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In 2008, the only perfect composition in Shanghai college entrance examination.

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At the end of the city, there are no bustling markets and shining neon lights; At the end of the city, there are only weather-beaten dilapidated shanty towns; At the end of the city, there are a group of people like them.

What should I call them? Children of migrant workers? Farmers' children? Or the second generation of migrant workers? No, I don't want to call them by these cold names. I want to call them by their simple birth names, hold their hands and approach their lives. ...

They grew up in the green mountains and green waters of their hometown, and their pure souls were heading and jointing in the fields. In the wind of Shan Ye, they are running and dreaming. The wind blew into the city from the fields. For their livelihood and future, they followed their parents to the city and took root at the end of the city. So I got used to the sight of green mountains and green waters, and came into contact with high-rise buildings and traffic for the first time. They don't know how to cross the six-lane road, and their little hands can't tell the floors of the office building. The prosperous modern civilization has never brought them any happiness, but this time, it left a deep impression on their hearts.

They took up their schoolbags and carefully integrated into city life. However, in the strange eyes of "city people", I understood the difference between hukou and temporary residence permit for the first time. They are all treasures in parents' hearts! But prematurely assumed the burden that does not belong to this age.

When they come home from school, they cook a simple dinner, and their parents are still working at the construction site or the food market; Wake up at midnight, the starry sky in the city is not as bright as the tearful hometown; Make a wish quietly, hoping that their mobile children's primary school will not be closed tomorrow because it can't pay the electricity bill. ...

However, I saw their growth in their growing bodies. I remember when a reporter asked a child of a migrant worker's children's school whether he would return to his hometown after graduation, the little girl said without hesitation: of course, he must go back! At that moment, I almost cried for their growth.

I remember their childish declaration on the Spring Festival Evening that year: "Our school is small, but its grades are not bad", "We don't compare with children in the city" and "Beijing's 2008 is also our 2008!" They gradually matured, bid farewell to yesterday's shyness and began to welcome a new day.

Although, they are still worried about the meager tuition; Although, the school still can't afford to pay the utilities; Nevertheless, there are still many systems that are not perfect ... although there are many "although", only one "but" is enough. Many eyes have turned to them, and they are thriving.

The sun rises from the horizon, illuminating the end of the city and their lives.

They will eventually become us.

The teacher's comments:

Full-mark composition has five advantages. First of all, the composition truly describes the living conditions of migrant workers' children, from the unnatural and unsuitable experience from rural to urban to the gradual maturity of their mentality, which makes people feel a real group; Secondly, the writing of the composition is very smooth, which shows that the candidates have accumulated a certain amount of reading, but they have not shown off, they have properly expressed their emotions and horizons, and the words and themes match well; Third, on the whole, the composition expresses the author's sympathy, concern and expectation for his peers, and also reflects the requirements of the title of the composition. Fourth, the description of this article is very delicate. "Small hand index can't tell the number of floors in an office building"; Finally, the article focuses on the changes of migrant workers' children. "They will eventually become us." Instead of complaining blindly, the candidate wrote down changes and hopes.

In 2008, the perfect composition of Zhejiang college entrance examination was "Feeling the earth and moving"

At first, I thought the countryside was a fairyland of fairy tales. It has faded away the glitz of the city and washed away the complexity of the world. It may be Al on Van Gogh's canvas. The sky is as clear as a mirror and the sea of flowers is as beautiful as an oil painting. Golden sunflowers grow seeds of hope under the nourishment of sunlight. It may be an idyll in Tao Qian's poems, telling the story of a fairy couple in the fog. The setting sun is light and leisurely.

This is just the village in the poem. When we really go into the village and feel the village with our heart, we will find that our village is experiencing pain. There is sunshine, which is not warm, but it scorches the earth viciously. From a distance, the swaying figure on the land exhausted its heart in the morning and evening, in spring and autumn. He grew up in this land, and his sweat nourished this land; He learned to be strong in this land, and his steps strengthened this land; He was born in the loess and returned to the loess, which has been endless for generations. When the storm came, his heart trembled like a swaying crop in the field, and his tears ran across his gullied cheeks, like water flooding the field, drowning his heart and his breath layer by layer. When the drought came, the crops shook like his thin body. He can't see hope and gain, and his chaotic eyes are dry and empty.

They are sometimes happy, but this happiness seems very humble. Their greatest happiness is a bumper harvest. Full particles are like gems, and the corners of their eyes smile like crescent moons. What they want most is good weather, and they just want to live an ordinary life.

When we face such a picture, will such a country let us down? In fact, the countryside is more real because of this cruel beauty. Feel the countryside, don't always be a leisurely tourist. While appreciating its tranquility and purity, we should pay more attention to its pain and give it more understanding and sympathy.

Feel the countryside, feel the pulse of farming civilization, feel the most vigorous cry of China, feel the massiness of that land, and feel the blood and sweat of that land; Feel the most simple persistence and perseverance of farmers in China, and feel the pain and helplessness experienced by farmers in China.

When we looked at them with disdain, did we ever think that it was they who brought us hope for life with sweat and blood?

Look at those farmers in China who have become eternal farmers in the history of China with the most humble attitude, and let us feel the countryside with our heart!

Fujian college entrance examination perfect score composition "Three Realms of Life"

Three people went into the shop and bought juice, coffee and mineral water, because they like sweetness, bitterness and sweetness and a faint feeling.

Let's imagine that if three customers are of different ages, they are only teenagers, middle-aged people and elderly people. Then teenagers like sweetness, middle-aged people taste sweetness and bitterness, and old people enjoy light alcohol. Isn't it wonderful to apply these three flavors to life?

When we walk in the world, we all go through three stages: adolescence, middle age and old age. The transition from adolescence to middle age and the weathering from middle age to old age are no less than the growth and aging of the body, but also the growth of the mind and the gradual change of mood.

When I was a teenager, I liked sweetness. Teenagers always like to admire the world with beautiful dreams. At this time, we are still simple and immature, burning ourselves in passion. We "teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow" and can proudly "point out the mountains and inspire the writing". We are young, full of energy and full of hope for the future, although "there is dust in Wan Huhou"! Teenagers are a realm of loving beauty, so many of them have made their mark in their teens. Gauss, the prince of mathematics, was famous all over the world when he was young. Young Ding Junhui challenged the world champion; Young Lang Lang is elegantly delivering sweet music to people ... When he was a teenager, he bravely stepped into life without any worries. When I was middle-aged, I tasted bitterness, because I like bitter and sweet feelings. Life at this point, like a cup of fragrant tea, we dig sweetness in bitterness. This is another realm. When people reach middle age, their careers and lives are mostly at their peak, and many people's helplessness has been fully grasped, making their views on the world more mature and stable. "People who can catch up without admonishing the past." Middle age is a period of connecting the past with the future. Middle age is a period of responsibility. Only coffee, bitter and sweet, shows the taste and charm of middle age.

In old age, people have probably tasted all the flavors of life. The sweetness of helping each other, the fragrance of dreams, the sadness and joy of responsibility, the bitterness of kicking down a bridge when it rains, and the acrimony of kicking down a bridge when it rains ... What is the final match? This is a bottle of mineral water. Just like white, it is actually composed of seven colors. The highest state of life is to be calm after the wind and frost, and after the big wind and waves. The wind and waves of the world can't arouse a ripple in my heart. This is true maturity. Look at the ebb and flow of the world with a pair of truly humiliated eyes. Only in this leisurely state of mind can we taste a faint but rich feeling in the clear water.

Life must be like this, drifting away. There is a saying that teenagers look at mountains and waters; Looking at mountains in middle age is not mountains, and looking at water is not water; The old man sees mountains or mountains, water or water. This statement is correct. Life is a cycle from simple to complex, and then to calm and simple. What we have to do is to enjoy every taste and feel every realm, and in the process, purify the meaning of life.

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The three people in the test materials are set as teenagers, middle-aged people and elderly people in turn, and then the different "tastes" experienced by the three life stages are described. This is the author's overall grasp of the conceptual materials.

Although it is not necessary to quote materials at the beginning of the article, the beginning of this article is close to the raw materials. The first paragraph summarizes the materials from the causal relationship, while the second paragraph shows your own ideas ("imagination"). In this way, the text is clear and easy to be accepted by readers.

As far as the content is concerned, it is rare that the candidate is a teenager, but he also has some experience on the "taste" of middle-aged and elderly people; Naturally, this is what the author got from observation and reading. (Yu Faliang)

When I was middle-aged, I tasted bitterness, because I like bitter and sweet feelings. Life at this point, like a cup of fragrant tea, we dig sweetness in bitterness. This is another realm. When people reach middle age, their career and life are mostly at their peak, and many helplessness in life has been fully grasped, which also makes them more mature and stable.

Excellent composition of Hubei college entrance examination in 2008: raise your hand and cast your foot

When my grandfather died, my grandmother whispered to him all night, or looked at him as if time had stopped.

When I was a child, I liked to go to my grandfather's house. Grandpa knows many interesting things, and grandma is a superb cook. Every time I listen to Grandpa happily finish a paragraph, Grandpa and grandchildren are hungry. So, grandpa crept into the kitchen, grabbed some freshly fried chicken chops while grandma was away, and came back to share them with me like a child. Several times, my grandfather was "stolen" by my grandmother and had to be beaten by my grandmother. Then we obediently set the table for dinner. At that time, I was really happy.

Sometimes grandma spends a long time buying food. Grandpa was so anxious that he couldn't sit still and looked out of the window, hoping to see grandma. However, when I learned that my grandmother was not far from Wan Li to buy our favorite authentic beef, my grandfather smiled again.

However, later, grandpa went to another world that he could never touch again.

The first time I didn't eat my grandfather's dinner was in a hotel. Grandma came, but she was not happy. Grandpa was missing from the tableware prepared for everyone, but when the waiter brought a chair, grandma refused and thanked her.

Grandma said, "The old man told me in his dream last night that he wanted to eat, too. He should be glad that you all remember what he wants to eat. However, the old man said that he would share a chair with me, which is enough ... "Grandma is a simple person, but her words impressed me more than any famous book.

Grandparents always exude something that I can't say, but always want to be close to.

Therefore, even though I was Tomb-Sweeping Day before the college entrance examination, I still insisted on climbing mountains, sweeping my grandfather's grave and communicating with him silently.

Grandma carefully, carefully set out a small table of exquisite and delicious rice and put it in front of grandpa's grave. At this time, grandma always cries. I know, grandma heard someone say that people in the other world really want to eat sacrificial food, but their throats are only as big as the eye of a needle. Grandma will be very sad to think that way about grandpa. Besides, the paper money folded by grandma is too thick to burn. If those flying ashes can bring grandma's thoughts, then I think those are the most beautiful love letters.

The trick and dialogue between grandpa and grandma let me witness their persistence. My eyes are often wet, perhaps because of the long-term noise, which finally touches a string that I haven't dialed for a long time.

I always try to convey something between gestures. Is it admiration for love or natural gratitude for love?

Comments: This article has a good selection of materials. It chose tips and dialogues between grandparents. It looks trivial and ordinary, but it is very life-oriented. It permeates the feelings of the characters and vividly describes the mutual feelings between loving elderly couples. The author observes life carefully and deeply, so the article is full of emotion.

Sichuan 2007 college entrance examination perfect score composition: the definition of excellent life

Every life is like a ring. It is hollow and incomplete, but it is complete at the beginning and the end. We have chosen our own life, our own way of life, whether rich or poor, to live ourselves and live ourselves. ...

Gu Shuli

Songs on the tower of life hope

First of all, the story in the story

A young man trudged on the road of life. He was forced to give up a backpack on a boat trip. In beauty, health, honesty, alertness, talent, money and honor, he finally chose to give up honesty.

So the ship went on.

Second, the heavy feeling behind the story.

Seeing such a story, I have a vague sadness. Yes, sad.

For the backpack that is easy to be abandoned, and for the young man who is easy to give up "honesty".

Or, for all those who ignore "honesty". I don't know whether these people think honesty and trustworthiness have nothing to do with themselves, but I know that a life that refuses honesty is definitely not an excellent life.

Third, life outside the story.

Once upon a time, people began to "safely" imprison themselves in a small cement cage with solid walls. What is it to guard against? Or to hide something? When people cruelly trample on the trust and friendship between people, have you ever wondered what makes people so suspicious and jealous? When people live in the jungle of reinforced concrete, do they worry that their eyes will one day become metal without feelings? When people wear elaborate masks and smile in front of people, do they feel that there is something missing in life?

Honesty! That abandoned backpack.

Fourth, look at life in the story.

I spent some time browsing the newspaper the other day. It is reported that people with poor personal credit refused to register a company, act as an enterprise legal person or apply for senior management personnel within three years.

All right!

It seems that honesty is not always a forgotten role.

Kundera said in The Unbearable Lightness of Life: The so-called life is the giving and receiving of honesty, friendship and trust.

My mother-an ordinary professional woman and my idol-told me that honesty is the foothold of life.

So, today I write down here: Honesty is the fulcrum of life, and it is also the criterion of my life.

The so-called excellent life means being honest and trustworthy and loving life.

● Expert comments:

Standing on the height of "life", this paper describes the importance of "honesty" to life in a piecemeal way. Quotations, narratives, example sentences and famous sayings echo each other and promote mutual interaction, which naturally completes the definition of "excellent life". The four subheadings of the article are cleverly named, and there are ingenious internal relations between them, which makes the article seamless and have no sense of separation. I have my own thoughts on the definition of "excellent life", which embodies some originality. It is not easy to write such an article in a short time.

Sichuan 2007 college entrance examination perfect score composition: I am honest, I am beautiful

Honesty and trustworthiness is a fine tradition of the Chinese nation. For thousands of years, people have always emphasized and respected honesty. The wind of honesty is simple and mellow, the longer the history, the greater the spirit of honesty, and the spirit of honesty permeates the land of China. She has long been integrated into the blood of our national culture and has become an indispensable part of cultural genes.

However, in recent years, with the impact and cleaning of market economy, people find that honesty is fading and "money worship" is becoming more and more serious. "Benefit" replaced virtue and honesty and gave way to fraud. On the balance of many people's lives, the sinking end is "

Health, beauty, alertness, intelligence, money and honor are the only things that stand above. Honesty has become lighter!

Not to mention the intrigue and intrigue in the mall; Needless to say, the vendors in the market are short and shoddy; Needless to say, dirty rice oil is sold by old rice, and the tap water is mixed with methanol; Even if one day the weather is fine and you are happy, you come across a bulging wallet by the roadside: dare you pick it up? Live. If it happened many years ago, you would gladly give it to the police uncle to win people's praise, but today, in a crowded street, I objectively say that as long as you touch this bag, you will be in trouble.

This is the case in the small environment, and there are many examples in the international environment. Looking at Uncle Sam on the other side of the ocean, he regarded honesty as nothing. We want to build a national missile defense system. The Anti-Ballistic Missile Treaty is an obstacle, and tearing it up is not negotiable.

The wind of honesty will stop, and people of insight will sigh.

However, we, the new century and new youth, have slowly unfurled a banner, on which we wrote, I am honest and beautiful!

Adolescence is the golden age of life, a period of purity of truth, goodness and beauty in life. Honesty is the virtue that should not be ignored and is easily overlooked. It is necessary for us to hold high the integrity so that everyone can see it and be attracted by her warm light.

I have a strong hunch that in the foreseeable future, honesty will return to the market, to society and to you and me. She is like a flowing water, gradually infiltrating and deeply rooted in people's hearts; She is like a breeze, blowing across the fields and blowing people's hearts. There, at that time, honesty replaced camouflage, order replaced disorder, simplicity replaced complexity, warmth replaced indifference, and people were bathed in the morning light of honesty, all of which benefited a lot.

Then, take action, my friends!

I am honest and beautiful; I'm beautiful and I'm proud!

● Expert comments:

The author of this paper pays close attention to life enthusiastically, and takes pictures of some phenomena in life, from small to large, from near to far. The language is clean and tidy, and the lines are full of deep feelings and heroism. It seems that as long as we pay close attention to life and write about it with passion, we can write good articles.

Sichuan 2007 college entrance examination perfect score composition: walk with integrity

Someone once asked me why I could make my career bigger.

-Answer: Nothing but a word and a letter.

This is "Li" in the president's office of Changjiang Industry, speaking into the microphone of the reporter of Asia Weekly. His heartfelt words spread all over the world with the help of powerful radio waves and shocked our hearts.

Perhaps, another sentence that Superman didn't say is: Being sincere to others means believing in yourself.

..... Once upon a time, I also had a lost time.

Letter? I'm ashamed.

-Tonight, the green hills under the moon in the forest are unparalleled! Although the quiet girls in Juanjuan's works are bright and charming, they are not frivolous; Her eyebrows are low, her sleeves hang down, and her garland is strict. I sat alone on the bluestone outside the forest with my head in my hands. I don't talk. I stopped talking, just looked down at my report card with tearful eyes. Half a year's vanity and self-deception, half a year's flying and frivolous, have soaked this ridiculous paper.

Suddenly, I remembered a sentence: Whoever is dishonest to fate will not believe him. Trekking on the long road of life, on the arduous and stumbling struggle road, whoever does not print the footprint of honesty will never get out of the small and narrow circle. There should be no hypocrisy and deception on the road of learning.

I don't mean to lament autumn, but I'm afraid the flowers will wither. I don't know whether I betrayed myself or I was tired of being honest: I stopped at this obstacle in my life.

The shame of the Sri Lankan people. Just like a butterfly with a broken wing, it flutters its broken wing and flies in vain into the mud. I can see my father's hard work in my mind: a yellow-brown plain. On the horizon, one place after another was built into an earth wall more than a foot thick by wooden rafters. Poplar, neem and Sophora branches are as thick as barrels, but their leaves are as small as copper coins. They turn over in the wind and spread to their parents' ears like the tunes of nature. With bare arms, waving whips, they shouted at the oxen like mountains and rivers, pulling triangular plows. "Sincerity and faith" are the lifeline of this group of people who have worked hard to dig rations from the yellow land left by their ancestors.

If a farmer is mistaken for a period of time, he will be mistaken for a year.

People who don't believe in a moment won't believe in a lifetime.

..... Inadvertently, it sneaked into my heart like a finger, plucked the untouched string at the bottom of the heart, and played a series of vibrato, as if Xu Beihong's galloping horse hissed in the wilderness, as if Schubert's keys trembled like stars, as if standing on the top of the Himalayas, listening to the wind coming from outside.

At this moment, it suddenly dawned on me:-Walk with sincerity on the road of life.

● Expert comments:

This article is good at using poetic language to set off the atmosphere. Materials are organized by others to reflect on themselves, think of others by themselves, and then observe themselves by others, and "torture" their souls layer by layer, with clear context. The article skillfully uses classical poetry and is good at shaping artistic conception. Languages such as "If a farmer is mistaken for a moment, he will be mistaken for a year" and "If a person does not believe in a moment, he will not believe for a lifetime" are full of philosophies. It seems that improving the cultivation of ancient Chinese prose is very beneficial to the improvement of writing level.

Sichuan 2007 college entrance examination perfect score composition: patient Wu's physical examination report

Name: Wu

Gender: male or female.

Age: Born in 1960s or 1970s.

Occupation: to be determined

Diagnostic method: combination of traditional Chinese and western medicine

First, visit the clinic.

Face: Nothing serious, just not blushing. His face won't change color even after "hitting a person when he's down". Eyes: The eyes are inflexible and can only look sideways or at "money". Cunning eyes. Nose: the nose is upturned, the nostrils are enlarged, and the sense of smell is intermittent. You can only smell bureaucracy and extravagance, but you can't smell popularity and poverty. Tongue: Degenerate, inaccurate pronunciation, and the shape between tongues tends to become a spring. When you say "lies", your pronunciation is clear, and when you say "facts", your pronunciation is vague and your words are unclear.

Second, feel the pulse.

The pulse is heavy, fast, urgent, tight, slippery and astringent ... Palpitation and premature beats after bragging are typical symptoms of heart failure.

Third, the perspective.

1. The liver and lungs are dark or even black. 2. The spine shows signs of bending, and the condition is straight waist.

Fourth, blood sample collection

The patient's blood color is dark red. The molecular structure of blood color is varied, including talent, appearance, money and thinking, among which the first three are mostly, but there are few honest cells and platelets.

Gene identification of verb (abbreviation of verb)

After precise instrument testing, the patient's genes have changed. It is no longer possible to show to future generations that the structure of "faith, righteousness and loyalty" has been destroyed. Although genetic testing can't determine families, their behavior has a strong feudal small-scale peasant consciousness. It is manifested in bending over when you see five barrels of rice (of course, the spine has been found to be problematic), conspiracy, conspiracy and poaching.

Sixth, the treatment.

1. blood exchange: inject a lot of "humanistic" oxygen to replace the harmful "money worship" carbon dioxide in the body. 2. Ask yourself once every morning and evening and touch your conscience. 3. Read a lot of articles to awaken their honesty consciousness.

Seven, the doctor suggested.

This case is not found for the first time, and it is very representative. Please pay attention to patients and don't infect each other.

Doctor (signature)

● Expert comments:

This paper is novel and innovative. This paper describes the characteristics of faithless people from the outside to the inside through four ways: seeing a doctor, feeling the pulse, fluoroscopy and blood sample collection. The reasons for the loss of integrity were revealed implicitly through gene identification, and the basic methods for restoring integrity were put forward through treatment and doctor's advice. The full text is developed from three aspects: what, why and why.

Sichuan 2007 college entrance examination perfect score composition: keep the inner contract

I am often moved to tears by an ancient man named Wei Sheng. "I made an appointment with that woman, and that woman didn't arrive until three days later. In the event of a flood, the micro-life died holding the column. " Weisheng is such a persistent and lovely gentleman. For that perhaps unimportant agreement, in order to keep the contract written to him in his heart, he bravely defended it with his life. I saw two flashing words from him-honesty.

I often miss the ancient times, which was an era full of personality charm. Behind the elegance of those gentlemen is the structure of people supported by honesty, credit and persistent belief. Don't those brave people who don't go swimming miss their homeland? Doesn't he know the danger and harm of going deep into the den? He went without hesitation, so firmly, with a cavity of loyalty to the monarch and full of loyalty to the oath. Don't Lin Xiangru, with Choi in his hand, know that the king of Qin is insidious and greedy? He promised to return to Zhao intact before leaving. He is following a difficult road of practicing his promise, bravely defending the interests of the country and the immortal contract in his heart.

These are old stories, and history and time may have faded them a little. The noise in the street and the colorful shadows of neon lights drown out the brilliance of human nature, and we have to sigh for those lost qualities.

Those impetuous people who sing "don't care about eternity, only care about what they once had" may forget that marriage is a contract of happiness and a contract of the soul. Only by carefully guarding can we reap the fruits of happiness.

Those who greedily think that "the right is not used, and it will expire after expiration" may forget their oath in party flag, which is the constraint of behavior and the straightforwardness of belief. A person who can even abandon his beliefs will eventually be abandoned by society.

An unconstrained mind is empty and free, just like a soul that has lost its home, a tree that has lost its root and a river that has lost its source. It will only degenerate, wither and dry up. ...

A voice from the soul is crying: stop-the contract of the soul: honesty!

● Expert comments:

The article flexibly uses historical stories, skillfully selects some phenomena in real life, and skillfully integrates books with life, from ancient times to the present, satirizes the present with the ancient, and sets off the present and the ancient with a rigorous structure. The penultimate paragraph embodies the author's profound thoughts and the beauty of reason; Language such as "the contract to keep the soul" is poetic and beautiful; Grouping fragments by parallelism embodies the beauty of momentum and eloquence. Therefore, how to use the book knowledge learned and the real life observed in writing is an important content of writing training.