How to write the ending of an essay about a park

1. How to write the end of the essay after visiting the park

Zhongshan Park

Zhongshan Park in Laohekou City is located in the center of the city, covering an area of ??about 4.8 hectares. The only comprehensive park in our city that integrates commemoration, viewing and entertainment.

When you come to the entrance of Zhongshan Park, you will see the four large characters "Zhongshan Park" inscribed by Mr. Li Zongren carved on the lintel of the gate, which are vigorous and powerful. On the marble doorposts on both sides of the gate, a couplet is written in green paint: "The public's merits will last for a hundred generations, and the garden will live up to the expectations of the public" to show respect for the great bourgeois revolutionist Mr. Sun Yat-sen.

When you walk into the park, you can see the statue of Dr. Sun Yat-sen standing in the center of the square. Behind the statue is the Sun Yat-sen Memorial Hall, which is an octagonal building with two floors.

To the southeast of the square is a plum forest. The trees are full of white flowers. From a distance, they look like white clouds falling from the sky. The plum flower is composed of five petals, the petals are round, and the stamens exude a light fragrance, which is soothing to the nostrils and makes people feel relaxed and happy.

Walking along a gravel path in the northeast corner of the square, you will find a rockery. The rockery is covered with red maples, white magnolias, and an unknown thousand-year-old tree. The old tree, whenever spring comes, the leaves on the tree are green and the huge crown stands high, looking majestic and vigorous. Climbing up the stairs and standing on the top of the mountain, you can see a piece of green water at the foot of the mountain. It is an artificial lake in the park. The water is crystal clear and fish can be seen playing. To the north of the artificial lake is a bamboo forest. The green bamboo leaves play cheerful and beautiful music in the spring breeze.

To the west of the square, there is a circular hill made of soil. The hillside is covered with all kinds of small flowers, colorful and colorful, making people feel like they are in a fairyland; there are also many flowers growing on the hillside. It is full of evergreen trees, all tall and mighty, like tireless sentinels guarding this paradise...

Zhongshan Park during the day allows you to wander in the beautiful scenery, and the park at night allows you to wander in the beautiful scenery. revel. This place has become a sea of ??lights and a world of music, with all kinds of neon lights opening up. Under the dreamy lights, people danced to the wonderful music, and there was laughter and laughter everywhere...

Zhongshan Park is a park with modern characteristics. She is beautiful, beautiful and attractive. A great place for your leisure and entertainment. 2. How to write a good beginning and end of a composition

A famous teacher talks about the exquisite "phoenix head" and "tail" of writing - a brief discussion on how to write a good beginning and end of a composition. The beginning and end of Anhui Wang Huabin's composition It is an important position for the marking teacher to read. Therefore, creating a wonderful beginning and end will make the article "highlights", thereby attracting the eye of the marking teacher and improving the score of your composition.

1. Write a wonderful beginning and fall in love at first sight. The ancients called the beginning of an article "crested", which means that the beginning should be beautiful, exquisite, novel and appropriate, creative, shocking and attractive, so that the marking teacher will fall in love at first sight and create a feeling of wanting to read it.

Therefore, before writing, you must carefully conceive and think over it repeatedly to ensure precision work. (1) Design the inscription, so that newcomers can hear and hear the essay "Friend, I want to say thank you" with a perfect score in the high school entrance examination. It begins like this: Fate, let me meet you in September when the sweet-scented osmanthus blooms; dream, let me know you again. I parted ways with you in the scorching sun in June.

My friend, in the four spring and autumn days I have been with you, your friendship has made me cherish it even more. It is you who make my bleak days become wonderful, it is you who make me discover the beauty of life, and it is you who make my proud heart be controlled by humility.

Everything, let me trace the footsteps I walked with you. ——Inscription In this article, the candidate ingeniously set up an inscription in front of the text, which not only exaggerates the strong atmosphere and sets the lyrical tone for the whole article; at the same time, it also implicitly explains "I want to say thank you." "The reason is a clever interpretation of the title of the article.

Moreover, the sentence structure is neat, full of literary talent, and very contagious and attractive. (2) To say the same thing, the winding path leads to a quiet place, just like the beginning of the essay "Beautiful Life" with a perfect score in the high school entrance examination: Some people like to compare life to a road, some people like to compare life to a glass of wine, and some people like to compare life to a glass of wine. Life is like a ball of numbness.

But I like to compare life to flowers. After laying out other people's various understandings of life, the young author changed the subject and expressed his own point of view: "I like to compare life to flowers."

This leads to the main part of the article, It can be said that he says one thing and means another, and he tries to catch it, but the winding path leads to the secluded place, and the charm is long. (3) Lay out the parallels and prepare for the move. There is an excellent composition titled "Door", which begins like this: Green opens the door of spring, thunderstorm opens the door of summer, fruit opens the door of autumn, Ruixue opens the door Books have opened the door of winter, wisdom has opened the door of ideals, and ideals have opened the door of success. Listen, there are sounds of opening doors everywhere... At the beginning of this article, the author uses 8 consecutive sentences with the same structure and meaningful meanings. The sentence gives "door" a unique meaning from different angles, not only revealing the rich connotations of "door", but also forming a progressive and unstoppable majestic momentum, which naturally leads to the following sentence "Push open the door of life" " theme.

(4) Holding things up, secretly crossing Chencang. I once saw a beautiful composition titled "Love Forever". The beginning left a deep impression on me: The rising sun has come out, and the lake has dressed it up. ; The new moon is up, and the stars are accompanying it; the spring flowers are blooming, and the green leaves are setting it off; the birds are singing, and the crickets are accompanying it... Everything in the world is telling us the story of love. In the article, the author starts from natural phenomena and uses objects to explain the deep "care" between many things in nature. He also uses anthropomorphic techniques to make these things humane.

You don’t need to look at the next step to know that it will definitely transition to the related theme of "there should be care between people", such as being popular on the water, and it will naturally become a document. Lu Ji, a writer in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, said: "It is a warning policy to set up a paragraph to serve as the main point."

This sentence is also very appropriate to describe the beginning of an article. There are so many ways to start, it’s hard to list them all.

But in short, the beginning must be distinctive, and strive to attract the marking teacher from the beginning and leave a deep impression on him, thereby improving the score of the entire article. 2. Develop a well-written ending to add the finishing touch.

Xie Zhen, a scholar of the Ming Dynasty, said: "The ending should be like ringing a bell, with more than a few clear sounds." Indeed, a good ending of an article can produce an artistic effect of "a lingering sound that lingers for three days" and enhances the appeal of the article. It has the power to arouse readers' thinking and excitement, immersing them in the realm of the article, and lingering on it for a long time.

(1) Add a postscript with a long aftertaste, such as the topic of Jiangsu Taizhou High School Entrance Examination composition is "Only One". There is an excellent composition "Mr. Lu Xun, there is only one". After the main text, the author also added a paragraph " "Postscript": My husband is waiting for us to step out of the flashy sea, step into his heart, and communicate with him in the depths of his soul! ——Postscript In the main part of the article, the author fully demonstrates the extraordinary value of Lu Xun and his works through comparison, expresses his indignation in the face of social neglect of Lu Xun, and then calls on us to get close to and read Lu Xun and his works. The postscript changes a different angle, calling us to communicate with him from Mr. Lu Xun’s perspective, making the article further strike the readers’ hearts and get closer to Lu Xun.

It can be said that this postscript is the finishing touch, complementing and complementing the main body of the article. (2) Raise questions and make people think deeply. There is an excellent composition "Simple and Not Simple" by middle school students. After listing various phenomena of "simple and not simple" and analyzing the dialectical relationship between "simple and not simple", the article ends with: , the author writes: Each of us has simplicity and unsimpleness at the same time. The question is what kind of simplicity and unsimpleness we should pursue.

Friend, what do you think? Here, the author cleverly puts forward the important proposition of "what kind of simplicity and simplicity should we pursue?", triggering readers' deep thinking, and inspiring people to make the right choice and pursue a meaningful life. Although the author does not say it clearly, it is thought-provoking and alarming.

(3) The final chapter shows the ambition and the purpose is clear. For example, in the semi-proposition composition "This is my ________", one candidate filled in the word "commitment" on the horizontal line. After specifically showing the formation process of "commitment", the author wrote in the concluding paragraph: "No matter what difficulties you may encounter in life, never give up and be a strong person in life!" - This is My promise.

At the end of the article, the author expresses the content of "My Commitment" very clearly, which not only closely follows the title of the article, but also reveals the main theme of the article. It can be said that the final chapter shows the ambition and the final song is elegant. Moreover, this sentence, which is rich in passion and striking, shows that it is a small work. 3. The end of the composition about ants

I found a team on the grass in the park. The team walked on a winding path. What is this? I lay down and took a look, oh, it turned out to be a team of ants. They are busy! There is a group of ants moving soil out of the cave, another group of ants is transporting food into the cave, and another group of ants is shuttling back and forth, as if directing other ants to work...

Out of curiosity, I took He took out a paper cup, poured some mineral water into the paper cup, and grabbed a few ants and put them in. Facing this sudden "flood", these ants panicked and struggled desperately in the water, their tentacles constantly swinging as if sending out a distress signal. After a brief panic, the ants seemed to be no longer afraid. They stretched out their legs and stirred the mineral water in the paper cups as if they were rowing oars. Gradually, several ants gathered together, as if they were discussing ways to escape the "flood". While the ants were discussing, they swung their antennae to send out signals, as if telling other partners how to escape. Finally, the ants swam to the edge of the paper cup step by step and escaped the "flood". Immediately afterwards, these ants hurriedly climbed out of the paper cup and lined up neatly to join the large army.

After a while, I placed a small cookie not far from the ants. Hey, the ants are so clever, they smell the fragrance of the cookies. An ant first climbed to the side of the biscuit, circled around the biscuit, and then climbed up. Then, four or five more ants crawled over. They also crawled around on the biscuits, touched their tentacles with the ant that came in front, and seemed to be muttering something. After about a minute, the ants crawled back to the main group. Why did these ants walk away without eating the cookies? Aren’t cookies delicious? After a while, a huge team of ants came to the biscuit and looked at the biscuit that was dozens of times larger than their own body. They seemed to be worried about whether they could move it. After a long time, these ants were all swaying non-stop, as if they were doing warm-up exercises. Then, the ants got under the biscuits one after another. Oh, the ants worked together to carry the huge biscuit. Watching the ants carry the biscuits back to the cave step by step in unison, I was really surprised. It turns out that the collective power is so powerful. No wonder the saying goes - "When people unite, Mount Tai can move"!

One day, my friends and I were playing outside. Suddenly, we found a group of ants busy doing something. I had heard that ants are afraid of the smell of moth balls and wanted to do an experiment to prove if this was true.

First, we caught 2 little ants. We used mothballs to draw a line in front of the ant. The ant turned around, then broke through the line and ran away. Without thinking, why did the ant run away? Aren't ants afraid of the smell of moth balls? The mystery was not solved yet, so out of curiosity, we caught two more little ants.

As before, we drew a line in front of the ant, and the ant still turned around and broke through the drawn line.

We drew another line in front of the ants. The ants wanted to break through and were approaching the drawn line, as if to say: Just such a line wants to trap us! You are too underestimated! Hahaha~~~". As the ant spoke, he rushed to the drawing line triumphantly. I thought that this test must have ended with 0 points again. When I was sighing, the ant seemed to be blown by a gust of wind. It seemed like it was blowing back, and the ants didn't dare to break through the drawing line.

When the ants were exhausted and their limbs were weak, we drew a big circle around the ants again. It seems that it has become smarter and does not want to break through the line as before. The ants are no longer arrogant and proud, and they are looking for the exit calmly.

We slowly closed the circle. The ants seem to be unable to bear the smell of the mothballs anymore, and seem to be begging: "Please let us go!" We really can't stand it anymore. We were too arrogant just now..." Finally, we narrowed the circle to smaller than a dime coin. The ants stopped wandering and lay motionless on the ground. The ants may be too tired. In addition, the smell of mothballs was unbearable, so they left the world.

The ant experiment tells us: Science is everywhere. As long as you are a thoughtful person, you will find that science is among us. Around you.

Must adopt it! 4. How to write the ending of the essay about visiting Dongzhou Park (key points)

Visiting Dongzhou Park

Dongzhou Park is located in Haimen. In the city center, roads are dotted all around. Dongzhou Park is like a bright pearl embedded in the treasure land of Haimen. When you first enter Dongzhou Park, the first thing you see is a star-shaped flower bed. It is dotted on the green carpet. When you get closer and smell it, it is fragrant and intoxicating. There is also a pine tree in the flower bed. I heard from the old people nearby that every time Christmas comes, a group of young children always love it. The pine tree was decorated beautifully, and a big star was hung on the top. Walking southward along the flower bed, there was a dirt hill. It was very difficult to climb up. Help people from time to time. The tall trees seem to be waving to people in the breeze, as if encouraging everyone to climb up. There is a small pavilion on the top of the mountain. This pavilion is square and supported by six pillars. At the top of the mountain, let the warriors who have climbed to the top rest. As the saying goes: "It is easier to go up the mountain than to go down the mountain." "When we were going down the mountain, these "friends" seemed to be walls blocking us. I spent a lot of effort and walked around the mountain before finally walking out of this dangerous mountain.

There is a lake opposite Tushan. When the wind is calm, the water surface is like a mirror. When the breeze blows, there are countless small boats swimming on the lake. During the competition, some people were chatting, and others were playing "bumper boats"...

This pearl located in the city center is the pride of Haimen people. A handful of soil is the crystallization of the wisdom of the people of Haimen. 5. How to write the ending of the essay about playing in the park

I love the beautiful Hushan Park in my hometown, but I love the beautiful and lovely northwest corner of Hushan Park even more. .

It’s another pleasant day. The breeze blows my cheeks with a hint of coolness. I enjoy a peaceful day with the singing of birds and the fragrance of flowers. In such a noisy city, I have a unique sense of leisure and feel very happy. I am happy, and the haze in my heart has been swept away. I am grateful to everything in the park for accompanying me through such a meaningful day.

The happy time is always so short, and the day passes quickly, but in the future. I will definitely have a lot of memories when I think about it. I will definitely invite my friends to go with me next time. I hope that every day will be as happy as today, and I also hope that I can go back to the road today. 6. How to write the beginning and ending of a composition about a community park

In autumn in the north, the sky is high and the clouds are clear. When the wild geese return to the south, there are abundant fruits everywhere. The beauty in autumn is unique beauty; the beauty in autumn is also real beauty.

If you don’t believe it, if you go to the streets, roads, and parks to look and listen, you will definitely be attracted by the unique scenery. I like the autumn scenery in green parks the most.

After passing through the maze-like park turnstile, the green park opens her broad mind to welcome us. Birds are chirping on the branches, as if giving a welcome speech; Shouting, hug me, because I am healthy, because I am environmentally friendly, let us learn about the old and learn the new together, and live happily every day!

In the center of the well-proportioned green park is a flat lawn. In autumn, the lawn is green and yellowish. When you look at the surrounding scenery along the stone path and lament the passing of a year, you have an indescribable feeling. Is it sour? Sweet? Bitter? Spicy? Are you happy? Still sad? I'm so moved, I can't explain it clearly.

In the northeast corner of the park is the peony garden. The peony fairies in the peony garden are exuding an attractive fragrance, making people feel refreshed and suddenly feel much more energetic. The fragrance of flowers is really pleasant!

In the northwest corner is a poplar forest. Countless poplar trees stand tall and tall along the roadside and river banks, in rows and rows, like soldiers being trained, in an orderly manner, as if to say: "You should be like this as a human being, behave yourself and be upright."

There are many locust trees, willows, and pine trees in the southern part of the park. .. .. Sophora japonica is the municipal tree of our city, and it naturally has a majestic momentum: the branches of the willow tree dance in the autumn wind, showing its elegance; while the pine trees are like strong young men, glowing with tenacious vitality. There are many resting stools like piano keys placed around the grove, a group of red, a group of yellow, and a group of green. .. ..The warm autumn sun shines on your face, walking on the soft fallen leaves, listening to the wind singing and watching the trees dancing. When you are tired, sitting on the piano bench feels like you are immersed in poetry and painting, not to mention how intoxicating it is!

Some grandparents are exercising in the park, some are doing Tai Chi, some are practicing martial arts, some are practicing singing by the river, and some are walking. .. ..People move with the scenery, and the scenery lives with the people. It is true that the scenery is composed of people, and people swim in the painting.

In fact, the most beautiful time of Green Park is at night. Colorful lights shine in the sky, on the trees, and on the ground, like our guides, guiding us forward, forward, and forward. Looking from a distance, in the dim light, the entire park is integrated, like a big family. Every corner is a member of the big family, and no one can live without it. Walking on the straight road, I thought that the green park at night is not purely green, but a yellow, red, purple, and blue park. It is a colorful park! 7. How to write the end of Zhang Jian's essay

Speaking of Nantong, everyone will think of Zhang Jian, who devoted his life to industry, culture and education and was the number one scholar in the Qing Dynasty. His proposition and practice of "Father Industry, Mother Education" have great It has profound historical significance. He founded more than 20 enterprises and more than 370 schools in his life, making valuable contributions to the rise of modern national industry in my country and the development of education. Zhang Jian’s former residence is the first place where we understand Zhang Jian’s grandfather. step.

Zhang Jian’s former residence is located in the "Haonan Villa" on the bank of Nanhao River in the urban area. It was newly built in November 2010, with a construction area of ??more than 2,000 square meters, which is half the size of a football field. This is a Chinese-style building with a brick and wood structure, red tiles, gray walls, and bright windows. It is very beautiful. The north facade of the building faces the street and faces the Qinghe River. On both sides of the gate are planted magnolia grandiflora, yellow oak trees, and podocarpus pine. In the west courtyard of the building, there are various flowers and trees such as loquat, peach, rose and so on. In the south courtyard of the building, there are lawns and flower gardens. The building also has a door facing south. In front of the door is a platform with stairs planted on both sides during the renovation. There is only one wisteria on both sides of the platform in front of the door. It is said to be a hundred years old and was transplanted back then. Every spring, the vines are entangled and the flowers are in full bloom. One red and one white complement each other, which is very spectacular. Grandpa Zhang Jian once wrote a poem praising: "When the flowers are blooming, the morning glow and sunset glow, and the century-old Mohe hangs its tassels." Now the old stem is gray, as thick as a giant arm, and its branches are growing all the way to the roof of the balcony on the third floor, which is amazing. Of course, like many old houses, the light on the ground floor is relatively dark.

Stepping on the stairs, the clear echo of "thump, thump, thump" seemed to take us back to the past. On the second floor, the room directly opposite the door is the hall, where the owner's utensils were displayed as always. Connected to the hall is a verandah that combines Chinese and Western styles. Each inner room passing through the verandah is an exhibition hall introducing all the deeds of Mr. Zhang Jian in establishing the industry. After looking at the second floor, what does the third floor look like? The most conspicuous thing on the third floor is a stele of family mottos written by Zhang Jian in the middle of the hall. It was organized by Zhang Jian looking through classics and listing the classic family mottos of famous families. There is also a photo exhibition on Zhang Jian's life on the third floor. Hundreds of old photos have almost become the entire landscape of Nantong in modern times, like a bowl of concentrated soup with a mellow taste.

It is said that the reason why Grandpa Zhang Jian chose this remote land outside the old city to build his house is that it is close to Haonan Villa in the east and Wu Park in the west. It has a quiet environment and a sense of nostalgia. Woolen cloth. In his early years, Zhang Jian had an uncle who bought a house here to make a living. Zhang Jianlai often played in this area when he was young. He climbed over the tall and strong willow tree in front of his uncle's house and fished by the river; he ran to the Yaowang Temple to the west, watched the fruit-bearing trees on the soap clipper tree, and scribbled on the back of the shrine... Zhang Jian's wonderful childhood memories were left here.

Now, the relevant departments have renovated and renovated the Haonan villa for people to visit and study, which is indeed a very meaningful thing.

Appreciate the true meaning of charity 8. The end of the essay on Jinyan Lake Park

Guanghan is an ancient cultural city with a long history. It has the famous Sanxingdui at home and abroad, the beautiful Qushang Garden, and the There is this charming Jinyan Lake Park.

Jinyan Lake Park is located in the northern suburbs of Guanghan. Standing on the Jinyan Lake Bridge, you can see three eye-catching characters "Jinyan Lake". These three characters sparkle in the sunlight, attracting many visitors. The gazes of many people make people want to go in and play.

When you walk in the door, the first thing you see are the pots of beautiful flowers. When you walk to the big lawn, you see the chrysanthemums in the lawn. White chrysanthemums are like snow, red chrysanthemums are like fire, and yellow chrysanthemums are like gold. Their postures are also different. Some have many long petals stretched out, some show their teeth and claws, and some always lower their heads, like a shy little girl. They are really diverse and dizzying. Walking along the tree-lined path, you will soon see Jinyan Lake. The banks of the lake are lined with weeping poplars, and the lake's surface is shimmering with light, as flat as a mirror, reflecting the blue sky and white clouds, which is refreshing and refreshing. The lake is very quiet, as quiet as a sleeping baby lying there and moving. Occasionally, a speedboat passes quickly, causing waves to rise on the lake and countless small splashes of water. There is a small island in the center of the lake. The island is full of big trees, and many egrets are playing freely here. Some hover on the water, some perch in the treetops, and some soar in the sky. I can't help but think of a poem called "A line of egrets ascending to the blue sky", which is so beautiful. The most interesting thing is the Twelve Zodiac Signs Square. The twelve Tongshuo zodiac signs are beautifully carved and extremely cute. Along the way, you can have a panoramic view of the beautiful scenery of Jinyan Lake, including the children's favorite playground and the large green lawn. Whenever night falls, you can also see the colorful neon lights, which are extremely dazzling.

Jinyan Lake is a shining pearl in Guanghan. I love Jinyan Lake Park.