How to write a short news review? (College Entrance Examination Edition) Detailed, preferably with examples. Thank you.

Many friends say that newspapers and TV in my hometown are not good-looking, so I don't read much. This has become a habit. In an era of relatively closed politics and economy, these should be understandable, but in today's era when all our undertakings are advancing by leaps and bounds, Chongming media is still in such a "inaction" situation, which is definitely abnormal.

I have a Chongming newspaper published in June 1, and the national road cycling championship was held in Chongming in May. This issue of the newspaper should be a good opportunity to promote the image of Chongming through this activity. The front page news of a newspaper often reflects the professional level and running direction of a newspaper editor, so I paid special attention to the front page news of this issue.

The front page of this issue is titled "Ecological Island Leads Fashion Racing", marked in striking red, with good momentum, highlighting Chongming's "ecological concept" and "fashion concept" of cycling race, and the subtitle is "Chongming Island Cup National Road Cycling Championship held in our county in 2005".

The main body of news is divided into four natural paragraphs. At the beginning of the first paragraph, it is said that the car race has been successfully concluded, and then it is said which county leaders attended the opening ceremony and so on. In the second paragraph, I began to write about various situations of racing cars.

Anyone familiar with news writing knows that there is an inverted triangle in news writing, in which important writing comes first, secondary writing comes last, leading role comes first and supporting role comes last. In this way, readers can read clearly without wasting time. According to this analysis, news should first introduce the events, contestants and results of the competition. At the beginning of this paper, it is said that the car race has been successfully completed, and it will soon arrive at the opening ceremony, and then it will soon be dragged to the closing ceremony, and then the race will be discussed. This press release in such an important position is so out of shape and messy that it is really incomprehensible.

There are three photos below the text. Since such a big headline has been shot, there should be good news pictures to suppress the topic. The newspaper uses three big photos on one page, which takes up a lot of space. It should be more than enough to reflect the national cycling race, but the contents of the three photos are surprising. The first picture shows a row of leaders clapping their hands on the rostrum of the opening ceremony, the second picture shows a leader speaking at the opening ceremony, and the third picture shows a leader awarding prizes to the winning athletes.

Three news photos showing the national cycling race and Chongming, and three pages of precious pages, are all shows by the leaders. There is no bicycle, no runway, no audience, only the miserable body of half an athlete, or as a foil for the leaders.

Are such ridiculous words and photos on such an important page the highest level of our Chongming media? I don't know how others feel after reading it. Anyway, I think such a political show has driven away all the ecology, fashion and so on.

I don't think those county leaders will be stupid enough to deliberately highlight their existence in such a national competition. They hope that what comes out of the media will definitely reflect Chongming and the competition itself. With these, it is logical for them to come out as a walk-on. But the problem is that the walk-on has become the protagonist, but we readers don't even know how many teams are participating and which team scored the most. This is no longer news, but a political report.

I can't blame the reporter who wrote the manuscript. I think he may have pondered this essay for a long time, and even speculated that Yang Xiaodu's position finally appeared behind Gong Deqing, and the final text was obviously the result of layers of review and revision. Of course, these reviews and revisions are necessary, but some people in charge of news review have turned the good news into "the emperor's new clothes"-making county leaders "streaking", completely ignoring that this is a sports competition, not several sessions or plenary sessions.

This practice of putting the cart before the horse not only highlights the low professional level of some journalists, but also reflects the backwardness of some people's political thinking, reflecting that some ideological trends in Chongming's middle and upper classes are so strikingly inconsistent with this era.

How to write the news? What do ordinary people like to see? When CCTV, Liberation Daily, etc. Boldly operating in the market, showing more and more vitality, they seem to have told us the answer, but we Chongming media are still taking the old road of the planned economy era, with no innovation and breakthrough in thinking. This stubbornness like an old farmer is not a good thing.

Today's Chongming has unlimited opportunities, and Chongming's media can no longer wait for Chongming's economy to go up and seek breakthroughs in the field of public opinion and ideological propaganda. With the advantage of regional monopoly, Chongming news media can keep up with the pace of domestic advanced media navigation, develop Chongming's economy ahead of time, and let Chongming people enjoy noble spiritual food without leaving the island.

I have always believed that the responsibility of Chongming media is not to sing praises and dance, but to work hard for the people and provide forward-looking guidance and public opinion supervision for Chongming's development decision. Therefore, I especially hope that it can seize the rare opportunity, embark on the road of market-oriented development as soon as possible, stop nagging about the old imperial calendar, become a propaganda team, or even become a seeder, because as long as people are willing, there will always be a warm response from the world.