I am urgently looking for an English composition with high scores, about the current proliferation of advertisements, about 200 words.

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Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. When you take bus, you can see the it in the moving TV or surface of the bus, when you look outside of the bus, you can see the advertisement too, in the building, the house even in the residential area. In China no matter where you walk, you can see the advertising. So how do you think the advertisement? Do you think it is necessary to advertise everywhere ?

In my opinion, although advertising will enable people to make decisions quickly, sometimes, they cause lots of trouble. In the modern society, no matter online or the reality world, the advertiser want the most commercial interest and attract more and more customers, they will go to extremes. Firstly, they have to match the common people, the slogen will be various, some of them will be harmful to children, like the wrong grammar or wrong spelling. Secondly, most of the slogens are misleading and unreal. The advertiser ignores the truth, just value the profit. Finally, some advertising appear no matter we want to see or not, like in the video in the internet, the advertising will come out several times.

In the end, the good advertising will be good for our decision on the condition that they according to the reality and from a customer perspective. And good advertisement just show up some times then will be remembered by people.

High scores are guaranteed. Medium should be fine. Haha, I hope you can adopt it.