1. Write an essay about "Laoshan Boundary" 600. We decided to climb a 30-mile-high Yaoshan Mountain. The map is called Yuechengling, and the local area is called Laoshan. We set out in the afternoon and walked up the ravine. I don't know why I couldn't get ahead, but I waited for a long time before I took a few steps and had to stop. The queue was crowded and tired, so I sat down on the side of the road. Stand up before you go. I wish I could go further, but I couldn't go any further after several walks and had to stop. It's getting late and hungry, and many people are so bored that they cry and scold. We stole an empty seat and ran to the front. The terrain gradually became steep. We have surpassed our own column and ran to the end of the column "Red Star". Just around the corner, we found a house by the road, so we went in to have a rest. Men may have heard about the parade, and according to their habits, they go somewhere to hide. "Sister-in-law, lend you a rest." "Please sit inside." She said with some frightened expression. The team is still moving slowly. We started talking to the Yao people. According to our experience along the way, no matter who they are, no matter how afraid they are of us, as long as we make it clear to them what the Red Army is, they are very affectionate with us. Today, we also want to give the Yao people a try. We talked about the Red Army, exorbitant taxes and levies, Guangxi warlords forbidding Yao people to believe in their own religion and killing them, and her living conditions here. The woman began to cry. She said that she used to own land, but the Han people drove them away from her own land. Now she lives in this barren mountain, which is a kind of family land. We have to pay a particularly heavy rent every year. She said: "Guangxi's exorbitant taxes and miscellaneous fees have a particularly heavy burden on the Yao people, and Guangxi warlords especially bully them. If your Red Army had come earlier, we wouldn't have suffered so much. " She asked us if we were hungry. The question hit home. She only took out a little rice and cooked porridge on the stove made of wood in the middle of the room. She apologized to us and said there was not much rice. She doesn't want it. Finally, a comrade she knew brought a bag of rice, which was enough for three days. Although we knew there was a shortage of food ahead, we gave her a whole bag of rice. She accepted it with great pleasure. Today, the army will March at night. Her house and fence are made of dead bamboo. We were afraid that someone would take it down as a torch, so we wrote a few slogans and put them in a conspicuous place outside with rice soup. We told our troops not to tear down the fence and use it as a torch. We asked the Yao people, knowing that there was a bamboo forest ahead that could be cut down as a torch, so we sent people to prepare it. The porridge tastes sweet because it is really hungry. We also give bowls to Yao mother and daughter. We inquired about the distance ahead, and we know that there is a place called Leigong Rock, which is very steep. It goes up 30 miles and down 15 miles, and the front is the edge of Tang Fang. We are still there. We set aside some water for everyone to drink. It was dark before we reached the foot of the mountain. Sure enough, there are many bamboo forests there. The sky is full of stars and torches are on. Looking up from the foot of the mountain, I saw the torches arranged in many zigzag patterns, connected to the sky and holding down the starlight, and I couldn't tell whether they were torches or stars. This is a miracle that I have never seen in my life. Everyone knows how steep the mountain is and can't help crying back and forth. "Don't fall behind and be a turtle!" "We go against the sky!" Everyone laughed when they heard it. They walked up the zigzag road step by step. Looking up, the torch rose to the sky overhead bit by bit. Looking down, it's a cliff. The torch shines on people's faces, right under their feet. After walking for a long time, suddenly I couldn't walk in front. It is said that there is still a road ahead of the cliff, and horses can't climb it. After waiting for a while, the order was given. We will sleep here and climb the mountain early tomorrow morning. Sleep here? What should I do? It is impossible to sleep in the bamboo forest. But do you sleep on the road? The road is only one foot wide. Isn't it difficult to turn over at midnight? Moreover, the stones on the road are very uneven, and a night's sleep will definitely hurt people. But I had no choice but to wrap a blanket and lie down on my side. Because I am so tired, I will fall asleep soon. I woke up suddenly in the middle of the night, feeling chilly, tingling all over my muscles and shaking all over. I rolled the blanket tighter and curled it up, but I still couldn't sleep. The twinkling stars in the sky are like black curtains. Black mountain peaks stand in front of us like giants. The surrounding mountains surround the valley like a well. There are several fires up and down. Comrades who woke up from the cold are whispering around the fire. In addition, there is silence. There are unpredictable voices in my ears, some are far away and close, some are very big and very thin, like spring silkworms chewing mulberry leaves, like wild horses galloping on the plains, like mountain springs whimpering, like rough waves. I don't know when I fell asleep again At dawn, I was woken up and said I was ready to go. Someone is delivering food at the foot of the mountain. I grabbed a bowl and began to eat. I gave the order that the team members should climb the mountain anyway today. Because the mountain road is difficult to walk, we need to push all the way forward. Several of us stopped again, immediately wrote slogans, and assigned people to shout slogans and give speeches at various sections of the mountain to help patients and carriers. We were busy for a while and then moved on. After walking for a while, we saw the road on the cliff mentioned last night. It's called Lei Gongyan. Next to it is a cliff, not very deep, but scary enough. A lot of horses have gathered under the cliff, but we can't go last night until the whole line is over today. Several horses once fell off a cliff and broke their ankles. They crossed the stone ladder carefully. Although the road above is still steep, it is not so steep. I walked all the way, checking the signs. I'm gradually falling behind. It happened that a Yao man came to talk to him. I know there is still a long way to go, and there are steep mountains in more than twenty miles. Yesterday's dinner and today's breakfast were not full. I was hungry and weak, but I had to summon up courage to move forward. On the way, I saw that the slogans I had sent before were used up, so I wrote slogans all the way. I'm too tired to walk.
2. The lesson "Laoshan Street" is about the silence of Leigongyan night, which is characterized by sound and silence. The ventriloquism performance began with Barking in Deep Lane. This sentence is about the barking of a dog. Listening from a distance, it comes from a deep alley, creating a quiet atmosphere at night and bringing the audience to a specific place. I wonder what will happen. This sentence not only sets off the quiet atmosphere in the middle of the night with emotion and words, but also paves the way for a family to wake up from a woman's morning to the noise of the whole family. (2) "I heard a mouse as a rope, the pot was crooked, and the woman coughed in her dream." This is based on the sound of mice stealing vegetables, the tilting of the pot and the coughing of women, which aggravated the quiet atmosphere in the middle of the night and showed it to the family. Writing static by moving is a traditional artistic expression in China. For example, Wang Wei's "Birding Creek" says: "When people are idle, osmanthus flowers fall, and the night is quiet and the mountains are empty. When the moon comes out, birds are singing in the spring stream. " It describes the silence and charming mountain scenery in the spring night in the mountains. Among them, the silence in Kasugayama is set off by moving and writing silence, which makes people more obvious in the singing of birds.
3. In paragraph 23 of Laoshan Street, try to describe waking up in the middle of the night from the description order and the use of 1. Description order: Write the cold feeling after waking up from freezing: "I suddenly woke up, feeling chilly, piercing my muscles and bones, and shaking all over. I rolled the blanket tighter, but I still couldn't sleep. " I wrote down what I saw: the twinkling stars in the sky are like black curtains. Black mountain peaks stand in front of us like giants. The surrounding mountains surround the valley like a well. There are several fires up and down. Write again and smell again: comrades who woke up from the cold whispered around the fire. In addition, there is silence. There are unpredictable voices in my ears, which are extremely far and near, extremely heavy and finely cut, like spring silkworms chewing mulberry leaves, like wild horses galloping on the plains, like mountain springs whimpering, like choppy waves. 2. Rhetoric: First of all, the author uses metaphor, personification and parallelism. Let readers feel immersive. These four "images" are divided into two groups: one is animals and the other is water. Both groups are smaller than each other in sound, showing two "unpredictable" auditory feelings. Under extremely difficult and dangerous circumstances, Red Army soldiers can spend the night halfway up the mountain, immerse themselves in it, enjoy the night view and forget all about the cold. This shows the optimistic and open-minded feelings of the Red Army soldiers and the fearless spirit of overcoming all difficulties and obstacles for the success of the China Revolution. Secondly, the author uses the method of contrast. People often say that "silence is better than sound", but sometimes "silence" needs "sound" to set off. This passage sets off Lei Gongyan's midnight silence with an "unpredictable voice in his ear", vividly and concretely depicts his deep affection in detail, which makes the reader seem to mobilize his hearing.