I wrote a couplet. Let's see if it needs to be revised. How come?

1. Wrong account.

2. A few simple things are piled up, and the words are not beautiful and not easy to read. I recommend reading some poems written by Chairman Mao, which are also piled up by several nouns and are magnificent.

The last three words of each couplet are too colloquial.

Think about it, hoping to help you get rid of habitual thinking or slogan thinking. Is the convening of the "two sessions" a happy event? The "two sessions" are routine meetings of the party and the state. When to open them was decided decades ago, so this is a neutral event, neither a happy event nor a bad thing. Of course it's a big deal.