has a strong human touch and a high literary taste, which makes it very stimulating to read. The college entrance examination is approaching. I hope your magazine can publish some examples of misuse of words. Be sure to tell the origin of the words, their correct meanings and the reasons for the errors. I would be very grateful.

20. Examples of answers: "hard work" is changed to "hard work"; "huicun" is changed to "treasure"; "stimulation" is changed to "enlightenment"; "deadline" is changed to "period" Or remove it directly; change "certainly" to "best". (Finding and correcting 1 correct point is worth 1 point, ***5 points)

Proposition explanation: "Kubi" belongs to Internet spoken language, which is not civilized enough; "Huicun" is an honorific word, used in expressions Respect for the other party cannot be used for oneself; "stimulation" is a spoken word, and the emotional tone is not positive enough; "deadline" can only be used to express that the end of life is approaching; "definitely" contains a command tone and does not fit the context.

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20. The following is part of the cold wave blue warning issued by a provincial meteorological station. There are five inappropriate uses of words. Please find and modify them. It is required that the revised text be accurate in meaning and consistent in style. (5 points)

The Provincial Meteorological Observatory issued a cold wave blue warning signal on the 24th. Affected by the strong cold air, it is estimated that strong winds and very cold weather will occur in our province from tonight to the 26th. The temperature will drop significantly, with a large degree of cooling in the process: about -8℃ in inland areas and -6℃ in coastal areas. Traffic police across the province are required to pay close attention to weather and road conditions, initiate emergency response in a timely manner, and take effective measures to eliminate traffic safety risks.

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(2) Change "?" to "?".

(3) "?" is changed to "?".

(4) "?" is changed to "?".

(5) "?" is changed to "?".

8． (5 points) In different genres and language environments, the same content is often expressed in different ways. Please express the meaning of "the other party is welcome to participate on time" according to the following restrictions, with each sentence not exceeding 10 words.

(1) In the commercial advertisement: Welcome to visit us

(2) In the invitation to our brother units: Please visit us for guidance

( 3) In the notice to subordinates: Be sure to attend on time

(4) In the invitation letter to experts: I look forward to your taking the time to come

(5) Hold a family banquet for the elders to give to the younger ones Oral notice: You must come then

Analyze and test the ability to use language appropriately and accurately. It is necessary to distinguish the speaker from the person to whom he is speaking and the occasion in which he is speaking.

Answers (1) The advertisement must be attractive and at the same time reflect a kind of politeness. It can be written as "Welcome to patronize you at that time";

(2) The invitation must be polite and polite. , can be written as "Please come to us for guidance at that time";

(3) The notification requirements are strict, and the tone should be serious and concise. The superior can use an imperative tone to the subordinates, and can be written as "Be sure to attend on time"; < /p>

(4) The invitation letter should show respect for the experts and can be written as "Looking forward to your visit";

(5) Oral notification, using spoken language to express expectations for the juniors, It can be written as "I must come when the time comes."

Answer: (1) Welcome to visit us;

(2) Please visit us for guidance;

(3) Be sure to attend on time;

(4) Looking forward to your time to come;

(5) You must come when the time comes.

． The following is a first draft of an invitation letter from a certain school. There are five inappropriate words in it. Please find and revise them. (5 points)

Dear ×× Company:

Thank you for your company’s insistence on recruiting graduates from our school over the years and providing them with suitable positions so that they can devote Just do it. In order to further strengthen the cooperation between our school and your company, promote communication and communication between employers, schools and graduates, and build a two-way selection platform for employers and graduates, our school is scheduled to open a new graduates program on January 12, 2019 We sincerely invite your company leaders to take the time to attend the student campus supply and demand negotiation meeting. Finally, I wish your company a prosperous career!

×× University Liaison Office

December 20, 2018

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1. Please define "meteor shower" based on the following sentences. Requirements: The word order is reasonable, and the information in the sentence must not be lost (words can be added or deleted). ①Meteor shower is a natural phenomenon that occurs when meteor groups meet the earth. ②The reason why meteor showers shine is due to atmospheric friction. ③The light emitted by the meteor shower is like fireworks bursting from a point. ④The meteor shower is like rain. ?Meteor shower is a natural phenomenon in which meteors emit light like fireworks bursting from a point and appear like rain when they encounter the earth due to friction in the atmosphere. ?

2. Based on the materials provided, define "mudslide" in no more than 45 words.

In some mountainous valleys, due to the continuous erosion and excavation of hillsides and ditch beds by surface runoff, the mountains often collapse and slide, and a large amount of solid materials such as silt, sand, and stones are carried away by the water flow. It is stirred and turns into a viscous slurry. Under the action of gravity and inertia, it rushes down rapidly. This is what people often call a mudslide. A rock flow is a torrent in which a large amount of solid materials such as sediment, sand, and rocks on a hillside are carried along by surface runoff and rush down a slope or ravine. ("Journey" can also be replaced by "torrent", "geographic phenomenon" or "natural phenomenon")