20 15 Quanzhou senior high school entrance examination composition analysis: labor is really happy.

Quanzhou 20 15 senior high school entrance examination has passed, but the controversy surrounding the proposition that "labor is really happy" is not over yet. Now, not only some people say yes, but some people say no. This problem has been related to how to write the composition in the future exam, and even to what the goal of education and training is. The reason why we are still talking about this issue for such a long time after the end of the senior high school entrance examination is that education is always worthy of our attention when it is never over.

"Labor is really happy"-this essay topic is very common, simple, unadorned, literary and straightforward, and candidates can see it at a glance. The topic is simple and there are no obstacles in the exam, which is convenient for candidates to write down their own experiences and understanding. Even so, in the examination room, candidates are a little overwhelmed when they see this topic, and only when they calm down can they start writing; Outside the examination room, some people feel incredible and full of complaints. Why does such a common topic ripple in peace? It really needs to attract everyone's attention and thinking.

Slogans such as "learn to work" and "glorious work" are written on the wall of the teaching building. Training students to be "workers with socialist consciousness and culture" is one of the purposes of educating people. As educators, we should actively guide students' outlook on life and values, and let them consciously regard labor as a part of their lives. "Labor creates wealth". How can a country prosper without labor? Without labor, how can there be happiness and well-being of the family? Without labor, there is nothing. As a student, at the beginning of life, we should establish the concept of labor and form the habit of work, otherwise "being a builder and contributing to the country when I grow up" is an empty talk. Therefore, the proposition that "labor is really happy" is not only a test question, but more importantly, it contains the value of education, giving candidates a positive life orientation, guiding them to pay attention to life, love life, and gain experience and understanding through composition, thus triggering thinking about the correct outlook on life and values.

It is not difficult to write this article well. Labor, not only refers to physical labor, but also refers to mental labor, which is an indispensable part of people's lives. Therefore, the writing materials are ready-made: at home, cooking for the first time, cleaning and tidying up your room, and helping parents do some housework within their power; At school, students take part in class cleaning when they are on duty, take part in collective labor to beautify the campus environment, and go to the education base for labor exercise. The usual reading and study, comprehensive practical activities, topic exploration and experimental operation are too numerous to mention. In daily life and study, as long as you pay a little attention and accumulate, how can you have nothing to say? Describe the labor process, describe the labor scene, express the labor feelings, and talk about the understanding of labor. Why not write a good article?

"Labor is really happy"-it helps to express real feelings, especially the word "happiness", and inspires students to express their feelings in a positive, healthy and tasteful way. The process of labor may make people feel tired, but "the pleasure gained after labor is incomparable to any material enjoyment." This kind of pleasure can only be achieved through labor. Senior high school entrance examination composition -20 15 Quanzhou senior high school entrance examination composition analysis and its excellent composition 3 senior high school entrance examination composition -20 15 Quanzhou senior high school entrance examination composition analysis and its excellent composition 3. In addition, we can also feel happiness from workers, thus inspiring and sincerely expressing the feelings of "loving labor" and "happy labor", which is another realm.

Indeed, in the face of the topic of "truly happy work", there is no imitation, and it is impossible to copy it mechanically. Candidates should write calmly, mobilize their usual knowledge reserves and tap the accumulation of life. Therefore, this topic can not only test the language level of candidates, but also examine their feelings, attitudes and values.

Although the topic "Labor is really happy" is quite surprising, the writing ability and writing level of candidates are still unexpected. "The students are busy with exams now, how can they have time to work? How can I write a good composition? " "How can students with no work experience express their true feelings?" Is this an incomprehension of the meaning of the question, or is it worrying about the students? Let's stop here. However, the question reflected from this is thought-provoking: can education be just for exams? As far as Chinese teaching is concerned, students should be encouraged to "read more books, read good books", observe more, accumulate more, practice more, enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizons, lay a solid foundation and focus on students' lifelong learning and development. In educating people, how can schools, society and families care for the new generation and make them grow up healthily? How to make students learn to be human while acquiring knowledge? Isn't that what education should pay attention to

It is a long way to go to train students into a new generation with all-round development in morality, intelligence, physique, beauty and labor. (The author is a Chinese teaching researcher at the Municipal Education Institute.)