Comment on Tao Tianzhen's poems.

Tao Tianzhen, Laker, 1987 After graduating from the Chinese Department of Yancheng Normal University, he taught in rural middle schools for ten years and now works for Jianhu TV Station. Member of Jiangsu Writers Association. He has published a large number of poems and essays in Literature Newspaper, China Culture Newspaper, Stars, Flying, Rain Flower, Children's Literature and Youth Literature. And many groups of poems have been included in authoritative anthologies such as Selected Works of the Year and 2 1 Century Literature Series.

Original new work

Rainy season: villages

1

Several indigo houses

Scattered in lush forests

It is covered with rain all day.

Xiaoxiao village

It's in a glass bottle

Exquisite interior painting

2

These trees hold huge umbrellas.

Silence in the rain

Like some lonely people inside.

Listen to the rain.

three

Those flowers

Colorful

Eyes shining in the rain

four

The farm tools leaned against the corner of the house.

Rain gear is hanging on the wall

Soak alone in a small handleless wine cup

Boredom grows on the tongue.

five

Someone went out in the rain.

Someone came back in the rain.

The tranquility of the village

I was scratched twice.

Return to peace

A woman with a bunch of reeds in her arms.

Slow down. Elegant.

On the beach in October

She put herself

And walked into a swaying reed flower.

The sun illuminates every corner of the land.

Birds are flying in the wind.

That bunch of reeds

She hugged me again.

It's like holding a fragile love in the past.

Deep down in her heart.

Has the sky cleared up?

I think she's

It's about to fly.

It's about to fly.

Use that bunch of reeds

On the beach in October

This woman

Hug a bunch of reeds

This is always the secret of autumn.

supply and marketing cooperative

The supply and marketing cooperative is in the busiest street in the middle of town. Although it is only a few rows of old bungalows with blue bricks and green tiles, it is even as important as the office compound of the commune in the eyes of the whole town.

The supply and marketing cooperatives are sneaking around. The smells of garlic sauce, dried radish, twist and prickly heat are mixed together and diffuse in the slightly wet air.

Several houses were opened to form a long whole room. You will feel spacious and cool when you walk in.

Grocery merchant Cloth seller. Selling sauces. Food seller.

Several big counters lined up in a row, full of style.

There is a wire above each counter leading to a small counter at the door. That's a special counter for accountants to collect money. There is a big iron clip on each wire.

Someone has come to buy something.

The clerk settled the bill, put the opened ticket and money on the big iron clip and handed it to the accountant at the door. The accountant stamped the ticket and returned it with the change. The clerk gave them to the customer together. The deal is done.

I was in primary school in the town at that time. I am in the same class as the director's daughter. The floral dacron shirt she wore should be regarded as the most upscale and fashionable at that time. She always brings a lot of snacks to the classroom every day. Milk sugar. Crispy twist. Candied snacks, which we dare not even think about, are commonplace in her opinion. We think her family should be the richest in the world.

We often go to the supply and marketing cooperatives. But most of them go in and lie on the counter and look at those colorful and attractive foods and toys. Who has pocket money to buy? Occasionally, someone has a nickel or a dime around him, and buying a few pieces of fruit candy becomes a luxury, and others will envy it. Those fruit candies are often shared by two people. Even if a person eats it, he bites off half of it and puts it in his mouth, and the other half is wrapped in sugar paper. That can't be enjoyed at once.

It is no exaggeration to say that the sales staff of supply and marketing cooperatives is one of the most enviable jobs in the town. They wear the most fashionable clothes every day, and they stand proudly behind the counter. I still don't know what to eat all day. We all hope that one day, if anyone can be a salesperson in a supply and marketing cooperative, it would be great!

At that time, tickets were needed for everything. Cloth tickets, food stamps, kerosene tickets, cigarette tickets, watch tickets ... the director of the supply and marketing cooperative has become the most sought-after person in town. There are too many people asking him to open the back door to get tickets. Especially those who are happy. He naturally became a guest at many people's banquets, and he often sat in the VIP table.

I remember when I was in the sixth grade, the bungalow of the supply and marketing cooperative in the town was demolished and a three-story building was built. There has never been a magnificent building of such scale and momentum in the town. In the first few days of doing business, every day in the supply and marketing cooperatives is like a party, and there are many people. There is also a special counter on the second floor to sell picture books, that is, comic books. That's where we go the most. A few cents around me no longer buy fruit candy, but save it. When you save a dime, you can buy a small picture book.

A few years ago, by chance, I returned to the small town. Between the surrounding high-rise buildings, the already dilapidated supply and marketing cooperatives seem a bit pitiful. I heard that it was contracted by several old employees. There is no benefit at all, only one livelihood. In particular, I noticed that on its outer wall, the slogan of white paint brush could be seen vaguely. Although the words have been corroded to pieces, I know those big words are: develop the economy and ensure supply.