Revise the disease sentence and add the cause of the disease

Modification of defective sentences means modifying words and sentences with obvious grammatical defects to make the sentences smooth, correct and more complete without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence. What are the causes of diseased sentence modification and disease? The following is the disease sentence modification and disease cause that I compiled. Welcome to enjoy the diseased sentence modification and disease cause 1

1. Improper word order

1. Improper positioning of components Nanchang There are many kinds of things used by Zhou Enlai on display in the August 1st Uprising Memorial Hall. (Jiangxi Volume Question 6, Item A) In the sentence, many kinds of ? should be adjusted to ? something? before ? something?, directly restricting ? something?

2. Improper placement of clauses. The big drama jointly produced by powerful actors allows people to see not only the overall progress of Chinese opera, but also the gratifying step that Chinese opera has taken in the modernization issue. (Beijing Volume Question 5, Item D) In ??the sentence, "People not only saw" but also saw that it is a compound sentence with a progressive relationship, so the "overall progress of Chinese opera" should be compared with "the gratifying strides that Chinese opera has made in modernization" One step? interchange to show the progressive level from part to whole.

2. Improper collocation

1. Improper subject-verb collocation Since the birth of the Beijing University Student Film Festival in 2008, more than 1 million people have participated in watching the film. (National Paper I, Question 3, Item A) The subject "1 million people" in the sentence does not match the predicate "participate in viewing". The latter sentence can be changed to "The total number of people who have participated in the film viewing has exceeded 1 million."

2. Improper combination of animals (media) and objects. If breastfeeding women only rely on the iodine content in supplements, they may be deficient in iodine. If they do not add iodine-containing foods in time, it may cause brain damage to their babies. Nerve damage or mental retardation. (Zhejiang Volume Question 5, Item A) The verb "take" in the sentence does not match the object "iodine content" in the sentence. The "iodine content" of "contains" should be changed to "contains iodine".

3. Improper pairing of host and guest. During his tenure as battalion commander and regimental commander, Comrade Li Mingde was rated as an advanced training unit and a logistics support model unit many times. (National Paper III, Question 4, Item B) ① The subject of the sentence? Comrade Li Mingde? and the object? Advanced training unit and logistics support model unit? are not properly matched. The first sentence can be changed to? Comrade Li Mingde served as battalion commander and regimental commander. The battalion and regiment he led?

4. Improper matching of one side and two sides Whether the scientific outlook on development can be implemented is undoubtedly of great significance to building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development. (National Paper I, Question 3, Item C) The front of the sentence mentions two aspects of affirmation and negation (?Can it?), but the latter only mentions one aspect of affirmation (?Construction, promotion?). In order to make the previous and later reference, Can the previous "?" be deleted?

3. Incomplete or redundant components

1. Incomplete components

(1) The subject is incomplete in this work, which does not give people much positive feedback. Encouragement and positive inspiration, on the contrary, some of the plots have a lot of negative effects. (Zhejiang Volume Question 5, Item B) The preposition structure "in the middle" of the sentence covers the subject "this work", so the "in the middle" should be deleted.

(2) Incomplete object Legal experts believe that consumers destroy goods in public just to humiliate or vent their dissatisfaction. (National Paper III, Question 4, Item D) The verb "humiliate" in the sentence lacks an object to match it, and should be followed by "businessman", "operator" and other objects.

2. Redundant ingredients If the things I manage can bring even a little bit of happiness and joy to the masses, I will be very happy and happy. (National Paper III, Question 4, Item C) This sentence is a complex sentence with a hypothetical relationship. The "time" in the first clause destroys the integrity of the sentence structure and should be deleted.

IV. Structural chaos The colorful waterfalls are located deep in the mountains in Niru Village, Shangri-La County. A plateau snowmelt river called "Niru River" and steep peaks create this unique spectacle.

(Beijing Paper Question 5, Item A) The first half of the sentence states "waterfalls", and the second half changes to "rivers and mountain peaks". You can change the second half to "this unique wonder is formed by a famous river" It was created by the plateau snowmelt river and steep peaks of the Niru River.

5. Unclear meaning

1. Inconsistent sentences The water on the mountain is precious, and we leave it to those who come at night to drink. (Tianjin Volume Question 4, Item C) If the word "come at night" in the sentence is broken into "night/come", it means "come at night"; if it is broken into "night/come up", it means "come up the mountain at night", which can be Change "evening" to "late" or "after".

2. Words with multiple meanings I will definitely convince the teacher to go with you for this competition, so that you will not be too nervous and can perform better. (Jiangsu Paper Question 4, Item B) If ? and ? in the sentence are understood as conjunctions, the objects of "persuasion" are the teacher and you; if they are prepositions, the objects of "persuasion" are only the teacher. people.

3. Multiple connections. He rides a motorcycle every day from the east to the west of the city, from the south to the north of the city, collecting waste liquid from more than 180 hospitals, photo studios, publishing houses and other units bit by bit. collected. (Guangdong Volume Question 4, Item A) The "more than 180" in the sentence can be limited to "hospitals" only, or it can be limited to "hospitals, photo studios, and publishing houses", and the "more than 180" can be transferred to "units". forward.

4. Unknown reference Today the teacher praised himself again at the class meeting, but I think we still need to continue working hard. (National Paper II, Question 4, Item B) The "self" in the sentence can refer to both the speaker and the teacher. 6. Illogical. The Municipal Education Commission requires that daily necessities and bedding in the student apartments of each school are chosen by students independently. purchased and cannot be equipped uniformly. (National Paper I, Question 3, Item B) "Daily necessities" in the sentence includes "bedding", and using "" and "" to connect it makes a logical mistake of juxtaposing big concepts and small concepts. Modify the sick sentence and add the cause of the disease 2

　1 ( ) A. In the era when Ji Kang lived, with his background and irreconcilable character, it was impossible for him to avoid disaster.

B. The officer tied his wife’s hands with a rope with tears in his eyes, and spent a whole day dragging her up the mountain from the snow.

C. Several debt collectors came to the shopping mall management department. Manager Zhao Lindong sent the deputy manager and his assistant to receive them.

D. The association plans to erect a giant bronze statue of the Yellow Emperor, about 10 meters high, at the Mausoleum of the Yellow Emperor on the eve of the Double Ninth Festival this year.

　2 ( )A. On February 18, the last batch of Cuban refugees stranded in Panama were repatriated to the US military’s Guantánamo base in Cuba.

B. For a long time, society has always used the enrollment rate as a rigid indicator to evaluate schools and teachers, although the central government has always opposed this.

C. The football match is about to start, and the audience is rushing to enter the venue.

D. The story of Jia Dao's "Monk Pushing the Moon Down to the Door" in the Tang Dynasty and the tempering of the word "green" in "The Spring Breeze Also Greens the South Bank of the River" by Wang Anshi in the Song Dynasty, we all know Very familiar.

　3 ( )A. My thoughts were interrupted from time to time by the cries of vendors outside the window.

B. As exchanges between countries around the world increase year by year, the number of workers and expatriates exported by each country also increases, resulting in a surge in the amount of global remittances.

C. The foreigner discovered the three diamond rings lost in the hotel room on his way to the airport.

D. We brothers have a deep love for each other. How can we leave our disabled brother and younger brother to watch a wonderful performance?

4 ( ) A. The two of them? "Second diagnosis ?The disparity in results is so huge that it is difficult for everyone to understand.

B. The deadline for proposals from deputies to this session of the National People’s Congress is before 6 p.m. on the closing day of the conference.

C. The principal invited a famous astronomer to advise the students on difficult problems encountered in their studies.

D. Fax communication can quickly and accurately transmit text and graphics to distant places through wired or wireless communication lines.

　5 ()A. In Shuidonggou, the primitive cultural site, people discovered slightly polished ostrich egg perforated ornaments and bone awls made of bone fragments. This was the germ of polishing technology. It is of great significance in the history of human production and development.

B. Wang Yan went to Shenzhen after graduation. According to her, she just wants to make a lot of money to prove her worth.

C. As exchanges between countries around the world increase year by year, the number of workers and expatriates exported by each country also increases, resulting in a surge in the amount of global remittances.

D. Fenglong Mountain, also called Feilong Mountain, is located 22 kilometers away from Shijiazhuang City. It has been recorded in history since the Warring States Period and has been a famous mountain in Hebei since the Han and Tang Dynasties.

　6 ( ) A. Improving the treasury bond market mainly involves reforming the issuance scale, term, method, interest rate, paperless degree, etc. of treasury bonds to realize the networking of the national treasury bond market.

B. When creating "Li Qingzhao", the author delicately rendered and expressed Li Qingzhao's thoughts and feelings in several different environments: newly married, divorced, and worried about the country.

C. The important cause of environmental pollution is the loss and waste of resources and energy.

D. This kind of clarification of the rights and obligations of all parties in the enterprise through contracts, articles of association, etc. is undoubtedly a basic guarantee for employees to exercise their democratic rights.

7 ( )A. The cultural essays written by some writers have been trying to re-evaluate the history that was once confused by various politics from the perspective of modern people.

B. The novel "Wandering" published by People's Literature Publishing House is written by a Mauritian Chinese author who has lived overseas for more than 20 years.

C. The conspiracy activities of counterrevolutionaries should be exposed and they can be exposed.

D. Stopping and regulating power consumption behavior has become an urgent issue in the anti-corruption struggle.

8( )A. Ji Ruizhi, the daughter of Ji Hongchang, an outstanding Communist Party member and the famous patriotic general, gave us a vivid report.

B. My father has left, but those sincere words always echo in my heart.

C. After the thunderstorm, the dark clouds gradually dissipated, the air was fresh and moist, the sunset slanted, and a curved rainbow appeared in the western sky, decorating the world like a fairy mirror.

D. You don’t need a dedicated phone to use the 300 phone. If you can remember your card number and password, you don’t have to carry the 300 card with you, so it is more convenient than a magnetic card.

9 ( )A. In universities of science and engineering, students first learn basic courses, then professional basic courses, and then professional courses. Through such step-by-step learning, they can acquire more systematic basic theoretical knowledge.

B. The clothes of the girls on the grassland are as beautiful as white clouds.

C. Researchers at the Polytechnic Institute of Technology are developing biosensors for detecting microorganisms that cause poisoning in things.

D. We do not deny that the novel "Medicine" does not reveal hope, but that this hope is very slim.

10 ( )A. Knowledge economics mainly studies the relationship between knowledge and economic development, and explores the laws of how to rely on the advancement of knowledge to achieve economic development and increase wealth.

B. This ending is implicit and natural, making readers feel that it comes suddenly, passes leisurely, and has lingering lingering sounds.

C. The good news that the self-defense counterattack heroes and models report group arrived in Shanghai brought everyone's thoughts back to the hot and boiling border post, recalling the scene when they performed there to express condolences.

D. This year’s "Challenge Cup" competition has significantly improved in terms of the number of participating universities and entries.

11 ( )A. Wherever the Oriental Song and Dance Troupe went, they were warmly welcomed by the masses.

B. The British and French imperialist coalition burned and looted the world-famous Old Summer Palace.

C. The correctional officers provide earnest education to the criminal juveniles, so that they can deepen their understanding of the problem and improve their consciousness.

D. People are not sages. Even if they are sages, they will inevitably make mistakes.

12 ( )A. Faced with the urgent challenge of the resumption of customs clearance for township and village enterprises, Qianjiang Motorcycle Factory has successfully played a proactive card to adapt to the standards.

B. Why not play with life and ignore it year after year? It is chanted repeatedly and openly; teasing and making fun of life has become a fashion in some popular popular novels.

C TV series "The Story of the Editorial Department" is a popular TV series. Although it shows some small things among them, it is thought-provoking.

D. At first, he only provided a hideout for criminals, but later he went into battle himself, abducting women in the name of selling insulation materials.

13( )A. Three years later, when the reporter drove here again, a magnificent new petrochemical city was already standing in front of people.

B. This is just one of the patients he has cured. In his clinic, which is hung with banners and filled with tens of thousands of letters, you can easily find the cases he has cured.

C. After years of hard study, superb medical skills and outstanding achievements, Li Yunjie has attracted the attention of the medical community at home and abroad.

D. Randomly fabricate some interesting stories to cater to the needs of some readers. The publisher makes money, but what kind of social effect can those books have?

14( )A. Put less emphasis on “departmental power” and put more emphasis on departmental collaboration.

B. For issues that can be solved directly at the grassroots level, do not hold meetings above.

C. In view of its own shortcomings, "Jin Ping Mei Ci Hua" was banned shortly after its publication. Only a few critics studied it, and it is still a book that is not suitable for public release.

D. If the skull fossil of Peking Man had not mysteriously disappeared during World War II, its scientific research value would have been fully reflected in many disciplines.

15 ( )A. He writes poems without any intention of seeking praise. When he feels something in life, he resorts to pen and ink. He never pretends, everything is told truthfully, straightforward and natural.

B. Some time ago, more and more articles commemorating the past appeared in newspapers, books and magazines, lamenting the indifference between people in modern life.

C. The Municipal Party Committee took effective measures to correct the wrong practices of some units that violated the financial and accounting systems reported by the masses.

D. The outstanding artistic feature of the text is the delicate psychological description to express the characters’ thoughts and personalities in the fierce conflicts.

Answer

1. D (A) Change "impossible" to "certain". B) Use a rope to put it behind the tears. C: His assistant has ambiguity . )

2. A(B Change ? to ? /p>

3. B (A? is often placed before the subject. C is unreasonable. D is ambiguous.)

4. D (A? Disparity? is repeated with ? Big? . B. Remove the previous one. C. Improper advice)

5. B(A. Decoration? Bone awl? Does not match the subject and object. C. Export foreigners? The moving object does not match. Match. Change the position of D to distance and remove the place.

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6. A (B: Delicate rendering and improper modification, and it is impossible for the author to express Li Qingzhao's feelings. C: Removed "because". D: Clarify the method of adding "?" after "?")

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7. A(BRemove the "author's hand". CThe subjects of the first and second half of the sentence are not consistent. DThe use of "standard" here is inappropriate.)

8. D(A?Excellent* ** Communist Party member? There is an ambiguity in the modified object. B? Voice, smile, echo? C? When the setting sun shines, the rainbow cannot be seen in the west. B? White clouds? Improper modification. D. Too much negation and sarcasm)

10. A (B? Come suddenly and pass away slowly? The meaning is unclear. C? Memories? Lack of subject. D. Works? Improvement? Improper collocation)

11. D (A. Wherever the subject goes? B. Loot? Put before? Burn?. C. Change yourself? For them.)

12. B (A. Change "in front of you" to "when you are doing it". C. Change "among them" to "editors". D. Change the name. 53. A(B) The cured cases cannot be picked up easily in the clinic. C. Li Yunjie uses them in front of him. D. The effect is not good and the combination of words and objects is inappropriate. . )

14. D (A. Put some emphasis on ?. B. Remove the ? of ?. C. Change the previous sentence to ? It has its own flaws. Only a few critics have studied it. After the sentence. )

15. A(B?Books and magazines?Repetition.C?Wrong approach?The attributive Character, let it be exciting )