Composition for the sixth grade of primary school (600 words): the most familiar "stranger"-addressed to the beloved small town teacher

Composition title: the most familiar "stranger"-addressed to the beloved town teacher.

Keywords: Dear Town, Grade 6, Primary School

This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.

Composition source:

This composition (600 words) is about the sixth grade of primary school (600 words). The title is: The most familiar stranger-addressed to the beloved town teacher. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically.

He is the person I know best. For more than two years, we have interacted frequently. He is my mentor. But he is my most "strange" person, because until now I have never seen my beloved teacher with my own eyes; But he is the person I admire most in my heart. He is so kind, selfless and enthusiastic to me, and loves every child who loves reading and blogging as much as I do. Dear teacher, you not only led us to the road of fragrant books, but also taught us how to be a man, how to love ourselves and others!

By chance, you are the person I know best:

It was the summer vacation on 20 10, July 26th, an unforgettable day. In my blog post "Elite Growth Summer Camp III: Mother's Love Accompanies Me", I was fortunate to meet my beloved teacher. At that time, your sincere comments made you worship at once: "The article tells your feelings of attending the summer camp very emotionally, especially the fourth, fifth and sixth paragraphs, which changed the part of talking to your mother after being called and highlighted the theme of maternal love accompanying you. Very touching. And the deficiency of this article also appears from here: it is the article that has changed people. In writing, people cannot convert without special needs. " It is this wonderful comment that made me know that I can't change my name when writing an article. Perhaps the teacher's sincere comments moved me, and then I revised this article. Unexpectedly, as soon as the article was posted, the teacher quickly came over and gave me a warm evaluation: the revised article was obviously perfect. Your composition has a good foundation. In the future, you should pay attention to the revision of articles before publication. In this way, if the text is compressed to about 100 words, the expression of the text will be more concise. I was very excited after seeing the teacher's message, that is, this time, my blog wore XXT gloriously. At that time, I jumped three feet for joy.

Later, my teacher often visited my blog, gave me wonderful comments, encouraged me and guided me. Gradually, I like the school newsletter, reading and writing blogs; Gradually, my XXT is more and more; Gradually, I learned that my beloved teacher, surnamed Xiao, is an excellent teacher in Suiping No.1 Middle School and an expert in ICT writing guidance in the school. Moreover, all teachers' guidance and comments are conducted in their spare time and are free of charge. Gradually, my teacher and I became the most familiar friends. I often come to the teacher's blog to study with a pious heart. Many golden ideas of writing in the teacher's blog have opened my eyes: seeing the novelty in the ordinary, how to make the characters stand up, the methods of contrast, the three highlights of the article, and the seven-point revision of the three-point writing ... I am eager to study and read ... In this way, in the wonderful class of the teacher day after day, I have gained more and more writing skills, practiced more pens and improved my writing level. It was that summer vacation. Thank you, dear teacher Xiao, as you wrote in the bulletin board of your blog: education is the cause of roses. Education is spreading love. Because of love, let's educate our children. Yes, you said so, and you did the same. With a selfless and loving heart, you led us strangers onto the road of fragrant books. It is you who inspired me to write and gave me the golden key to open the door to writing! Thank you, dear teacher!

Quietly "miss", you are the "stranger" I care about most;

It is the happiest and happiest to communicate with the beloved town teacher in the blog. The teacher also called me "Xiao Huihui" and "Xiao Doudou" as intimately as my father. It is my happiest day to go to the teacher's wonderful class every Friday.

But I will never forget the winter of 20 10. On the first day, my teacher visited my blog "Mr. Kong, a book I love to read" and left me a message of encouragement, but the next day, I never saw my teacher again. I began to look for the teacher's shadow in my blog friends' space ... until later, Di Zi left me a message: Dear town teacher was hospitalized for heart surgery! At this time, I suddenly understood the reason why the teacher "disappeared quietly" and tears flowed down my cheeks silently. Dear teacher, you must be ill because you are so tired. How many holiday weekends did you sacrifice to satisfy our students' thirst for knowledge? You always come in the morning light and don't leave until late at night. Dear teacher, you must get better, and I will pray for you silently every day!

In this way, praying for the beloved town teacher with my bloggers and expecting the town teacher to recover soon has become my primary task every day. During that time, I have been imagining the teacher in my mind, imagining whether the teacher wears glasses, whether the teacher is fat or thin, and whether the teacher loves to laugh. It was during that time that I suddenly felt that the teacher was the "stranger" I cared most about. Looking at the sincere comments of the teachers, tears once again blurred my vision. "Teacher, don't worry, I will study hard, write a good blog and communicate well. You must rest assured to recover from illness! " After leaving a message to the teacher, I resolutely dried my tears and began to hit the keyboard. ...

Admirably, even during his serious illness, the teacher in the small town repeatedly entrusted the teacher who had a dream to forward blog posts for him. Friday's appointment was not delayed because the teacher was hospitalized, but it was even more exciting ... Days passed, New Year's Day came, the teacher was still in the hospital, the Spring Festival came, and the teacher was still in the hospital. Dear teacher, I can't see your figure, and even the happy Spring Festival is suddenly eclipsed. ...

20 1 1 On February 6th, New Year's Day, a familiar golden flame head suddenly appeared in my blog "Yanoda". "Good town teacher, the town teacher is discharged!" My excited screams led my mother to rush to the computer in two steps: "The town teacher finally recovered, and the town teacher can finally go home and reunite!" " "My mother and I embraced happily and looked at the" most beautiful "information in the world, with tears in our eyes: thank you, my friend! After I was discharged from the hospital, my body recovered to be worthy of the world. This disease embarrassed me. It's really like a stone falling into the clear lotus pond, which has caused waves in our blog family, disturbed everyone's rebeccalu and worried my beloved bloggers. This is what I feel guilty about so far, and I am most grateful-I hope I am the last patient of mankind, and there will be no more word "disease" from now on. It's good to be back on the blog! Friends, let's happily enter the year of 20 1 1, enter new growth, and get closer to more friends! Yes, dear teacher Xiao, as you said, the school newspaper is our warm home, but you are the brightest sunshine in this home, shining and warming us forever. Your humility, your open-mindedness, your optimism, your upward trend, your expectations and your blessings ... all inspire us to be a hardworking and sunny teenager!

Interactive communication, you are the brightest beacon in my life;

The contact with the town teacher not only learned the essence of reading and writing, but more importantly, he taught me more about being a man.

Friends: There are about 200 essays published every day, so it is more and more important to advocate self-evaluation and mutual evaluation. Here, I quote a passage from Yu Bowen to give appreciation and reflection to friends who have become attached to the composition: I think the purpose of writing a blog post is to let bloggers appreciate it, and the more people step on it, the happier they will be; The more others appreciate themselves, the more enthusiastic they are about blogging. However, others need to be appreciated and trampled. Therefore, if you don't know how to cooperate, communicate and enjoy, others will not welcome him, and he will not enjoy the happiness of communication and cooperation-let me understand the basic principle of being a polite person: to win the appreciation of others, you must first learn to appreciate others! Collaboration, communication and enjoyment will bring you more unexpected happiness!

It is better to play monopoly games with yourself often. When you visit museums, art galleries, tourist or walking parks and rural areas, you may want to take a deep breath and say to yourself, "Enjoy it, what I see is my own." Indeed, every exhibit, every scenic spot, has become its own thing after seeing it. If we visit frequently, our wealth will increase dramatically. If we can change our concept of ownership, then each of us will only get richer and richer. The poorest people are those who want to interpret "possession" as "occupation" Do you believe it or not? -let me understand that only spiritual possession, spiritual wealth is really the richest! Change your concept of ownership and make yourself the richest person in the world!

Thank you for visiting my blog! Special message return visit: I believe you are the first! Chianle, an American salesman who broke the Guinness record of selling 65,438+0,425 cars a year, solemnly repeated "I am the first!" Before going to bed every day. Then he went to bed. It was this inspiring hint that strengthened his confidence and courage and prompted him to succeed. Do you dare to say "I am the first" in life? The answer to this question is not difficult. If you are a man who is determined to win, please answer: "Of course, I am the first!" " "Why must be the first? Because you are the first. Remember: the person who inspires you and pushes you forward is yourself! So, don't forget to tell yourself every day: "I am the first!" Let me understand how important it is to build self-confidence: no matter what you do, you must believe in yourself first and motivate yourself with confidence in order to succeed in the end!

A drop of water is the footsteps of life, a grass is the vitality of youth, a tree is the wave of hope, and a flower is a beautiful soul! Let's protect everything around us and be pioneers in environmental protection! Ignite green hope, embrace green life and build a green home. Green, you and I care together! Being kind to the earth means being kind to yourself, and saving the earth means saving the future! -Let me understand that every grass and tree has its youthful beauty and vitality. We have the responsibility to create a green and beautiful life and care for the earth.

In short, there are many such "chicken soup for the soul" town teachers. He not only taught us how to be a man, but also taught us how to love ourselves, others and society ... The town teacher is the brightest beacon to illuminate my life. You lead me happily with a golden beam that penetrates all the fog. ...

Thank you, dear town teacher, thank you, my most familiar "stranger". With your guidance, my road to study will be more brilliant, and with your company, my journey of growth will be brighter!

I would like to give this document to Mr. Yu, a small town that loves children as people and other children as gods. Sincerely wish good people peace, health and happiness all their lives! !